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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2020/10/29,#,She is a,kind,teacher.,In order to,help you,she always works hard.,She is a teacher who is very helpful,for example,she always helps you with your science.,Who is she?,Lets play a guessing game!,She is a teacher,who likes travelling.,She is a teacher.,She is a kind teacher.In order,English Writing,-Try to make your writing better,English Writing-Try to make,pollution,Hi!Tina,Im happy to get your letter.I hear that the pollution is bad.I have some suggestions.You should walk to school.You should,turn off lights,.You should,plant some trees.You,should,use something that can be used many times.,These are my suggestions.I hope the environment in your hometown will be better later.,Yours,Bill,Tina,pollutionHi!Tina,Tina,Im happy to get your letter.,You should walk to school.,Tip1:Use words and phrases properly and,vividly,.,用词适切、,生动,Im happy to,receive,your letter,.,You should,go to school on foot,.,How to make it more,vivid(,生动的,),？,Im happy to,hear from,you.,You should,go to school on foot instead of taking cars,.,Im happy to get your letter.T,Parts of Body:,正文,(,节选,),You should walk to school.You should,turn off lights,.You should,plant some trees.,You should,use something that can be used many times.,Sentence patterns(,句型,)of giving advice:,should/can do sth,Why not do sth?/Why dont you do sth?,What about doing sth?/How about doing sth?,It is+adj+for sb to do sth,It is a good idea to do sth,Had better do sth,It is better to do sth,Try to do sth,Lets do sth ,Lets,walk to school.,It is a good idea to,walk to school.,Youd better,walk to school.,Tip2:,Try to use different sentence patterns(,句型,).,Parts of Body:You should walk,Wed better turn off lights,so that we can save energy.,You should,turn off lights,.,Parts of Body:,正文,(,节选,),Adverbial Clause,状语从句,so that,when,in order to,Turn off lights,when we leave the classrooms to save energy.,In order to,save energy,lets turn off lights.,Wed better turn off lights so,You should plant some trees,that are good for the environment.,You should,plant some trees,.,Parts of Body:,正文,(,节选,),Attributive Clause,定语从句,that,which,Tip3:,Use complex sentences(,复合句,)to make sentences better.,You should plant some trees,that can make our earth green.,You should plant some trees th,Use something that can be used many times,.For example,we can use china cups instead of paper ones.,Use something that can be used many times.,Parts,of Body:,正文,(,节选,),Try to add an example.,for example,such as,Use something that can be used many times,such as using cloth bags instead of plastic bags.,Tip4:,Add examples to make your writing persuasive(,有说服力的,).,Use something that can be used,Hi!Tina,Im happy to,hear from you,.Because,Im sorry,to hear that the pollution is serious.I have some suggestions for you,.Lets walk to school instead of taking cars.,Its good for us to reduce air pollution.You should plant some trees,that are good for the environment,.,Turn off lights when we leave the classrooms to save energy.,Use something that can be used many times,.For example,we can use china cups instead of paper ones.,These are my suggestions.If everyone starts to do something,the world will be saved.I hope the environment in your hometown will,be better and better in the future,.,Yours,Bill,Tip5:Use,linking words properly,连接词使用恰当,(,),Coherent(,连贯的,)?,Hi!Tina,Tip5:Use linking wo,写作中,句子和句子之间,比较常用的连接词,1.,表示并列,/,递进关系：,and,besides,whats more,also,not only,but also,at the same time,2.,表示转折关系：,but,however,3.,表示因果关系：,because,since,so,therefore,4.,表示结果：,as a result,sothat,5.,表示先后：,First,Second,Third,Next,Finally,6.,表示时间：,when,while,after,before,as soon as,7.,表示总结：,in a word,generally speaking,all in all,写作中句子和句子之间比较常用的连接词,Hi!Tina,Im happy to hear from you._Im sorry to hear that the pollution is serious._I have some suggestions for you,.,_,Lets walk to school instead of taking cars.Its good for us to reduce pollution._,Turn off lights _ we leave the classrooms to save energy._,you should plant some trees that are good for the environment._,use something that can be used many times.For example,we can use china cups instead of paper ones.These are my suggestions.If everyone starts to do something,the world will be saved.I hope the environment in your hometown will be better and better in the future.,Yours,Bill,finally,so,firstly,but;when;secondly;whats more;,when,Secondly,Firstly,But,Whats more,So,Finally,Hi!Tina,finally,so,firstly,Firstly,lets walk to school instead of taking cars.Its good for us to,reduce,pollution.Secondly,turn,off lights when we leave the classrooms to save energy.,Whats more,you should plant some trees that are good for the environment.Finally,use something that can be used many times.For example,we can use china cups instead of paper ones.,Finally,use something that can be used many times.For example,we can use china cups instead of paper ones.,Hi!Tina.,Im happy to hear from you.But Im sorry to hear that the pollution is serious.So I have some sugg
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