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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,After,Twenty,Years,Write,an ending to a story,Bob,I was at the appointed place on time.When you struck the match to light your cigar I saw it was the face of the man wanted in Chicago.Somehow I couldnt do it myself,so I went around and got a plain clothes man to do the job.,JIMMY,What does the note tell you about the ending of story?,Jimmy,a,policeman,arrived at the appointed place on time.,Put these four statements in the correct order.,Bob,had committed,a crime,in Chicago.,Jimmy,decided to fulfil his duty and had Bob arrested.,1,2,3,4,Jimmy recognized the face wanted in Chicago,CONTENT,S,01,Follow the storyline,02,Highlight the theme,03,Describe the feelings,Write an ending to the story,Be a novelist today!,Made an agreement,Review the storyline,Left for the west,Lost contact,Came back to meet the,old,friend,Got arrested,after 20 years,logical,What are Bobs and Jimmys feelings towards each other?,Tip,1,Describe feelings by using adjectives and metaphors,How Bob described Jimmy as a close friend?,the best chum,the finest chap,true,staunch,just like two brothers,A,vivid,image of the best friend,four adjectives and one metaphor(,比喻）,Tip 2 describe the feelings by using,various sentence patterns,We agreed that night that we would meet here again exactly twenty years from that date and time,no matter what our,might be or,from what,we might have to come.,no matter what=whatever,No _ and _ could stop them from seeing each other.,conditions,distance,describe feelings,They treasured each other as true friends,and kept their promise to meet again after twenty years.,What are Bobs and Jimmys feelings towards each other?,Tip 3:Describe the feelings by showing inner,world,I came a thousand miles to stand in this door tonight,and,its worth it,if,my old partner turns up.,Somehow I couldnt do it myself,Show the readers inner world,Find,more,sentences that describe Jimmys and Bobs feelings to each other.,Highlight the theme,Jimmy and Bob shared sincere _,and they _ it a lot.However,，,when Jimmy,was faced with the,dilemma(,两难困境）,of friendship and justice,he chose to,devote to,his,_,and defend the,_.,appreciated/treasured,duty,justice/law/truth,Whats the theme of the,story?,friendship,Describe the feelings,Follow the storyline,Summary,Highlight the theme,adjectives&,Metaphor,s,Various sentence patterns,Inner world,Write your own ending to Jimmy and Bobs story,twenty years after Bob was arrested.Answer the questions to help you.,Do you want to introduce other character in the ending?If so,who are they?,What has happened to Bob and Jimmy over the past twenty,years?,What,feelings,Jimmy and Bob had?,What theme you would like to highlight?,How will the story end?,Write an ending to the story,Stepping out of jail into the cold wind,Bob,now 58,felt lost,and,helpless,.,Although twenty years had passed,he could still recognize that face,Jimmys face,Is your writing connected to the storyline?,Have you used the correct tense,?,Have you described the feelings?,Have you highlighted the theme of the story?,Peer Review,Do you think Jimmy did the right thing?Why or why not?,Share your ideas,Loyalty to friendship,vs,Devotion to justice,PPT,模板下载：, real value first lies in the choice he makes and,the right,thing he,does.,When,your,world is,crumbling(,崩溃,)and,you,think,no one,loves you,you best friend will be there,.,Assignment,Read Bobs story after he was released from jail on page 47 of your textbook,and read your work to your partner and polish it.,PPT,模板下载：, you for,watching,
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