书面表达辅导

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,山东无棣一中 王冠清,书面表达,高二政治,重要性 历年分值与要求,时 间,分 值,词 数,题 材 内 容,MET1991,15,80-100,人物介绍；介绍体育明星孙淑伟,MET1992,15,100,左右,看图；六图说明探望祖母的经过，日记,MET1993,25/150,100,左右,看图；六图讲述动物故事（阿福救人）,NMET1994,25/150,约,100,词,广播通知；通知参加欢迎美国朋友的晚会,NMET1995,25/150,80-100,看图；给,Peter,信，指明野餐（,picnic,）,道路,NMET1996,30/150,100,左右,看,表格；介绍自己基本情况，书写申请,NMET1997,30/150,100,左右,看图；六图违反交通法规，被惩罚值勤,NMET1998,30/150,100,左右,看图；六图参观农场，写日记,NMET1999,30/150,100,左右,看图；分析学校三年平面图，写信谈变化,NMET2000,30/150,100,左右,看图目击交通事故，警察局里写报告,看图作文如何写？,五个,步骤,1,、审题,文字信息,图画信息,题材、人称、时态、要点,2,、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节要点。,3,、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点 的词语扩展成句子。,4,、联句成文：,注意：,主语和谓语,背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）,逻辑关系,开头与结尾,5,、检查修改，规范抄写,练 习,根据下列图画中,Tom,骑,自行车的经历，用英语写一篇短文。短文要写得连贯、完整。字数,100,字左右,。,审 题,字 词 文,参考答案,2000,年高考,审 题,1,、体裁：叙述,Tom,骑自行车的经历，为记叙文体,2,、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘一起交通事故,3,、人称：第三人称,Tom,4,、要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点：时间、地 点、人物、事件的前后经过。,字 词 文,词：,to ride a bike,to hit his bike and fall off,句：,Tom was riding a bike along the street.,The car hit his bike and he fell off it.,文：,The other day,Tom was riding along the street.Suddenly,a car was running towards him fast and hit his bike,then he fell off it.,参 考 答 案,The other day,Tom was riding along the street.,Suddenly,a car was running towards him fast,.,He was so frightened that he quickly turned to the left side.,But,it was too late,.The car hit his bike and he fell off it.,When the driver realized that he had caused an accident,he got such a fright that he took flight with his car.,He was soon out of sight,leaving,Tom helpless on the spot.Fortunately a passer-by happened to see what had happened and remembered the number of the car,.He reported that to the police.Now the driver has been caught and,will be punished for his wrong doing,.,NMET2000,书面表达（满,30,分）,假设你是李华，在美国探亲。,2000,年,2,月,8,日清晨，你的目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。注意：,1,、目击者应该准确报告事实；,2,、词数,100,左右；,3,、结尾已为你写好。,About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.,Li,Hua,审 题,短文该错,小 结,2000,年高考书面表达审题,1,、题材：一份书面材料，报告你所目击的一起交通事故 的经过，为记叙文体,2,、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘发生过的一起交通 事故。,3,、人称：为“,I”,，,第一人称。,2000,书面表达答案,It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8,2000.1_I was walking along Park Road towards the east while 2_an old man came out of the Park on the other side of the 3_street.Then I saw a yellow car drove up Third Street and 4_,make a right turn into Park Road.The next moment the car,hitted,5_,the man while he was crossing the road.He fell with a cry.The car didt stop and drove off at great speed heading west.6_I noticed the driver was a young woman 7_but the plat e number was AC864.After 8_two minutes later I stopped a passing car 9_and brought the old man to the nearest hospital.10_,Lihua,小 结,注意选词 多用短句 慎用长句,巧用转折词，总括词,注意使用“变通表达法”,熟练运用书写技巧,欢迎你的光临,请,留下宝贵建议,