TEM4作文概要

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,TEM4,作文概要,测试要求,A.,作文：能根据所给的作文题目，提纲或图表，数据等，写一篇200个单词左右的作文。能做到内容切题，完整，条理清楚，结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺，表达得体。考试时间35分钟。（15分）,B.,便条：能根据所给提示写50至60个单词的便条，通知，请贴等。能做到格式正确，语言得体。考试时间10分钟。（10分）,命题范围,社会热点问题,(,Advantages of a Job interview; Global Shortage of Fresh Water),学校生活,(,Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?; Reading Selectively or Extensively?; A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus),科技,(,On the Internet; The Advantages and Disadvantages of Home Computer),个人兴趣,(,Why do I Prefer to Live in the Country?; The Films Give Way to TV),青少年问题,(,Teenage Smoking Soars; On the Generation Gap; Shall We Be Close Followers of New Conceptions?),评分原则及标准,评分原则：,总体评分 (,Global Scoring),方法,，,不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。,从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。,A.,作文是否体现主题思想（要求文章切题，全文统一，无不相关细节内容）,B.,组织结构是否合理（全文条理清楚，组织连贯和谐，善于使用衔接语以增强文章的逻辑性）,C.,语法文字是否有重大错误,D.,卷面布局是否整洁（字体清晰，规范大小写，词间空格，段前缩进，标点符号，减少涂改）,评分标准：,五个等级(,range-finders)，,即14分、11分、8分、5分和2分。（无半分）,字数要求：累计字数在150-170之间，扣1分；130-150之间，扣2分；110-130之间，扣3分；90-110之间，扣4分；90以下，至多给5分。,照抄提示中原句，不得计入所写字数。,只写一段者：0-4分；只写两段者：0-9分。,评卷实例,Directions: Write a composition of about 150 words on the following topic:,PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT,.,You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly your understanding of the saying. In the second part, give one or two reasons to support your point of view. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion.,Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and,appropriacy,. Failure to follow these instructions may result in the loss of marks.,Sample 1:,“Practice makes perfect” is a famous saying. The truth of it is,self-evident,.,The more,you practice,the more,skillful you will be. (Moreover), practice helps you find better ways of doing things. (As everyone can see), practice helps us to be,efficient,.,When we study English, we have so much to learn such as grammar and vocabulary. In order to learn it well, we need much practice. We must read a lot and write a lot.,Only through practice can we,have a good command of,the language.,Do remember to,practice if you want to speak English fluently and express yourself freely.,(Another case in point is) typing. A good typist can type fast and,accurately,. But you will not be surprised at her performance if you know,how much time she has spent,practising,. Through practice, she,has,both her speed and accuracy,improved,.,(It goes without saying that) practice makes perfect. Since all of us have realized the importance of practice,why not,put it into practice,?,Sample 2:,Why practice makes perfect? Because practice help you developing the knowledge and experience about what to do. The more practice you do the more skill you will improve. So you will be perfect.,For example. In the English studying, practice will make you a progress. More listening practice help you hear more fast rate, and help you hear more clearer. If you keep up reading about one hour in the morning every day, you will improve your speaking ability. And reading more novels will probably help you read more faster, more understandable. And writing practice could make you be more familiar with the English.,For another example, such as in basketball sports. More practice help you know more how to pass ball, how to throw a ball, and how to help others to play.,At all, I think practice makes perfect.,作文实考题分析,四级作文大多数为议论文，少量为说明文或记叙文。说明文和记叙文均为与考生日常生活紧密相关的话题，如：,A Brief description of My University Library; A Brief Description of My Leisure Activities,等。,议论文考题大致可分为三个类型：,A.,二选一型（题目给出两种观点，问考生倾向于哪一种观点）,例如：,It has been said, Not everything that is learned is contained in books. Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?,B.,给出一个观点，问考生是否同意这一观点,例如：“,Nowadays people spend too much of their spare time indoors.” How far do you agree with this statement? Write a composition of about 200 words to state your view.,C.,要求考生就某一现象或问题进行评论,例如：,Nowadays, many students show great enthusiasm in campus political participation, i.e. running for heads of various organizations such as Student Unions or associations. Give your comment on this entitled Campus Politics,TEM4,写作技巧,一、审题、构思、草拟提纲,例：,A Major Advantage/Disadvantage of Advertising on Television,Introduction:,Thesis: TV is the most effective medium for advertising.,Body:,A. TV is the most popular medium that reaches almost every family.,a. Computers: expensive, not needed by every family.,b. Newspapers and magazines: not subscribed by every family.,B. TV commercials are best remembered with sound, pictures and actions. (a, b,),C. TV commercials are rarely missed.(a, b,),Conclusion:,To achieve the best effect of advertisements, business organizations should promote their products and services on TV.,二、遣词造句,1. 用词得当,My voice shook with excitement.,His parents forbade him from going out.,2. 语法正确,Every man, woman, and child were asked to go to this evening party.,I left the classroom after the lecture was finished.,He looked out and saw a young lady coming through the window.,Its high time we do something to reduce traffic accidents.,There has been more and more road accidents happened in recent years.,3. 结构、意义完整,Many people in our country prefer going to work by bike. Because it is cheaper and convenient.,Bicycles are so popular in China.,He loves the dog better than his brother.,However, too many examinations probably make us very tired and nervous, and waste our much time and useless at all.,4. 句型多样化,We should,It will be wise for us to,It is important for us to,Only when we take measures now, can we,The thief disguised himself. No one would recognize him.,He saw an old woman get on the bus, he quickly stood up to offer her the seat.,My desire to go abroad will soon become a reality. It has been a dream all of my life.,It must be made use of properly, then it can produce good effects.,5. 用英语思维，写出地道的句子,For example, you work in a big factory.,Suppose you work in a big factory.,We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.,We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.,Their brain is still very young.,They are still immature.,Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.,Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.,They cant analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.,They cant tell right from wrong.,Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.,Though it is not the best job, he can make ends meet with it.,They like an active life but not a peaceful life.,They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.,No one knows all the things.,No one knows everything. (No one is an encyclopedia.),They will learn the bad habits.,They will develop bad habits.,三、文体风格,避免用词、句式、语气的过度口语化,TEM4,写作,引言段(,Introduction,),正文(,Body,),结论段(,Conclusion,),文章三部分的比例,全文（13或14个句子）,引言段（三、四句）,正文段（七、八句）,结语段（三、四句）,