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写作素养提升练,Module 6,Animals in danger,本模块以“怎样保护动物”为话题展开，以学习动词不定式的用法为主线，介绍了当前濒临灭绝的动物的现状及有关保护它们的措施。具体到书面表达中，要求同学们会写有关某种濒危动物的情况或有关动物保护措施方面的文章。,live, forest, mountain, river, bamboo, grass,leaf, allow, protect, wild, grow, enough, raise,research, baby, situation, scientist, produce,southwest, government, nature, develop, save,单 词：,in danger, nature park (reserve), at last, take away,in peace, feed on, live in (on), look after,in order to, set up, take action,短 语：,1. Many wild animals dont have a safe place to live, because villages and farms are growing bigger and are taking away their land and forests.,2. Lets find out what else we can do to save as many animals as possible.,3. In order to protect . in the wild, the government is setting up nature parks and developing other plans.,句 型：,4. It is hard to believe that there are only about one hundred South China tigers left on the earth and few live in the wild.,5. They do important research to find out the best way to protect animals.,老虎是一种濒危动物，主要生活在印度、印度尼西亚,(Indonesia),、马来西亚,(Malaysia),、中国和俄罗斯。现在仅存几千只老虎，绝大多数生活在自然保护区内。原因是,:,人们总是捕杀它们,;,森林由于遭受砍伐，面积在逐渐减少。它们需要更多的生存之地。人们必须立刻停止捕杀它们，保护它们的栖息地。写一篇倡议书，号召大家都来保护老虎。词数：,70,左右。,1.,体裁,：应用文,2.,人称,：第一人称为主,3.,时态,：主要使用一般现在时,【,审题指导,】,【,思路构建,】,Boys and girls,The tiger is an animal in danger. Tigers live in India, Indonesia, Malaysia, China and Russia. There are only a few thousand tigers living in the world now. The population is becoming larger and people take away the tigers land and forests. Most tigers have to live in nature,【,范文赏析,】,parks. The problem is that people keep killing them. Tigers need more land to live on, so we must stop people killing them right away and create more nature reserves for them.,点评：短文首先叙述了老虎所处的濒危状态及造成这种状态的原因，然后又叙述了保护老虎的措施。句用了,there be,句型，说明了老虎现存的数目。句用形容词比较级,larger,作表语，说明人口不断增长及老虎的栖息地减少的原因。句用了,stop sb. doing sth.,结构。整篇短文表述准确，意思完整。,请以,“ Animals Need Protecting”,为题，根据相关提示写一篇保护动物的短文，,70,词左右。,提示,: 1.,现状：动物是我们的朋友，但许多野生动物,(wild animals),处于濒危状态。,2.,原因：,(1),人们猎杀,(hunt),；,(2),环境破坏,(destroy the environment),；,(3),缺乏食物。,3.,现有措施：,(1),政府为了保护野生动物正在修建自然公园；,(2),人们募集善款,(raise money),帮助野生动物；,(3),制作宣传片,(publicity),，告诉人们要保护环境，不要猎杀动物。,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,Animals Need Protecting,Everyone knows animals are our good friends. However, many wild animals are in danger now. First, a lot of people hunt the wild animals. Second, people destroy the environment so that lots of animals,cant,find enough food.,Luckily, the government is setting up nature parks in order to protect all the wild animals. Many people are,raising,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,money to help them. We also make publicity to tell people to protect the environment and not to kill the animals.,To protect animals, lets start from now.,
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