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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,二级,三级,四级,五级,2020,年,7,月浙江省高考读后续写精讲,Read for basic information,who,what,when,where,Elli and I, polar bears,to photograph polar bears,a research camp outside.,Canada,Q: What was taking pictures of polar bears like?,one fall,One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at are research camp outside the polar bear capital of the world-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.,Taking pictures of polar bears is,amazing but also dangerous,. Polar bears -like all wild animals -should be photographed from a safe distance. When Im face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.,As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed and smelled our garlic bread.,The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.,Terrified. Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit potshard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though -he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子).,I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇) I took some pictures of the bear.,Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears eyes, but doesnt hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.,Q: What was taking pictures of polar bears like?,One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at are research camp outside the polar bear capital of the world-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.,Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears -like all wild animals -should be photographed from a safe distance. When Im face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.,As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed and smelled our garlic bread.,The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.,Terrified. Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit potshard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though -he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子).,I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇) I took some pictures of the bear.,Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears eyes, but doesnt hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.,Q: What does “that” refer to in this sentence?,that,One fall, my wife and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world”- the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.,Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance. When Im face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.,As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our spaghetti and garlic bread.,The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high, wire fence. He clawed, bit, and shoved the wire mesh. He stood on his hind legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.,Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, banged pots, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear-he just growled and went back to trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws.,I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter, I snapped some pictures of the bear.,Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears eyes, but doesnt hurt them.,So I crept up to our uninvited guest and, though the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar, the bear ran back to the lake to wash his eyes.,Q: What does “those times” refer to in this sentence?,those times,One fall, my wife and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world”- the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.,Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance. When Im face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.,As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our spaghetti and garlic bread.,The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high, wire fence. He clawed, bit, and shoved the wire mesh. He stood on his hind legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.,Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, banged pots, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear-he just growled and went back to trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws.,I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter, I snapped some pictures of the bear.,Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears eyes, but doesnt hurt them.,So I crept up to our uninvited guest and, though the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar, the bear ran back to the lake to wash his eyes.,those times,This time, it was going to be dangerous!,understand the structure,Orientation,setting the scene,One fall, my wife and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world”- the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.,Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance. When Im face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.,a dangerous encounter with polar bears,understand the structure,Complication,series of events,What happened?,How was it going to be solved?,As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed and smelled our garlic bread.,The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.,Terrified. Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit potshard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though -he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子).,I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇) I took some pictures of the bear.,Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears eyes, but doesnt hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.,our dinner attracted a young polar bear,Actions of my wife and I,Reactions of the polar bear,1,try bear defense actions,2,3,yell at; hit potshard; fire blank shotgun shells,making loud noises to scare bears off,keep trying to tear down the fence,radio sb for help,a helicopter, 30 m to arrive,use pepper spray,approach slowly, spray in the face,an angry roar, run to wash his eyes,understand the structure,Orientation,setting the scene,a dangerous encounter with polar bears,Complication,series of events,What happened?,How was it going to be solved?,our dinner attracted a young polar bear,we tried many ways but in vain,understand the structure,Orientation,setting the scene,a dangerous encounter with polar bears,Complication,series of events,What happened?,How was it going to be solved?,our dinner attracted a young polar bear,we tried many ways but in vain,paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to ourcamp.,Resolution,How was the problem solved?,paragraph 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.,understand the character,What character traits of my wife and I do you find in the passage? provide clues from the text.,adventurous,one single goal to photograph polar bears-amazing but dangerous,determined,Making the best of this close encounter I took some pictures of the bear.,kind,to scare bears off;,the spray burns the eyes,but doesnt hurt them,understand the character,What would be the possible reason(s) that lead the bears to the camp?,1. sniff and smell our garlic bread,2. follow his nose,3. sometimes loud noises will scare bears off-but not this one,The polar bear was in desperate need of food.,Why would a polar bear living in its natural habitat be so hungry?,climate change lead to food shortage,Lose its way to its home,Illness prevents it from hunting for food,understand the theme,two adventurous and kind fans of photography,a hungry and angry bear,They both wanted to protect themselves, one from hunger, the other from the attack.,Can the situation be solved peacefully?,Theme: can animals and humans live harmoniously with each other?,understand the language,He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.,he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws.,With an angry roar, the bear,ran,to the lake to wash his eyes.,Vivid descriptions,Descriptions of bears,Then, finally, the bear got angry, rose up on his hind legs, and began to growl.,The bear began to chase him and Keesh ran away. But as Keesh ran, he dropped a little round ball on the ice. The bear stopped and smelled it, then swallowed it.,This continued, and then the bear suddenly stood upright and roared loudly in pain and ran around wildly, beating its paws madly against its body.,After a while the bear grew weak and tired, for he was very heavy and had been jumping around violently. Finally he went off to the ice along the shore, shaking his head slowly from side to side, and sitting down now and then to squeal and cry.,-,Keesh by Jack London,Descriptions of bears,The sun caught the ends of the hairs along his back. Shining black and silky the bear stood on its hind legs, half up, and studied Brain, just studied him, then lowered itself and moved slowly to the left, eating berries as it rolled along, wuffling and delicately using its mouth to lift each berry from the stem, and in seconds it was gone. Gone, and Brian still had not moved. His tongue was stuck the top of his mouth, the tip half out, his eyes were wide and his hands were reaching for a berry.,-,Hatchet by Gary Paulsen,Descriptions of bears,But then she stopped, turned, and charged straight for me.,She was on top of me, biting my arms, shoulders, and backpack. The force of each bite was like a sledgehammer with teeth. Over and over she bit me. After what felt like hours but was merely minutes, she disappeared.,She slammed down on top of me and bit my shoulder and arms.,Suddenly she stopped. There was dead silence except for the sound of her heavy breathing and sniffing. I could feel her breath on the back of my neck and her front claws digging into my lower back below my pack, where she stood. I could smell the terrible, pungent odor she emitted. For 30 seconds, she stood there crushing memy chest smashed into the ground, my forehead in the dirt. And then she was gone.,-,The Unbelievable True Story of the Hiker Who Survived,Back-to-Back Grizzly Bear Attacks,学生习作赏析,A few minutes later, the bear came back.,With two bloodshot and swollen eyes, he let out a deafening roar, charged at the fence and shoved the mesh with his full strength. The fence couldnt help trembling. Moaning and groaning, which deeply wrung our heart.,It would have devastated anything in its way and attack us in a few minutes. We have no aternative but to anxiously wait for the helicopter.,With a cracking noise, the bear rushed in, approaching us rapidly. We tried pepper spray again, but in vain. Elli and I were forced to flee separately to escape the outrageous claws.,At the very moment, the helicopter arrived. With the bear chasing behind, “Elli, come on,” I yelled, attracting the bear to an opposite direction, but unfortunately, I was trapped to a narrow corner, where I could almost hear the gasps of it. At the very moment, several gunshots echoed to scare it off.,The bear lifted his face and stared at the giant figure of the helicopter. Slowly, he flinched. Relieved yet enhausted, I climbed into the helicopter, hugging tightly with Elli.,It was such a breathtaking experience, but as I developed the film later, it all just became worthwhile.,点评：本文通过细腻的描写勾画出了千钧一发之际的惊险，（字数超出规定，不忍删减，当然也会跟学生探讨这个问题）；最后“洗出的照片”很完美地回照了前文！,学生习作赏析,Afewminuteslater,thebearcameback.,Nosetwitchingandmouthwideopening,heslammedonthebrokenfencewith hispowerfulpaws.Wecouldevensawthesharpteethinsideandheardthedeepvoicefromthebottomofhisthroat.He was absolutelyonedge.Wepacedback,lookedstraightintohiseyesandpretendednottobeafraid.Onthevast snowfield, nothingcouldbeheardexceptourrapid heartbeatswiththecracksfromthefence.Suddenly,ahuge shadowpouncedonuswithoutmercy.Achillspreadingdownmyspine,whatwecould dowaslyingdownandpraying.,Attheverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.Anarrowwith specialmedicinewasshot,whichcameintoeffect immediately.Thebearfaintedontothegroundjustseveralmetersawayfromus.Wequicklypackedourbaggage, boardedthehelicopterandfinallybreathedasighofrelief. Lookingoutside,themassivebearseemedhelplessespeciallyinthisfrozenisland.Themanagerexplainedthatitwasthe climatechangethatforcedpolarbearsintosuchhungry situation.,Weraisedourcameraandshootthe,lonelybear withthemeltedglacier,hopinghimto be safe and sound.,点评：本文部分描写语言略显生涩，但结尾的远景描写，意境深远，主旨得到升华，构思巧妙！,学生习作赏析,Afewminuteslater,thebearcameback. As the spray had run out, we were confined into a desperate stage. With little weapon to defend ourselves in this temporary camp, every mosel of flesh in our bones shrank when the angry bear smashed the poor fence once and once again. Ultimately, he made it. To our surprise, the bear rushed straight towards the leftovers of our dinner, leaving us precious time to escape the narrow camp where we would be easily attacked. However, a heavy growl quickly caught us up before we could secure a safe shelter.,Attheverymoment,thehelicopterarrived. With a loud bang, the beast fell down. Had it not been for the staffs timely shot, we migh not have survived under the bears massive paws. It took time to calm ourselves down and it brought us great relief to know that the bear hadnt been killed. It was only a mild medicine injected to make it fall asleep. Sunshine poured on the bears fur, painting it with lovely golden colour. It was really an unforgettable experience and luckily we both had lost nothing.,点评：本文基本到位描绘了人熊大战的场景，作者也很暖心地“留了一命”，遗憾的是，结尾句的表达还略有欠缺，需要通过把握文本隐藏线索和主旨大意，更好地改进。,原文结尾欣赏,A few minutes later, the helicopter arrived. As we were lifted into the air, we saw the stubborn bear was already heading back to our camp. When Elli and I got home and developed our pictures, we noticed this bear had broken an important tooth. Like humans, polar bears feel pain, have emotions, and can be afraid. Elli and I learned our lesson: beware of a bear with a toothache.,