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专题十六 书面表达,高考,英语,(课标,专用),Writing 1(2017课标全国),假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀,请他加入,内容包括:,1.球队活动;,2.报名方式及截止日期。,注意:,1.词数100左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,五年高考,A组 统一命题,课标卷题组,答案,写作提示,1.本文为提纲类作文。人称应以第一、二人称为主,时态以一般现在时、一般将来时为主。,2.写作要点:导入话题:鉴于Eric对乒乓球运动的兴趣,特告知他校乒乓球队招收新队员的消息;,介绍球队活动,可从日常训练安排以及比赛活动入手;告知Eric报名方式,提醒他务必在截止,日期前完成报名。,One possible version:,Dear Eric,I,,m writing to invite you to join our school table tennis team. I have been told that our school team,is recruiting new members. Knowing that you are keen on playing table tennis, I wonder if you,,d,like to join.,Team members need to receive training after school every day and are often offered opportunities to,watch table tennis competitions, which benefit me most. What do you think of it? If you are interest-,ed in it, you can visit the school website to sign up. The closing date is 15th June.,I hope to meet you in the school team.,Yours,Li Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇recruit,v,.吸收;招募be keen on酷爱,对,着迷,2.出彩结构Knowing that you are.I wonder if.me.(现在分词短语中that引导宾语从句;wonder,后的if引导宾语从句),Writing 2(2017课标全国),假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内,容包括:,1.时间和地点;,2.内容:学习唐诗;,3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。,注意:,1.词数100左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案,写作提示,1.本文为电子邮件,属于书信类。人称为第一人称,写作时态以一般将来时为主体时态。,2.内容要点:上课的时间和地点; 上课的内容:学习唐诗;课前要求:简要了解唐朝的历史。,One possible version:,Dear Leslie,I am writing to inform you of our course schedule of our next class, which is about poetry of the,Tang Dynasty. We will have it this Friday, in Classroom 602, Building 6. In order to learn it better,you need to do the following things before the next class.,At first, please read some materials about poetry of the Tang Dynasty, which plays an extremely sig-,nificant role in our literature. You can find some original poems of famous poets, such as Li Bai and,Du Fu. Besides, knowing the history of the Tang Dynasty will be of great benefit for you to under-,stand the background of the poems.,You are so diligent and I am glad to teach you. I sincerely look forward to our next class and your reply.,Yours,Li Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇extremely,adv,.极其play a role in在,起作用,2.出彩结构At first, please read some materials about poetry of the Tang Dynasty, which plays an,extremely significant role in our literature.(which引导非限制性定语从句),Writing 3(2017课标全国),假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内,容包括:,1.展览时间、地点;,2.展览内容。,注意:1.词数100左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案,写作提示,1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为书信。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主,以一般现在时和一般将来,时为主体时态。,2.文章要点:,1)展览时间、地点;,2)展览内容:中国传统剪纸艺术的历史和作品。,One possible version:,Dear Henry,I,,m Li Hua, one of your students. I,,m writing to invite you to visit the paper-cutting exhibition. Pa-,per-cutting is one of Chinese traditions and I,,m sure you will like it.,The exhibition will be held in the local museum next Saturday. Some famous Chinese artists will,perform on that day. Meanwhile, some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all over the,country, will be exhibited there. It will be a feast. If you like, you can also join in paper-cutting. I,,m,sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.,Im looking forward to hearing from you.,Yours,Li Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇exhibition,n,.展览unforgettable,adj,.难忘的,2.出彩结构If you like, you can also join in.(if引导条件状语从句),Writing 4(2016课标全国),假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:,1.表示歉意;,2.说明原因;,3.另约时间。,注意:,1.词数100左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案,写作提示,1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为应用文电子邮件。主要人称为第一人称,时态主要用一般现在,时。,2.文章要点为告诉对方你不能赴约的原因并表示歉意和另约时间,虽然题干中已经给出要点,但,重在适当地发挥。,One possible version:,Dear Bob,I,,m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found,that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you,too much trouble.,Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we,,ll have more time to read and se-,lect books. If it,,s convenient for you, let,,s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know,what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.,Yours,Li Hua,精彩语句,1.available,adj,.有空的,2.cause sb. too much trouble 给某人造成太多的麻烦,3.If it,,s convenient for you, let,,s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. (避免了出现汉式英语:If you,are convenient),Writing 5(2016课标全国),假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋,友Peter写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括:,1.主题:环境保护;,2.展览时间;,3.投稿邮箱:,intlphotoshow,。,注意:,1.词数100左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案,写作提示,1.本文属于应用文,按照要求写一封书信,应使用第一人称。基本时态用一般现在时。,2.本文要点:1)主题:环境保护;2)展览时间;3)投稿邮箱。,One possible version:,Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography,Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for,three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures,and you,,ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed,me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for,more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to,intlphotoshowgmschool.,com.,Hope to hear from you soon.,Yours,Li Hua,Writing 6(2016课标全国),假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms,Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。,注意:,1.词数100左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案,写作提示,1.本文为半开放式作文,体裁为书信。人称为第一人称,时态主要用一般现在时。,2.文章要点包括告诉对方你的情况(想去一家外资公司兼职)和要求(帮助修改申请书和个人简,历)。,One possible version:,Dear Ms Jenkins,I,,m one of your students, Li Hua from Class Two. I,,m writing to ask for your help.,This summer I intend to take up a part-time job in a foreign company, through which I would like to,broaden my horizons, gain some working experience and meet new friends. My application and re-,sume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them. Firstly, I,,m wondering,if you can help add some contents. Besides, if there are some mistakes in them, I hope you can help,correct them. Lastly, I attach some materials whose format had better be changed and hope you can help.,I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to do so much for me.,Looking forward to your early reply.,Yours truly,Li Hua,Writing 7(2015课标全国),假定你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festi-,val)。请给外教露西写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括:,1.出发及返回时间;,2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。,注意:,1.词数100左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;,3.结语已为你写好。,Looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li Hua,答案,写作提示,1.本文为应用文电子邮件的写作,属于提纲类作文。在写作时应使用第一人称,时态主要为,一般现在时和一般将来时。,2.内容要点:(1)出发及返回时间;(2)在敬老院的活动:包饺子、表演节目等。,One possible version:,Dear Lucy,I,,d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double,Ninth Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.We,,ll go and make dumplings and cakes,with the elderly people there.We,,ll also spend some fun time together singing,dancing and playing,games,which we hope will make them happy.We should be back around 4 o,,clock in the afternoon.,If you are able to come with us,please let us know and we,,ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in,the morning.,Looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li Hua,Writing 8(2015课标全国),假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。,请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:,1.栏目介绍;,2.稿件内容;,3.稿件长度:约400词;,4.交稿日期:6月28日前。,注意:,1.词数100左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;,3.开头语已为你写好。,Dear Peter,I,,d like to ask you to write an article for our school,,s English newspaper.,答案,写作提示,本文为书信体提纲式作文。写作时以一般现在时为基本时态,以第一人称为主体人称;注意要点,要齐全,包括栏目介绍、稿件内容、稿件长度和交稿日期;写作时注意恰当地使用衔接词和过渡,词,以使文章行文连贯、流畅,这一点是高考英语高分作文所必须具备的要素。,One possible version:,Dear Peter,I,,d like to ask you to write an article for our school,,s English newspaper.,The“Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries arti-,cles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write,something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especially welcome ar-,ticles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,and the life of American high school,students.You can write anything relevant so long as it,,s interesting and informative.400 words,would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?,Im looking forward to hearing from you.,Yours,Li Hua,Writing 9(2014课标全国),假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该,校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。,注意:1.词数100左右。,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,3.参考词汇:住宿accommodation,Dear Sir/Madam,Yours faithfully,Li Hua,答案,写作提示,1.本文属于图表类作文,在写作时要用第一人称,基本时态以现在时为主。,2.内容要点:,说明写信的目的;,开课时间和每周上课时间;,班级大小;,收费情况;,住宿类型。,3.参考词汇:,住宿 accommodation宿舍 dormitory,One possible version:,Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I,,ve seen your ad,and I,,d like to know something more about your six-week English course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?Besides,I wish there would,not be too many students in a class.I,,d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and,whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?,I am looking forward to your early reply.,Yours faithfully,Li Hua,Writing 10(2014课标全国),一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。,1.家庭;,2.工作;,3.业余生活。,注意:1.词数100左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;,3.开头语已为你写好。,I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.,答案,写作提示,1.本文为提纲式作文,注意不要遗漏内容要点,注意上下文的连贯性。,2.人称需用第一人称,时态以一般将来时为主。,3.注意结尾要有总结性语句。,One possible version:,I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.,I think my life will be very different in ten,years.I will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will have my own family,probably with a lovely,child.I hope I,,ll work in a computer company as a program designer.I,,ll enjoy my work and get a-,long well with my colleagues.I,,ll do a good job in whatever I do.In my free time,I,,ll continue to,take regular exercise,such as swimming,running and various ball games.On my holidays,I,,ll travel,around the world.In a word,my life will be much richer and more colorful.,Writing 11(2013课标),假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的,那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明:,李明:高个子,戴眼镜,航班号:CA985,到达:8月6日上午11:30,注意:1.词数100左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;,3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,Dear Peter,How are you doing?,Looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li Hua,答案,写作提示,1.本文属提纲类作文,在写作时主要使用第二和第三人称,基本时态为一般将来时。,2.内容要点:,说明写信目的;,请求Peter接机;,介绍李明外貌特征;,说明航班号、飞机到达时间。,3.参考词汇及句型:attend a conference/go for a conference 开会;meet sb.at the airport接机;flight,number 航班号;Would you please.?/Could you help me to.?/Would you mind.?,One possible version:,Dear Peter,How are you doing?,I,,m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference,and I,,ve asked,him to bring you the Chinese painting you,,ve asked for before.,Also,I,,d like you to do me a favor.Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to,his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.?Thank you in advance!,His flight number is CA985,and it will arrive at 11:30 am,August 6.My uncle is tall and he is wear-,ing glasses.And he will be in a blue jacket.,Looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li Hua,Writing 12(2013课标),假定你是李华,自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信,请他代卖,要,点包括:,1.外观(尺寸、颜色、材料),2.象征意义,3.价格,注意:1.词数100左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;,3.开头语已为你写好。,Dear Tom,How are you doing?,Li Hua,答案,One possible version:,Dear Tom,How are you doing?,I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.I made them myself with,red silk threads,cloth and other materials.They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond,about,5 inches long and 4 inches wide.In China,these knots stand for friendship,love and good luck.People,can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.They are only 12.99 US dollars,each.If anyone wants to know more about the knots,let them write to me.Also,do let me know if you,need further information.Thank you!,Li Hua,考点一提纲类,Writing 1(2017天津),假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请根,据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。,(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;,(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入,了解天津等);,(3)希望她有机会重访天津。,注意:,(1)词数不少于100;,(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;,(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。,参考词汇:第十三届全运会the 13th National Games,Dear Mrs. Green,B,组 自主命题,省（区、市）卷题组,I,,m so glad to hear from you.,Yours,Li Jin,答案,写作提示,1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为应用文。人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。,2.写作要点:,(1)介绍自己的学习和生活;,(2)告诉Mrs. Green你已成为第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍你为此所做的准备;,(3)希望Mrs. Green重访天津。,One possible version:,Dear Mrs. Green,I,,m so glad to hear from you.,With the college entrance examination drawing near, I am engaged in,preparing for it. Meanwhile, owing to my great interest in sports, I pay close attention to the 13th Na-,tional Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. And the good news I want to tell you is that,I have become a volunteer for it. In order to have a good performance, I have made a lot of prepara-,tions for it. After class, I often surf the Internet to get more information about the history and culture,of Tianjin. Practicing my oral English is also becoming my schedule.,I do hope you can return to Tianjin as soon as possible.,Yours,Li Jin,精彩语句,1.精美词汇performance,n,.成绩be engaged in 忙于,2.出彩结构With the college entrance examination drawing near, I am engaged in preparing for it.,(with复合结构),Writing 2(2017北京,第一节),你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者,“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:,1.你建议的线路;,2.你的理由;,3.你的祝愿。,注意:1.词数不少于50;,2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,Dear,Jim,Yours,Li Hua,答案,写作提示,1.本文为提纲类作文。体裁为应用文中的书信。时态以一般现在时为主。,2.先介绍建议的旅游线路,再陈述理由,最后表达祝愿。,One possible version:,Dear,Jim,I,,m happy to receive your letter and know you,,re coming to China.,Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I,prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civiliza-,tion. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along,the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That,,s why I think the trip along the,Yangtze will be a better choice.,Hope you,,ll have a good time in China.,Yours,Li,Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇recommend,v,.推荐civilization,n,.文明,2.出彩结构That,,s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.(表语从句),Writing 3(2017浙江,第一节),假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:,1.参加者;,2.时间、地点;,3.活动:登山、野餐等。,注意:,1.词数80左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案,写作提示,1.本文是一封邀请英国朋友参加郊游的邮件,因此,时态要用一般现在时和一般将来时。,2.注意本文的要点:时间、地点、参加者和活动,不可以遗漏要点。在表述的时候不可逐字翻译,可以将一些信息包含在从句、分词结构中。,3.注意句子之间的顺畅连接以及高级句式的使用。,One possible version:,Dear Chris,How is everything going these days? I am writing to invite you to join my class in an outing orga-,nized by me this Saturday, June 10th. We will start at 6 o,,clock early in the morning from the school,gate, and then take a bus to Yinling Mountain, where we will climb the mountain in the morning,and then have a picnic at noon. If you could come, there is no need for you to take food but you,,d,better wear sports shoes and suitable clothes.,We will be really glad if you can come. Looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇suitable,adj,.合适的,2.出彩结构If you could come, there is no need.clothes.(if引导状语从句),Writing 4(2016天津),假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的,交流活动。现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。,(1)回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);,(2)谈谈收获或感想;,(3)表达祝愿与期望。,注意:,(1)词数不少于100;,(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;,(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,Dear friends,How time flies!,Thank you.,答案,写作提示,1.本文为欢送会上的发言稿,人称为第一人称,写作时态用一般过去时、一般现在时、一般将来,时。,2.写作要点包括:回顾双方的交流活动,细数收获或感想,表达祝愿与期望。,One possible version:,Dear friends,How time flies!,I am Li Jin, president of Student Union of Chenguang Middle School. It,,s my great,privilege to be here, sharing this moment with our fellow friends from the Great Britain. During the,two-week activities, we surely exchanged our ideas on learning, ways of life, PE and cultures. One,of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with each other in the basketball match.,The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship. It is not only your enthusiasm but also,your teamwork and good spirits that impress us. After the two-week exchange activities, we now,have a better understanding of each other on a whole new level. And I sincerely hope our friendship,lasts forever. Wish you all the best!,Thank you.,Writing 5(2015陕西),假定你是李华,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事,并根据,写作要点,和,写作要求,写一封应征邮件。,Volunteers Wanted,Our annual English Festival,which will be held on June 1517,2015,is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show,Speech Contest,and English Debate.If you are inter-ested,please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at chenlaoshiaef.com.,写作要点:,1.表达写信意图:,2.陈述应征目的;,3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。,写作要求:,1.邮件词数不少于100;,2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;,3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;,4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。,Dear Ms Chen,I,,m Li Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3.,Looking forward to your reply.,Yours truly,Li Hua,答案,写作提示,1.本题为提纲类作文,在写作时主要使用第一人称,时态主要包括一般现在时和一般将来时。,2.内容要点:(1)表达写信意图;(2)陈述应征目的;(3)说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。,One possible version:,Dear Ms Chen,I,,m Li Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3.,I,,m writing to apply for the position as a student volun-,teer.,I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because,by offering my service,I will be able to im-,prove my organisational ability,communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English,in public.,As an outgoing girl,I get along well with my classmates.Besides,I have such a good command of,English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Successfully,I have lent a helping hand,to her in several English activities of my class,which have been appreciated by both teachers and my,classmates.,I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be grateful if you could give me a,kind consideration.,Looking forward to your reply.,Yours truly,Li Hua,Writing 6(2015天津),假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津,你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根,据以下提示,写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系,并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营,时带去赠书。,(1)自我介绍;,(2)拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;,(3)询问对方的其他需求。,注意:,(1)词数不少于100;,(2)请适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。,生会the Student Union,Dear Chris,Yours,Li Jin,答案,写作提示,1.书信格式,用第一人称和第二人称,主要用一般现在时和一般将来时;,2.要点齐全:自我介绍;捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;询问对方的其他需求;告知将,于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。,3.注意上下文的连贯性和书信语言的得体性。,One possible version:,Dear Chris,I,,m Li Jin,chairman of the Student Union in Chenguang High School.I,,m writing to tell you some-,thing about donating books to your class.To enhance communication with your school,we prepared,about 100 books ranging from Chinese cartoon to literature.With them,you may have a better under-,standing of China and its culture.We,,ll take the books when participating in the summer camp this,July to your school.,Would you please tell me something about your other requirements? We will spare no effort to meet,your needs.I sincerely hope that we may exchange with each other more and develop our friendship.,Best wishes!,Yours,Li Jin,Writing 7(2014陕西),假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请,根据,写作要点,和,写作要求,写一篇欢迎词。,写作要点:,1.表示对客人的欢迎;,2.介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等);,3.表达对客人的祝愿。,写作要求:,1.词数不少于100;,2.称呼已经给出,请写欢迎词正文;,3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。,Dear American guests,答案,写作提示,1.本文为一篇欢迎词,体裁属于应用文,人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主,在介绍活,动时应用一般将来时。,2.内容要点:,(1)表示对客人的欢迎;,(2)介绍此项活动;,(3)表达对客人的祝愿。,One possible version:,Dear American guests,On behalf of our school,I would like to express our warm welcome to you.We are lucky to h
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