话题-过去的经历写作课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,#,Past events and experiences,学习目标,1,、能用不同时态描述过去的经历；,2,、能正确使用用一般过去时、过去进行时、现在完成时、过,去完成时。,3,、写作策略,:,复合句在写作中的运用,Past events and experiences,1. Places you have ever (never) been to,2. Unforgettable events,3. Unexpected events,佳句欣赏与模仿,The most interesting museum,Ive ever been to,is the American Computer Museum!,我去过最好玩的地方是西藏。 它给我很多难忘的体验。,2. Wells made it sound,so,real,that,hundreds of people believed the story, and fear spread across the whole country. Molly,被帐篷外的蛇吓坏了。她太害怕了以至于发不出一点声音。,The most fun place Ive ever been to is Tibet. It gave me so much unforgettable experience.,Molly was frightened by the snake outside the tent. She was so afraid that she couldnt say a word.,3. Many people ran to their local supermarkets to buy,as,much spaghetti,as they could,.,当我意识到自己可能错过火车时， 我尽可能让自己快点赶到车站。,_,4.,Thats why,its important to learn a second language.,他乐于助人，那是我把他当成最好朋友的原因。,_,When I realized that I may miss the train, I got to the station as quickly/fast as I could.,He is always ready to help others. Thats why I regard him as my best friend.,5.,Although,the storm broke many things apart, it brought families and neighbors closer together.,尽管这是一次可怕的经历，我们仍然学到了有用的教训。,_,6.,I couldnt believe my eyes when,I saw so many different kinds of toilets there.,在回家的路上看到如此拥挤的交通时，我感到难以置信。,_,Although it was a terrible experience, we still learned a useful lesson.,I couldnt believe my eyes when I saw so heavy traffic on the way home.,Places you have ever (never) been to,Where have you visited for you last summer vacation?,I have ever been to Qingdao. I went there with my,parents. It was a beautiful and clean city. We have been to the beach and swum in the sea. We have visited the famous aquarium. There were all kinds of fishes. We watched a dolphin show. It was very lovely. How unforgettable trip it was!,have been to, things have done, feelings .,Unforgettable events,what, when, where, who,On a cold afternoon, I went to work as usual.,While I was walking out of the gate, a firework was,thrown at me. I cried and fell down on the ground.,When I woke up, a thief was stealing something,from my coat. How scary it was!,By the time I got outside, the bus had already left.,How unlucky it was!,You can imagine,how strange it is,!,感叹句归纳：,_,amazing,it was!,_,wonderfully,Liu Qian performaned!,_ an,surprising,experience,it was !,_,great,school trip,it was !,_ happily we sang and danced!,_ embarrassing I felt when I was late for school!,_ meaningful volunteer work we did!,_ interesting teacher she is!,How,How,What,What a,How,How,What,What an,感叹句表达经历！,More practice,Fill with,“,while,”,or,“,when,”,1._ May,was talking,on the phone, her son,got lost,.,2._ Rita,bought,her new dog, it,was wearing,a pink coat.,3._ I saw Bill, he was shouting at his wife.,4._ I,was dancing, he,was singing,loudly.,5. _ Linda finally saw Davy, he was jumping with a dog .,6. I was cleaning my room _ the fire broke out .,When,While,While,When,When,when,Lets read and write. (,读写综合,),A,信息归纳：请阅读下面短文，完成表格。,Last weekend, I went shopping with my friends. On my way home, I saw an old lady lying on the ground, crying. There were many people around her. I went to her and found that she was bleeding, I was sure that she was very dangerous at that time, but nobody gave her a hand.,I had to make a decision: should I go home or help the woman in need? In fact, it was hard for me to decide what to do. If I helped the lady, her family may think it was me who hurt her. I didnt want any trouble. On the other hand, if I did nothing, the woman would die if nobody helped her.,At last, I decided to help her. I sent her to the hospital and tried to find her family members. The woman was saved in time and they all thanked me.,A few days later, the family of the woman called my teacher and told him the story. Our teacher praised me. I was happy I could help others. To be honest, I also hoped that when I fell down one day, there would be someone who could help me out.,When did the writer go shopping?,1.,What did the writer see on the way home?,2.,Did the writer help the lady,at last?,3.,What did the family of the woman do a few days later?,4.,What would happen if nobody help the woman?,5.,Information Card,Last weekend,An old lady lying on the,ground,cring,Yes ,he/she did,Called the teacher.,She would die,B.Writing,人的一生中总会遇到这样那样的事情，会有各种各样的经历。请你以,My Unforgettable Experience,为题。描述你曾经遇到过的一件刻骨铭心的事情。必须阐明事情发生的时间，地点，经过以及结局等。字数：,80,字左右。,My Uncfogettable Experience,.,I will never forget the experience that happened .,_,【,写作指导,】,1.,审题：,是写一篇叙事短文，体裁应该是记叙文。时态应该以一般过去时为主。人称应该是第一人称为主。,2.,抓点：,要点一定要齐，批改作文时是按要点给分。这篇的作文的要点是,4,个，即：时间地点经过结局。这,4,个要点缺一不可。,3.,斟酌词句：,表达时间和地点可以用,in,the street on Monday;,表达经过、结果可以用到的句型：,Firstly / next / then /after that / at last,。,适当,运用从句，谚语可以加分。,4.,学会仿写,。善于从给出材料中找出可以借鉴的句式。,5.,书写规范，不涂鸦,。在同等情况下书写工整的同学分数决会高于书写不工整的同学。千万不要在试卷上乱涂乱画，写一些与作文无关的话语：包括拼音、汉字以及涂鸦。,My _experience,Beginning,：,I will never forget the experience that happened,in the street last Sunday,.,I had a very,unusual,experience on Sunday.,My _experience,Body,Firstly / next / then /after that / at last,What was worse / What was more,After / When / While ,At the same time,To my surprise,It was sothat,Believe it or not,The process of event(,事件的进展,),When , Where, When, What, Why,I still cant believe I met such a,shocking,thing in my life.,It was one of the most,interesting,things I had ever seen.,It was the first time I experienced such things, isnt it,amazing,?,Time flies! But this experience is still fresh in my memory.,My _experience,Ending,：,I will never forget the experience that happened,on a hot summer afternoon,my father and I went to,the swimming pool,to swim.,While my father was changing his clothes, I was playing by the pool. Suddenly, I slipped into the pool by accident!,I was so afraid that I shouted at once,! But the water kept coming into my mouth and I drank a lot of it.,I thought I would die there. To my surprise, I was able to keep myself above the water!,Just then, my father saw me and he helped me out quickly,.,From this unforgettable experience I learnt that one has to stay calm when its dangerous. To calm down helps you to think clearly and make the best decision for you. Time flies! But this experience is still fresh in my memory.,My Unforgettable Experience,【,佳作展示,】：,如何批改作文,要点,记,3,分,要点,记,3,分,要点,记,3,分,善用从句加,2,分,佳句加,2,分,Thank you for listening!,