英语写作技巧传授ppt课件

Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,英语写作技巧,创造闪光点，作文亮一点,高分作文标志,1,：是否,长短句交叉,；,2,：是否会使用,插入语,；,3,：用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的,闪光词,；,4,：关键词是否换用，,切勿老用重复词,；,5,：,句型,使用是否,准确,、地道。,写好一篇作文的注意事项,1.,适当用被动替换主动，,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用,we / I,。,eg:,It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,，,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.,写好一篇作文的注意事项,2.,善于使用插入语,，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。,如,however / therefore /for example/I believe,做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。,eg,：,Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ,写好一篇作文的注意事项,3.,一定要学会换词，具体的替换太宽泛的。,(,考试中一般不要出现,good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion,等等,),比如上面例子中，,applicable,替换,proper, approaches,替换,ways, implement,替换,carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge,替换,enhance ones competitiveness(,提高某物竞争力,),Computer and IBy Simmy,I never forget the,exceedingly,thrilling,day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which,exerted a tremendous fascination on me,so that i indulged myself in,googling,an army of,useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.,替换,very,替换,exciting,替换,sb. be interested in sth.,替换,search,替换,a lot of,范文,The dawn of the new century witnessed,the increasing popularity,of computers.,Coincident with,the,advancement,of science and technology, computers,pouring into,the,current,society as a fashion are,appealing to,growing numbers,of individuals.,It is no exaggeration to say,we have been submerged by them, in large measure!,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；,替换,more and more popular,替换,with,替换,development,替换,enter into,替换,now,替换,sb. be interested in sth.,替换,more and more people,经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的,范文,For a start,we can, freely, search,desired information at any moment . Little by little,our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.,Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.,To begin with,插入语,被动,替换,In addition / Besides,替换,send,范文,There is no denying that , however, computers can,function in the disservice,of human beings,in a way, especially the growing violence, porn pictures, which leads quiet a few,net citizens,to copying.,替换,do harm to,网民，精彩用词,范文,As a classic proverb goes that,no garden has no weeds,. Computers,do,play a,positive,role in the development of people lives, despite,a slice of,unfavorable,impacts,.,We should ,therefore, take advantage of the,fruits and avoid the opposite,facet,.,替换,Every coin has two sides,强调,替换,important / good,等,替换,a part of,替换,bad,替换,effects / influences,插入语,替换,aspect,30,个最经典的替换词,1.individuals, folks,替换,(people ,persons),2:,positive, favorable, rosy,(,美好的,),，,promising,(,有希望的,),，,perfect,pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior,替换,good,30,个最经典的替换词,3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill,(,有害的,),替换,bad,如果,bad,做表语，可以有,be less impressive,替换,eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.,30,个最经典的替换词,4,.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most),替换,many.,注：用,many, if not most,一定要小心，,many,后一定要有词。,Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.,同理 用,most, if not all ,替换,most.,30,个最经典的替换词,5:,a slice of, quiet a few , several,替换,some,6:,harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that,替换,think(,因为是书面语，所以要加,that),30,个最经典的替换词,7:,affair,business ,matter,替换,thing,8:,shared,代,common,9:,reap huge fruits,替换,get many benefits ),10:,for my part ,from my own perspective,替换,in my opinion,30,个最经典的替换词,11:,Increasing(ly),growing,替换,more and more(,注意没有,growingly,这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用,increasing/growing.,修饰形容词，副词用,increasingly. Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.,Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.,30,个最经典的替换词,12:,little if anything,或,little or nothing,替换,hardly,13:,beneficial,rewarding,替换,helpful,14:,shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换,customer,15:,exceedingly,extremely,intensely,替换,very,30,个最经典的替换词,16.,hardly,necessary, hardly inevitable,.,替换,unnecessary, avoidable,17.,sth,appeals to sb,sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb,替换,sb take interest in / sb. be interested in,18.,capture,ones attention,替换,attract ones attention.,19.,facet,sphere,代,aspect,30,个最经典的替换词,20.,be,indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of,代,indicate, suggest ,fear,21.,give,rise to, lead to, result in, trigger,替换,cause.,22.,There are several reasons behind sth,替换,.reasons for sth,23.,desire,替换,want.,30,个最经典的替换词,24.,pour,attention into,替换,pay attention to,25.,bear,in mind that,替换,remember,26.,enjoy, possess,替换,have(,注意,process,是过程的意思,),27.,interaction,替换,communication,30,个最经典的替换词,28.,frown,on sth,替换,be against , disagree with sth,29.,to,name only a few, as an example,替换,for example, for instance,30.,next to / virtually impossible,替换,nearly / almost impossible,一二三原则,1,）,first, second, third, last,（不推荐，原因：俗）,2,）,firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally,（不推荐，原因：俗）,3,）,the first, the second, the third, the last,（不推荐，原因：俗）,4,）,in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly,（不推荐，原因：俗）,5,）,to begin with, then, furthermore, finally,（强烈推荐）,一二三原则,6,）,to start with, next, in addition, finally,（强烈推荐）,7,）,first and foremost, besides, last but not least,（强烈推荐）,8,）,most important of all, moreover, finally,9,）,on the one hand, on the other hand,（适用于两点的情况）,10,）,for one thing, for another thing,（适用于两点的情况）,开头段常用核心句型,The arguer may be right about, but he seems to neglect to mention the fact that,Contrary to generally accepted views, I argue that,It is true that, but this is not to say that,The main/obvious problem with this argument is that it is blind to the basic fact that,It would be natural/reasonable to think that, but it would be absurd to claim that,开头段常用核心句型,There is absolutely no reason for us to believe that,At first thought, it may seem an attractive idea, but on second thought, we find that,The problem/fact is that,As far as I am concerned, I believe that,Those who object toargue thatBut people who favor, on the other hand, argue that,中间段的常用核心句型,The change inmainly results from,The increase inis due to the fact that,Many people would claim that,One of the reasons given for is that,There are a variety of reasons for this dramatic growth in First Second Finally,Why are (is/do/did)? For one thing For another,中间段的常用核心句型,History is filled with the examples of,As is shown in the table released by the government, it can be learned that,There is (no) good evidence to,We must admit the undeniable fact that,No one can deny the fact that,Experience (Evidence) suggests that,The same is true of,结尾段的常用核心句型,It is high time that we placed great emphasis on the improvement of,It is high time that we put an end to the unhealthy situation (tendency/phenomenon) of,There is no easy solution to the problem of, but might be useful.,Unless there is a common realization of, it is very likely that,It is essential that effective measures should be taken to prevent the situation.,结尾段的常用核心句型,It is suggested that great efforts should be made to control the growth of,It is hoped that great efforts should be focused on finding (developing/improving),Anyway, more publicity should be given to the potential effects of,To control the tendency is not an easy job, and it involves a different state of attitude towards,To put all into a nutshell, I,1.,人的活动是有意识的。这决定了人类活动的预期性、目的性。,2.,人类社会是有组织的。这种组织性决定了人类活动的秩序性、规则性，导致人类活动的领导与被领导、权威与服从关系的确立。,3.,人类社会是不断发展的。从这三方面来说，人类社会从其诞生开始，就有了领导活动。,4.,是若干领导者按照一定的原则、制度科学地排列组合起来的，彼此间相互作用、相互影响的具有高度组织性和能动性的有机整体。这一集体，由其中的最高层的领导者负责和统领，次级领导者充当集体成,5.,第一种方法是不提及纠纷的具体内容，晓以大义。这种调解法就是告诉纠纷的一方或双方，个人的事再大也是小事,.,6.,在语言的发展过程中，逐渐形成了约定俗成的语法规则，并随着社会的发展而进行必要的更新；其中，尤以某些词语在词性、词义和用法的变化，新词汇的不断涌现最为显著。,7.,磁砖是一种陶瓷，但许多人并不知道，陶是陶而瓷是瓷，陶瓷是对它们的合称，实际上指的是两回事。,8.,在历史上，陶器比瓷器的出现要早得多，比如我国彩陶时期，距今约有七千年左右，而到了商代才有原始青瓷，可以说瓷器是在陶器的基础上发展起来的。,9.,在空调空调压缩机的电动机绝缘击穿、匝间短路或绕组烧毁以后，由于电动机烧毁后产生大量酸性氧化物而使制冷系统受到污染。,10.,因此，除了要更换压缩机、毛细管与干燥过滤器之外，还要对整个制冷系统进行彻底的清洗。轻度污染时制冷系统内冷冻油没有完全污染，从压缩机的工艺管放出制冷剂和冷冻油时，油的颜色是透明的。若用石蕊试纸试验，油呈淡黄色。,感谢观看！,