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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2020/6/17,#,英语书面表达写作策略,英语书面表达写作策略,1,历年日照中考作文分析:,2015,年之前分值为,10,分,,15,年至今一直为,15,分。,(,2015,),随着手机功能日增多,越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动,成为“手机控”一族。假定你某校学生,请根据以下提示写一篇短文,,向某英文报投稿,。,谈谈你对该现象的看法和建议。,“手机控”的表现,沉迷于手机娱乐活动(聊天、看电影等),与朋友和家人的交流减少,离开手机会有焦虑等异常情绪表现,“手机控”的危害,对健康不利,影响学习,你的建议,参考词汇:手机控,a phone freak,焦虑,anxious (adj.),沉迷于,be addicted to,注意:,1.,内容须包括所提示信息,可适当发挥;,2.,文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;,3.90,个单词左右。开头已经给出,不计入总词数。,Today, many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. They,历年日照中考作文分析:,2,(2016),假如你是李华,你的英国笔友,David,发邮件向你咨询如何学好汉语。请根据提示和要求用英语给,David,回复,邮件,。,要求:,1.,除上图所给提示外,再写出两条,如何学好汉语的,建议,;,2.,文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;,3.,字数,90,词左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,Dear David,Im glad to receive your email. Heres some advice on how to learn Chinese well.,_,_,Best wishes.,Yours,,,Li Hua,(2016)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友David发邮件向你咨,3,2014,级,8,班同学群,汤姆,,美国人,,15,岁,爱好体育和音乐。暑假想来中国学中文、了解中国文化,正在寻找寄,宿家庭(,homestay,),。,1.,住光华国际学校附近;,2.,家中有文化氛围(爱好中国画、京剧等);,3.,有同龄人,会讲英语。,Tom2017,假如你是该群的李华,请给,汤姆,写一封电子邮件,,,邀请,他到你家寄宿。,要求:,1.,可根据留言内容,适当发挥;,2.,文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;,3.,词数,90,左右;邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,光华国际学校,: Guanghua International School,(2017),2014级8班同学群汤姆,美国人,15岁,爱好体育和音乐。暑,4,(2018),假如你是李华,上周末到青岛拜访你的朋友美国留学生,Mike Harris,将背包遗落在他的房间里,包内有学生证、,i-pad,和英语词典。请你给他,写一封电子邮件,说明情况,让他尽快将背包寄回,并,邀请,他到黄海市共度暑假。,邮寄地址:黄海市红星中学,9,年级,1,班,要求:,1.,根据内容,可适当发挥;,2.,文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;,3.,词数,90,左右。,Dear Mike,,,I really enjoyed my stay with you last weekend._,_,Yours,,,Li Hua,(2018),5,近,4,年中考书面表达分析:,15,年、,16,年:陈述所给问题、现象,并给出建议看法。,problems/ facts + suggestions/opinions,17,年、,18,年:陈述现象,并邀请对方。,facts + opinions/invitation,写作特点:,夹叙夹议,据实描述,+,适当发挥,据实描述即 提示、要求,适当发挥即 细节、观点,体裁:应用文,词数:,90,词左右(多于,90,,少于,110.,书写大小适中,占版面的,4/5,最佳。),近4年中考书面表达分析:,6,Structure,(,文章结构),Beginning:,topic sentence,Body,:,Supporting sentence,Ending:,Concluding sentence,Structure (文章结构)Beginning:,7,Basic rules,(写作方法),1 Search,(,审题),style,(体裁),person,(人称),tense,(时态),2 List,(列出重点),短语、句式列出来,文章内容(要求)要列全(,如有漏点导致内容不全,扣分最多,),Basic rules (写作方法),8,3,Beautify,(美句,课本重点短语、句式、谚语等),word,sentence,phrase,Which is better?,我希望你能帮助我。,A. I hope you can help me.,B. Im,looking forward to,your help.,我们应该努力取得好成绩。,A. We should work hard to get good grades.,B. We,are supposed to,make an effort to,get good grades.,我们应该拯救地球。,A. We should save the earth.,B. Everyone should,play a part in saving,the earth.,Tips,:,1,不影响句意前提下可以拓展、丰富。,2,尽量用课本学过的短语、句式。,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,3 Beautify(美句 课本重点短语、句式、谚语等)T,9,4 Connect,(,连接,句子及段落过渡语),段落连接,开头:,As we all know,/We know that ,(众所周知),(,未给开头可用),These days, the topic about is more and more popular.,结论:,All in all,/ In a word, /,In my opinion,(view),句子链接,表并列:,bothand./,not only but also./,neither nor.,表递进:,Besides,,,/ Whats more,表因果:,because(of)/,as a result,/so,表转折:,However,/,although/after all,表对比:,on the one hand,on the other hand,(,议论文多用),表解释举例:,for example,/such as/,in other words,/,表顺序:,Firstly, Secondly, ( Thirdly, )Finally,First, Next, Then, Finally (Lastly),表强调:,especially,,,/ In fact,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,4 Connect (连接 句子及段落过渡语)英语书面表,10,5 Add (,加开头、结尾及内容的拓展),文章只给内容(,body,),开头、结尾需要自己写。最能体现文采。,加例子,适当拓展。,(历年中考均有,1.,根据内容,可适当发挥;,),Eg,: (2018),请你给他写一封电子邮件说明情况,让他尽快将背包寄回,,并邀请他到黄海市共度暑假。,参考范文,Summer vacation is coming.,Would you like to come to Huanghai for your vacation?,Im sure well have a good time together .,Looking forward to seeing you soon!,(添加内容),英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,5 Add (加开头、结尾及内容的拓展)英语书面表达写作策,11,我市在争创文明城市,为更好落实市政府要求,学校决定举办以,How to behave well,?,为主题的英语征文比赛,请你写一篇,90,词左右的短文参加比赛。,要点提示:,1.,守时,守信,不撒谎,不说脏话;,2.,礼貌待人,热心助人;,3.,遵守交通规则;,4.,不,在,公共场合喧哗,不,乱,扔垃圾。,就此话题再补充一至两点,个人看法,。,参考词汇:,obey,遵守,注意:开头已给出,不计入总词数。,(,build a civilized city,创建文明城市),How to behave well,?,Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.,practice,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,我市在争创文明城市,为更好落实市政府要求,学校决定举办以Ho,12,1,审,体裁:应用文 人称,:,第一人称,时态:一般现在时,2,列,1.,守时,守信,不撒谎,不说脏话;,2.,礼貌待人,热心助人;,3.,遵守,交通规则;,4.,不,在,公共场合喧哗,不,乱,扔垃圾。,就此话题再补充一至两点,个人看法,。,参考词汇:,obey,遵守,As a student,We should,be,on time and keep promises.,Dont,lie or say dirty words.,We should,treat others politely, and be ready to help others.,We should,obey the traffic rules.,We should,not speak loudly in public or throw litter .,In my opinion/view,we should,learn to work with others.,应该,(最好,/,是重要的),be supposed to/be expected to/had better (not) do/,It is (im)polite to do/It is rude to do/It is important to do,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,1 审 英语书面表达写作策略(23张)作文课件作文指导优秀作,13,参考范文:,How to behave well?,Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.,As a student, _,I think,its very important to,do everything on time and keep promises.,Never,lie to others or say dirty words,_. /_,We should,be polite to others and ready to help people in need. /_,Wed better not,talk loudly in public.,Dont,throw litter or spit everywhere. /_,remember to obey traffic rules.,_,learn to work with others. We need good teamwork in our life.,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,参考范文: 英语书面表,14,How to behave well?,Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others.,As a student,the first important thing is to,be on time and keep promises.,We should not,lie to others or say dirty words, either,.,Secondly,We are supposed to,be polite to others and ready to help people in need.,Thirdly,Wed better not,talk loudly in public.,As we all know,it is impolite to,throw litter, so never do it.,Finally, (Last but not the least,),remember to obey the traffic rules.,In my opinion,with,the development of,our society,everyone is expected to,learn to work with others. (We should,pay attention to the importance of,teamwork.),英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,15,Tips,:,1,尽量用熟悉的句子,最好变换使用课本句子。,不确定的最好不用,以免出错。,平时学习时把知识点记牢。,2,“要求”,中的内容切忌直译,灵活转换,尽量用高级表达翻译出意思。,尽量,变换句式,,用不同的句式表达类似意思,避免用法单一。,一般,3,段式(最少),但要避免段数过多,不像文章。(通常,3-4,段为宜,),陈述内容段,必须要有顺序连接词,。,书写要工整,,不涂、不划、尽量不改。,下笔有力度,不要太轻飘,也不要太用力。,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,Tips :英语书面表达写作策略(23张)作文课件作文指导优,16,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(23张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课,17,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(23张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课,18,Self-challenge,假如你是一名中学生李华,到英国学习、生活了三个月。在,那,儿期间,你住在戴维(,David,)家中。现在学习结束回国,给戴维写一封信表达感激之情,内容包括以下方面:,要求:,1.,字数,90,左右;,2.,信件内容要包含所给的提示信息,可适当发挥;,3.,信的开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数,。,Dear David,,,I have just got back home. I want to say “Thank you most at the moment.,表达谢意,感谢对你的照顾。,难忘的事,1.,帮助你学习英语,带你去参观了许多地方;,2.,戴维的父母在你生病时送你去医院,给你做好吃的食物。,学习收获,发出邀请,邀请,戴及家人来中国游玩。,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,Self-challenge表达谢意感谢对你的照顾。难忘的事,19,Dear David,,,I have just got back home. I want to say “Thank you most at the moment.,During,my stay with your family, I,was well taken care of.,First of all,you,helped,me,with,my English.,Besides,you,showed me around,many places.,Whats more,When,I was ill, your parents,took me to the hospital,and,prepared,delicious food,for,me, so I got well soon.(They,looked after,me,so,carefully,that,I got well soon.),With your help,my English has greatly improved.,At the same time,Ive learned more about British culture.,Thank you for,what you have done!,Id like to,invite you and your family to visit China.,(,Looking forward to hearing from you,.),Yours,Li Hua,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,Dear David,英语书面表达写作策略(23张)作文课件,20,评分说明:,(2018),要求考生用适当的,完整准确地表述所提示的内容,书写 工整。,第一档 短文,通顺完整,,能包含所有要点,表达,清楚流畅,语言,基本无误,,13,15,分,;,第二档 短文,较通顺完整,,表达,基本清楚,,语言有,少量错误,,10,12,分,;,第三档 能写明,基本要点,,短文,不够通顺完整,,语言有,较多错误,但尚能达意,,7,9,分,;,第四档 仅能写明,部分要点,,短文,不完整,,语言,错误多,影响意思,表达,,4,6,分。,第五档 仅能写出与文章有关的,单词或片语,,03,分,。,2.,查看错误,按照错误扣分。,( 1),属于第一档次的作文,若无语法错误和拼写错误可给满分。,( 2),语法错误每,2,处扣,0. 5,分。词汇错误每,4,个扣,0. 5,分。同一错误不重复扣分。,3.,书写潦草卷面不整洁扣,1,分,(,1-3,分),英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,评分说明: (2018)英语书面表达写作策略(23张)作文课,21,Reorganize your composition.,Write it on your paper and hand in.,Homework,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,Homework英语书,22,Thank you!,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,英语书面表达写作策略(,23,张)作文课件作文指导优秀作文专题课件中考作文高考作文,ppt,Thank you!英语书面表达写作策略(23张)作文课件,23,
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