高考英语作文应用文写作技巧课件

文体解读：文体解读：在日常生活、学习、工作中，个人与个人在日常生活、学习、工作中，个人与个人交往，个人与集体交往，集体与集体交交往，个人与集体交往，集体与集体交往都需要用文字交流，这种文章就被称往都需要用文字交流，这种文章就被称为应用文。应用文是一种常见文体，具为应用文。应用文是一种常见文体，具有很强的实用性。近些年高考题对考生有很强的实用性。近些年高考题对考生在应用文方面的写作要求相当普遍，命在应用文方面的写作要求相当普遍，命题形式多为文字提示，写作形式主要有题形式多为文字提示，写作形式主要有书信、电子邮件、日记、通知、演讲稿、书信、电子邮件、日记、通知、演讲稿、发言稿、便条等。发言稿、便条等。文体解读：1一一 书信书信一书信2六句口诀六句口诀六句口诀六句口诀v开门见山说意图开门见山说意图v信息要点覆盖到信息要点覆盖到v举一反三讲细节举一反三讲细节v语言正式词多变语言正式词多变v感谢客气不能少感谢客气不能少v期待回信成老套期待回信成老套v注：首段表明写作目的注：首段表明写作目的 中间扩展内容（注意读信人的感受）中间扩展内容（注意读信人的感受）末段表明礼貌，并说出自己的期望末段表明礼貌，并说出自己的期望六句口诀开门见山说意图3Class4SeniorBaodingNo.1HighSchoolHebei,ChinaMay4th,2011TomBlackPaceMiddleSchoolNewYork,NY10038U.S.ADearTom,GladtoreceiveyourletterofDecember1Bestregardstoyourparents，Yourssincerely,ZhangHong写信人地址写信人地址写信日期写信日期收信人地址收信人地址称呼称呼正文正文结束语结束语谦称谦称签名签名4书信的开头和结尾可使用的基本用语书信的开头和结尾可使用的基本用语常用开头语常用开头语vImveryglad/happy/pleasedtoreceiveyourletterofvImgladtoreceiveyourletterdatedonvHowareyougettingalongwithyourstudies?vIdlovetocome,butIcantbecause/Imreallysorrytosay结尾结尾Imlookingforwardtoreceiving(longingtoreceive)yourreply.Allmybestwishestoyou./Remembermeto/Goodlucktoyou./Thankyouagain.书信、电子邮件书信、电子邮件书信的开头和结尾可使用的基本用语书信、电子邮件5（20052005）假定你是李华，正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训，）假定你是李华，正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确（箭头所指内容）。请给该旅行社发但一些具体信息不明确（箭头所指内容）。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。注意：注意：1 1词数词数100100左右，信的格式已为你写好。左右，信的格式已为你写好。2 2可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3 3参考词汇：牛津参考词汇：牛津Oxford Oxford 费用费用feefee（2005）假定你是李华，正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划6内容要点：内容要点：开头；开头；是否有学生特价；是否有学生特价；票价包含的项目；票价包含的项目；是否有午餐；是否有午餐；返回时间；返回时间；是否有购物时间；是否有购物时间；内容要点：7DearSir/MadameImwritingformoreinformationaboutthedaytourtoLondon.AsastudentatOxfordUniversity,Idliketoknowifyouhaveanyspecialpriceforstudents.Asforthemoneyyoucharge,doesitcovertheentrancefeesforvisitingtheplaceslisted?Whataboutlunch?Isitincluded?OrdoIneedtobringalongmyownfood?Howlongwillthetourlast?SinceIneedtopreparemylessonsforthenextday,Idliketoknowthetimetoreturn.Besides,isthereanytimeforshopping?IreallywanttohavealookatthebigstoresinLondon.DearSir/Madame8自荐信、申请信、求职信自荐信、申请信、求职信写作要点：写作要点：介绍消息来源介绍消息来源表明感兴趣表明感兴趣说明优势说明优势请求答复联系请求答复联系表明感激之情表明感激之情自荐信、申请信、求职信写作要点：9开头开头1.Idliketoapplyforthejob/post/positionadvertisedin2.Havingknownthatyouneed/arelookingfora,Imwritingtoapplyfortheposition/Iwouldliketoapplyfortheposition.3.Ihavelearnedfromyouradvertisementthatyouareinneedofa4.Imwritingtoexpressmyinterestinyourrecentlyadvertisedpositionfora结尾结尾1.Ishallbemuchobligedifyouwilloffermeanopportunityforaninterview.2.PleaseconsidermyrequestandImlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.3.IwouldgreatlyappreciateitifIcouldhavethechance.开头10vIunderstandthatIhavethequalificationsandexperiencethatyouneedforthepersonnelinyourcompany.Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldconsideremployingmeinyourcompany.IunderstandthatIhavetheq11表示信心、表示信心、能力、兴趣或承诺能力、兴趣或承诺vIhaveexcellentqualificationsforthisposition.vImsurethatIcandoagoodjobinyourcompany.vImfit/suitablefortheposition.vIwillsparenoefforttodothejobwell.vIpromisetoofferthebestservice.表示信心、能力、兴趣或承诺12v年龄年龄 v学习情况及英语水平学习情况及英语水平v学历学历v兴趣和特长兴趣和特长 v性格特点性格特点:善于交往、乐于助人、合作精神善于交往、乐于助人、合作精神年龄13自荐信、申请信、求职信自荐信、申请信、求职信Dearsir/madam,Imwritingthelettertoapplyforthepositionthatyouhaveadvertisedin消息来源消息来源.Asa/an_.Ihavebeen_.Besides,Iwon_in_.Ifyouconsidermyapplication,pleasecallmeat_.ThankyouforconsideringmyapplicationandImlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua自荐信、申请信、求职信Dearsir/madam,14 （20062006全国卷全国卷IIIIII）假定你是李华假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办将在你居住的地方举办,现在正在招募志愿者现在正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信写一封申请信.内容应包括内容应包括:1.1.个人情况：年龄、性别、学历个人情况：年龄、性别、学历;2.2.个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况于助人、熟悉本地情况;3.3.承诺：提供最佳服务。承诺：提供最佳服务。注意：注意：1.1.词数词数100100左右，开头语已为你写好；左右，开头语已为你写好；2.2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.3.生词：申请生词：申请apply(v.),application(n.)；志愿者志愿者volunteer真题回放真题回放（2006全国卷III）假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动15DearSir/Madam.My name is Li Hua,I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.Iamaboy/girlof17andIamstudyingathighschoolnow.IamgoodatEnglishandIcantalkwithforeigntouristsinEnglishfreely.IbelieveIcandoagoodjobfortheGames.First,IlikesportsandIknowtheplaceverywell.Second,Igetalongwithotherseasily,whichisespeciallyusefulforavolunteer.Third,Imreadytogivehelpwheneveritisneeded.MypromiseistoofferthebestservicepossibletothepeopleattheGames.Pleaseconsidermyrequest,andImlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaDearSir/Madam.16DearSir/Madam.MynameisLiHua,IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames.Iamaboy/girlof17andIamstudyingathighschoolnow.IamgoodatEnglishandIcantalkwithforeigntouristsinEnglishfreely.IbelieveIcandoagoodjobfortheGames.First,IlikesportsandIknowtheplaceverywell.Second,Igetalongwithotherseasily,whichisespeciallyusefulforavolunteer.Third,Imreadytogivehelpwheneveritisneeded.MypromiseistoofferthebestservicepossibletothepeopleattheGames.Pleaseconsidermyrequest,andImlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaIamaboy/girlof17，studyingathighschoolnow.ImeasytogetalongwithImgoodatcommunicatingwithothers.Imreadytohelpwhoeverneedshelp.DearSir/Madam.Iamaboy/g17假设你是新华大学的学生李华，得知某英文报招假设你是新华大学的学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报社聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。写一封自荐信。1 1表示感兴趣；表示感兴趣；2 2说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历；相关经历；3 3希望得到回复希望得到回复。DearSirorMadam,ImastudentfromXinhuaUniversity.Thankyouverymuch.Yourssincerely,LiHua假设你是新华大学的学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有18DearSirorMadam,ImastudentfromXinhuaUniversity.Imgladtolearnthatyouwantafewpart-timeEnglishreporters.Imquiteinterestedinit.IthinkImfitforthejob.Asastudent,Ivereadalotandhavemuchknowledgeinmanyfields.ImfondofEnglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting.Besides,Imeasytogetalongwithandenjoyworkingtogetherwithothers.Aboveall,Ionceworkedasareporterformyschoolbroadcastingstation.SoImsureIcandothejob.Imlookingforwardtoanearlyreplyifpossible.AndIdappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldcallmeat.Thankyouverymuch.Yourssincerely,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,19DearSirorMadam,ImastudentfromXinhuaUniversity.Imgladtolearnthatyouwantafewpart-timeEnglishreporters.Imquiteinterestedinit.IthinkImfitforthejob.Asastudent,Ivereadalotandhavemuchknowledgeinmanyfields.ImfondofEnglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting.Besides,Imeasytogetalongwithandenjoyworkingtogetherwithothers.Aboveall,Ionceworkedasareporterformyschoolbroadcastingstation.SoImsureIcandothejob.Imlookingforwardtoanearlyreplyifpossible.AndIdappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldcallmeat.Thankyouverymuch.Yourssincerely,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,20DearSirorMadam,Idliketoapplytobecomeanassistantinyourcompany.IhavegraduatedfromHebeiUniversityofTechnologywithaMastersdegreeinmechanicalengineeringthissummer.Inthepastfewyears,Ihavegotexperienceindesigningnewprojectsanddevelopedgoodprofessionalcompetenceinmysubjects.Iworkedinmyholidaysforacompanythatdesignedenginesforjeeps.Ihelpedthemdesignseveralpartsofthenewengine.ItmademethinkIwouldliketoworkinarealinventorscompany.IunderstandthatIhavethequalificationsandexperiencethatyouneedforthepersonnelinyourcompany.Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldconsideremployingmeinyourcompany.Yourssincerely,TomSmithDearSirorMadam,21高考英语作文应用文写作技巧课件22高考英语作文应用文写作技巧课件23高考英语作文应用文写作技巧课件24高考英语作文应用文写作技巧课件25高考英语作文应用文写作技巧课件262011辽宁Dear Sir/Madam,I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary.Im really interested in this position and hope I can work for you.Im 18 years old and will be graduating from Xinxing Foreign Languages School this July.Im an excellent student,among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.Im good at English,especially spoken English.I often use the computer and I type very fast.In my spare time,I read a lot.Poems are my favorite.I enjoy music very much too.Being an active young person.I like sports and outdoor activities.Besides,Im easy to get along with and I like to make friends.Im looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours,Li Hua 2011辽宁DearSir/Madam,Il27结构结构HelloYourssincerely/truly,开门见山开门见山起到交际作用起到交际作用语言得体语言得体Imwritingtoinviteyoutobeajudge.Itwillbeagreathonorifyoucancome.Wouldyoupleasesparesometimeforus?Iwonderifitisconvenienttoyou.主被动主被动、时态、时态Thespeechcontestwillbeheld介词运用介词运用Itwilllastfrom2:00pmto5:00pm.onJune15thinClassroom501典型错误典型错误Chairman/president/head(master)Judge/judgmentThereare10studentsmakespeecheswelcomesb.todo优秀表达优秀表达aroundthecorner,onbehalfof，deliverspeeches结构HelloYourss28邀请信邀请信写作要点：写作要点：邀请对象；邀请对象；活动内容、时间、地点；活动内容、时间、地点；与该活动有关的注意事项；询问是否接受邀请；询问是否接受邀请；期待对方接受邀请，并可表示感谢。期待对方接受邀请，并可表示感谢。语言注意点语言注意点:邀请信叙事（时间地点场合）一定要清楚、明白。邀请信叙事（时间地点场合）一定要清楚、明白。如写给朋友，可选用活泼、真诚的言辞；如写给长如写给朋友，可选用活泼、真诚的言辞；如写给长辈、上级、名人等，语言则应正式、礼貌。辈、上级、名人等，语言则应正式、礼貌。开门见山，亮明身份、说明原因，起到交际应用作开门见山，亮明身份、说明原因，起到交际应用作用。用。邀请信写作要点：语言注意点:29v开头开头:ImwritingtoinviteyoutoIdlikeyoutocometoMayIhavethehonorofyourcompanyatv结尾：结尾：Iwillfeelhonored/gratefulifyoucancome.Itwillbeagreathonorifyoucancome.Iwonderifitisconvenienttoyou.Wouldyoupleasesparesometimeforus?WesincerelyhopeyoucanattendWearelookingforwardto开头:Imwritingtoinviteyou30Dear_,Howiseverythingwithyou?Imwritingtotellyouthattherewillbea内容内容at/in地点地点on时时间间.Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.Theoccasionwillstartat具体时间具体时间.Thiswillbefollowedbya进一步的安排进一步的安排.Ringmeupandtellmewhetheryouwillcomeornot,willyou?Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.Myphonenumberis_.Lookingforwardto_.YourssincerelyLiHua邀请信邀请信Dear_,邀请信31（20102010全国全国）假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华，）假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华，你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speechcontest）,希望附近某大学的外籍教师希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith 女女士来做评委，请参照以下比赛通知给她写一份信。士来做评委，请参照以下比赛通知给她写一份信。英语演讲比赛英语演讲比赛 主题：人与自然主题：人与自然时间：时间：6 6月月1515日下午日下午 2:002:005:005:00地点：地点：501501教室教室参赛选手：参赛选手：1010名学生名学生联系人：李华（电话联系人：李华（电话 ）欢迎大家光临欢迎大家光临（2010全国）假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华，你校将举办32DearMs.Smith,ImLiHua,ChairmanoftheStudentUnionofYucaiMiddleSchool,whichisclosetoyouruniversity.ImwritingtoinviteyoutobeajudgeatourEnglishspeechcontesttobeheldinourschoolonJune15.Itwillstartat2:00pminRoom501andlastforaboutthreehours.Tenstudentswilldelivertheirspeechesonthegiventopic“ManandNature”.Wehopethatyouwillacceptourinvitationifitisconvenientforyou.Pleasecallmeat44876655ifyouhaveanyquestions.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Withbestwishes,YourssincerelyLiHuaDearMs.Smith,33Directions:YouwanttoinviteMr.WilliamstogivealectureonAmericanliteratureinyourcollege.SupposedyouaretheassistantoftheEnglishdepartment,writealetterandsay:1)thepurposeoftheinvitation.2)thetimeofthelecture.Yourlettershouldbenolessthan100words.Youdontneedtowritetheaddress.Dontsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter,useLindainstead.Directions:Youwanttoinvite34DearMr.Williams,IamwritingonbehalfoftheEnglishDepartmenttoinviteyoutogivealectureinourcollege.WeknowthatyouareanexpertonAmericanliterature.AsEnglishmajors,ourstudentswouldliketoknowsomethingaboutAmericanliterature.WewouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldgiveatalkonContemporaryAmericanLiteraturetostudentsoftheEnglishDepartmentonSaturday,June4.Ifthissubjectdoesnotsuityou,anyothersimilartopicwouldbewelcomeaswell.Wehavealreadyhadseveralveryinterestingtalksfromsomedistinguishedvisitorsfromvariouscountriesandwelookforwardearlytotheopportunitytobenefitfromyourexperienceandwisdom.Yourstruly,LindaDearMr.Williams,35 表达写信人对于某一种情况的不满意（商品质量表达写信人对于某一种情况的不满意（商品质量问题、服务、所遇到的困扰等），向有关单位写问题、服务、所遇到的困扰等），向有关单位写信投诉、提出意见，用词较正规，无客套语。信投诉、提出意见，用词较正规，无客套语。投诉信投诉信v首段首段;写作意图、投诉内容写作意图、投诉内容v主体段落：展开说明投诉原因主体段落：展开说明投诉原因(重点，叙事应客观重点，叙事应客观准确简洁准确简洁)v结尾段：紧迫性，提出解决方案，表达愿望（不需结尾段：紧迫性，提出解决方案，表达愿望（不需要展开，切实可行）此段应体现书信的礼貌原则，要展开，切实可行）此段应体现书信的礼貌原则，应当有类似应当有类似“如你能如你能，我将万分感激，我将万分感激”的话语。的话语。v在表达不满时，语言要把握分寸、不失风度在表达不满时，语言要把握分寸、不失风度内容有理、批评有节内容有理、批评有节表达写信人对于某一种情况的不满意（商品质量问题、服务、所36Dear_,Imwritingtoyouforsth/totellyousthabout投诉的内容投诉的内容.简述导致矛盾的事件简述导致矛盾的事件.表达本人曾做的努力表达本人曾做的努力.投诉原因一投诉原因一.Besides，投诉原因二投诉原因二.Tobefrank,客观的评论以示诚恳客观的评论以示诚恳.Idohope/Irequirethat 表达本人期待的解决方案表达本人期待的解决方案.Thankyouforyourtimeandkindconsideration.Yourssincerely,LiHua投诉信投诉信Dear_,投诉信37vComplainaboutvPutupwith/bear/toleratevAwful/poor/terribleservice/qualityvGive/bringmeagreatdealoftroublevOutofonesexpectationvLookinto/investigatevIncident/mattervSolve/settle/dealwithvBadmannersvPreventtherecurrenceof/stopsuchthingshappeninganymore常用词汇常用词汇Complainabout常用词汇38开头：开头：1.Imwritingtomakeacomplaint/complainabout/that2.ImwritingtoinformyouthatImdissatisfiedwithyour/informyouofmydissatisfactionwith3.Iamwritingtoexpressmyconcern/dissatisfaction/disappointmentabout4.Imwritingtocall/drawyourattentiontosomeproblemsabout5.Ifeelbad/sorrytotroubleyoubutIamafraidIhavetomakeacomplaintabout投诉信投诉信开头：投诉信39结尾：结尾：1.Thankyouforyourkindconsideration.2.Yourattentiontothisletterwillbehighlyappreciated.3.Idohope/requirethatyoucanconsidertheseproblemsandmakemoreimprovements.4.Iwouldappreciateit/begrateful/besatisfiedifyoucouldkindly5.Itrustyouwilltakemycomplaintsseriouslyand6.Idliketohavethismattersettledbytheendof/within/assoonaspossible.7.Inviewoftheinconveniencethatthishascaused,Ifeelyoushould8.Isincerelyhopesuchthingswillneverhappenagain.结尾：40(2008(2008湖北湖北)假设你是卜曼宜假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机。因有质量问题司生产的手机。因有质量问题,要求该公司更换。要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件。用英文写一封电子邮件。1.1.问题问题:手机不响铃手机不响铃,不能发短信不能发短信;该产品已售完该产品已售完,无法更换无法更换;型号新型号新,无配件无配件,无法维修。无法维修。2.2.要求要求:公司应尽快予以更换。公司应尽快予以更换。参考词汇参考词汇:配件配件(sparepart)DearSir，IamwritingtoyouforthemobilephoneofDephone-S250Iboughton20thApr.2008atTeleMallinWuhan,P.R.China.(2008湖北)假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的41DearSir，IamwritingtoyouforthemobilephoneofDephone-S250Iboughton20thApr.2008atTeleMallinWuhan,P.R.China.Ten days after that,itdidntringorsendshortmessages.ThenItookittotheseller,but wastoldthatthemodelhadbeensoldoutandIhadtowaitatleastthreemonthsforanewone.LaterIwenttotherepairman.Hesaidsinceitwasanew-modelinChina,itwasimpossibletofixitwithouttherightspareparts.Iwassodesperateonhearingthat.HowcanIwaitthatlong?Therefore,Irequirethatyousendmeanewoneofthesamemodelwithinamonth.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Sincerelyyours,BuManyiDearSir，42DearSir，IamwritingtoyouforthemobilephoneofDephone-S250Iboughton20thApr.2008atTeleMallinWuhan,P.R.China.What bothers meisthequalityofthemobilephone.Theproblemsareas follows:Tostartwith,not only does it fail to ringbutalsoitcantsendamessage.Besides,thiskindofphonessellsowellthat nonecanbefoundatthemarket.Asaresult,Icantchangemyphoneforanewone.Whatsworse,it being such a new product,thesparepartsofthephonearenot availableatthemoment.Asaconsequence,itsimpossibletoget it changed.As is known to all,theserviceofyourcompanyhasbeenpraisedbymanyguestsandIhopethatyourcompanycangetmyphonechangedassoonaspossible.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Sincerelyyours,BuManyiDearSir，43vYouliveinaroomincollegewhichyousharewithanotherstudent.Youfinditverydifficulttoworktherebecauseyourroommatealwayshasfriendsvisiting.He/shehaspartiesintheroomandsometimesborrowsyourthingswithoutaskingyou.vWritealettertotheAccommodationOfficeratthecollegeandaskforanewroomnextterm.Youwouldpreferasingleroom.Explainyourreasons.Youliveinaroomincollege44DearSirorMadam,IamwritingtoinformyouthatIwishtomoveintoanewroomnextterm.Iwouldpreferasingleroom,asIfindthepresentsharingarrangementinconvenient.Imustexplainthatthereasonformydissatisfactionismyroommatesinconsideratebehavior.Foronething,hisfriendsareconstantlyvisitinghim.Foranother,heregularlyholdsnoisyparties.Inaddition,hesometimesborrowsmythingswithoutaskingme.Inthesecircumstances,Ifinditdifficulttoconcentrateonmystudies,andIamfallingbehindinmyassignments.Iamsureyouwillagreethattheonlysolutionisformetomoveintoaroomofmyown,whereIwillbefreefromsuchdistractions.Therefore,Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldfindasingleroomforme,preferablynotinthesamebuildingbutasneartothecollegecampusaspossible.Yourssincerely,JaniceKennedyDearSirorMadam,45Directions:Youfoundsomethingwrongwiththetelephonebillyouhavereceivedfromthelocalpostoffice.Youmadeacalltoinquireaboutthis;howeverthepersonwhoansweredthecallwasveryrude.Writealetterofcomplainttothemanagerofthepostoffice,explainingthesituationandgivingyoursuggestionsforimprovement.Yourlettershouldbenolessthan100words.Youdontneedtowritetheaddress.Dontsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter,useDonnainstead.Directions:Youfoundsomethin46DearSir,Iamwritingtocomplainabouttheterribleattitudeofoneofyourstaffmember.Ireceivedmytelephonebillforthepreviousmonthfromyouandthoughtthereweresomeerrorsincalculation:Ihadbeenoverchargedfortwooverseascalls.However,whenIcalledyourComplaintsDepartment,thegirlwhoansweredmyphonewasveryrude.Foronething,sheinterruptedmecontinually.Foranother,sheevensaidthatthefaultwasmyown.Needlesstosay,suchawayofdealingwithcustomersisunacceptable.Iwouldliketosuggestthatthegirlshouldbedisciplined,andinstructedontheproperwaytodealwithconsumers.AndIdohopeshecanmakeaformalapologytome.Anearlyresponsewillbeappreciated.Sincerelyyours,DonnaDearSir,47开头：开头：Imwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning.结尾：结尾：1.Yourattentiontothisletterwillbehighlyappreciated.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful.建议信建议信开头：建议信48Dear_,Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto_.Thenitalsohelpsto_.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato_.Youcanalso_.Imsure_.Yours,LiHua(引出对方需要建议的主题引出对方需要建议的主题)(根据需要用不同的句式提出建议根据需要用不同的句式提出建议)(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心)建议信建议信Dear_,(引出对方需要建议的主题)(根据需要用49DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyoulllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TryandwritemeinChinesenexttime.BestwishesYours,LihuaDearPeter,50DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyoulllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TryandwritemeinChinesenexttime.BestwishesYours,LihuaDearPeter,511)IsuggestdoingIsuggest/recommendthatWhatIsuggestisthatMysuggestionisthat2)Itsagoodideatodo3)Itishelpful/important/beneficialtodoItisofgreathelp/importance/benefittodo4)Youdbetterdo5)Whynotdo?6)Ihopethat.7)Youshould提出建议提出建议Isuggestdoing提出建议52(2010(2010(2010(2010江苏卷江苏卷江苏卷江苏卷)假设你应邀参加学校组织的假设你应邀参加学校组织的假设你应邀参加学校组织的假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座英语学习师生座英语学习师生座英语学习师生座谈会谈会谈会谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。出建议。出建议。出建议。注意：注意：注意：注意：1.1.1.1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2.2.2.2.词数词数词数词数150150150150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。3.3.3.3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。自己英语学自己英语学习的情况习的情况1.1.英语学习的目的英语学习的目的2.2.英语学习的方法英语学习的方法3.3.课外自学的途径课外自学的途径 .对学校英语对学校英语教学的建议教学的建议（请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两（请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议）。至三点建议）。真题回放真题回放(2010江苏卷)假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈53v给与学生更多学以致用的机会给与学生更多学以致用的机会v老师多推荐阅读材料老师多推荐阅读材料v更多的活动更多的活动给与学生更多学以致用的机会54Dearsir,ImgladtoshowmyideaonhowtoimprovetheEnglishteaching.Herearesomesuggestions.Firstofall,givingthestudentsmorechancestoputthetheoryintopracticeisimportant,becauseitwillimproveourabilitytouseEnglish.Inaddition,itsevenbetteriftheteachersrecommendmorereadingmaterialstousstudents,asitwillenrichourvocabulary.Lastbutnotleast,itsofgreatbenefittoholdmoreactivities.OnlyinthiswaycanwebuildourconfidenceinlearningEnglishandbeinterestedinit.Ihopethatyoucantakemyadviceintoconsideration.Yourssincerely,LiHua陈瑶陈瑶Dearsir,55Dearsir,ImwritingtoexpressmyadviceonhowtoimprovetheEnglishteaching.Hereareafewsuggestions.Inthefirstplace,itisofgreathelptoholdsomeactivitiesaboutlearningEnglish,forexample,EnglishSpeechContest.bydoingso,studentscanimprovethemselvesalot.Moreover,whynotrecommendsomeEnglishmaterialswhicharesuitableforstudentstothem?Youknow,readingisthebestwaytolearnalanguage.Latbu