思维导图与高考英语书面表达ppt课件

英语写作讲解英语写作讲解英语写作讲解1影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素因素1.语篇信息是否完整语篇信息是否完整2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。3.是否使用高级词汇是否使用高级词汇4.是否使用复杂句是否使用复杂句5.卷面整洁卷面整洁,书写工整书写工整影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个2写作基本步骤：写作基本步骤：1.仔细审题，列举大纲。仔细审题，列举大纲。2.围绕要点，写出句子。围绕要点，写出句子。3.添加过度，确保连贯。添加过度，确保连贯。4.先求正确，再求灵活。先求正确，再求灵活。5.认真眷写，卷面整洁。认真眷写，卷面整洁。写作基本步骤：3现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不高三学生要不要参加春游活动要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。篇短文。的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为应该春游应该春游不应该春游不应该春游接触大自然，呼吸接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康新鲜空气，有利健康高考临近，没有心情高考临近，没有心情玩玩活动是精神放松，活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习大脑休息，有利于学习春游耽误学习春游耽误学习的学生认为的学生认为应该春游不应该春游4Introduction(topic)Body(supporting ideas)ConclusionIntroduction(topic)Body Concl5Can you list the outline of th6The outline of the writing:Conclusion paragraph:Introduction paragraph:Point 2BodyPoint 1supporting idea 1supporting idea 2supporting idea 1supporting idea 2The outline of the writing:Con7nKey words:1.introduction(topic):高三学生（senior 3 students）春游(go spring outing）讨论（discussion）2.body(supporting ideas):接触自然（be close to nature）呼吸新鲜空气（breathe some fresh air）精神放松（relax themselves）大脑休息（rest their brains）高考临近（with college entrance examination drawing near）没心情玩（dont feel like going）耽误学习(waste the time)3.conclusion:in my opinionKey words:8nKey words:中学生middle school studentsn身体差in a poor state of healthnIn bad conditionn充足的睡眠enough sleepn加强锻炼，增加户外活动ntake more exercise and do more outdoor activitiesn定时吃饭少吃零食nhave three meals regularly,eat less non-staplenfood.n讲卫生 Form/develop the habit of hygieneKey words:中学生middle school stu9主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性门见山，句式力争多样性How will you start you passage?How will you start you passage?问句：问句：从句：从句：Introduction:（sample）Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性H10巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系系Pay special attention to the transition sentences:Opinions are divided on the question.巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系Pay special11The body partPoint1:65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）点）Sentence pattern:Most of us(about 65%)hold the opinion that,since it tends to,which is unfavorable to Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.The body partPoint1:65%的人认为应12Reason1Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康有利健康Sentence pattern:They think it good to do sth/sth do good to sth In their opinion,it is of great benefit to do sth Eg:They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康Sente13Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休息，活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习有利于学习（注意：两个观点之间的连接）递进递进whats more；besides;moreover;in addition；furthermoreEg:they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习（14Conclusion:Conclusion:小段总结，进一步亮明小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应观点，前后呼应。nEg:They think it will do good to their students.Conclusion:小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应。15nPoint 2:的学生认为不应该的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）春游（亮明观点）n注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）上启下）nSentence pattern:nHowever,others prefer tonSome others have just the opposite opinion.nOn the other hand.nEg:On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.Point 2:的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）16nReason 1:Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩高考临近，没有心情玩 nSentence pattern:nThey say/believe/hold the opinion that.nEg:They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩 17nReason 2:春游耽误学习春游耽误学习 n（注意：两个观点之间的连接）（注意：两个观点之间的连接）Eg:Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studiesReason 2:春游耽误学习 18 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies Whether or not should Seni19 表示观点对比类写作套语表示观点对比类写作套语A.总起总起:n Opinions are divided on this question.nDifferent people hold different/opposite opinions.nPeople have taken/adopted different attitudes towards n People have different opinions on this problem.n People take different views on this question.B.表达观点一表达观点一:n of them hold the opinion that.n of them are in favor of the idea thatn People who are for the idea think 表示观点对比类写作套语A.总起:20C.表达不同观点之间的衔接表达不同观点之间的衔接:nHowever,of them hold a different view./of them hold the opposite opinion.nPeople who are against it dont think so.nHowever,every coin has two sides.nDifferent from those.,people think.nOn the other hand,people think.D.结尾常用套语结尾常用套语:n In my opinion/Personally,n As far as Im concerned,nIn short/in brief/in a word,C.表达不同观点之间的衔接:21 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea thatOn the other hand,about 35%students areagainst the idea.Whether or not should Sen22表列举说明的关联词表列举说明的关联词:nFirstly/First of all/To begin with,.Secondly ThirdlynIn the first place In the second place In the third placen Finally/Last but not least/,.表示递进、强调的关联词表示递进、强调的关联词n.Besides/Apart from/Whats more/In addition/Furthermore/Moreover/worse still/to make matters worse 表列举说明的关联词:23 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea thatOn the other hand,about 35%students areagainst the idea.whats more,Besides Whether or not should Sen24A A、运用高级词汇或短语、运用高级词汇或短语B B、增加形容词或副词、增加形容词或副词C C、灵活运用各种句型、灵活运用各种句型 亮点点拨亮点点拨亮点点拨25 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies.be close toenergeticfeellike goingaffordfix theirattention onheatedfresh Whether or not should Sen26Homework:Finish and improve your composition and hand it in tomorrow.Homework:Thank you!27