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writing_writing_非谓语动词在写非谓语动词在写作中的应用作中的应用阅卷老师喜欢的句子阅卷老师喜欢的句子 、同位语结构、同位语结构、with复合结构复合结构，使文章简洁、通顺使文章简洁、通顺；尽量使用；尽量使用动词短语和词组、定语从句等动词短语和词组、定语从句等复合句，修辞润色文章。复合句，修辞润色文章。使用分词短语使用分词短语(非谓语动词非谓语动词）Non-finiteVerbsinwriting非非谓语动词谓语动词在写作中的在写作中的应应用用 1.Seeing from the top of mountain,the city is beautiful.2.In my opinion,climb mountain is an enjoyable thing.3.Which team is good at cooking?A team called itself the supper cook.Correction写作中非谓语动词常见的错误写作中非谓语动词常见的错误Seenclimbingcalling1.When she heard the news,she burst into crying._ the news,she burst into crying.2.Australia is located on the west coast of the Pacific.Australia is the largest country in Oceania.Australia，_ _ the west coast of the Pacific，is the largest country in Oceania.用非谓语结构改写句子用非谓语结构改写句子Hearinglocated on 3.Though I admit what he has said,I still doubt he didnt do his best._ _ _ _ _,I still doubt he didnt do his best.4.Because I missed the bus,I went to school late._ _ _,I went to school late.Admitting what he hassaidMissing the bus5.When I was walking in the street,I saw him._ in the street,I saw him.6.If you work hard,_hard,you will succeed.WalkingWorking7.Although he had failed many times,he didnt lose heart._many times,he didnt lose heart.8.As she was scolded by the teacher,the girl sat there without lifting her head._,the girl sat there without lifting her head.Having failedScolded by the teacher例文例文(1)：Getting back what you have lost would be an unforgettable experience.Last Monday,I lost my expensive cellphone,on which my name was inscribed(刻).Fortunately,it was returned.That morning,I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi,for I would be late for the final examination.On arriving at school,I headed to my classroom quickly,not noticing that I had left my cellphone on the back seat.EnjoytwoessaysThereisalwayssomeonebehindus,caringaboutus.Oneverydaymorning,walkingoutofthedoorwaytogotoschool,wemaybetoldtopayattentiontothetraffic,nottofightorquarrelwithothers,andmayevenbetoldtochewslowlyattable.Beingachild,wemayfeeltiredofthosewords.whenwecomehomeafterschool,shehastriedherbesttoprovidewhatshehasforus.Evenifwhatweneedisjustaglassofwater,shewillalsokeepitinmind.例文例文(2)Whennoticinghergreyhairsandthewrinklesaroundhereyes,IrealizeIhavegrownupwhilesheisnolongeryoung.ItstimethatIshoulddosomethingforher,evenonlygivingherbacksomemassageormakingacupofteaforhercanmakeherfeelthatsheseemstobethehappiestwomanintheworld.Doyouknowwhosheis?SheisourMom.Funtime!Pickoutapictureandfinishthetaskplay musicmakehappy Playingmusic makes them happy.makeasentenceusingnonfiniteverbs_ by the reporter from CCTV,the man said he was very happy.(interview)InterviewedFinish the sentence using nonfinite verbse.g.Havingfinishedmyhomework,Iwentontohelpmyparents.listento/burstoutlaughingHavinglistenedtothesongcalled“Gangnamstyle”,weburstoutlaughing.Follow the example and make a sentence.3.Moyanstoodthereandwassurroundedbymanyreporters.Moyanstoodtheresurrounded by many reporters.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子Combine the following sentences1.As soon as they arrived at the school.They felt the happy atmosphere.Arriving at the school,they felt the happy atmosphere.2.If I am given another chance.I will succeed.Given another chance,I will succeed.3.He wants to improve his English(目的目的)He studies harder.To improve his English,he studies harder.4.When he left the classroom,he didnt say goodbye to me.5.Because he is ill,he cant attend the meeting.When leaving the classroom,he didnt say goodbye to me.Being ill,he cant attend the meeting.6.The policeman saw the thief who was stealing a bike.7.The boys who swam in the river were in danger.The policeman saw the thief stealing a bike.The boys swimming in the river were in danger8.Because he hadnt seen the film before,he went to the cinema.Not having seen the film before,he went to the cinema.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子1.因为因为在这国家没有朋友在这国家没有朋友，她觉得要想找，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。到工作是不可能的。用连词用连词becauseBecause she has no friend in the country,she found it impossible to find a job.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构Having no friend in the country,she found it impossible to find a job.2.这本这本用简易英语写成的用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂书很容易读懂用定语从句用定语从句 The book,is easy to understand.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构 The book,is easy to understand用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子which was written in simple English,written in simple English,3.他们是他们是来自于几个国家的来自于几个国家的游客。游客。用定语从句用定语从句 They are visitors who come from several countries.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构They are visitors coming from several countries.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子4.发现他好朋友沮丧发现他好朋友沮丧，他竭尽所能让他朋友开，他竭尽所能让他朋友开心。心。用并列句用并列句He found his best friend frustrated and he did everything he could to make him happy.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构Finding his best friend frustrated,he did everything he could to make him happy.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子 It is high time we took part in some activities.We want to make ourselves more healthy.It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.4.用非谓语结构合并下列句子用非谓语结构合并下列句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams.用非谓语结构美化后的文章用非谓语结构美化后的文章要求：要求：1.1.用用2-32-3句话句话表达表格内容表达表格内容 2.2-32.2-3句话要有句话要有连贯性连贯性necessaryaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.thebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.（20112011高考模拟）高考模拟）高考临近，保持良好的心态有助高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。Having a try翻译翻译:高考临近，保持良好的心态有助高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。Step1：拆分成几个简单句：拆分成几个简单句(中文中文)高考临近。高考临近。(National College Entrance Examination)保持良好的心态很重要。保持良好的心态很重要。(have a right attitude)它有助于减轻焦虑它有助于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难和勇敢地克服困难。Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句：分别翻译这几个简单句National College Entrance Examination is coming.It is important to have a right attitude.It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Having a tryStep3：合并句子：合并句子 With National College Entrance Examination coming,it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.National College Entrance Examination is coming.It is important to have a right attitude.It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence1:Having a tryStep3：合并句子：合并句子 With College Entrance Examination coming,it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.College Entrance Examination is coming.It is important to have a right attitude.It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence2:Tip:Trytousedifferentwaystoexpress.Having a try要求：要求：1.1.用用2-32-3句话句话表达表格内容表达表格内容 2.2-32.2-3句话要有句话要有连贯性（连贯性（20112011高考模拟）高考模拟）Having a trynecessaryaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.thebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.Having a tryItisnecessarytohaveenoughsleep.Havingenoughsleepisnecessary.Itwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.Keepinghealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.ToKeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.Passage：Havingenoughsleep isnecessary,becauseitwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.Moreover,tokeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.Tip:Neverignoretheconjunction.Having a try With College Entrance Examination coming,it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Having enough sleep is necessary,because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.Moreover,to keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.Besides,doing exercise regularly is of great benefit to our health.Last but not least,it is very important to keep a balanced diet.二二.使用使用非谓语动词非谓语动词使句子简洁高档使句子简洁高档三三.巧用巧用倒装倒装增强句子表现力增强句子表现力四四.尝试多尝试多 样化表达方样化表达方式式一一.使用较使用较高级词汇高级词汇使文章增加吸引力使文章增加吸引力强调句强调句With短语复合结构短语复合结构定语从句定语从句名词性从句名词性从句(主宾表同从句主宾表同从句)各种状语从句各种状语从句被动语态被动语态1.beggar,lie,sleep2.Mr.Li,hurry,paynoattentionto3.stickout，tripover(绊倒绊倒),angryA beggar1.一天，一个乞丐在路边讨钱，但是李先生匆忙赶路一天，一个乞丐在路边讨钱，但是李先生匆忙赶路上班，上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。没有注意到那个乞丐。2.结果这个乞丐很生气，伸出拐杖，差点把李先结果这个乞丐很生气，伸出拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了。生绊倒了。3.意识到他是个残疾人意识到他是个残疾人，李先生想给他一些钱。，李先生想给他一些钱。4.于是他拿出了一张百元钞票于是他拿出了一张百元钞票,突然一阵风把钞票吹到突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。了空中。5.看到被风吹到空中的百元钞票看到被风吹到空中的百元钞票，乞丐迅速跳起来去，乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票，追那张钞票，使李先生非常惊讶。使李先生非常惊讶。实战演练实战演练：用五个句子写出下列信息点，注意：用五个句子写出下列信息点，注意非谓语和复合句的运用。非谓语和复合句的运用。A beggarWriting2.MrLihurriedhome,payingnoattentiontoabeggar.1.Thebeggarlayontheground,sleeping.3.Suddenly,thebeggarstuckouthislegs,trippingoverMrLi,whichmadehimveryangry.Makeanending Exchange and discuss your partners composition,following the criteria.Pair work A beggar One day,hurrying home,Mr.Li paid no attention to the beggar who lay on the ground,sleeping.Suddenly,the beggar stuck out his legs,tripping Mr.Li over,which made him very angry.Realizing the beggar was a disabled person,Mr.Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give him.He took out a 100-yuan note,which was suddenly blown into the air by the wind.Seeing this,the beggar jumped quickly to run after the note,making Mr.Li so surprised that he stood there with his mouth open.基础写作：用英语写一篇关于四川地震的简介：用英语写一篇关于四川地震的简介：写作内容：写作内容：2008年年5月月12日，一场特大地震袭击了四日，一场特大地震袭击了四川省，造成了成千上万人无家可归。川省，造成了成千上万人无家可归。大量的大量的人员受伤，甚至丧命。人员受伤，甚至丧命。为了营救那些受困和为了营救那些受困和被埋的人，政府及时采取有效的措施，派遣士被埋的人，政府及时采取有效的措施，派遣士兵到受灾地区。兵到受灾地区。听到这个噩耗后，全世界的听到这个噩耗后，全世界的人们都伸出了援助之手。人们都伸出了援助之手。尽管他们失去了尽管他们失去了一切，但他们正全力以赴，克服重重困难，重一切，但他们正全力以赴，克服重重困难，重建家园。建家园。参考词汇：参考词汇：袭击：袭击：hit/strike受灾地区受灾地区:theearthquake-strickenarea On May 12th,2008,a worst earthquake struck Sichuan Province，causing thousands of people homeless.A great number of people were injured or even killed.To rescue the trapped and buried people,the government immediately took effective measures,sending the soldiers to the earthquake-strickenareas.Hearing the terrible news,the people all over the world came together to help them.Although having lost everything,they are trying their best to overcome all kinds of difficulties to rebuild their home.结束语结束语谢谢大家聆听！谢谢大家聆听！50