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海南中学 赵华英授课教师：授课教师：海南中学海南中学 赵华英赵华英完成句子：完成句子：1、学生们一方面应该努力学习，另、学生们一方面应该努力学习，另一方面需要足够的时间玩儿。一方面需要足够的时间玩儿。_,students should study hard,_,they should be given adequate time to play.On the one handOn the other hand 完成句子：完成句子：2、一方面我对电影不感兴、一方面我对电影不感兴趣，另一方面我也没时间。趣，另一方面我也没时间。_,I dont have any interest in that movie._,I have no time.For one thingFor another 填空：填空：3._,I tend to spend my spare time in learning my courses well._,I am in hope that I can develop my ability by taking this part-time job as a tutor.On the one handOn the other hand 试卷分析（第二卷）试卷分析（第二卷）一、语法填空一、语法填空二、短文改错二、短文改错三、书面表达三、书面表达Homework:Homework:第二卷：满分第二卷：满分5050分（分（6464人参加考试）人参加考试）平均分平均分优秀率优秀率（3636分以上）分以上）及格率及格率（2727分以上）分以上）38.0938.0978.13%78.13%93.75%93.75%最高分最高分4040分以上分以上最低分最低分45.545.5分分胡启利胡启利3333人人9.59.5分（分（1 1人）人）语法填空（满分语法填空（满分1515分）分）平均分平均分优秀率优秀率（1212分以上）分以上）及格率及格率（9 9分以上）分以上）10.9210.9253.13%53.13%89.16%89.16%最高分最高分13.513.5分以上分以上人数人数最低分最低分1515（4 4人）人）1515人人1.51.5（1 1人）人）语法填空中高错误率题目语法填空中高错误率题目错题号错题号考查内容考查内容错误原因错误原因6262（2424人）人）时态时态6363（2222人）人）连词连词6868（4242人）人）冠词冠词7070（2525人）人）代词代词没做到：时间状语没做到：时间状语与时态的一致性与时态的一致性没把握好上下文的没把握好上下文的逻辑关系逻辑关系上下文的理解有误上下文的理解有误 上下文逻辑关系上下文逻辑关系M:I got a C for my report.I am wondering what I have done wrong.You know I 62 (devote)a lot of time and energy to the report in the past three months.H:Well,Meg.I understand.Maybe thats 63 you were two days late to hand in the report.The due day is September 3rd.have devotedbecausein the past three months.I got a C for my report.I am wondering what I have done wrong.you were two days late H:And figures are important,too .You also need to add 68 actual figure such as the monthly sales.M:you are quite right,professor.H:And why not do more research,look for some figures and write the report again?M:Are you giving me 70 chance,professor?H:Seems like I am.ananotherfiguresfiguresfigure1、牢记考点，关注你的易错点、牢记考点，关注你的易错点 （时态（时态/冠词冠词/连词连词/代词等）；代词等）；2 2、做题时：、做题时：1)理解全篇，注意上下文逻辑理解全篇，注意上下文逻辑关系；关系；2)寻找依据；寻找依据；3)论证答案。论证答案。Practice(1)W:What did you major in at college?M:Physical education.I really 2 (want)to be a gym teacher at a school.W:So what made you change your mind?wantedmadedidPractice(2)W:Im sorry to complain,but could you ask your kids to make less noise?M:Oh,sorry,I didnt realize.I 4 (ask)them to turn the music down.will askPractice(3)Jim:Hi,Mary.Its been a long time 1 I last saw you.Mary:Hi,its you,Jim?Im sorry!I 2 (recognize)you.didnt recognize sincePractice(4)W:You are here,Peter.Have you looked at this application yet?M:The one from Colson,you mean?Yeah,I have just read 2 .itThe onePractice(5)W:Hi,Peter!Youre rather energetic today.Whats going on?M:I went on 2 skiing trip with my friend last week.We had a wonderful time.aPractice(6)W:Did your friend do well in the entrance examinations?M:Yeah.8 they were tough,he made it.Although/Though短文改错（满分短文改错（满分1010分）分）平均分平均分优秀率优秀率（8 8分以上分以上）及格率及格率(6(6分以上分以上)8.318.3173.43%73.43%93.75%93.75%最高分最高分9 9分以上人数分以上人数最低分最低分10(1710(17人人)3535人人1 1（1 1人）人）短文改错短文改错错题点：错题点：定语从句（错题人数：定语从句（错题人数：2020）介词介词（错题人数：（错题人数：17）冠词冠词（错题人数：（错题人数：1717）On January 5th,some students in our school visited Robot World,which we saw varieties of robots.It was amazing to find that the robots could do many things just like real people,including playing chess,playing piano and drawing pictures.wheretheBy visiting Robot World,I have learned a lot of about robots,especially about their functions and shapes.短文改错短文改错错题点：错题点：错误原因：基础知识掌握不牢。错误原因：基础知识掌握不牢。定语从句（错题人数：定语从句（错题人数：2020人）人）介词介词（错题人数：（错题人数：17人）人）冠词冠词（错题人数：（错题人数：1717人）人）课下训练时课下训练时：1 1、留意定语从句中关系词的用法、留意定语从句中关系词的用法（关系代词还是关系副词）；（关系代词还是关系副词）；2 2、注意冠词的特定用法、注意冠词的特定用法(a/the/(a/the/零冠词）；零冠词）；3 3、关注短语中介词的用法关注短语中介词的用法（用还是不用介词）（用还是不用介词）Practice:1)As matter of fact,peoples opinions differ.2)Im really sorry for my using the mobile phone in your lecture the last week.3)I have learned a great deal of from him.a4)My mothers hair turned from black toward grey over the years.5)Having tea in late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,that might not be served until 8 oclock at night.whichto/into the6)My best friend and I had same answers in the test,what made the teacher angry.7)Today,at the local convenience store that I work,an old man with a guide dog came in.8)When we leave home at early age,we will meet lots of problems.thewherewhich an书面表达（满分书面表达（满分2525分）分）平均分平均分优秀率优秀率（2020分以上分以上）及格率及格率(15(15分以上分以上)18.8618.8656.25%56.25%93.75%93.75%最高分最高分 2020分以上人数分以上人数最低分最低分23(223(2人人)3636人人5 5（1 1人）人）高分作文的特点：高分作文的特点：注意体现注意体现（1 1全全+5+5美）美）一、要点全一、要点全二、五个美二、五个美1 1、外在美（字体、卷面）、外在美（字体、卷面）2 2、结构美（段落、层次）、结构美（段落、层次）3 3、词汇美（词汇、短语）、词汇美（词汇、短语）4 4、句式美（长短句结合）、句式美（长短句结合）5 5、过渡美（句段的衔接）、过渡美（句段的衔接）本次作文的问题本次作文的问题没做到：没做到：1）词汇美）词汇美2）句式美）句式美 Correct or polish the following passage:Dear Tom,（学生习作（学生习作）（第一段）第一段）How are you doing?I know you are interested in the topic whether it is necessary for freshmen to have a laptop when they go to university.Here,Id like to tell you something about it.(1)About this topic，peoples opinions are different.（第二段）（第二段）(2)Some people in favor of it.(3)Firstly,they think the kids work so hard to achieve good grades that they should have a laptop.(4)Besides,it is convenient for them to look for information for their studies.（第三段）（第三段）(5)However,the other people opposed to it.(6)They think that buying a computer costs a lot of money.(7)In addition,there are enough computers for students in the university.（第四段）（第四段）(8)In my opinion,it is better for college students to have a laptop.One possible version（范文）（范文）Dear Tom,How are you doing?I know you are interested in the topic whether it is necessary for freshmen to have a laptop when they go to university.Here,Id like to tell you something about it.When it comes to this topic,peoples opinions differ.Some people are in favor of it.First of all,freshmen deserve a laptop as an award for their great efforts and achievements.In addition,having a laptop in hand will bring more convenience to their studies and they can have easier access to the Internet,which will in turn benefit them.However,others hold opposite opinions.Their reasons are as follows.For one thing,it will add the financial burden to some families.For another,many universities are equipped with adequate computers for use.Personally speaking,it is unnecessary to buy a laptop for freshmen.They may be addicted to computer games,which will have bad effects on their studies.尽量做到：尽量做到：1 1、词汇美：、词汇美：1 1）高级词汇代替一般词汇；）高级词汇代替一般词汇；2 2）注意：短语优先原则。）注意：短语优先原则。2 2、句式美、句式美长短句结合，最好用长短句结合，最好用1010句话概括。句话概括。1 1）简单句、并列句、复合句；）简单句、并列句、复合句；2 2）非谓语动词、倒装结构、强调）非谓语动词、倒装结构、强调结构、独立主结构、独立主 格结构；等等。格结构；等等。1.Re-polish your composition after class.2.Due date:Before 10:30 tomorrow morning.练习：练习：随着生活条件的改善，在中国越来越随着生活条件的改善，在中国越来越多的学生喜欢请家教。假定你是李华，请你多的学生喜欢请家教。假定你是李华，请你给你的英国笔友给你的英国笔友Tom写一封信，写一封信，介绍一下人介绍一下人们对请家教的不同观点，并谈谈你的看法。们对请家教的不同观点，并谈谈你的看法。赞同赞同:（1）家教可以单独解答问题，提出）家教可以单独解答问题，提出详细详细的学习建议；的学习建议；(2)有经验的家教可以有经验的家教可以帮助帮助学生有效地复习功课。学生有效地复习功课。反对反对：（：（1）学生太依赖家教，对课堂所学生太依赖家教，对课堂所 讲关讲关注不够；（注不够；（2）家教布置额外作业，导致）家教布置额外作业，导致学生疲劳。学生疲劳。你的看法：你的看法：