初二英语写作(教学课件)

初三英语在线课程初三英语在线课程上课老师：蔡老师上课老师：蔡老师上课时间：上课时间：1818：45-1945-19：4545初三英语寒假课程初三英语寒假课程第二讲：作文写作精讲第二讲：作文写作精讲作文写作的字、词、句、段、篇作文写作的字、词、句、段、篇 字字：工整、清楚；：工整、清楚；词词：不拼写错误；能适当掌握高级词汇；：不拼写错误；能适当掌握高级词汇；句句：不出现语法错误；句子要逐渐使用复：不出现语法错误；句子要逐渐使用复杂的从句句型，为文章添彩；杂的从句句型，为文章添彩；段段：段落内容有逻辑性；：段落内容有逻辑性；篇篇：合理安排文章布局；要有逻辑与联接；：合理安排文章布局；要有逻辑与联接；绝对好用的替换词绝对好用的替换词 Good wonderful,excellent,gorgeous,fabulous,amazing,magnificent;Important significant,essential,necessary,carry a lot of weight;ButHowever,Sotherefore,hence,Primarily,Firstly,one of the most essential reasons,to stress first Secondly,above from the first point,In addition Thirdly,Last but no least,In conclusion,to make a conclusion,to summarize举例举例 For example For instance,to take.as an example,to state a fact as an vivid example,经典句型：经典句型：1、Its said that2、No matter what/which/who/where/when/whose+从句从句3、It is/was+被强调部分被强调部分+that(who)+剩余部分剩余部分 4、It happened(chanced)that+从从句句=sb.Happened/chanced to do sth.=sb.did sth by chance 5、由由as引导的非限制性定句从句引导的非限制性定句从句/由由where,when引导的定语从句引导的定语从句6、It+谓语谓语+时间段时间段+before+主语主语+谓语谓语(before引导的是时间状语从句）引导的是时间状语从句）7、When/So long as/As long as/Once+从句，从句，+主句（从句也可放在主句（从句也可放在主句之后）主句之后）8、No sooner+had+主语主语+donethan+主语主语+did 9、倍数表达句型倍数表达句型 倍数倍数+more than,倍数倍数+as much as.10、形容词、副词、名词形容词、副词、名词+as/though+主语主语+谓语谓语+主句主句句式多变化句式多变化 要抓住英语高考作文得高分的要抓住英语高考作文得高分的”关键点关键点”,就需要把好增加句子复杂性和使用高级词就需要把好增加句子复杂性和使用高级词汇这两道关。汇这两道关。（1 1）句式要有变化。）句式要有变化。改变句子的开头方式，改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地以主语开头，接着是谓语，宾不要一味地以主语开头，接着是谓语，宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语放在语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语放在句首，或用分词作状语等。句首，或用分词作状语等。原文原文 We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.修正修正 Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.原文原文 The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.修正修正 Hearing the bad news,the young man couldnt help crying.(2)(2)在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如到装句、强调句、主从复合句、分灵活运用诸如到装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语从句等。词状语从句等。强调句强调句 原文原文 My parents praised Ah Fu warmly.It had saved my little sister bravely.修正修正 My parents praised Ah Fu warmly.It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely.由由what等引导的从句，此处的等引导的从句，此处的what相当于相当于中文中的中文中的“所所”，有很强的概括，如：，有很强的概括，如：原文原文 We had to stand here to catch offender.修正修正 What we had to do was(to)stand there,trying to catch the offender.由由with或或 without引导的短语。如：引导的短语。如：He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.分词短语如：分词短语如：Satisfied with the result,he dicided to go on with a new experiment.倒装句倒装句 Only in this way can we achieve our goal.Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.省略句省略句 If so,victory will be ours.You can make some changes wherever necessary.对比，这在中文中也是常使用的方法如对比，这在中文中也是常使用的方法如 Failure is not a crime,but failure to learn from failure is.When I play,I feel excited,and after it I feel relaxed.(3)(3)通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。和表现力。原文原文 He stopped us an hour ago.He made us catch the next offender.修正修正 He stopped us an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.原文原文 We had a short rest.Then we began to play happily.We sang and danced.Some told stories.Some played chess.修正修正 After a short rest,we had great fun singing and dancing,telling jokes and playing chess.2007年上海市中考写作题：年上海市中考写作题：Write at least 60 words on the topic“A Story about My Parent(s)”.(以以“爸爸爸爸 /妈妈的故事妈妈的故事”为题写一篇不为题写一篇不少于少于6060个词的短文，标点符号不占格。个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）我的父亲母亲我的父亲母亲 先中文构思先中文构思 尽量避免复杂的词句尽量避免复杂的词句 将中文翻译成英文将中文翻译成英文 加入适当的连词，组成文章加入适当的连词，组成文章 注意全文用过去式写作注意全文用过去式写作关于职业的单词关于职业的单词 scientist 科学家科学家 detective侦探侦探 fisherman 渔夫渔夫 fire fighter 消防员消防员 journalist 新闻记者新闻记者 lawyer 律师律师 barber 理发师理发师 singer歌手歌手 engineer 工程师工程师 worker工人工人 painter画家画家 writer/author 作家作家 businessman 商人商人 pilot 飞行员飞行员 dentist牙医牙医 nurse护士护士 accountant 会计会计 waiter/waitess服务员服务员 librarian图书管理员图书管理员 surgeon 外科医生外科医生 pharmacist药剂师药剂师 anesthetist 麻醉师麻醉师 manager经理经理 governor政府官员政府官员 President总统总统 policeman 警察警察 policewoman 女警察女警察 waiter 服务员服务员 waitress 女服务员女服务员 driver 司机，驾驶员司机，驾驶员真题举例真题举例 1）A Story about My Parent;2)In mums family,there were seven people:mums parents,mums two brothers and two sisters and mum.When mum was young,her father was a doctor in the small village and her mother was just a worker;3)At that time,for lack of TV and computer,everyday after school mum along with her brothers and sisters would go home to help their mother with the housework.For example,they helped to make supper or wash clothes.Mum told me that though the life at that time was very hard,she felt happy.My mum was born in a small village.In her family,there were seven people:mums parents,mums two brothers and two sisters and mum.When mum was young,her father was a doctor in the small village and her mother was just a worker.At that time,for lack of TV and computer,everyday after school mum along with her brothers and sisters would go home to helped their mother with the housework.For example,they help to make supper or wash clothes.Mum told me that though the life at that time was very hard,she felt happy.比较型作文写作比较型作文写作 常用词组常用词组:Prefer A to B I show my strong preference to A.Compared with A,I shed more light on B.In comparison with A,I find that B is more.文章层次文章层次 1 1、开启段落，指出自己的选择结果。、开启段落，指出自己的选择结果。2 2、列出原因，将一些可比项进行比较。横、列出原因，将一些可比项进行比较。横向与纵向。向与纵向。3 3、总结、总结开启段落开启段落 In facing the high school entrance examination,we have to make choices about which school to attend.Between the two choices,I will choose.The reason for that is are as following.学会对比学会对比 南方大学南方大学:学费学费8000/8000/年年 招生招生2020人人 无优惠政策无优惠政策 北方大学北方大学:学费学费5000/5000/年年 招生招生1010人人 加加2020分优惠分优惠 选择南方：选择南方：1 1、虽然学费贵，但是招生人数比北、虽然学费贵，但是招生人数比北方的多；方的多；2 2、自己是南方人，适合南方的生活，、自己是南方人，适合南方的生活，离家近。离家近。选择北方：选择北方：1 1、学费便宜；、学费便宜；2 2、有加分政策；、有加分政策；3 3、可以体验不同的学习生活，学会独立。可以体验不同的学习生活，学会独立。如何转折如何转折 Though the tuition is higher in the southern University,yet I prefer the ways of living here in the south.The Northern University offers an additional 20 scores.However,I still have a strong inclination to the Southern University.如何结尾如何结尾 Concerning the reasons above,I would not hesitate to choose.In conclusion,concerning the convenience,the tuition and the other reasons,I will choose.In all,to conclude,to put all the reason together,上海上海2002年的中考英语作文年的中考英语作文根据英文提示，以根据英文提示，以“我的心爱之物我的心爱之物”为题写话，为题写话，不少于不少于5050个词。内容必须包括英文提示中的个词。内容必须包括英文提示中的3 3项项要求，标点符号不占格：要求，标点符号不占格：题目：题目：My Favorite Thing(s)What the thing(s)is(are)When and/or where,and how you got if(them)Why you like it(them)and why it is(they are)special to you My Favorite Thing I have many small things in my home such as stamps,toys.But among those things,my favorite thing is a green watch.It is a digital watch with a duck on the bottom of it.And it is my birthday present given by my best friend.I got it on my 12th birthday.I like it very much because I can read time since then.Because it was the present given by my best friend,it is very special to me.本课件由上海复旦托业教育提供网址：http:/ 补习班 http:/www.fudan- http:/ MBA培训 http:/ 电脑培训Thank you!