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写作审题:审体裁（议论、说明、叙述），审direction中要求的内容结构:搭文章架子 - 开头、主体、结尾条理清楚: 议论文正反面；说明文条理 层次清楚:醒目的中心思想句(Topic Sentence)，主题句之后应该紧接着扩展句（具体的论据、事实、数据等）很好利用草稿纸 搭结构，把各个层次画一下 中心句减少语言错误，语法规则和固定搭配。写完后检查，尤其是检查拼写语法错误。1. 根据文章章法合理使用、灵活改造命题提纲，做到起、承、转、合，有头有尾。2. 确保主体段落有明确的中心思想句，后面的扩展层次清楚。3. 注意语法规则和固定搭配，减少语言错误。4. 文贵在变，学会用不同的形式开始句子，注意句子的长短结合。 具体要求：语言第一位- 表达通顺、无重大语言错误基础一般：简单原则、安全第一基础较好：变化句子结构和词语用法结构第二位 逻辑性： 并列：and/or/but 因果：because/in that, since/as, for 转折：but/however内容第三位 四级写作出题分析出题内容： 四级考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。具体来说可以分为两个方面： 关于大学生的话题 常见的社会问题四级考试作文题型： 对立观点型 说明利弊型 解决问题型 谚语警句型 图表图画型 应用写作型1. 对立观点型作文对立观点式 1有人认为X 是好事，赞成X， 为什么？ 2有人认为X 是坏事， 反对X，为什么？ 3我的看法。 has become a hot topic among people recently. Opinions vary from person to person. Some people are inclined to think that On the contrary, there are still many people who claimThose who criticize argue that However, people who advocate , on the other hand, maintain thatAs far as I am concerned, my favor goes to the first / second view. Admittedly, but it doesnt follow that Only if can we对立观点型作文变体Paragraph I（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点； （2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。Paragraph II（1）提出作者观点（本文主题句）；（2）举例加以论证。Paragraph III 总结全文（再次强调作者观点）2. 说明利弊型作文1.说明某种现象，并且阐释人们的不同的观点2.你的观点EXAMPLE 网上购物越来越流行，有人喜欢网上购物，但也有很多人不喜欢网上购物 你的观点。 The discussion about has never stopped in the past few years. Lets have a look at its advantages and disadvantages before drawing the final conclusion. The biggest advantage of Whats more Last but by no means the least. However, the negative effects are also obvious. To begin with, In the second place, Finally Technically speaking, we could draw the conclusion that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. We have every reason to believe that will embrace its bright future during the next decade.3. 解决问题型作文1. 说明问题、现象2. 分析问题、现象产生的原因，带来的后果；3. 你的建议The recent years have witnessed an unfavorable social phenomenon - .After contemplation and meditation, we can find three possible reasons accounting for this trend. Firstly, . Secondly, . Finally, We should take urgent measures . On the one hand, On the other, .4. 谚语警句类作文写法1997年1月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Haste Makes Waste. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below.1. 为什么“欲速则不达”？ 2. 举例说明。写法1. 解释谚语警句的涵义2. 举例说明3. 总结说明谚语警句对于自己的意义，对自己的影响 is a well-known proverb which all of us are familiar with. This self-evident proverb means that I fully agree with its implication.I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the example of All reliable data pile up to show the point thatFrom what have been discussed above, we can conclude that . For one thing, For another The best way is to .5. 图表图画型作文描述图表/图画说明原因/阐述寓意总结建议ExampleChanges in the Ownership of HousesIt can be seen from the chart that there have been dramatic changes in While the percentage of has dropped from . to , that of has soared from to during the same period of time.A number of factors account for the change. Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, .In a word, this chart is a perfect indicator of . Although , it is reasonable for us to believe that .图表的一些表达方式As the table / graph / chart shows，As is shown in the table / chart / graph the past years has witnessed a dramatic / steady increase / decrease in experienced rises and falls during the past years.6. 应用写作型作文书信 私人书信 公务书信 a. 求职信 b. 投诉信 c. 邀请信 d. 感谢信 e. 公开信 f. 咨询信私人书信Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during a weeklong holiday. You should write at least 120 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese. 2001年6月1. 表示欢迎 2. 提出对度假安排的建议 3. 提醒应注意的事项June 28, 2001Dear Xiao Wang, Im thrilled to receive your letter on May 10th, in which you suggested our spending a week together here in Beijing. I do think its a fantastic idea and I believe well have a good time together. As to the arrangement of the holiday, I suggest the following activities. For the first three days I will show you around our campus and some places of interest downtown Beijing, such as the Forbidden City, the Temple of Heaven and the Summer Palace. For the following two days, we will visit the Great Wall, the Ming Tombs and other historic sites around the city. In the last two days, we will be back in the city and tour some famous business streets, where you can do some shopping. What do you say? It will be quite hot here in Beijing, so remember to get prepared for the weather. And, last but not least, dont forget to bring your camera with you, for you will find so many scenes worth photographing here. I will be longing for your arrival. Best wishes. Yours truly, Zhang Ying公务书信写作步骤1. 简要说明事由2. 说明具体理由3. 再次申明目的投诉信2002年1月Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。Dear Mr. President, I am a sophomore from Department 3 and I am writing to you about the food and service in the canteen on campus. To be frank, I am rather disappointed at the food quality, price and service in the canteen. First, the dishes are scarcely well cooked and most of them taste the same. Secondly, most of the dishes there are priced so high that some students cannot even afford them. Thirdly, the service in the canteen is far from satisfying and the inside of the canteen always seem untidy. To solve the problem, I suggest that another canteen be built and a mechanism of competition be introduced between the old and the new. Besides, both the canteens should be subject to the students supervision. Dining is an everyday issue for students. It may affect their academic performance. Therefore, I sincerely hope this letter can draw your attention to the matter and I hope the problems mentioned above can be solved as soon as possible. Best regards. Yours sincerely Li MingDear Sir or Madam, Im writing to lodge the complaint about the poor quality of an air conditioner that I purchased from Sun Appliance Company. Frankly speaking, Sun Appliance has always been my favorite. On April 4, 2007, I bought the air conditioner (serial number 12345) from one of your chain store located in Lang Fang. The machine operated well at first, but ten days later, there was a fault that bothered me, that is, the fan made so much noise that I could not sleep well at night. Worse still, the cooling system didnt work well and the machine began to leak recently. Its poor quality ruined almost all my previous impression toward your products. I strongly suggest that a repairman or a service engineer should be sent to my home without delay. I wonder if you could pinpoint the exact cause of the malfunction as soon as possible. If you cant, I am afraid that I will request for full amount of refund or a new air conditioner. I would appreciate all your assistance in this matter. If you have any questions, please dont hesitate to contact me. Look forward to your reply. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming求职信Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter of application for a job You should write at least 150 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 假定你是李明，是北京外国语大学(Beijing Foreign Studies University)一名英语专业的学生。你在China Daily上看到一则招聘广告：Microsoft China要招聘口译员。你认为自己符合条件，请写一封申请信。June 17th, 2006Dear Sir/Madam, I am responding to your advertisement in China Daily on June 10th, 2006, which invites applications for interpreters. Enclosed with this letter is my resume which details my background. I believe that I am the best candidate for this position. In the first place, I have been studying for four years in Beijing Foreign Studies University, one of the most prestigious language schools in China, which has provided me with a desirable command of English skills. In the second place, I have taken part in a number of social activities in the past years, which have helped cultivate my team-spirit and creativity. Besides, I have attended training courses for interpretation and have obtained related certificates. Last but not least, I have worked as a part-time interpreter, so I am well prepared for this job. I would treasure the chance and exert every effort to do a good job if I had the luck to be provided with the position. Besides, I shall be much obliged if you will afford me an opportunity for an interview, and I appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your considering. Best regards. Yours sincerely Li Ming感谢信June 23 2007Dear Sir/Madam, Im writing to extend my heartfelt thanks to all the nurses and doctors in your hospital. Last month, while I was on a business trip in Taiyuan, Shanxi province, I suffered from a bad cold and a fever, so I was sent to Ward Rom 201, Chaoyang Medical Center. During my stay at hospital, nurses on duty patiently took my temperature, regularly examined my body, and often fed meals to me. In addition, doctors prescribed me the most effective drugs and gave the best medical advice. Thanks to the constant care from the hospital staff, I recovered quickly. Now that I have returned home, the excellent service of your hospital still impresses me. I believe that as patient, I have received the most professional treatment and the most considerate care. Please allow me to convey my sincere greetings toward the doctors and nurses that contribute all their efforts, patience and energy to their patients. Nothing can express my gratitude except my best wishes to them. If you have anything that needs my help, please dont hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 邀请信Directions: Suppose you are the dean of the History Department, Peking University. You want to invite Professor Herb Jason, a well-known scholar of Chinese history, to come to attend an international conference on Chinese history. Youll cover the following points: The purpose of the invitation The time and place of the conference Ask him a favor of presenting a lecture to your students during his stayWrite your letter in no less than 150 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use Li Ming instead. You do not need to write the address.June 23 2007Dear Professor Herb Jason, I am Li Ming, dean of the History Department, Peking University. I am writing to invite you to participate in an international convention that is to be held in Beijing from 22th to 25th, July, 2007. Since your visit in Beijing last year, all the teachers that attended your lecture have been deeply impressed with your thorough knowledge and profound understanding of the subject. We would be pleased if you could come, as our guest of honor, to the International Conference on Chinese History. If possible, would you please deliver a speech on whatever subject that interests you. Enclosed in this letter is a time schedule for the event. You would, of course, receive our standard honorarium to cover traveling and other expenses. When you arrive in Beijing, I will certainly meet you at the airport. Please let me know your date of arrival if you can come and tell us when you can make the trip. If you have any questions, please dont hesitate to contact me. Look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming咨询信假如你是张涛，一位应届毕业生，想到美国去读研究生。你需要向美国校方写一封信，信的内容是询问读研究生的入学要求、学费、奖学金和住宿条件等。Dear Sir/Madam: I am a Chinese student who will graduate from college in the coming July and wishes to study for M.A. degree in your university. My plan is to take my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with the information below. First, what are the qualifications needed for studying as a graduate student in your university? I am going to take a bachelors degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Do I need to take the GRE test? Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I wonder if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what about the accommodation? I would prefer a single room, which is more conducive to studying. But if single rooms are expensive, I would be willing to share.Im looking forward to your early reply, and to attending your prestigious institution. Sincerely, Zhang Tao公开信Your Help Needed Dear friends,As some of you may know, Lucy, a lovely girl student ,a junior from the Department of Fine Arts, has been seriously ill. In fact, she has been suffering from hepatitis, which is very dangerous. This 20-year-old girl comes from a small town in Shangdong province. Her family has tried every means to save her.Now Lucy is in urgent need of operation to her liver transplanted. However, her family is too poor to afford the expenses, which totaled 120,000 yuan. How can a poor family earning 1000 yuan per month afford such high expenses? But the time is limited. They cannot afford to wait to see the disease untouched.So you help is urgently needed. Lets do what we can to save our fellow student. The life of such a lovely girl is in your hand. Your love can save a life. You can contact 2335648 in the daytime and 2335658 at night. Students Union