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北京市海淀区高一英语期末试题 第二节、书面表达（满分15分） 云雾山是一处旅游胜地，每日有大量游客。几年前少数游客不注意保护环境。现在大有改观。请你根据以下要点写一篇作文。 注意： 1. 开头以为你写好。 2. 字数：120字左右The Yunwu Mountain is a place of interest. 分析题目：审题-审文体、人称、时态、内容、结构、词数本文为记叙文，写事为主，第三人称，一般过去时和一般现在时搭配，内容是几年前少数游客在观赏云雾上时的行为和现在游客的表现，结构上分为两大部分：过去和现在；详略安排上，两部分平均分配；100-140。要点思考：每日有大量游客 There are many tourists every day.Every day crowds of/ large numbers of tourists come (to visit) here.几年前少数游客不注意保护环境Several years ago, a few visitors didnt pay any attention to protecting the environment here. to environmental protection take no notice of/ paid no attention to乱扔废纸、塑料袋、罐头盒In the past, they threw away waste paper, plastic bags, and cans/ tins.杀害动物、捕捉飞鸟They killed/ hunted animals and caught birds.砍伐树木、采摘花草 They cut down trees and picked up flowers.在丛林中生火烧饭 They lit a fire and cooked meals in the forest.They made a fire to in order to cool meals in the forest.现在的游客带走垃圾 “在这吃还是带走”for here or to go/ eat here or take away?Nowadays, the tourists will take away the rubbish/ garbage/ trash with them.不再打猎 They no longer hunt animals.爱护动物 They begin to take good care of/ cherish the animals.自带午餐，以防森林火灾 They take lunch by themselves in order not to cause forest fire. to prevent forest fire.没有任何调整，这些只是散乱的句子；只有意思通顺、语义连贯才能称得上是文章Every day, lots of tourists come here. Several years ago, a few visitors didnt pay much attention to the environmental protection and made a lot of mistakes. Some people used to throw waste paper, plastic bags, and cans everywhere. Others would pick up the flowers, cut down trees and even cook meals over an open fire. This was rather dangerous. Worst of all, they killed animals and caught birds, the number of which reduced quickly at that time.However, things have changed a lot nowadays. Many visitors bring lunch with them, and take the rubbish away, and this will surely help prevent forest fires. They no longer go hunting, and on the contrary, they attach more love and care to the animals. Its hoped more people will realize it and do our best to protect the environment here. Attach much importance to sth.范文赏析 The Yunwu Mountain is a place of interest. Every day a large number of visitors pay a visit there. Several years ago, some visitors paid no attention to the environmental protection. They not only threw away waste paper, plastics and cans at will, but also cut down trees and picked flowers. Sometimes they even killed animals and caught birds for fun. Worse still, they often made a fire to cook, which could easily cause a big fire. To our joy, nowadays people have realized the importance of protecting the environment. When visiting the mountain, they take away the rubbish, and protect the plants and animals. They also take along food with them in order not to cause forest fire.北京一零一中学高一英语期中试题第二节 书面表达I （满分20分） 请根据所给材料，以Getting to Know Tom Hanks为题写一篇短文。 字数要求：120字左右姓名：汤姆汉克斯身份：演员出生日期195679出生地美国加州童年时期5岁时父母离异，跟随父亲辗转各地学生时代高中开始表演戏剧，大学继续。大学毕业后投身演艺事业主要获奖电影1994获Oscar最佳男演员奖，影片“Philadelphia”1995获Oscar最佳男演员奖，影片Forrest Gump家庭状况1989第二次婚姻：妻子Rita Wilson, 现有四个儿子，家庭幸福 参考用词： 离婚：get divorced 加州：California题目分析记叙文，人物介绍，第三人称，一般过去时为主，按照时间顺序，叙述TOM HANKS的生平；主要内容已经给出，无需增加要点，可以将文章分为两大部分，大学毕业是分界线，之前写学生时代，之后写演艺成就。110-140词之间。句型思考姓名+身份 Tom Hanks is an actor.生日 He was born on July 9th, 1956.合并Tom Hanks is an actor, bon on出生地 He grew up/ was brought up in California, the U.S.A.童年When he was five/ At the age of 5, her parents got divorced/ got a divorce. Then he stayed with his father and traveled to a lot of places.学生时代He began to play a role in dramas in high school and continued this hobby in the university.Since high school, he has acted in many dramas and he continued in the university.大学时代After graduation, he devoted himself to acting.Then, he officially began his career as an actor after graduation.事业、获奖In 1994, he was awarded the Oscar Best Actor, because of his excellence performance in the movie “Philadelphia”. Just one year later, he got the same title again, thanks to “Forrest Gump”. As he did a really outstanding job in the movie “Philadelphia”, he was conferred the Best Actor of Oscar in 1994. One year later, he got the same award with his movie “Forrest Gump”.家庭Now he has a happy family with four children and his wife Rita Wilson, whom he married in 1989.At present he is leading a happy life with his wife Rita Wilson, whom he married in 1989 and his four children.总结（需要补充）This is the popular, great actor Tom Hanks.范文赏析Tom Hanks, an American leading actor, was born on July 9th 1956 in California, USA. When he was five, his parents got divorced. In order to make a living, he had to spend much of his childhood moving about with his father. While still a student, he showed a great interest in acting and began to perform in his high school plays, and he continued acting while attending university. In 1994 and 1995, he was honored with his first and second Oscar as Best Actor for “Philadelphia” and “Forrest Gump” Now he has a happy family with his second wife Rita Wilson, whom he married in 1989. Nowadays, Tom Hanks has become one of the most popular stars throughout the world.参考答案 I started learning English when I was five years old and now I can speak the language freely. Last year I went to America with a group of people, in which I was the only one who could speak English well. During the trip I did a lot of things to help others. For example, I helped them order dishes in restaurants, buy gifts in shops and ask the way in the streets, so everyone in the group enjoyed the trip. Being a link between the group and the American people, I practiced the language and made many friends.VII. 书面表达：（10分） 请根据下面提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的日记。 2005年9月16日，星期日，晴。早上看完英语电视，给同学李平打电话相约下午看电影。看完电影去学校，碰见刘老师，他表扬我英语取得了进步，但语文，特别是作文已落后。他建议我每天写日记。晚上回家后，父亲建议我多读报刊。我觉得他们的建议都很好，决定采纳他们的建议。题目分析：要点多，就根据要点从表达形式上思考，努力创新；要点少，就要从内容、增加要点上思考，力求新意；English TVEnglish News on TVAfter I watch English News on TV in the morning, I made a telephone call to my classmate Li Ping, to ask him to see a movie together in the afternoon.-After watching English News on TV in the morning, I made a telephone call to my classmate Li Ping, asking him to see a movie together in the afternoon.When the movie was over, we returned to school. While having a rest in the schoolyard, I met Mr. Liu, who praised me for my great progress in English. However, he told me that Ive fallen behind in Chinese, especially in writing.Whats more, he suggested that I should keep diaries every day. -Then he gave me a suggestion that I keep diaries every day.In the evening, I went home and my father also advised me to read more newspapers and magazines.These are really a good ideas.What they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.范文赏析SundaySeptember 16th, 2005fineAfter watching “English on Sunday” on TV in the morning, I phoned Li Ping, my classmate, telling him to go to see a film in the afternoon. When the film was over, we returned to our school to do lessons. While having a rest in the schoolyard, I met Mr. Liu, my head teacher. He told me that I had made some progress in English, but my Chinese had fallen behind, especially my Chinese composition. He suggested I should read more and keep on taking a diary every day. In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me good for improving composition writing. That was really a good idea! What they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.第二节：书面表达（共25分） 请为你们学校英语广播站写一口头通知，（100词左右），要求如下： 1. 英语角定于星期六下午在教学楼前广场上举行，4点开始，大家可就学生的生活、学习自由交谈。 2. 汤姆，一位正在河师大就读的加拿大学生将参加，他答应谈谈加拿大学校教育情况。 3. 事实证明英语角对我们英语学习大有好处。（通知首句已知）范文赏析An Announcement Attention, please! I have something important to tell you. The English Corner is to take place on Saturday afternoon in front of our teaching building. Itll start at 4 oclock. You can talk freely with one another about your life and studies at school. Youre encouraged to speak as much English as possible. Tom, a Canadian student studying at Henan Teachers University (Henan Normal University), will join us. He has promised to tell us something about school education in Canada. Im sure youll show interest in his talk. The English Corner has proved to be of great benefit to us in our English learning. Everyone will be welcome. Please come on time. Thats all. Thank you.第二节 书面表达（满分15分）饮食和生活习惯与人们的身体健康息息相关。下面四幅图反映的是两个学生不同的饮食及生活习惯。请先描述图片内容，并就其中一位同学的饮食习惯发表自己的看法。1. 词数不少于100。2. 短文的开头已经给出。参考词汇：couch potato, mouse potato, be rich / high / low in, vitamin, calories, protein, calcium, fiberA healthy diet and regular exercise are important in peoples lives. The above pictures show different eating habits of Li Ming and Xiao Hong.题目分析四幅图，介绍了两个学生不同的饮食和生活习惯，同时要就一位学生的饮食习惯发表评论。文章分为两大部分，第一部分描述图画；第二部分进行引申，评论。描述部分里，又可以细分两小部分，分别介绍两个人的情况。第三人称，一般现在时态。图画总结第一幅图 李明喜欢吃汉堡、薯条等食物，而且一次能吃很多； Li Ming is very fond of such food as hamburgers and potato chips, which are rich in fat and high in calories. Eating too much has made him very fat./ As he eats too much, he gets fat easily.第二幅图 他躺在沙发上看电视，一边还吃着零食；有时也一直坐在电脑旁； Moreover, he prefers to watch TV while lying on the sofa and having snack food. When he sits in front of a computer, he becomes a mouse potato.第三幅图 小红喜欢各式蔬菜和肉类，营养搭配均衡； Different from him, Xiao Hong enjoys various kinds of vegetables and meat. Her food/ What she eats is well balanced in nutrition, such as vitamin, fiber, protein and calcium.第四幅图 她经常做运动，如游泳、跑步、滑旱冰等； Of course, she also likes doing sports, such as swimming, jogging and skating.引申就李明的饮食习惯，认为暴饮暴食对身体不好，有害健康，而且很容易发胖，引发各种疾病。就小红的饮食习惯，认为均衡饮食，每餐适量，有助于身体健康，并且避免摄入太多垃圾食品、油腻食物。范文赏析 A healthy diet and regular exercise are important in peoples lives. The above pictures show different eating habits of Li Ming and Xiao Hong.Li Ming has a habit of eating junk food and snacks which contain a lot of fat and are high in calories. Besides, he spends a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV, and does little exercise. As a result, he is putting on so much weight and has become a couch potato. But Xiao Hong has a balanced and healthy diet. She takes part in various sports, such as swimming, skating and running. Therefore, she is fit and healthy.In my opinion, in order to keep healthy, Li Ming should make right choices and eat foods which have good sources of fiber, vitamins and protein and he ought to learn more about his body and the fuel it needs to keep fit. Moreover, the most important thing for him to avoid being a mouse potato is to take more exercise. Only in this way will he become as fit as Xiao Hong.范文赏析 A lot of things are wasted in our daily life. Some people buy more food than they can eat and throw away the leftovers, which can be kept for another meal. Some dont bother to turn taps off after using running water. Lights are sometimes left on even in the daytime and people ignore this as if they didnt see them at all.I hope everyone can realize that its not easy for our parents to earn enough money to support us and that ours is not a very rich country and many people are still suffering poverty. We should not waste! Save things for the sake of our parents and our country.第三节 写作（满分20分）假如今年夏天你准备和你父母一起去海南旅游。下表所列的部分物品可能是你们旅游时必备的。请你选择至少五种主要的物品，并说出必备的理由。词数120左右。DocumentsID card, passport Clothessweater, raincoat, walking shoes Articlesmedicine, umbrella, vacuum bottle Equipmentmobile phone, compass Booksguidebook, map, magazine Other thingscamera, CD player, Mp3 I will travel with my parents in Hainan province this summer vacation. Well take the following things with us, which are_本文需要注意事项：1、由于列出五项物品后，要分别进行解释；所以最好安排好介绍顺序，同时有连接词； 2、安排内容时，注意详略得当；切勿每个原因一句话，或者平均分配字数，很没有层次感；范文一：First of all, the ID card is necessary in that we need it to prove our identity, especially in a strange place. Then I suggest we take a mobile phone with us. On the one hand, we can keep contact with our friends and relatives. On the other hand, it can be used to make some phone calls when needed. Of course, we shouldnt forget the walking shoes, which might make us much more comfortable in the long tour. The fourth article we must take is some medicine. As we never know whatll happen to the weather, wed best prepare it in case that anyone falls ill. But I hope everything will go well. Lastly, a MP3 player will definitely bring us more/ a lot of fun and pleasure. When we get tired, listening to some music must be the best solution.范文二：I will travel with my parents in Hainan province this summer vacation. Well take the following things with us, which are my ID card, a camera, a compass, a CD player and some clothes. I think the ID card is a basic and necessary document, and it is often used by tourists. The camera is used to take pictures or record what we have done during the trip, and it can bring us a lot of fun. Wed better take the compass with us when traveling in the forests, in case we may get lost. And then the CD player I think, is also very important for me to kill the time when on the bus, on the train or the plane. Whats more, I have to bring one or two coats when traveling to a different place in case the weather changes. In a word, among all above, I think the ID card is the most important.Nowadays more and more young people are going to study abroad. Like everything else, studying abroad has both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the favorable aspects can be listed as follows. Firstly, they think by attending a college in a foreign country they can learn not only useful knowledge, but also the culture and customs of other nations. Secondly, they can take advantage of this opportunity to gain a good command of the foreign language they are learning very quickly. Moreover, they can meet different people and experience different cultures, which may help to broaden their views. Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. The costs are much higher than those in their native country. Most overseas students have to work for a living, which cant allow them to pay all their attention to study. Whats more, they may feel very lonely. Through above analysis, we can see that the positive aspects outweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I am in favor of going abroad to study.On AdvertisementsAdvertisements appear everywhere in the modern society. When we walk along the street, we can see large advertisement boards with pretty girls smiling at you. In newspapers, we often see half of the pages covered with advertisements. We turn on the TV set and we see advertisements again. Whether we like it or not, they are getting their way into our life.Advertisements help us choose what we need and then we spend our money on it. They also guide us in finding suitable jobs. However, too many advertisements annoy us. And quite often, they give us false information.范文欣赏As a student, were thirsty for knowledge and wish to be the all-round ones, but it is impossible. SEPC is a set of good textbooks for us. The passages selected are up to date and closely related to modern life. They can really meet our needs, but there are so many subjects and it is too much for us to bear. We want to learn as much as we can about this world, but finally when we enter society, we can only choose one subject as the major to serve the people, doing our contribution. Whats more, everyone is different and it is the same with their ability. We hope to choose subjects freely. What we learn should be practical and combined with our own situation, and the college entrance exam ought to keep pace with reality. 第二节：书面表达（满分25分）人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。赞成的理由反对的理由你的看法1. 广交朋友2. 可自由表达思想3. 利于外语学习1. 浪费时间2. 影响学习3. 可能上当受骗？注意：1. 文章必须包括表中的全部内容。2. 词数为100120之间3. 参考词汇：网络朋友on-line friend(s)，上当受骗to be cheated要点思考学生网上交友Students make friends on line; students look for friends through the internet关于学生是否可以网上交友的话题引起了很多人的讨论It has been a heated topic of discussion whether students should make friends through the internet.一些人赞成Some people are in favor of this idea. Support, agree with因为这样可以广交朋友，自由表达思想，还有利于外语学习Because in this way students can have friends from all walks of life, and may have a better chance to chat freely with each other/ express themselves freely. Furthermore, itll be of great benefit/ help to them in English studies if they have some foreign friends.Be helpful = be of help但是一些人反对However/ Yet/ But/ Nevertheless, others dont believe so. Disagree, object to, be opposed to他们认为上网交友浪费时间，影响学习，还有可能受骗According to their opinions, knowing new friends on line will waste students a lot of time and have a negative effect/ influence on their studies. Sometimes, they might even be cheated by somebody.总结个人观点From my point of view, it is proper to look for friends on line, but we shouldnt spend too much time and energy on it. As long as we make good use of the internet, well gain much pleasure and happiness.范文赏析Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies.Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.11