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高三复习,writing,高考书面表达的评分原则:,按评分标准分为五个档次,第五档：2125分 第四档：1620分 第三档：1115分 第二档：610分 第一档：15分 0分,24-25 21-23,19-20 16-18,14-15 11-13,9-10 6-8,4-5 1-3,第一档 ( 4-5分） 大部分句子可读性差，只能通词汇 勉强传递少部分信息，词汇明显有限，基本 没有句子能力。 （1-3分）只能提到零星内容要点，写了一些 无关内容， 无法传递所需信息,Remember: 不要照抄试卷上阅读或其他的篇章内容！,第一 杜绝 0 分,第三档 （14-15）允许遗漏一个主要内容要点，但不影 响预期的写作目的。句子虽然有一些错误， 但基本可读。至少有2-3个基本正确的句子并都与不同的主要内容要点有关。基本完成试题规定的任务。,第二 保证15分,第五档 24-25 1) 覆盖所有内容要点 2）句式灵活，能合理使用复合句，非谓语 动词，倒装句，省略句等语法结构 3）衔接合理，过度自然，句子流畅，层次 分明，词汇丰富地道，语气自然得体。 完全达到预期的写作目的。允许有个别 语法结构或词汇方面的小错误（因尽力 使用复杂结构，高级词汇所致） 21-23 要求同上,允许有2-4个不影响理解的小错误,第三 突破20分,书面表达六步法,2014年高考海南卷英语书面表达题 一家英语报社向学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”, 请根 据下列要点和你的畅想，完成短文。 1 家庭 2 工作 3 业余生活 注意：1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.开头语已为你写好 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.,一、审题,文体，人称，时态,1 文体：充满想象的记叙文 2 人称：I ( we ) 3 时态：将来时,二、抓要点,确定要点齐全，写出和要点 相关的单词或短语,要点一 家庭 与要点相关的词汇： marry , husband , wife , child, house 要点二 工作 与要点相关的词汇: teacher, school, students, English doctor, hospital, patients , save lives 要点三 业余生活 与要点相关的词汇： play basketball/football/ computer games travel, watch movies/TV , read, dance, sing,三、扩展成句,把与要点相关的词汇扩展成 句。为了保证句子正确，最好 写简单句。,要点一 家庭 与要点相关的词汇： marry , husband , wife , child, house Ill get married to a beautiful girl. Ill have a handsome husband. Well have two children, a boy and a girl. Well live in a big house.,要点二 工作 与要点相关的词汇： teacher, school, students, English doctor, hospital, patients , save lives Ill be a teacher. Ill teach English in a high school. The students love me very much. .,要点三 业余生活 与要点相关的词汇： play basketball/football/ computer games travel, watch movies/TV ,read, dance. sing I like playing basketball. Ill play basketball with my friends in my spare time. Ill go travelling with my family.,四、连句成文,适当使用连接词把写出的句 子连成篇章,I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. Ill get married to a beautiful girl. Well have two children, a boy and a girl. Well live in a big house. Ill be a teacher. Ill teach English in a high school. The students love me very much. I like playing basketball. Ill play basketball with my friends in my spare time.,五、查错改错,1.注意时态、语态等是否正确 2.是否有破句（缺成分） 3.词数是否符合要求 4.是否需要合适的开头与结尾,I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. Ill get married to a beautiful girl. Well have two children, a boy and a girl. Well live in a big house. Ill be a teacher. Ill teach English in a high school. The students love me very much. I like playing basketball. Ill play basketball with my friends in my spare time.,In ten years, Ill be 28 years old.,who is very gentle and loves me very much.,with a swimming pool.,Ill be a teacher teaching English in a high school.,My English is so excellent that I am popular with the students.,In a word, my life in the future will be colorful.,，,and,六、誊写,修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。 卷面一定要工整!,美文欣赏：2014年高考书面表达,23分,Practice,2013年高考辽宁卷,一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英文稿件， 介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。写作要点： 1、它是中国传统节日之一； 2、家人团聚； 3、赏月、吃月饼、 4、还有旅游、访友等其他活动。 注意： 1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯； 3.开头语已您写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： 中秋节: the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历: lunar calendar 赏月: enjoy the full moon 月饼: moon cake,一、审题,1 说明文，介绍中秋节 2 人称： it, we 3 时态： 现在时,二、抓要点,中国传统节日 与要点相关的词汇： traditional, festival, China 2 回家和家人团聚 与要点相关的词汇： come home, get together, family 3 吃月饼，赏月 与要点相关的词汇： eat moon cakes ,enjoy the full moon 4,旅游，访友 travel, visit friends and relatives,三、扩展成句,中国传统节日 与要点相关的词汇： traditional, festival, China 2 回家和家人团聚 与要点相关的词汇： go back home, get together, family 3 吃月饼，赏月 与要点相关的词汇： eat moon cakes ,enjoy the full moon 4,旅游，访友 travel, visit friends and relatives,The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China.,We usually come home to get together with our family.,We eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon.,We also go travelling and visit our friends and relatives.,四、连句成文,The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China. We usually Come back home to get together with our family. We eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon. We also go travelling and visit our friends and relatives.,五、查错改错,注意时态、语态等是否正确,词数是否符合要求,是否有破句（缺成分）等。,The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China. We usually go home to get together with our family. We eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon. We also go travelling and visit our friends and relatives.,Thank you !,
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