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专题十五应用文写作挖命题【考情探究】考点考核内容考查方式考情分析2018.112018.62017.112017.62016.10求助邮件应聘信邀请信邀请邮件沟通邮件应用文写作1.日常英语的词汇量及词汇应用能力2.英语句子结构的理解和掌握能力3.日常英语的语言表达和组织能力要求考生根据所给的情境,写一篇80词左右的短文。情境包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等;提供情境的方式有提纲、图画、图表等乘机时钱包丢失,向航空公司写求助信应聘学校英语协会志愿者春节邀请外教到自己家里一起过春节组织郊游的活动邀请作为交换生到加拿大学习的信息获取分析解读写作是对考生综合语言输出能力的考查。而应用文写作是对考生写作基本能力的考查,要求考生根据所给的信息,能使用准确的语法和词汇、用比较好的句式和词汇表达规定的内容。其设题取材非常广泛,内容非常丰富,一般是和学生生活比较接近的内容。应用文的形式多样,可以是邮件、信、通知等。应用文只是形式载体,其考查的核心还是考生用英语表述事情的能力。因此,考生在写作时要注意:1.内容要包含所有的要点。根据题目的要求组织文章结构,连贯地表达自己的意思;2.要使用准确的语法和丰富的词汇;3.使用比较高级的句式结构;4.使用有效的语句间连接成分,使结构完整紧凑。【真题典例】假定你是李华,乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括:1.行程信息2.钱包特征;3.联系方式。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。本文是一封求助邮件。写作时要注意求助的重点突出,问题的说明要简洁清楚。题目明确列出的要点有三条,但是一定要注意题目中所含有的航班信息。注意句子之间的顺畅连接和连接词的使用。写作用词上要注意表现出礼貌和感谢。参考范文范文鉴赏Dear Madam/Sir,I am writing to report the loss of my wallet.I flew business class on your FL753 from China to London on November 1st, 2018. But it was really a pity that on my arrival in London Heathrow Airport, I found my wallet gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the flight. It is a black leather one and in it are my ID card, 2 credit cards as well as some money.Besides the items mentioned above, there is also a family photo, which means a lot to me.If anybody happens to find it, would you be kind enough to tell me at xxx ?Thank you very much.Yours sincerely,Li Hua1.写作重点突出。范文开门见山,先明确邮件的目的。2.结构安排合理。文章第一句指出邮件的目的。第二段简洁而清楚地讲述事情的原委。不仅在很短段落内交代清楚了航班信息,而且对钱包特征给予了明确的描述。第三段则提供了联系方式。邮件的信息完整。3.用语礼貌,符合求助信的特点。过专题【五年高考】A组自主命题浙江卷题组Writing 1(2018浙江6月)假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:1.口语能力;2.相关经验;3.应聘目的。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯答案写作提示1.本文是一封求职信,以第一人称为主,时态主要用一般现在时。2.内容要点:(1)口语能力;(2)相关经验;(3)此次应聘的目的。One possible version:Dear Sir/Madam,On seeing your notice on the bulletin board, I feel excited to write this letter for the position.Owing to studying in the English department, I can talk in English fluently. To be honest, I have just won first prize in the Spoken English Competition, so there is no doubt that there is not any problem for me to communicate with foreigners. Whats more, I have ever served as a receptionist in our schools 70th anniversary celebration, making myself more confident.In order to practise my speaking skills and get more experience, Im eager to be taken on for this job.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua Writing 2(2017浙江11月)假定你是李华,得知外教Mr. Hall寒假不回国,想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信,内容包括:1.时间;2.一同过节的家人;3.活动。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.题目要求有三个要点,但是,要注意其在叙述部分“暗含”的要点:外教寒假不回国;邀请他到家过春节。2.本文属于邀请信,因此时态要用现在时或将来时。3.要注意语言的礼貌、客气,并且尊重对方的文化习俗。One possible version:Dear Mr. Hall,Knowing that you will not go home in the winter holiday, Id like to invite you to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival, which falls on January 19. Its traditionally a time for family reunion, so all my family will be there. We will have a big Chinese-style dinner first, followed by chatting and some interesting games. At 8 in the evening we can watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV together. All my family will be happy if you can come.Yours,Li HuaWriting 3(2017浙江6月)假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.参加者;2.时间、地点;3.活动:登山、野餐等。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文是一封邀请英国朋友参加郊游的邮件,因此,时态要用一般现在时和一般将来时。2.注意本文的要点:时间、地点、参加者和活动,不可以遗漏要点。在表述的时候不可逐字翻译,可以将一些信息包含在从句、分词结构中。3.注意句子之间的顺畅连接以及高级句式的使用。One possible version:Dear Chris,How is everything going these days? I am writing to invite you to join my class in an outing organized by me this Saturday, June 10th. We will start at 6 oclock early in the morning from the school gate, and then take a bus to Yinling Mountain, where we will climb the mountain in the morning and then have a picnic at noon. If you could come, there is no need for you to take food but youd better wear sports shoes and suitable clothes.We will be really glad if you can come. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li HuaWriting 4(2016浙江10月)假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生(exchange student)去加拿大一所高中学习,住在Lynn家里。请给Lynn写一封邮件,内容包括:1.介绍自己;2.告知到达时间;3.询问应做何准备。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 答案写作提示这是一篇非常符合考试说明要求的应用文写作题目。文章是以邮件为载体交流信息。解题时注意以下几点:(1)因为本文涉及的都是现在和将来的信息,因此时态要用现在时和将来时。(2)文章必须包括三个要点:自我介绍、到达时间和咨询如何准备。(3)要注意三个信息之间的顺畅连接,同时要注意使用较好的句子结构,如从句、非谓语动词等。(4)注意句子一定要高级且精炼,字数不要太少或太多,一般以70至90字为宜。(5)浙江新高考的应用文和以往的题目以及目前其他省份的应用文有一定的不同之处,要特别留意。除了字数不同,在格式上也稍有不同。其他省份的应用文会在原题中提供了应用文的格式,但是浙江新题型中没有提供格式,因此要特别注意这一点。在写作时要加上正确的应用文格式。One possible version:Dear Lynn,Im Li Hua, an exchange student from China. Im happy to know that Ill be staying with your family in the next few months while Im studying at the local high school. Thank you for having me! I will arrive in Toronto on August 20th and get to your place late that afternoon. I wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in Canada.Looking forward to seeing you!Best wishes,Li Hua B组统一命题、省(区、市)卷题组Writing 1(2018课标全国改编)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文是回复一封邮件,主要人称为第二人称,写作主体时态为一般现在时。2.文章要点:到达时间;合适的礼物;餐桌礼仪。One possible version:Dear Terry,I am delighted when receiving your letter asking what customs you should pay attention to when visiting a friend. Here are my tips for you. First of all, bear in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the appointed time, which is of great significance to show your politeness. Additionally, to be respectful, you might as well bring an appropriate gift, like some fruits. Most importantly, its vital that you should mind your table manners. For instance, never speak with your mouth full of food, which may be similar to your own custom.In brief, do as the Chinese do when in China. I do hope you will have great fun at your friends home.Yours sincerely,Li HuaWriting 2(2018课标全国改编)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together,内容包括:1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示本文为提纲式作文,属于应用文中的书面通知。可采用三段三步写作法写作。第一步审题立意,布局谋篇“启”:审题确定主题、体裁、主要人称和主体时态。主题:在学校宣传栏“英语天地”发布邀请大家观看短片的书面通知;体裁:书面通知;人称和时态:以第一、二人称为主要人称,以一般现在时或一般将来时为主体时态。第二步确定、提炼和理顺要点,顺势承上启下,巧妙转折过渡巧“承”妙“转”,即注意段落之间、句子之间的衔接与过渡。结合要点文章可分三段来写。第一段:介绍短片内容学校的发展;第二段:说明放映的时间和地点;第三段:表达愿望希望大家对短片提意见。第三步紧扣主题,遣词造句“合”:照应开头和主题的完美的结尾,是画龙点睛之笔。紧扣主题组词成句,做到语言得体、准确无误,避免重复;遣词造句时,注意高级词汇、短语或句式的使用。One possible version:NoticeDear schoolmates,It is a great honor to be on behalf of our school to inform you that well invite you to see an English short film named Growing Together,which is about the development of our school.We have arranged that the short film will be on show from 16:00 to 17:00 at our school theater tomorrow. Dont miss the chance of taking part in this collective activity.I do hope you can give us some valuable suggestions about the short film. Please give your feedback in time and contact us at your convenience. Students UnionWriting 3(2018北京,第一节)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.推荐他上哪所大学;3.建议他做哪些准备工作。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua答案写作提示1.仔细审题,注意交际用语;2.要点齐全,合理添加细节;3.注意词句的使用,关注文章的整体性。One possible version:Dear Jim,Im happy to hear from you. Welcome to Beijing for your study!Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture, I think Beijing Language and Culture University is an ideal place for you. The university is known for its language and culture courses intended for international students. I believe you will have a rewarding experience there.To be frank, studying for a degree in a different culture is never easy. Youd better learn some basic Chinese before you come. That way, you may adjust yourself to the life here in Beijing soon.If you have any other questions, do let me know.Yours,Li HuaWriting 4(2018北京,第二节)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述你们上周接待外国学生,带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。注意:词数不少于60。答案写作提示1.介绍、参观;2.演示、观看;3.指导、体验;4.合影。One possible version:Last week, a group of international students visited our school. To help them better understand our tea-drinking culture, we took them to the tea room in our school, where I introduced the history of tea-making and different kinds of tea and so on. All the international students were quite interested in my introduction.Then I showed them how to make tea. I sat at a table, explaining every step of the process while making tea. All of them were amazed. They couldnt wait to have a try for themselves.Soon the tea room became lively with every international student trying to make their own tea. We had a lot of fun, practicing, and enjoying the tea.In the end, we took a group photo, with cups or tea in our hands, to record this unforgettable experience.Writing 5(2018天津改编)假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。(1)比赛的时间、地点;(2)邀请他的原因;(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。注意:(1)词数不少于80;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:世界青少年机器人技能竞赛the World Adolescent Robotics CompetitionDear Chris,I have good news to tell you.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin答案写作提示1.本文是一封电子邮件,主要人称为第一人称和第二人称,主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。2.文章要点:说明写邮件的目的;介绍比赛的时间和地点;邀请他的原因;告知Chris训练计划将发送到他的邮箱并请他提出自己的建议。One possible version:Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition is scheduled to be held at the end of July in Tianjin. Im writing to invite you to join our team to prepare for it.As far as I know, you once won a prize in a robotics competition. Therefore, I think not only will it be a golden opportunity for you to show your great talent, but also you can offer us guidance, which is of great significance for us to perform well in the coming competition. Our training plan is to be sent to your e-mail box. I would appreciate it if you could give us your personal advice after reading it.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li JinWriting 6(2017课标全国改编)假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.内容:学习唐诗;3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文为电子邮件,属于书信类。主要人称为第一人称和第二人称,写作时态以一般将来时为主体时态。2.内容要点:上课的时间和地点; 上课的内容:学习唐诗;课前要求:简要了解唐朝的历史。One possible version:Dear Leslie,I am writing to inform you of our course schedule of our next class, which is about poetry of the Tang Dynasty. We will have it this Friday, in Classroom 602, Building 6. In order to learn it better, you need to do some preparations before the next class.At first, please read some materials about poetry of the Tang Dynasty, which plays a significant role in our literature. Besides, youd better read about the history of Tang Dynasty, since it will be of great benefit for you to understand the background of the poems.You are so diligent and I am glad to teach you. I sincerely look forward to our next class and your reply.Yours,Li HuaWriting 7(2017课标全国改编)假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;2.展览内容。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为书信。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主,以一般现在时和一般将来时为主体时态。2.文章要点:1)展览时间、地点;2)展览内容:中国传统剪纸艺术的历史和作品。One possible version:Dear Henry,Im Li Hua, one of your students. Im writing to invite you to visit the paper-cutting exhibition. Paper-cutting is one of Chinese traditions and Im sure you will like it.The exhibition will be held in the local museum next Saturday. Some famous Chinese artists will perform on that day. Meanwhile, some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all over the country, will be exhibited there. It will be a feast. If you like, you can also join in paper-cutting. Im sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li HuaWriting 8(2017课标全国改编)假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:1.球队活动;2.报名方式及截止日期。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文为提纲类作文。人称应以第一、二人称为主,时态以一般现在时、一般将来时为主。2.写作要点:导入话题:鉴于Eric对乒乓球运动的兴趣,特告知他校乒乓球队招收新队员的消息;介绍球队活动,可从日常训练安排以及比赛活动入手;告知Eric报名方式,提醒他务必在截止日期前完成报名。One possible version:Dear Eric,Im writing to invite you to join our school table tennis team. I have been told that our school team is recruiting new members. Knowing that you are keen on playing table tennis, I wonder if youd like to join.Team members need to receive training after school every day and are often offered opportunities to watch table tennis competitions, which will benefit us most. If you are interested in it, you can visit the school website to sign up. The closing date is 15th June.I hope to meet you in the school team.Yours,Li HuaWriting 9(2017北京,第一节改编)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.你建议的线路;2.你的理由;3.你的祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua答案写作提示1.本文为提纲类作文。体裁为应用文中的书信。时态以一般现在时为主。2.先介绍建议的旅游线路,再陈述理由,最后表达祝愿。One possible version:Dear Jim,Im happy to receive your letter and know youre coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization, from which you can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope youll have a good time in China.Yours,Li HuaWriting 10(2017天津改编)假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);(3)希望她有机会重访天津。注意:(1)词数80左右;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:第十三届全运会the 13th National GamesDear Mrs. Green,Im so glad to hear from you.Yours,Li Jin答案写作提示1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为应用文。人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。2.写作要点:(1)介绍自己的学习和生活;(2)告诉Mrs. Green你已成为第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍你为此所做的准备;(3)希望Mrs. Green重访天津。One possible version:Dear Mrs. Green,Im so glad to hear from you. With the college entrance examination drawing near, I am engaged in preparing for it. Meanwhile, I pay close attention to the 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. Im glad to tell you that I have become a volunteer for it and I have made a lot of preparations for it. After class, I often surf the Internet to get more information about the history and culture of Tianjin. Practicing my oral English is also becoming my schedule.I do hope you can return to Tianjin as soon as possible.Yours,Li JinWriting 11(2017北京,第二节改编)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。注意:词数80左右。提示词:视频 video答案写作提示1.本文应以第一人称为主,时态以一般过去时为主。2.制作毕业纪念视频的全过程应该包括讨论分工、收集素材、编辑制作以及放映视频四个方面。One possible version:Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.【三年模拟】A组20172019年模拟基础题组Writing 1(2019浙江五校联考)假如你是李华,你的好友Tom想约你明晚和他家人共进晚餐,但你因故不能应约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件:1.表示歉意;2.解释原因;3.弥补方法。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文是致歉信,注意使用礼貌用语。2.要点要全部包括,不能有遗漏和省略。3.要点只是提纲,要在此基础上增加细节,不要逐字逐句翻译,要注意谋篇布局。4.注意运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法结构让文章更有文采。5.注意本文主要使用一般现在时。One possible version:Dear Tom,Thank you for your invitation to have dinner at your home tomorrow evening. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family, because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get-together, and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterward?If so, please dont hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date. I do long for a pleasant chat with you.Please allow me to say sorry again.Yours,Li HuaWriting 2(2019浙江绍兴11月联考)为了迎接2019年元旦,学校学生会开始在广大师生中征集元旦庆祝活动方案(scheme)。假定你是李华,请你给学生会写一封信,提出自己的建议,内容包括:1.你设计的活动方案;2.你的设计理由及相关活动的意义。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.注意不要遗漏要点:方案;理由;意义。2.时态用一般现在时或一般将来时。3.注意使用合适的连接词,使语句顺畅。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,使文章更精彩。One possible version:Dear Student Union,Having learned that you are collecting schemes for the approaching New Year celebration, Ive got some ideas to share with you.As we all know, New Year represents a new beginning, so its strongly recommended that teachers and students share their new year resolutions, which will serve as a strong motivation in the following year. Additionally, a New Years Gala will be definitely welcomed, and it would be better if some traditional shows can be included. Whats more, New Year is also a good chance to spread kindness, so it is a good choice to hold a charity sale in the playground.I sincerely hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration, and that the New Year celebration will be a brilliant success.Yours sincerely,Li HuaWriting 3(2019浙江稽阳联考)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信就下周三要参加孔子学院(the Confucius Institute)的面试征询你的意见。请你写封回信,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.提出建议(至少2条);3.表示祝愿。注意:1.词数80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文是建议信,注意语言要简洁明了。2.文章的主要时态为一般现在时。3.三个明确的要点和介绍中的暗含要点都不要遗漏。One possible version:Dear Peter,Glad to receive your letter asking me for some advice on the interview for the Confucius Institute scheduled for Wednesday. Im writing to remind you of what to prepare for.First, I think you need to read some books about Confucius, which helps you to understand traditional Chinese cultures better. It would also be beneficial to learn a few Chinese greetings. Additionally, wearing Han-style clothes will make you stand out among the candidates and impress the interviewers greatly. I do hope my humble proposals could be practical.Wish you good luck!Yours Sincerely,Li HuaWriting 4(2019浙江杭州模拟)假定你是李华,最近你的美国笔友Robert要来杭州体验中国传统文化,请你给他回复一封邮件,并为他设计杭州一日游的活动,帮助他体验中国传统文化。内容包括:1.打算去的地方;2.具体的活动安排;3.安排的理由。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.注意要点和背景。2.主要时态为一般现在时和将来时。3.注意句子的衔接要合理顺畅。One possible version:Dear Robert, Im glad that you will come to Hangzhou soon, where there are lots of places of interest. To experience traditional Chinese cultures better, I do recommend the West Lake tour.We can begin our tour by going sightseeing along the West Lake. I bet you will be attracted. Along the West Lake, not only can you watch the wonderful scenery, but also you will find many historical relics, from which you can learn a lot of traditional cultures. Sincerely waiting for your coming!Yours, Li HuaWriting 5(2019浙江十校联盟高三期中
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