高考英语作文模块修改.doc

高考英语作文模块高考英语书面表达评分标准一、评分原则1、本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。2、评分时，应根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。4、评分时，应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点三、各档次的给分范围和要求：第五档次（很好）：（25-30分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。-覆盖所有内容要点。-应用较多的语法结构和词汇。-语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（好）：（19-24分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。-虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。-语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试复杂语法结构或词汇所致。-应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（适当）：（13-18）基本完成了试题规定的任务。-虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。-应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（较差）：（712分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。-漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。-语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。-较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档（差）：（1-6分）未完成试题规定的任务。-明显遗漏主要内容，写一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。-语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。-较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。-缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息；内容太少、无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。四、说明1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分 英文写作“四步走”高考的英语作文步骤如下：1）作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿（可现在草稿纸上）。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。2）考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些动词和词组等。3）边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。4）写完后一定要再细看一遍。 十个常见句型面临高考的学生，记住和积累固定句型，对于考试中的任何一项，尤其是写作，都是百利而无害。这里是十个常见句型，分别以a、b单词开头，请注意：1. According to依照根据According to the newspaper，its a great movie根据报纸说，这是一部很棒的电影。2. Am I allowed to我可以吗？Am I allowed to introduce our new manager Mr. Anderson to all of you?请允许我介绍我们的新经理安德森先生给大家，好吗？3. As matter of fact，实际上As matter of fact，I dont agree with you实际上，我不大同意你的看法。4.As far as Im concerned就我而言，As far as Im concerned, | think we should pay more attention to the safety of schoolchildren.就我而言，我认为我们应该更关注在校儿童的安全问题。5.As far as I know，据我所知As far as l know，he is not coming，but l may be wrong.据我所知，他不打算来，但我或许会弄错。6.As I just mentioned.正如我刚才提到过的，As I just mentioned, nobody should drop out of school unless they believe they face the opportunity of a lifetime. And even then they should reconsider.正如我刚才提到过的，任何人都不应该辍学，除非他们相信他们面临着一生中难得的机会，尽管那样，他们还需反复思量。 reconsider。重新考虑7. As I see it,在我看来，As I see it, he is not the right person for this position. 在我看来，他不是这个职位的合适人选。8. As is known to us all, . 众所周知，As is known to us all, Hong Kong is one of the financial centers of Asia.众所周知，香港是亚洲金融中心之一。9. As long as.只要As long as we work together, we can make the impossible possible.只要我们一起努力，我们就能把不可能变为可能。10But for.若不是因为。如果没有But for your generous help, we couldnt have finished the work so soon.如果没有你的鼎力相助，我们不可能这么快完成工作的。 高考万能作文1. 图标作文模板 As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,_ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from _ in _ to _ in _. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _. There are at least two good reasons accounting for _. In one hand, _.In the other hand, _ is due to the fact that _.In addition, _ is responsible for _. Maybe there are some other reasons to show _.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing. As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.2. 书信作文模板 Your address Month, Date, yea r Receivers address Dear ., I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience. Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours,3. 话题作文模板 Nowadays, there are more and more _ _ in _ _. It is estimated that _. Why have there been so many _? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is _. Besides,_. The third one is _. To sum up, the main cause of it is due to _. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing,_. For another thing, _. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _.4. 对比观点作文模板 _ is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say _ is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of _. What is more, _. Moreover, _.While others think that _ is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,_. Secondly (besides),_. Thirdly (finally),_.From my point of view, I think _. The reason is that _. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.据报道，重庆2009届高三学生中，有上万考生没有报名参加高考。招生负责人称，“读书无用论”思想在农村蔓延，不少农村孩子想早些出去打工挣钱。请结合这一现象，根据下列要点，用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈你的看法以便在班会上讨论。 1、 金融危机对家庭的影响。2、 大学生就业困难。 3、 陈述你对这一现象的看法 注意：词数120-150字。发言稿的开头、结尾已经给出不计入总数Classmates,_ 高考英语作文必背写作句式句型 一开头用语：良好的开端等于成功的一半在写作文时，通常以最简单也最常用的方式-开门见山法。也就是说, 直截了当地提出你对这个问题的看法或要求，点出文章的中心思想。 议论论文： A. Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantagesB. Compared to/ In comparison with letters, e-mails are more convenient.C. When it comes to computers, some people think they have brought us a lot of convenience. However,.D. Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city and in the countryside. E. As is known to all/ As we all know, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life.F. Why do you go to university? Different people have different points of view. 2. 书信：A. I am writing to you to apply for admission to your university as a visiting scholar.B. I read an advertisement in todays China Daily and I apply for the job.C. Thank you for your letter of May 5.D. How happy I am to receive your letter of January 9.E. How nice to hear from you again.3. 口头通知或介绍情况：A. Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please. I have an announcement to make.B. Attention, please. I have something important to tell you.C. Mr. Green, Welcome to our school. To begin with, let me introduce Mr. Wang to you.4. 演讲稿：A. Ladies and gentlemen, I feel very much honored to have a chance here to make a speech on the subject - A Balance Diet and Health.B. Good morning everyone! Allow me, first of all, on behalf of all present here, to extend our warm welcome and cordial greeting to our distinguished guest. 二并列用语：as well as, not onlybut (also), including,A. Not only do computers play an important part in science and technology, but also play an informative role in our daily life.B. All of us, including the teachers / the teachers included, will attend the lecture.C. He speaks French as well as English.=He speaks English, and French as well.=He speaks not only English but also French. D. E-mail, as well as telephones, is playing an important part in daily communication.三对比用语：on one hand ,on the other hand, on the contrary/contrary to ., though, for one thing ;for another, neverthelessA. I know the Internet can only be used at home or in the office, but on the other hand, it is becoming more and more popular for much information as well as clear and vivid pictures.B. It is hard work; I enjoy it though.C. Contrary to what I had originally thought, the trip turned out to be fun.四. 递进用语：even, besides, whats more, as for, sothat, worse still, moreover, furthermore; but for, in addition, to make matters worse A. The house is too small for a family of four, and furthermore/besides/whats more/moreover /in addition/worse still , it is in a bad location. 五. 例证用语：in ones opinion, that is to say, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, in fact, namely A. As a matter of fact, advertisement plays an informative role in our daily lifeB. There is one more topic to discuss, namely/that is ( to say ), the question of education.六. 时序用语：first/firstly, meanwhile, before long, ever since, while, at the same time, in the meantime, shortly after, nowadays,A. They will be here soon. Meanwhile, lets have coffee.B. Firstly, let me deal with the most important difficulty.七. 强调用语：especially, indeed, at least, at the most, What in the world/on earth. , not at all , A. Noise is unpleasant, especially when you are trying to sleep.B What in the world/on earth are you doing?八. 因果用语：thanks to, because, as a result, because of/as a result of , without, with the help of., owe .to.A. The company has a successful year, thanks mainly to the improvement in export sales.B. As a result, many of us succeeded in passing the College Entrance Examinations. 九. 总结用语：in short; briefly/ in brief ; generally speaking, in a word, as you know, as is known to all A. Generally speaking, sending an e-mail is more convenient than sending letters.B. In short, measures must be taken to prevent the environment being polluted. 常用句型（一）段首句 1. 关于人们有不同的观点。一些人认为There are different opinions among people as toSome people suggest that 2. 俗话说（常言道），它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。There is an old sayingIts the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today. 3. 现在，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，；其次，。更为糟糕的是。Today, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, Second,What makes things worse is that.4. 现在，很普遍，许多人喜欢，因为，另外（而且）。Nowadays，it is common to . Many people like because Besides，5. 任何事物都是有两面性，也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages. 6. 关于人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说），在他们看来， Peoples opinions about vary from person to person. Some people say that To them, 7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题，这个问题变得越来越严重。Man is now facing a big problem which is becoming more and more serious. 8. 已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. 9. 在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。 has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出。很显然，但是为什么呢？ According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen thatwhile. Obviously，but why? （二）中间段落句 1. 相反，有一些人赞成，他们相信，而且，他们认为。 On the contrary，there are some people in favor oft the same time，they say2. 但是，我认为这不是解决的好方法，比如。最糟糕的是。But I dont think it is a very good way to solve .For example，Worst of all，.3. 对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，。而且，最重要的是 is necessary and important to our countrys development and construction. First，Whats more, Most important of all,4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以。There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can5. 面临，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来。一方面，另一方面，Confronted withwe should take a series of effective measures to. For one thing，For another，6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说，另外。所有这些方法肯定会。 It is high time that something was done about it. For example. In addition.All these measures will certainly.7. 为什么？第一个原因是；第二个原因是；第三个原因是。总的来说，的主要原因是由于 Why The first reason is that The second reason is The third is.For all this, the main cause of use to .8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，也有它的不利的一面，象。However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, also has its own disadvantages, such as 9. 尽管如此，我相信更有利。Nonetheless, I believe that is more advantageous.10. 完全同意这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下：I fully agree with the statement that because.（三）结尾句 1. 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that 2. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来。 In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of Only in this way can in the future. 3. 但是，和都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，而。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢） But andhave heir own advantages. For example, while Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to 4. 就我个人而言，我相信，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为Personally, I believe that Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because 5. 随着社会的发展，。因此，迫切需要。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。 With the development of society, So its urgent and necessary to If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better. 6. 至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为更合理。只有这样，我们才能For my part, I think it reasonable to Only in this way can you 7. 对我来说，我认为有必要。原因如下：第一，； 第二，；最后但同样重要的是 In my opinion, I think it necessary toThe reasons are as follows. First second Last but not least,8. 在总体上很难说是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现。 It is difficult to say whether is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of.however, from a personal point of view find9. 综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is常用句型：1. 开头： When it comes to ., some think . There is a public debate today that . A is a common way of ., but is it a wise one? Recently the problem has been brought into focus. 2. 提出观点： Now there is a growing awareness that. It is time we explore the truth of . Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible. 7. 进一步提出观点： . but that is only part of the history. Another equally important aspect is . A is but one of the many effects. Another is . Besides, other reasons are. 8. 提出假想例子的方式： Suppose that. Just imagine what would be like if. It is reasonable to expect. It is not surprising that. 3. 举普通例子： For example(instance),. . such as A,B,C and so on (so forth) A good case in point is. A particular example for this is. 4. 引用： One of the greatest early writers said . Knowledge is power, such is the remard of . . That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise.). . How often we hear such words like there. 5. 讲故事 （先说故事主体），this story is not rare. ., such a thing we often meet in daily life. ., the story still has a realistic significance.6. 提出原因： There are many reasons for . Why . , for one thing,. The answer to this problem involves many factors. Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves . The first reason can be obviously seen. Most people would agree that. Some people may neglect that in fact . Others suggest that. Part of the explanation is . 9. 进行对比： The advantages for A for outweigh the disadvantages of. Although A enjoys a distinct advantage . Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned. A maybe . , but it suffers from the disadvantage that. 10. 承上启下： To understand the truth of ., it is also important to see. A study of . will make this point clear 11. 让步： Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as. I do not deny that A has its own merits. 12. 结尾： From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that . In summary, it is wiser . In short.参考范文：It was reported by Chongqing Evening News that more than ten thousand graduates from senior schools abandoned the chance to take the university entrance exam, which aroused a heated debate in our class.The reason why they chose to give up lies in the following facts. There is the financial crisis this year .Their families income decreased and more university graduates cant find their satisfactory jobs after four years study in universities.In my opinion, the first is that they are at a disadvantage in grades due to the poor education conditions. The second is that the tuition is too high for their families to afford even if they are admitted to colleges or universities. Personally speaking, the students should attend the entrance exams, Though going to college no longer means good jobs and satisfying salary, yet higher education will put you at a favorable position in the job market. Besides, something must be done to raise the standard of education in underdeveloped areas. Last but not least, the government should spare no effort to create employment opportunities