山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错写作(40).doc

山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（40）短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线 ( ) 划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，从第11处起不计分。 An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught in the fence around his farms. He thought the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put on the animalThen he started trying to cut the fence to free the animalsBut as soon as the kangaroo were free, it jumped up and ran away with the jacketThe farmer was worried because of his wallet was in the pocketBut, to my surprise, when he gets home, he saw the animal waiting at the door, still wore his jacket with the wallet in the pocket书面表达假如你班要就“如何为高考做准备”开一个班会，请根据以下内容写一篇发言稿，谈谈你对高考备考过程中要注意的事项及建议理由： 1. 保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气； 2. 目标明确、正确评价自己。太低的目标使人松懈，太高的目标使人丧失信心； 3. 与父母、老师或同学沟通帮忙走出困境； 4. 作息合理，饮食均衡，以保持旺盛的精力。 注意：1词数120左右，开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination._短文改错：An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught in the fence around his farmsHea farmthought the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put so 或 and on the animalThen he started trying to cut the fence to free the animalsBut as it animalsoon as the kangaroo were free, it jumped up and ran away with the jacketThe wasfarmer was worried because of his wallet was in the pocketBut, to my surprise, hiswhen he gets home, he saw the animal waiting at the door, still wore his jacket with got wearingthe wallet in the pocket写作：one possible versionNo doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National college Entrance Examination. Yet what should we do in order to achieve success? Here are some suggestions. First, its very important to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us to relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely. Meanwhile, we should have a definite goal and a correct estimation of ourselves. Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disappointed with what we have known and done. Besides, wed better sometimes talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when were in trouble. Finally, keeping a proper balance between study and rest keeps us energetic and a healthy diet is useful as well. With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance.