高中英语作文-道歉信.ppt

道歉信 ALetterofApology 道歉信文体概述 Letterofapology 道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事 给别人带来了麻烦或损失 发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件 通常包括以下三部分内容 1 开门见山 表明写信目的 表示歉意 2 说明出现差错的原因 提出弥补措施 3 再次致歉 请求原谅 希望得到理解 语言要诚挚 解释的理由要真实 常用语块因某事向某人道歉 2 向 说对不起 3 接受我的道歉 4 为某事原谅某人 5 并非故意做某事 havenointentiontodosth apologizetosb forsth makeanapologytosb forsth saysorryto acceptmyapology forgivesb forsth 6 弥补 赔偿 7 赔偿 偿还 8 给你带来不便 9 给你带来许多麻烦 10 更加小心 bemorecareful makeupfor payfor compensatefor causeyouinconvenience causeyoumuchtrouble 11 犯这样愚蠢的错误 12 应当受到责备 13 承担责任 14 难以接受的后果 15 下不为例 neverletithappenagain makesuchastupidmistake betoblame beresponsiblefor shoulder undertaketheresponsibility anunacceptableresult consequence 写作三步曲 Step1 审题养成重视审题的习惯 第一人称 一封道歉信 说理的逻辑性 一般现在时 9 3 提出补救办法 2 说明具体原因 道歉信写作4步走 写信的一般要求1 内容要简单对于题中所给的内容 全面对于自己发挥的内容 简单写熟悉的 会写的 2 结构要清晰开头段 中间段 结尾段 3 语言要精彩 4 注意内容之间的连接 1 表示歉意 总结提升 4 再次致歉望理解 造句能力 高分套话 10 Basicstructureandexpressions第一段 简明说明写信目的 为自己的过失表示歉意 希望得到对方的谅解 道歉的表达 Ifeelsorryformyfailureto IamawfullysorrythatIcannot IamverysorryforIamwritingtoexpressmysincereapologyformy 5 IregrettoinformyouthatIamunableto 6 IfeelguiltyforwhatIhavedonetoyou pickyouupattheairport attendyourparty myrudeness thoughtlessness badmanners 11 第二段 详细说明当时情况 解释原因 语气要诚恳 1 Nowletmeexplainwhathappenedtomethatday 2 Ihadintendedto 3 IamafraidwhatIhavedonehascausedmuchinconveniencetoyou 4 Iamtoblameforthissillymistake 5 Pleaseforgivemeforastupidchoiceofwords 6 Ifeelawfullysorryaboutitandwantyoutoknowwhathappened 12 第三段 提出补救方法 具体提出自己的想法 希望能弥补过失 消除误会 1 Inordertoremoveourmisunderstanding Iwouldliketoinvite 2 Tomakeupformyfault Iwill 3 Tocompensateforyourloss Idecideto 4 Iwishyoucouldgivemeachancetomakeupformyfault 5 Ihopethesettlementofthismattercanmeetyourwishes 13 第四段 再次表示歉意 愿意为此负责 希望以后不再出现类似不愉快事件 1 Pleaseacceptmymostsincereapologyagain 2 IpromisethatIwillnevermakesuchastupidmistakeagain 3 Iassureyouthatitwillneverhappenagain 4 Isincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituation thinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies 5 Onceagain I msorryforanyinconveniencecaused youhavesustained Step3 写作 15 道歉信模板一DearBob Iamtrulysorrythat 道歉的原因 Thereasonisthat 介绍的原因 Onceagain Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation Yourssincerely LiHua 习作欣赏DearSir Madam IamawfullysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookIborrowfromyourlibrarylastweek ThenameofthebookisAdventurersinDeserts Ireadthemeveryeveningandintendtofinishitthenextweek butunfortunatelyyesterdayuntilIcamebacktomyroom itwasnowheretobefound Ipromisetopayforthelostofthebook IknowmoneycannotcoverthelossandIamblame IwillgotoyourplaceinThursdayafternoontotalkoverthecompensation 赔偿 forthemissedbook Iapologizeagainforanyinconveniencesortroublecausedbymycareless Ipromisethatsuchathingwillneverhappenagain 习作欣赏DearSir Madam IamawfullysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookIborrowfromyourlibrarylastweek ThenameofthebookisAdventurersinDeserts Ireadthemeveryeveningandintendtofinishitthenextweek butunfortunatelyyesterdayuntilIcamebacktomyroom itwasnowheretobefound Ipromisetopayforthelostofthebook IknowmoneycannotcoverthelossandIamblame IwillgotoyourplaceinThursdayafternoontotalkoverthecompensation 赔偿 forthemissedbook Iapologizeagainforanyinconveniencesortroublecausedbymycareless Ipromisethatsuchathingwillneverhappenagain 第一段 开门见山道歉并解释失误的过程 第二段 承诺弥补或赔偿及措施 第三段 再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误 习作修改 做短文改错 DearSir Madam IamawfullysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookIborrowfromyourlibrarylastweek ThenameofthebookisAdventurersinDeserts Ireadthemeveryeveningandintendtofinishitthenextweek butunfortunatelyyesterdayuntilIcamebacktomyroom itwasnowheretobefound Ipromisetopayforthelostofthebook borrowed it when loss IknowmoneycannotcoverthelossandIamblame IwillgotoyourplaceinThursdayafternoontotalkoverthecompensation 赔偿 forthemissedbook Iapologizeagainforanyinconveniencesortroublecausedbymycareless Ipromisethatsuchathingwillneverhappenagain Yourssincerely LiMing on missing inconvenience carelessness 诵读经典范文DearSir Madam IamawfullysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookIborrowedfromyourlibrarylastweek ThenameofthebookisAdventurersinDeserts Ireaditeveryeveningandintendtofinishitnextweek butunfortunatelyyesterdaywhenIcamebacktomyroom itwasnowheretobefound Ipromisetopayforthelossofthebook IknowmoneycannotcoverthelossandIamtoblame IwillgotoyourplaceonThursdayafternoontotalkoverthecompensation 赔偿 forthemissingbook Iapologizeagainforanyinconvenienceortroublecausedbymycarelessness Ipromisethatsuchathingwillneverhappenagain 第一段 开门见山道歉并解释失误的过程 第二段 承诺弥补或赔偿及措施 第三段 再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误 诵读经典范文DearSir Madam IamawfullysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookIborrowedfromyourlibrarylastweek ThenameofthebookisAdventurersinDeserts Ireaditeveryeveningandintendtofinishitnextweek butunfortunatelyyesterdaywhenIcamebacktomyroom itwasnowheretobefound Ipromisetopayforthelossofthebook IknowmoneycannotcoverthelossandIamtoblame IwillgotoyourplaceonThursdayafternoontotalkoverthecompensation 赔偿 forthemissingbook Iapologizeagainforanyinconvenienceortroublecausedbymycarelessness Ipromisethatsuchathingwillneverhappenagain Let stakeactions Writeanaletterofapologyin15minutes 课堂练习假定你是李华 寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训 回国时因为匆忙 把房东Bob的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来 现在请你给Bob写一封道歉信 要点如下 1 对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意 2 提出解决的办法 3 再次请求原谅 注意 1 词数100左右 2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 开头语和结束语已为你写好 Agoodessayshouldbe plete2 coherent3 accurate4 various5 neat DearBob IamwritingtomakeanapologytoyouforthefactthatIforgottoreturnamusicCDwhichIborrowedfromyoulastweek YesterdayIcamebackfromEnglandandfounditinmyluggage Iamsosorrythatyoucannotlistentoitatpresent TheCDwhichIborrowedfromyouismadeinEngland soIbelieveyoucanfindanotheroneinyourlocalstore HowaboutyourbuyinganotherCDbyyourselfandIwillpayforit Ifyoucannotfindasimilarone Iwouldsenditbacktoyouthroughapostoffice Andifthereareanyothersolutionsyoulike pleaseletmeknow Iamterriblysorryagainformycarelessness Pleaseforgivemeforanyinconveniencecaused Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply Yourssincerely LiHua Homework 课外作业假定你是李华 你的美国老师Mr Evans要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座 你因故不能参加 请你写一封信向Mr Evans道歉并说明情况 要点如下 1 表示歉意 2 理由 父亲去北京出差 母亲生病住院需要人照顾 3 询问 是否有录音 以便补听讲座 注意 1 词数100左右 2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 开头语和结束语已为你写好 DearMr Evans IamindeedsorrytotellyouthatIwon tbeabletoattendthelectureonEnglishhistorytomorrowafternoon MymothersuddenlyfellillandwastakentohospitallastnightandmyfatherisonabusinesstriptoBeijingnow IamafraidthatIwillhavetotakecareofherthesedays HowaboutyourbuyinganotherCDbyyourselfandIwillpayforit Ifyoucannotfindasimilarone Iwouldsenditbacktoyouthroughapostoffice Andifthereareanyothersolutionsyoulike pleaseletmeknow However IamactuallyveryinterestedinEnglishsocietyandhistory Iwonderifitispossibleforthetalktoberecorded andifso couldIborrowthetape Itwouldmeanagreatdealtometolistentothetapeandlearnwhatiscoveredinthetalk Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletounderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology Yourssincerely LiHua 套用句式我写这封信是因 向你致歉 2 请接受我真诚的道歉 1 Iamwritingtoapologizetoyoufor Iamwritingtosaysorrytoyoufor 2 Pleaseacceptmysincereapology 3 对于我说的话 做的事 我确实感到很抱歉 但请相信 我并非故意要 4 我真心希望你能理解我的处境 设身处地地为我考虑 并接受我的道歉 5 对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意 3 IamindeedverysorryforwhatIsaid did butpleasebelieveIhadnointentionto 5 Onceagain Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused 4 Isincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituation thinkinmypositionandacceptmyapology