Writing-给交换生的邮.ppt

写作 给交换生的邮件 假如你是高三 1班的班长李华 得知美国学生Forest作为交换生下个月将到你班学习 请你根据以下要点 给他写封邮件 1 表示欢迎 2 简要介绍所在班级以及课程设置情况 3 希望Forest能介绍一些西方文化及校园生活 注意 1 词数100左右 2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 开头 结尾已给出 不计入总字数 参考词汇 交换生 anexchangestudent DearForest I mLiHua monitorofClassOne SeniorThree Yours LiHua 审题 1 文章体裁 2 主体时态 3 主体人称 邮件 信件一般现在时第一人称第二人称 2 列出要点 确定所写内容 列 1 表示欢迎 Goodnewscomesthatyou warmly sincerelywelcomeintroducemake athome2 简要介绍所在班级以及课程设置情况 consistofclass relationship studyatmosphere subjects many learnmuch 3 希望Forest能介绍一些西方文化及校园生活 introduce interestedinhaveagoodknowledge understandingof 3 善用语言功底 写好每个句子将上述所列出的写作要点等扩展成句 并使用各类语法结构提升句子 注意时态 语态的正确运用 4 根据逻辑关系 连成通顺短文 连 使用衔接词 假如你是高三 1班的班长李华 得知美国学生Forest作为交换生下个月将到你班学习 1 表示欢迎 Welcometomyclassasanexchangestudent Tomakeyourstaymorecomfortable I dliketointroducesomeinformationtoyou 1 aimtodosth 2 soasto inorderto 3 sothat inorderthat 2 简要介绍所在班级以及课程设置情况 Ourclassismadeupof52students Andithasaharmoniousstudyatmosphere wherestudentsandteachersarefriendlyandhaveagoodrelationship Besides thereareseveralsubjectsyoucanchoosefrom suchasChinese Arts chemistryandsoon 3 希望Forest能介绍一些西方文化及校园生活 IsincerelywishyoucouldintroducesomewesternculturesandyourcampuslifethatweChinesestudentsareinterestedin Inthatcase we llhaveabetterunderstandingofeachother whichhelpsimproveourfriendship Lookingforwardtoyourcoming 5 核查准确无误 认真规范誊写 查 1 查内容信息是否完整 2 查句子结构是否完整 主谓是否一致 两个句子之间有没有连接词 3 查是否有单词拼写错误 时态错误等 DearForest I mLiHua monitorofClassOne SeniorThree Welcometomyclassasanexchangestudent Tomakeyourstaymorecomfortable I dliketointroducesomeinformationtoyou Ourclassismadeupof52students Andithasaharmoniousstudyatmosphere wherestudentsandteachersarefriendlyandhaveagoodrelationship Besides thereareseveralsubjectsyoucanchoosefrom suchasChinese Arts chemistryandsoon IsincerelywishyoucouldintroducesomewesternculturesandyourcampuslifeweChinesestudentsareinterestedin Inthatcase Therefore we llhaveabetterunderstandingofeachother whichhelpsimproveourfriendship Lookingforwardtoyourcoming Yours LiHua 改错 Ihearedofyouwillasanexchangestudentcometoourclassinnextmonth Wearedelightandwelcometoyou Ourclasshas60students include30boysand30girls Theyareactiveandfriendly Youcanmakefriendswiththemeasily Thereis8classeseveryday suchasmathclass Chineseclass SometimesithasPEclass wealllikeitverymuchbecausewecandosports IwantyoucantalkmesomewestculturalandschoollifesoIcanlearnmoreaboutyou 改错 Ihearedofyouwillasanexchangestudentcometoourclassinnextmonth Wearedelightandwelcometoyou Whenthegoodnewscomesthatyouwillcometoourclassasanexchangestudentnextmonth wearesodelightedandwelcometoyou 改错 Ourclasshas60students include30boysand30girls Theyareactiveandfriendly Youcanmakefriendswiththemeasily Thereis8classeseveryday suchasmathclass Chineseclass SometimesithasPEclass wealllikeitverymuchbecausewecandosports Ourclassconsistsof60students including30boysand30girls whoarenotonlyactivebutalsofriendly Soitwillbeeasyforyoutocommunicatewith makefriendswiththem WehavemanysubjectssuchasChinese Arts chemistryandsoon SometimeswehavePElesson inwhichwecandosportstoimproveourhealth 改错 IwantyoucantalkmesomewestculturalandschoollifesoIcanlearnmoreaboutyou I dappreciateitifyoucantellmesomewesterncultureandschoollifesothatIcanhaveagoodknowledgeofyourcultureandlife Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply