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专题23 文字提纲式2018高考题【2018天津卷】书面表达（满分25分）61. 假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他普在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。 （1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics petitionDear Chris,I have good news to tell you. _Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin【参考范文】Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics petition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July so as to promote the development of robotics. What I would like to stress is that it is looking for new members at this moment. I would like to invite you to take part in it, since I know youve just won first prize in the Robotics petition held in your institute and have shown great talent in designing robotics. Therefore, you are the most suitable person, I suppose.The training schedule, in addition to regular training, includes joining in a variety of activities, such as participating in some national petitions. I will send its details to you by e-mail. I would appreciate it if you give us some advice on how to make it perfect. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin【点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。【2018北京】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：(1) 表示欢迎；(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。注意：(1). 词数不少于50；(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim, Im so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest wele to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing. Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be pletely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment. I sincerely hope your dream will e true and its my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day es. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.Yours,Li Hua亮点说明：文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子结构紧凑。使用定语从句Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be pletely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美；巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。 【2018全国III】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：1. 学校的体育场馆；2. 主要的运动项目；3. 你喜欢的项目。注意：1. 词数100左右：2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Peter, I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has bee the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running petitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, Im intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.All in all, I sincerely invite you to e to our school and see for yourself.Yours, Li Hua【解析】本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况，属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。2017高考题【2017天津卷】书面表达（满分25分）假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；（3）希望她有机会重访天津。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th National GamesDear Mrs. Green,Im glad to hear from you. _Yours,Li Jin【答案】略【考点定位】考查提纲作文【名师点睛】这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。根据要求确定要点，适当对要点进行发挥。关键在于词汇和句式的选用，尽量使用简洁准确的语言。【2017北京卷】你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim, Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim, Im happy receive your letter and know youre ing to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly remended. Personally, I prefer the your along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope youll have a good time in China.YoursLi Hua【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。表语从句的使用：Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.高级词汇的使用：highly remended。连接词的合理使用：Personally，moreover。【2017浙江卷6月考】应用文写作(满分15分)假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1. 参加者；2. 时间、地点；3. 活动：登山、野餐等。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Chris, How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7：00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you dont have spare time for this trip, it is fine. Its just up to you. Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Li Hua2016高考题1.【2016天津】书面表达（满分25分）假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。（1） 回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；（2） 谈谈收获或感情；（3） 表达祝愿语期望。注意：（1） 词数不少于100；（2） 可适当加入细节，是内容充实、行文连贯；（3） 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear friends,How time flies! Thank you.【答案】One possible version: Dear_friends,_How_time_flies! Two weeks went by before we realized that our exchange activities ended. On behalf of our school, I would like to express my feelings.As scheduled, we took part in several instructive activities. We have learnt many Chinese characters and often took exercise together. We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food. The food was extremely delicious and different from our food. While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists works.As far as Im concerned, everyone here is a member of our big family. And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip to your country. I hope well get together again next year. Thank_you. 【考点定位】考查提纲作文【名师点睛】这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。根据要求确定要点，适当对要点进行发挥。关键在于词汇和句式的选用，尽量使用简洁的语言。2.【2016北京】书面表达 第一节（15分） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 该人物是谁； 2. 该人物的主要贡献； 3. 该人物对你的影响。 注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _ _Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim, Its great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history. As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world. Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know. Cheers!Yours,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：题材新颖，要求介绍中国历史人物，内容包括喜欢的历史人物、他的贡献和对你的影响。不少于50词，使用一般现在时和一般过去时以及第一人称和第三人称进行写作。亮点说明：范文使用了词组hear from, As for, In fact和搭配 inspire sb to do sth等，丰富了作文内容；范文注意上下文的语意连贯。 考点：应用文写作【名师点睛】题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。2015年高考试题 书面表达之文字提纲式1.【2015新课标全国II】书面表达（满分25分）假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们国重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1. 出发及返回时间；2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 结语已为你写好。_ Looking forward to your reply.Yours Li Hua【参考答案】 Dear Lucy, Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon. If you are able to e with us, please let us know and well wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.Yours Li Hua【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明。Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引导的定语从句和句式spend time doing。此外，还有if从句以及一些短语如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。【考点定位】考查提纲作文。【名师点睛】本作文从实际生活出发，以英语的交际性和实用性为目标，兼顾尊老敬老和做志愿者的教育意义。体现了课程标准要求的以知识运用为教学目标的要求。在高三备考时，应该多从把语言作为交流的工具的角度去准备书面表达。2.【2015新课标全国I】第2节 书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：1. 栏目介绍；2. 稿件内容；3. 稿件长度：约400词；4. 交稿日期：6月28日前。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；3. 开头语已为你写好。【答案】Dear Peter,Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially wele articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.运用了过去分词作后置定语， And we would especially wele articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be popular among, so long as, look forward to , hear from等。【考点定位】考查提纲作文。【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。文中巧妙地使用了一些固定句式和过渡词语，不仅增强了表达效果，而且实现了形式与内容的统一。3.【2015北京】假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括： 1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间，地点，参加者等）； 2. 说明你打算参加的原因； 3. 询问对方的意向。 注意： 1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。 提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training CampDear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if youd like to go with me.This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and Ill send you more information.Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer. 【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了一些邀请信里常用的句型。如：Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday；I wonder if youd like to go with me.文中注意使用了一般将来时、一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握。【考点定位】应用文类书面表达【名师点睛】本题是一篇考的是邀请信，龙舟的一个艺术节，仍然是传统文化的主题。采分点主要是三个板块，第一个板块是相关细节的处理。因为在第一个要点当中写到，学生要自己设计时间、地点以及参赛人员，这使学生需要自行发挥得，编纂的时候要合理一些。第二个板块提到你的参加原因，原因必然是考官会关注的，为什么要参加龙州艺术界的活动。第三，他提到两个字，就是询问，希望学生在写作的时候尽量避开一些非常生硬的词汇。注意写邀请信常用句型：On behalf of, I am writing to invite you to take part in the；Id like to be involved indue to the fact that；I am looking forward to your reply/ arrival/ing/ attendance等考生在应用文写作中一定要体现出交际功能，重视该文体的写作结构，除称呼与落款必须写齐全外，正文部分一般开头应道明写作目的，中间呈现具体细节，结尾处补充礼貌性话语。另外，应用文的语言结构忌过于复杂，用词忌过难过偏，少用倒装从句嵌套等长难句。语言与用词做到适用应用场合，准确到位即可。只要做到以上几点，应用文部分即可拿到一个不错的分数。4.【2015广东】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）你接受了一项写作任务，为英语校报写一篇科技报道。写作内容请根据以下信息，介绍国外医疗行业出现的一项新技术。内容包括：技术名称：DNA检测检测方法：唾液样本分析检测费用：125英镑检测时长：4到6周检测用途： 1. 预测重大疾病2. 预知食物偏好3. 提示合适的锻炼方式检测影响： 1. 增强健康意识2. 易引起过度焦虑*唾液样本：saliva sample写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容；评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【答案】第一节DNA DetectionWe can use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses, predict whether people are particular about food and remind people to take proper exercise. People should pay 125 pounds for it. It takes four to six weeks to finish the report. After detection we can realize we should strengthen our bodies. It may cause too many worries.【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I will explain to them that studying hard is very important运用了宾语从句，以及Sally was a teacher.who taught some students full of problems.定语从句。副词Therefore的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。【考点定位】考查提纲作文。【名师点睛】本题所给用5个句子概括医疗新技术的材料是学生不太熟悉的内容，所以要尽量使用学生熟悉的句式来写，还必须用5个句子表达所有的信息。此题主要考查阅读概括能力及语言的组织的能力。需要用一些高级句式及词汇来增加文章的亮点。 5.【2015陕西】 书面表达（满分30分）假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。 Volunteers WantedOur annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at chenlaoshiaef.写作要点：1.表示写信意图；2.陈述应征目的；3.说明应征条件（性格、能力等）。写作要求： 1.邮件词数不少于100；2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear MS Chen , Im Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. _ Looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua【参考答案】Dear MS Chen , Im Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. Im writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer. I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, munication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public. As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good mand of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates. I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration. Looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I have such a good mand of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.运用了sothat句型，以及定语从句I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.。此外，文章还使用了大量短语，如apply for the position, as well as, in public, get along well with,have such a good mand of, lent a helping hand to, live up to等。插入语Besides，以及副词Successfully的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。【考点定位】考查提纲作文【名师点睛】这篇作文类似于读写类作文。首先要读懂招募启事，抓住重要信息。再结合提纲写作。内容贴近学生的生活，学生有话讲。也富有实用性。对学生的交际能力也会有所帮助。6.【2015四川】书面表达（共35分)假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意：1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；Hi Sharon,This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm_
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