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Module 1 Basketball写作园地-人物传记 感悟范文 刘翔，作为前奥运会110米跨栏冠军，世界纪录保持者，因伤退出北京奥运会，留下遗憾，尽管如此，刘翔克服重重压力复出，夺得2010年广州亚运会冠军。请根据下面的介绍写一篇短文。姓名：Liu Xiang生日：1983.7.13 出生地：上海 项目：the mens 110 meters hurdles辉煌战绩2004年，以12秒91的成绩夺得110米跨栏奥运会冠军，成为中国第一人。2006年，在the super grand prix meeting in Lausanne中以12秒88打破世界纪录。2010年，获得广州亚运会110米跨栏冠军。精神顽强拼搏，坚定信念注意：1.短文词数不少于120；2内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；3书写须清晰、工整。范文Liu Xiang, born on July 13,1983 in Shanghai, is a wellknown athlete in track and field in the world.Liu Xiang won the mens 110 meters hurdle final and got the gold medal in the Athens 2004 Olympic Games. Therefore, he became the first Chinese man to win an Olympic track and field title. He set a world record of 12.88 seconds in the mens 110 meters hurdles at a super grand prix meeting in Lausanne, Switzerland in 2006.Liu Xiang has returned as a king and got the champion of the Asian Games in 2010. He overcame the pressure as well as the pain of his injury. It is his determined spirit that helps him stand again. It takes great pains to have it. To do this, we must establish a firm faith in our actions and be ready to devote ourselves to them. Around us，there are quite a few people with this intense determination and spirit. Liu Xiang sets a good example for us to follow.技法讨论1体裁：本文是人物传记，属于记叙文体。主要写名人或伟人的生平事迹。因此要抓住人物的出生年月、主要事迹、给人们的启示等来写。2格式：句子时态在上下文中要有相关性、连续性，要与表达内容一致。就本文而言，要用一般过去时。用第三人称。3结构：首先介绍刘翔的生平，然后介绍刘翔的主要事迹，最后介绍刘翔带给我们的启示。黄金表达1出生在 be born in/on2成为中国第一人 bee the first Chinese man3创世界纪录 set a world record of4克服压力 overe the pressure5致力于，献身于 devote oneself to6为树立榜样 set a good example for亮点分析：1这篇参考范文要点齐全，语句通顺，行文连贯，各种句型使用恰当。适量运用了一些较为高级的词汇和较复杂句式，起到了锦上添花的效果。如使用了强调句型“It is his determined spirit that helps him stand again.”以及“To do this，we must establish a firm faith in our actions and be ready to devote ourselves to them.”等，这些句式的使用，使得文章语言多姿多彩，令人耳目一新。2亮点句式回放(1)Liu Xiang has returned as a king and got the champion of the Asian Games in 2010.(2)He overcame the pressure as well as the pain of his injury.(3)It is his determined spirit that helps him stand again.(4)To do this, we must establish a firm faith in our actions and be ready to devote ourselves to them.类文演练假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jason写信询问有关姚明的情况。请你根据在国内网站上所收集的有关信息给他写一封回信，谈谈有关姚明的情况：出生日期：1980.9.12出生地：上海身高：2.26米体重：134千克最喜欢的食品：肉最喜欢的颜色：蓝色座右铭(motto)：相信自己1997：进上海篮球队1998：入选国家队2000：入选亚洲全明星队(Asian Allstar basketball team)2002：加盟休斯敦火箭队(Houston Rockets)2011：宣布退役联想词汇1. 出生于_答案：be born in2. 据说 _答案：It is said that.3. 座右铭 _答案：motto4. 被选进 _答案：be selected into5. 退役 _答案：retirement连词成句1. Yao Ming, who is now 2.26 metres tall and 134 kg in weight，_on September 12,1980.姚明现在2.26米高，体重134公斤，1980年9月12日出生于上海。答案：was born in Shanghai2. _he likes meat best and that his favourite color is blue.据说他最喜欢肉，他最喜欢的颜色是蓝色。答案：It is said that3. Two years later he _a member of Asian Allstar basketball team.2年后他被选为亚州全明星篮球队成员。答案：was chosen as连句成章_One Possible Version：Hi，Jason，You asked me about Yao Ming. Here is something I got when I searched the website at home.Yao Ming，who is now 2.26 metres tall and 134 kg in weight, was born in Shanghai on September 12,1980. It is said that he likes meat best and that his favourite colour is blue. His motto is：One must believe in oneself.He joined Shanghai basketball team in 1997 and became a member of China national team in 1998. Two years later he was chosen as a member of Asian Allstar basketball team. In 2002, he was selected into the Houston Rockets in the NBA draft. In 2011, he announced his retirement from basketball. He is a top player both in China and all over the world.Yours，Li Hua
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