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Module 2 Highlights of My Senior Year写作园地-事物简介：理想的高中 感悟范文某报社正在举办征文活动，请你以我理想的高中生活为题写一篇短文，以便投稿。短文内容必须包括：1你的个人信息：姓名(李萍)、年龄、所在年级和班级、你最喜欢的科目、学校类型、你认为假期多长最为合理。2你最喜欢参加什么样的课外活动小组以及原因。3你理想的学校中最重要的是什么。为什么？注意：1.词数：100左右；2参考词汇：intellectual智力的。范文My Ideal Senior High School LifeMy name is Li Ping. Im seventeen and Im in Class One，Grade Two of senior high school. I like maths, physics, chemistry and English best. I prefer a large school to a small one. As far as Im concerned, the vacation should be about a month.I like petitive sports, so I think my ideal high school should have such afterschool clubs as Basketball Club, Debating Club, Running Club and so on. In this way I can not only build my body but also make many friends.In my view, a school should put importance on both the development of social skills and the development of intellectual skills as every student will make a living by themselves in the future.技法讨论本文为半开放作文，要求学生针对题目要求提出自己的观点。每一段围绕一个中心，切忌一段话写到底。对于此类作文，同学们要在用词准确的基础上，言之有物，条理清晰，能自圆其说。写此类作文时，通常使用一般现在时。常用句式1. My ideal senior high school is like this.2. It should be an individual school.3. We have a lot of free time to take part in outofclass activities.4. We can borrow books from the library.5. There should be many associations.6. Teachers and students get along well with each other.黄金表达1要点信息与相比更喜欢 prefer.to.就而言as far as sb./sth.is concerned等等and so on在我看来in my view/opinion把重点放在上 put importance on.2一句多译就我而言，假期应该是大约一个月。I think we should have a vacation of about a month.I think there should be a vacation about a month.In my opinion, the vacation should be about a month.As far as I am concerned, the vacation should be about a month.亮点分析：本文亮点颇多，能按照半开放性作文的要求提出观点，并论证观点，实为一篇佳作。正确运用复杂的结构prefer.to.，not only.but also.准确使用了本模块中所学的短语as far as Im concerned，达到了学以致用的目的。and so on, put importance on短语的使用体现了作者较高的写作水平和语言运用能力。类文演练学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”，内容要点包括：1以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点；2然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括：(1)对中学生活的感受；(2)理想的大学生活；(3)中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。联想词汇1. 适应，调节_答案：adjust to2. 过着忙碌的生活 _答案：live a busy life3. 首先，最重要的是 _答案：above all4. 习惯于 _答案：get used to5. 积极参加 _答案：take an active part in连词成句1. _ I dreamed was the exciting life in the college campus.我所梦想的是大学校园里令人兴奋的生活。答案：What2. But I must realize that the life in the high school is different from _ in the college.但是我必须要意识到高中的生活与大学的生活是不同的。答案：that3. I must get used to _things of my own.我必须习惯自己处理事情。答案：handling连句成章_One Possible Version：Preparing Myself for College LifeFrom what Mike said I know that though Mike didnt adjust to his life in the college at first, he has overe the various difficulties and got to enjoy the life in the college.In high school I lived a busy life all the day. I spent most of time studying. Then what I dreamed was the exciting life in the college campusmore good facilities, helpful instructors, and above all, more free time to do what I really like.But I must realize that the life in the high school is different from that in the college. In a new place, everything is strange to me. I must learn to study，learn to live on my own and learn to deal with the problems I meet with in the course of growing. I must get used to handling things of my own. For example, municate with my classmates and teachers, make a plan for my study, and take an active part in the campus activities.I think I can prepare myself for college life.
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