英语初三第二阶段写作训练.ppt

初三第二阶段写作训练,Travel(1),假如你是李雷，请阅读你美国网友Tom的E-mail，根据E-mail的内容，给他写一封回信。DearLiLiImgladtotellyouthatIlltakeatriptoChinathiswintervacation.CouldyoupleasetellmewhereIcango?Whataretheplacesofinterestthere,theactivitiesIcando,andthefoodIcanenjoy?Sorrytotroubleyou.Willyoupleasewritetomesoon?Yours，Tom注意:1字数不少于60。2.开头已给出DearTomImgladtoknowyouwillcometoChina.,DearTom,ImgladtoknowyouwillcometoChina.Talkingaboutmymotherland，theresjustsomuchtoappreciate.Amongalltheattractivecities，Shanghaimaybeoneofthebestchoicesforyou.,Shanghaiisaperfectmixtureofhistoricsceneriesandmodernskyscrapers.Forinstance，peopleinvariablyvisittheTownGodsTemple(城隍庙)whentheycometoShanghai.Notonlycanyoulearnaboutalotoftouchingstoriesthere，butalsoyouresupposedtotrythefamousdeliciousfood-ShanghaiSteamedDumplings.Bytheway，areyoucrazyaboutshopping?Shanghaiisreallyaparadiseforshopaholics.Itseasyforyoutogetinexpensivegoodsofbestquality.So,whatsyourdecision?Ijustcantwaitmeetingyouandyouarealwayswelcome.,Travel(2),Doyouhaveaplanforyournextvacation?Ifnot,whydontyoucometovisitBeijing?Beijingisacitywithalongcolorfulhistory,sotherearelotsofplacesofinterest.Forexample,theSummerPalace,theFragrantHillparkandthePalaceMuseum.Ifyouprefertogoboating,theSummerPalaceisagreatplacetochoose.TheFragrantHillparkisforpeoplewholikeclimbingmountains.Andifyouwanttogosomewhereeducational,itsnotabadideatogotothePalaceMuseum.,TravelingaroundBeijingbybusisthecheapestandthemostconvenientway.Thereareanydifferentkindsofbuses.Takingdifferentkindsofbuses,youcanenjoydifferentsights.Whentheeveningiscoming,howabouthavingsomeBeijingfood?BeijingDuckisoneofthemostdeliciousfoodinBeijing,however,itdoesntcostmuch,youstillcanhaveagoodtimeeatinginBeijing.Inaword,Beijingisnotonlyfamousforplacesofinterest,butalsoawfullythrilling.Oneeyewitnessisbetterthantenhearsays.CometovisitBeijingandenjoyyourself!,Volunteer(1),DearSir,IamLiMing,astudentfromClassFive,GradeNine.Iwanttojoinyourvolunteergroupthiswintervacation.IdliketovisittheoldpeopleshomeonSundaysandsingforthem.Iamalovingboywithaninterestinmusic,soitwouldmakeallofushappy.Goingtoananimalhospitalisalsoagoodchanceformetoputmylovetogooduse.Iwillspendseveralhoursworkingthereeveryweek.IbelieveIcannotonlyhelpothers,butalsodowhatIenjoybyvolunteering.Ifyouwouldlikemetohavethischance,pleasecallmeat5555-8765LiMing,Volunteer(I),DearSir,ImLiMing,astudentfromClassFive,GradeNine.Hearingthenews,IwasveryexcitedandIwasdeterminedtodosomevolunteerwork.Firstofall,Idliketohelpcleanupacitypark.IenjoydoingoutdoorworkandIthinkitsourdutytomakecontributiontothesociety.SoIlltrymybesttodoitwell.,AnotherthingthatIwanttodoisteachinginanafter-schoolcarecenter.IthinkmyEnglishisgoodandwhileIamdoingthat,Icannotonlyhelpchildrenwiththeirhomework,butimprovemyselfaswell.Volunteerisgreat.Itcangiveuslotsofexperiencesinbothsocialskillsandstudy.ThatwillalsohelpmetorealizemydreamwhenIwork.ThesearewhatIcandoandhowIthink.Ihopeyoucangivemethischance.,Volunteer(II),DearSir,ImLiMing,astudentfromClassFive,GradeNine.Ireallywanttobeavolunteer.IcanhelpintheChildrensHospital.There,IcanhelplookafterchildrenandsingtocheerthemupaswellbecauseIamgoodattakingcareofothersandsingingismyfavoritehobby,too.IbelieveIcanhelpthemstayawayfromsadness.,Ialsowanttovolunteerinananimalhospital.IamabletofeedanimalsandhelpthemcleanthemselvesbecauseIhaveapetdogandIhavelotsofknowledgeaboutanimals.Besidesbeinginterestedinanimals,thereasonwhyIcanvolunteerthereisIhaveenoughtimetowork.SoIpreferthisvolunteerwork.Inmyopinion,themoreIvolunteer,themoreknowledgeIwillget.Beingavolunteerwillnotonlyopenupmyeyes.Butalsomakemeahelpfulgirlinthefuture.,AsfortheChildrensHospital,everychildthereneedshelp.AndImhelpful,myhobbyisreading,soIcantellstoriestocheerthemupandletthemknow:whenyousmile,theworldsmilestoyou.OnemorethingIneedtomentionisthatIcandotheseworkonweekends.Inmyopinion,theseactivitiesaregreat,theycanhelpmekeepanactiveattitudetowardslife.,Volunteer(2),假如你是李雷。你想加入你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(HelpingHandsClub)”，请用英语写一封自荐信，写出你的“爱心”具体表现，并说明为什么要参加？你的想法是什么？（注意：开头和结尾已写出，不记入词数。请不要写出真实姓名和学校。）workhardat,helpothers，getonwith，oldpeople，because，,DearChairman,IamaboystudentfromClass1,Grade3.IdliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.Iamwell.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.Igetonwellwithmyclassmatesandoftenhelpthemwiththeirlessons.Onmywayhome,Ioftenhelpoldpeoplecrossthestreet.Onthebus,Ialwaysgivemyseatstowomenwithbabies.Sometimes,IpickuprubbishintheparkinordertoprotectourenvironmentbecauseIthinkImustdowhatIcandotosavetheearth.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.Besides,Icandomoreforothers.IllbegladifImreceived.Iamwaitingforyouranswer.,Volunteer(3）,现在，学校正在开展题为WhatIhavedoneformyclass的征文活动，请你投稿，谈谈你为班集体做了些什么，有什么感想或受到了哪些教育。注意：请不要写出真实校名和姓名。提示词语：love，class，do，forexample，think,WhatIhavedoneformyclass,Imamemberofourclass.IlovemyclassandIhavedonelotsofthingsforit.Firstofall,Iusuallycleanuptheclassroomcarefullyandkeepitclean.NotonlydoIfeelgoodwhenIcleanourclassroom,butalsoImakebothteachersandtheotherclassmateshappy.Next,Ihaveneverstoppedhelpingotherclassmates.ItsagoodwaytomakefriendsandithasalsoimprovedmyskillswhenIhelpotherswiththeirschoolwork.Meanwhile,Ihavehelpedteacherssolvesomedifficultquestions.Ithinktheyarealleducational.Themoreyouhavedoneforyourclass,themoreyouhavelearned.Itletsmeknowhelpingislearning.,WhatIhavedoneformyclass,Ilovemyclass,becauseitisnotonlyaplaceformetostudy,butalsomyhome.SoIhavedonemanythingsformyclass.Ilikehelpingothers.Forexample,Ialwayshelpmyclassmateswiththeirhomeworksothattheycanimprovetheirexamgrades.Thatmakesushappy.AndIoftenhelpmyclassmatestodothecleaningwork.Becauseofthis,ourclassroomiscleanandtidyeveryday.Doingthesethingsnotonlymakesushappy,butcreateacleanandcomfortableenvironmentforstudyaswell.Ithinkallofthismakesusunited.Unityisstrength.Withtheunity,wecandowellineverything.,Help(1),英语报正在举办“Wehelpourselvesbyhelpingothers”为主题的征文活动。请你通过自己的经历和感受，说明帮助别人也就是帮助自己。提示词：forexample,askfor,find,withoneshelp,realize,dogoodto,EveryoneneedshelpandIvelearnedalotfromit.Monthsago,myteacheraskedmetohelpMikewithhismath.AtfirstIfeltalittlenervous,becauseIwasnotthatgoodatmath.Sobeforehelpinghim,Iwentoverthetextbookagainandagain,anddidlotsofexercise.Tomysurprise,somedifficultproblemsIcouldntunderstandbeforewereworkedoutbymyself.Withmyhelp,Mikemadegreatprogressinmath,too.Afterthat,Irealizethathelpingothersalsodoesgoodtoourselves.,Help(2),妈妈，我爱你！,校报举行英语征文比赛，请根据图画和所给提示词,以“Sallysmiledagain”为题写一篇80个单词以上的英文短文参赛。要求语法正确、意思连贯，所提供的图示和英文提示词必须涉及并可适当发挥。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：inhospital,lookafter,misslessons,fail,help,encourage,join,game,三类文（有错误）,Lastweek,Sallysmotherwasillinhospital.Shehadtolookedafterher.Becauseshelookedafterhermotherinthehospital,shemissedalotoflessons.Sallyfailedtheexamandverysad.Shewascriedloudly.Whenherclassmatesknewshefailedtheexamstory,theyhelpedherwiththelessonsafterschool.Theyencouragedherandplayedgameswithher.Sallyjoinedthemandhadagoodtime.Sallywasveryhappy,shesmiledagain.(80w),二类文,Oneday,Sallysmotherwasbadlyillinhospital;shewasreallyworriedandhadtolookafterhermothereveryday.Shedidntcomebacktoschooluntilhermotherwaswellenoughtoleavethehospital.Aftershereturnedtoschool,shetookabigexam.Shemissedalotoflessons,soshefailedtheexamandwasverysad.Shecriedloudlyassoonasshesawthepaper.Whenherfriendsknewthis,theydecidedtohelpher.Theyencouragedherandhelpedherwiththelessons.Withthehelpofherfriends,Sallycaughtupwithothersagain,shewasveryhappy.Sallysmiledagain!Look,sheisplayinggameswithherfriendsnow!(120w),二类文,Oneday,Sallysmotherwasill.Sallywasveryworriedaboutherandhadtolookafterherinhospitaleveryday,soshemissedalotoflessons.Therewasabigexamandshefailed.Herclassmatessawhercryanddecidedtohelpher.Theyencouragedhertofacethedifficultiesandalsohelpedherwithherlessons.Sallywasmovedandtriedherbesttostudy.Shemadegoodprogressthenandcaughtupwithothers.Sheenjoyedplayinggameswithherclassmates.Sallysmiledagain.,一类文,Sallyusedtobeoutgoing.Butthatwasbeforehermotherwashospitalized.Lastmonth,shespentmostofhertimelookingafterhermotherinthehospital.Thedutifulgirldidntcomebacktoschooluntilhermotherwasrecovered.Asaresult,shemissedalotoflessonsandfailedtheexam.Shewassosadthatshecouldnthelpcrying.Whenherclassmatesknewthat,theydecidedtohelpher.Theynotonlyhelpedherwithherlessons,butalsoencouragedhertofacethedifficultiesbravely.Shewasreallymoved.Withthehelpofherfriends,Sallymadegreatprogressandsooncaughtupwithothers.ItsreallyfortunateforSallytobeinsuchagoodgroup.Look!Sallysmiledagain!(126w),文章提升亮点,1开头增加背景描述，为下文做好铺垫。例：Sallyusedtobeoutgoing.Butthatwasbeforehermotherwashospitalized.2多种句型及过渡语的使用，使故事描述层次清晰，此起彼伏。例:Shespentlookingafterhermotherinthehospital,asaresult,she3状语从句的灵活运用。例：Shewassosadthatshecouldnthelpcrying.4.细节描述部分使用关联词语，及丰富文章内容，又不显得冗长累赘。例：Theynotonlyhelpedherwithherlessons,butalsoencouragedhertofacethedifficultiesbravely.5.结尾部分评价句型的使用，起到议论点评并提升的作用。,