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7步成文第七步网上阅卷眼神倦，誊写切记“字要端”通过以上六步的逐步落实，细节完善，一篇美文已经形成，但若要保证完美还得整洁地誊写到卷面上，也就是提升书面表达的“颜值”。因为阅卷老师在有限的时间里必须快速高效地评卷，书写潦草的卷面会使长时间工作已经很疲劳的阅卷老师产生厌倦，留下不好的印象。因此字体工整、卷面整洁的文章更容易吸引眼球、先声夺人，并得到阅卷老师的认真对待，也更容易被发现亮点。卷面书写应符合英文书写习惯，字母的大小和字母之间的距离要匀称，无涂改、增补现象，切忌乱涂乱画。(为避免卷面涂鸦，建议考生在写作时一定要先写草稿，再修改，后誊写)一、不比不知道，一比吓一跳典例感悟(2018北京高考书面表达第一节)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：1表示欢迎；2.推荐他上哪所大学；3.建议他做哪些准备工作。注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim， Yours，Li Hua让阅卷老师厌倦的试卷类型典型示例评卷厌倦点1.出现了书信格式错误，开头格式就不对。2.书写潦草，有涂改、增补现象。3.有较多的单词拼写错误、词性应用错误、高级词汇使用错误。4.有较多的语法错误，根本不会使用高级句式。5.表达不地道，出现了大量的汉语式英语。6.语言基础不扎实，整篇文章找不到一个令人感觉良好的句子。让阅卷老师喜欢的试卷类型典型示例评卷兴奋点1.外在美书写规范，卷面整洁，给人赏心悦目之感。2.结构美段落层次合理，条理清晰。很好地利用了“三段式”作文法：第一段：表明写信的目的表示欢迎；第二段：具体说明推荐的学校及专业；第三段：希望对方梦想成真。3.词汇美选词准确，能灵活运用高级词汇，语言功底深厚。4.句式美句式多变，长短句结合，能灵活运用非谓语动词等高级句式。5.衔接美内容连贯，衔接自然，结构紧凑，能有效地使用句子间、段落间的衔接词和过渡语。二、不求写“凤舞”，但求写工整典例感悟假定你是李华，最近你校将举办“外国学生讲中国故事”的活动。请你给在中国留学的英国留学生Jack写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack，I hope everything is going on well with you. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua考前临摹增2分近年来高考英语写作的命题坚持的思想就是高起点低落点。题目起点很高，突出体现在一些书面表达的话题涉及中国优秀传统文化和社会主义核心价值观。但是最终要将这些中国文化、中国故事、中国礼仪等抽象概念体现在具体的考生生活实际中，体现在考生熟悉的生活中，这就是低落点。这种高起点低落点现象有利于考生充分发挥自己的写作水平，但对平时靠死记硬背、不注重生活积累的考生来说是一个巨大的挑战。我们在此创编8个热点话题，旨在让考生开阔视野，熟悉并掌握当前的一些热点命题素材。热点话题押题练(一)中国传统文化.作文升格题目假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy在当地的一所孔子学院(Confucius Institute)学习。你刚获悉她在学院举办的中文诗词(poetry)比赛中荣获一等奖。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件表示祝贺，并希望她有机会来中国深造。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。问题作文Dear Lucy，Im pleased to learn youve just won the first prize in the Chinese poetry petition held in your institute. Im writing to offer my congratulations to you. I know you love Chinese culture, and now youre studying in a local Confucius Institute. I hope you can have a chance to e to China for further study.Wish you greater progress in the study of Chinese poetry.Yours，Li Hua我来升格(词数扩充，词汇、句式升级)Dear_Lucy，Im_pleased_to_learn_youve_just_won_the_first_prize_in_the_Chinese_poetry_petition_held_in_your_institute._Im_writing_to_offer_my_sincere_congratulations_to_you._It_came_as_no_surprise_to_me_because_I_know_you_love_Chinese_culture,_especially_Chinese_poetry,_and_youve_been_studying_in_a_local_Confucius_Institute_for_years._Im_so_proud_to_see_all_your_efforts_have_paid_off._I_hope_you_can_have_a_chance_to_e_to_China_for_further_study_in_the_near_future_and_have_a_better_understanding_of_my_country.Wish_you_greater_progress_in_the_study_of_Chinese_poetry.Yours，Li_Hua.整篇训练假定你是李华。你的英国笔友David对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣。你校今年暑假将为外国学生举办一场汉语夏令营活动(Chinese Summer Camp)，请你给他发一封电子邮件告诉他该夏令营活动的相关信息，内容包括：1时间和地点；2内容：学习汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化等；3报名方式和截止时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考范文：Dear David，Here es good news. A Chinese Summer Camp, intended for foreign students, is to be held by our school this summer vacation. Since you show great interest in Chinese culture, Id like to invite you to join it.The summer camp is scheduled to last 13 days, from July 20th to August 1st, which covers a wide variety of cultural activities, ranging from studying Chinese to attending some lectures on Chinese history and Chinese traditional culture. Im convinced that you can dig out Chinese cultural features from the language study. By admiring the historical relics, you will definitely gain a better understanding of the country.If you want to take part, please sign up for it before July 10th on our school website. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua热点话题押题练(二)校园生活.作文升格题目假定你是李华，你校将于2019年5月16日在学校体育馆组织一次慈善义卖活动。请根据以下要点给你校外籍教师Mr. John写一封信，邀请他一起参加。1活动介绍(时间、地点、物品等)；2活动意义；3盼回复参与意向。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：义卖活动charity sale体育馆 stadium问题作文Dear Mr. John，How is everything going? Know that you are a warmhearted man and enthusiastic about charity activities, Im writing to invite you to take part in an charity sale.The activity will be held at the school stadium in May 16th, 2019, from 8：00 am to 12：00 am. There is varieties of item, such as books, earphones, puters, pens and so on.As far as Im concerned, it is an interested and meaningful activity. It can raise peoples charity awareness as well as develop the habit of helping people in the need. Whats more, this is also a rare opportunity to develop our ability design and organize activities.Please let me know if you will e or not as soon as possible. Im looking forward to hear from you.Yours，Li Hua我来升格(改正文中10处错误)答案：第二句：KnowKnowing; ana第三句：inon第四句：isare; itemitems第五句：interestedinteresting第六句：去掉第二个the第七句：ability后加to第八句：ifwhether第九句：hearhearing.整篇训练假定你是李华，正在负责策划你校的“绿色校园”(Green School)活动，请给你的美国笔友Henry写封邮件，向他介绍此次活动内容并征求他的建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考范文：Dear Henry，I have a favor to ask. We are to start a Green School campaign to inspire students to be environmentally conscious at school. Could you give us some advice on our current plan at your convenience?We plan to play a 30 minutes video first, which is about how to save water, paper, cans and electricity at school. Students will surely be impressed by the striking figures and helpful tips. Then our science teacher will give a live show in the lab on what actually happens to those recyclable materials during the recycling process. This will be really popular.What else can we do? Looking forward to your constructive suggestions.Yours，Li Hua热点话题押题练(三)环境保护.作文升格题目假定你是李华，你校即将举行主题为“Lets go green now”的英语演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，要点包括：1倡导绿色生活的原因；2实践途径(至少三点)。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。问题作文Boys and girls, I am very honored to give the speech. With the development of society and economy, the number of private cars is increasing surprisingly. As we all know, cars give off poisonous gas such as carbon dioxide, causing global warming, frequent natural disasters, human diseases and so on. In order to protect our environment, we should go green.Firstly, we should attach great importance to going green. Secondly, using fewer private cars can make a great difference to the environment. _， we should take full advantage of water, electricity, paper, food and so on. Last but not least, it is a good idea to classify our rubbish and recycle it in our daily life.Thats all. Thank you.我来升格1用“It is名词不定式”改写句It_is_a_great_honor_for_me_to_give_the_speech.2用介词短语替代处副词surprisinglyat_a_surprising_speed3用it作形式主语改写句It_is_well_known_that_cars_give_off_poisonous_gas_such_as_carbon_dioxide,_causing_global_warming,_frequent_natural_disasters,_human_diseases_and_so_on.4用句型it is high time that .改写句In_order_to_protect_our_environment,_it_is_high_time_that_we_went/should_go_green.5把句改为被动语态Firstly,_great_importance_should_be_attached_to_going_green.6在处加入过渡语Whats_more/In_addition等.整篇训练假如你是校学生会的李华。在地球日前夕，请你以“地球我们共同的家园”为话题，代表学生会向校报提供一份倡议书，倡议全校学生厉行节约、保护环境。内容包括：1节约与环保的关系；2举例说明中学生该如何厉行节约；3倡导发扬关于节约的优良传统以保护环境。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考范文：Dear students，Earth Day is ing. To build a beautiful home, we should save our natural resources and not destroy the environment. First of all, the habit of saving is very important because natural resources in our world may run out one day. Meanwhile, this habit can help us avoid producing waste, which will make our home the Earth more beautiful. As students, we should make our contributions. For example, we can recycle our textbooks or use both sides of our exercise books. In this way more wood would be saved. Whats more, we Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard waste as shameful, so lets make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment. Your cooperation would be much appreciated.The Students Union热点话题押题练(四)社会生活.作文升格题目假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的Mr. Brown的资助，可以重返校园。你给Mr. Brown写了一封信，内容如下：1收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；2在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励；3决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；4盼望见到Mr. Brown，希望他寄来一张照片。注意：1.书信应包括以上所有要点，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2词数100左右。问题作文Dear Mr. Brown，_ I could not return to school without your help. Thank you so much.I have been work hard since I went back to school. I have made a great progress in my studies under the help of my teachers. They often praise me and encourage me. But for your help, I might have left school and couldnt have got such good education. I made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress.How are you getting on with your life and work? I would like to meet you in person, but I have no opportunity to do so. Would you please to send me a photo of yourself?_Yours sincerely，Li Hua我来升格1在处补全点题句I_am_writing_to_express_my_deepest_gratitude_for_the_money_and_books_you_sent_me.2在处补全结尾句Thank_you_again_for_your_generous_help_and_best_wishes!3改正文中错误(1)时态错误：I could not returnI could not have returned; I made up my mindI have made up my mind(2)动词形式错误：I have been workI have been working; Would you please to sendWould you please send(3)冠词使用错误：去掉made_a_great_progress中的冠词a(4)介词使用错误：under the help ofwith the help of.整篇训练请以李明的名义给中国日报英文版写一封信，信的内容为呼吁人们(包括驾驶员和车上人员)在行车途中不要向窗外乱扔东西。要点如下：1陈述驾车时向外乱扔东西的不文明行为；2开车或坐车时向窗外乱扔东西的危害；3提出自己的建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Sir or Madam，Id like to talk about one kind of uncivilized behavior of people on the road. Yours，Li Ming参考范文：Dear Sir or Madam，Id like to talk about one kind of uncivilized behavior of people on the road. As we all know, with the development of economy, more and more people can afford to buy private cars. However, one phenomenon should really be paid attention to on the way of driving. That is throwing rubbish out of cars as they like.First of all, throwing rubbish out of cars will surely spoil a citys appearance which is supposed to be clean and tidy. Whats worse, it is very dangerous to throw rubbish out of cars when driving at a high speed, which may cause severe accidents or even death, as was reported in the news. Besides, it also adds to cleaners difficulty of collecting rubbish or even threatens their life when theyre collecting rubbish.All in all, this kind of phenomenon must be prevented. I strongly appeal to all the people to stop this kind of uncivilized behavior and the police should give proper punishment to those who violate it deliberately as well.Yours，Li Ming热点话题押题练(五)语言学习.作文升格题目假定你是李华。你的笔友Tom给你写信咨询“如何在班级创设浓厚的汉语学习氛围”。请你用英语给他写一封回信。内容包括：1宣传标语用英汉双语；2开设汉语角；3邀请汉语外教来学校上课。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。问题作文Dear Tom，How are you doing? Im glad to hear from you. From your letter, Ive learnt that youd like to know what to create a good atmosphere to learn Chinese. Its pleasure for me to give you some advices.First of all, to raise the awareness of Chinese learning, youd better to put up signs and slogans written both in Chinese or English. Besides, Im convincing that setting up a Chinese Corner as a platform for students to practise their spoken Chinese will be of great helpful. Last but not least, it is a good idea to invite a native Chinese teacher, whom has a good mand of Chinese, to giving you a lesson.I do hope my suggestions can be beneficial for you. Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua我来升格(改正文中10处错误)答案：第三句：whathow第四句：pleasure前加a; advicesadvice第五句：去掉better后的to; orand第六句：convincingconvinced; helpfulhelp第七句：whomwho; givinggive第八句：forto.整篇训练假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David是网络孔子学院(Confucius Institute Online)的注册学员，给你发来邮件说最近他对中国古诗产生了兴趣。请你给他回一封邮件。内容包括：1学古诗的意义；2.学古诗的方法；3.给予鼓励。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考范文：Dear David，Im glad to know that youre being interested in Chinese ancient poetry.As an important literary form, for a thousand years Chinese ancient poetry has been enjoying great popularity in China. Therefore, learning Chinese ancient poems can not only improve your language skills but also enhance your understanding of Chinese culture.To learn an ancient poem well, its necessary to know some background knowledge about it. Besides, read it as much as possible until you can recite it from memory and then you can have a better understanding of it.All things are difficult before they are easy. If you keep on learning Chinese ancient poems, youll perfectly understand their meaning and appreciate their beauty.Yours，Li Hua热点话题押题练(六)人际关系.作文升格题目假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter得知你家三世同堂，对这种生活方式很不理解。请你就此给他回复一封电子邮件。要点包括：1陪伴；2.照顾；3.其他。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。问题作文Dear Peter，I have received your letter, which say you cant understand why my grandparents live with us. Therefore, its a very mon phenomenon which three generations live under the same roof. The reason are as follows.Firstly, it is wellknown that old people often feel lonely, included my grandparents. They are willing to live with us about pany. More importantly, they need to looked after considering our poor health. We live together so that we can know everything about their mental and physically health. Last but not least, it is an tradition and virtue to respect and take good care of the old in China.Im wondering how you support your elders. Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua我来升格(改正文中10处错误)答案：第一句：saysays第二句：ThereforeHowever; whichthat第三句：reasonreasons第四句：includedincluding第五句：aboutfor第六句：to后加be; ourtheir第七句：physicallyphysical第八句：ana.整篇训练假定你是李华。你的好友，来自美国的交流生Tony在你市首届外国人中华才艺大赛(the First Expats Chinese Show petition)中未能进入决赛，情绪低落。请给他写封信表示安慰，要点如下：1表示理解；2.给予安慰和鼓励； 3愿意提供帮助。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考范文：Dear Tony，Im sorry to hear that you didnt get to the final of the First Expats Chinese Show petition. I quite understand how you feel now.I know that you did a lot to get fully prepared for the petition. However, the truth is that all the contestants are very petitive. Therefore, dont be depressed and keep a good state of mind. Failure is the mother of success. As long as you dont lose heart, youll succeed in time.Chinese culture is extensive and profound, so its not easy for foreigners to master it in a short time. If you have any difficulty, dont hesitate to ask me. Im willing to help you.Yours，Li Hua热点话题押题练(七)征文投稿.作文升格题目随着汽车的数量增加，道路安全问题变得越来越重要。假定你是李华，是校学生会主席，请你根据下面的写作要点，给校报的英语专栏写一篇英语稿件。1列举街道上常见的交通违规现象；2分析违反交通规则造成的后果；3发出几点倡议(至少两点)。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。问题作文Dear boys and girls，I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Students Union. Id like call your attention to the importance of obeying the traffic rules. Nowadays, with the number of vehicles is increasing on the road, traffic problems have bee part of our life. Some people run the red light at the crossing and other ride their bikes on the roadway. Some drivers drove too fast in the street. All the behavior present potential danger. If we dont obey the traffic rules, there might be more traffic jams and accident. To keep the traffic smoothly, I suggest all the students should obey the traffic rules when walk in the street to make sure we are safe and avoid trouble. Also, I think to lay stress on the traffic safety education is necessary. Lets take responsible for ourselves and others and take action now!Yours，Li Hua我来升格第一步：规避错误保基本上面文中共有10处错误，请改正。答案：第一句：去掉第一个the第二句：call前加to第三句：withas第四句：otherothers第五句：drovedrive第六句：presentpresents第七句：accidentaccidents第八句：smoothlysmooth; walkwalking第十句：responsibleresponsibility第二步：词句靓化上档次使用it作形式主语改写。Also,_I_think_it_is_necessary_to_lay_stress_on_the_traffic_safety_education.第三步：优化结构争满分请把上面习作进行合理分段。Dear_boys_and_girls，I_am_Li_Hua,_chairman_of_the_Students_Union._Id_like_to_call_your_attention_to_the_importance_of_obeying_the_traffic_rules.Nowadays,_as_the_number_of_vehicles_is_increasing_on_the_road,_traffic_problems_have_bee_part_of_our_life._Some_people_run_the_red_light_at_the_crossing_and_others_ride_their_bikes_on_the_roadway._Some_drivers_drive_too_fast_in_the_street._All_the_behavior_presents_potential_danger._If_we_dont_obey_the_traffic_rules,_there_might_be_more_traffic_jams_and_accidents.To_keep_the_traffic_smooth,_I_suggest_all_the_students_should_obey_the_traffic_rules_when_walking_in_the_street_to_make_sure_we_are_safe_and_avoid_trouble._Also,_I_think_it_is_necessary_to_lay_stress_on_the_traffic_safety_education.Lets_take_responsibility_for_ourselves_and_others_and_take_action_now!Yours，Li_Hua.整篇训练假定你是李华，某英文报社向即将毕业的高中生征稿，主题是“向成年出发”，请你根据下列要点用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿。1你的心情；2.你的人生规划(学业、事业等方面)。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考范文：It wont be long before I bee an adult, so I feel very excited as well as a bit nervous.First of all, Id like to express my sincere gratitude to my parents and teachers, without whom I couldnt have made such great progress in my life and study. Secondly, as an adult, I should learn to be independent. Also, its time for me to take it into consideration what I will take up in the future. I wish to study in a key university to bee a lawyer, using what I have learnt to serve our society.Adulthood means hope, challenge and responsibility, and Im sure I can do well in the future.热点话题押题练(八)表达看法.作文升格题目假定你是某中学的学生李华。请你用英语给出版社的编辑写封信，表达你对现在使用的英语材料的看法，内容主要包括：优点：1.话题广泛；2图片丰富；3有助于提高学习兴趣。建议：适当降低词汇难度。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。问题作文Dear Editor，As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks which are published by your publishing house.These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. Many beautiful and colorful pictures are along with the texts. They can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English turned out to be interested in the subject.However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Id like to suggest change them into easier ones.Best regards，Li Hua我来升格1处使用非谓语动词短语作定语published_by_yo
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