2019-2020年高考英语书面表达集训（一）.doc

2019-2020年高考英语书面表达集训（一）【高阶特练】第三部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）第二节 书面表达（满分25分） 按照题目要求或提示来完成下列表述。 【高端点拨】每年高考后，我们一直在思索：英语高考中书面表达考什么、怎么考、如何写等系列高难表述问题。但是，通过与考生交流，我们发现他们的书面表达的思维能力并非不活跃，只是在他们的记忆库中存储的相应表达方式不足，或记忆有误，或根本是空白。拿到作文题目后，不愁没内容可写，只愁没词可用，或是写了不知是否正确，因此在表达过程中，要么被迫放弃，要么按照汉语的结构硬译，以致造成短文词不达意，错误地传递信息，分数也受到影响。针对考生在书面表达方面出现的问题，下面将谈谈高考书面表达的复习建议和答题技巧。一、复习建议（一）明确写作能力的培养和提高是一个日积月累的过程。高考英语书面表达题是一项综合性的测试。要写好一篇短文，考生不仅要具备熟练的谴词、造句和谋篇能力，而且需要熟知不同的写作策略。如果从高三年级开始准备，则必须保证有科学、全面的训练计划和足量的写作实践，在这方面，笔者要求学生从认识句子成分，到谴词成句，到练习基本句式，再到语段语篇的这样一个过程。当然有些学生在这过程中也坚持写日记，然后笔者给他们都进行了详细批改。这样学生既听从了老师的安排和指导，也没有忽视自己的独立实践与总结。（二）注重平时的练笔。近几年考题的话题包括外国交换学生在华学习生活安排、少年健康问题、中学生业余生活、人们的生活变化、环境保护、中学生庆祝 xx年奥运会申办、举办成功等。对于这些话题，每个考生都不会感到无话可说，只要平时认真进行一些写作实践，就不难具备应付这类话题所必要的写作能力。（三）明确写作方向。从近几年的情况来看，试题并没有特定的语篇或文体要求。虽然短文会用到记叙、说明或议论等表达方式，但这毕竟只是一个区区几十字的文段，远不足被称为记叙文、议论文、说明文或某种特定文体的文章。例如： 书面表达材料要求根据一首诗的内容，描述其中的一位老师，这是单纯的记叙文;或者根据提示，写毕业赠言，其中首先要求表述好友在你心中的印象，并用一两个事例加以描述，然后表达祝愿，这其实也是记叙文;或者依据要求，让学生描述一位伟人，并说明自己喜欢他或她的原因，这还是记叙文。（四）注意平时的词汇积累。针对考生平时练习时出现的没词可用，写了不知是否正确等情况，建议考生们采用听、读、写相结合的办法，增加语言输入，扩大存储量。高三年级不可避免地要进行大量的听和读的练习，在做完听力和阅读理解后，可以停下来，用一点时间有意识地增加针对写作的语言输入，比如将听过或读过的表达方式回忆一下并记住，或者将有用的短语标出来，记在笔记本上，以备事后记忆之用。注意选取的资料应与考生自己的写作水平相近，还要提高记忆的准确性。二、解题技巧高考英语书面表达题解题应遵循五步骤的原则进行。xx年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试大纲英语中对写作这样要求：“要求考生根据提示进行书面表达，考生应能(1)准确使用语法和词汇。(2)使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。（一）仔细审题，确定要点。在开始写作这前一定要认真阅读题目中的所有信息(中文提示、图示、注意事项等)把需要表达的全部信息要点列成提纲，列要点时，如果提示是图表，要认真审图，从图中找出要表达的信息要点，如事件发生的背景，人物的衣着、表情、动作、位置、年龄、外貌、图中的英汉文字等，如果有参考词汇，一定要用上。（二）根据要点，遣词造句。近年来高考书面表达的要求不断提高，高分文章要有较多的词汇，较高级的词汇用法。比如表达丰富可以用rich,但如果你用abundant这个词就属于较高级的词汇。再比如“他强调小心驾驶的重要”这个句子 He emphasized the importance of careful driving.其中“强调”这个词如果你用 attach much importance to 效果更佳。（三）确定时态及人称，内容连贯，结构紧凑。高考书面表达评分标准明确规定，如人称错误要扣分，不同的文体一般都有基本时态。日记通常记叙发生过的事情，多用一般过去时。议论文多用一般现在时，通知等文体通常用一般将来时。每个句子写好之后，句与句之间要选择恰当的连接词。比如：(1)表示承接、递进用语，besides(并且)、whats more(并且)，moreover(而且)，firstly, secondly, finally(最后)，from now on (从此)，afterwards I after that(后来)，to make things worse/ whats worse(使事情更为糟糕的是)，the worst thing of all(最糟糕的是)。(2)表示转折关系用语。But, however, otherwise, though, despite, in spite of.(尽管)on the other hand(另一方面)，as(尽管)，all the same(尽管如此)。(3)表示因果关系用语。because/because of.for(因为)，owing to (由于)，thanks to (由于)，due to (由于)，so that (结果)。(4)归纳总结用语。to summarize(总而言之)，in short/in a word(简而言之)，on the whole(从总体看)，generally speaking(一般说来)，in my view(我的观点)，in conclusion(总之)。（四）句式丰富，避免重词。英语书面表达评分标准第五档(21-25分)要求，“应使用较复杂结构，这要求学生不仅会运用基本句型，也要有意识地使用复杂句型，这是文章的亮点。如何使用复杂结构，本人认为适当运用非谓语结构(分词短语、动名词或不定式短语)、适当运用各种从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)，这些都是有效的途径。比如：When he arrived in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail.(时间状语从句。一般)On arriving in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail. Having arrived in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail.(使用了介词+动名词和现在分词短语，分别作状语。高级) Hardly had he arrived in Beijing when he gave me an e-mail.(改变时态，句子结构。高级)I wont believe what he says.(一般)No matter what he says, I wont believe it.(让步状从句，高级)。（五）认真答写，卷面整洁。高考书面表达评分标准中对书写有较高要求。尤其是高考英语作文网上进行阅卷以来，如果书写较差，会影响到扫描质量，因此，考生在答卷时，一定要认真、清楚规范地书写，以保卷面整洁和美观，为争取高分作文做好铺垫。三、修正小误1、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点2、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多3 句子结构错误 双谓语现象句子结构混乱 4 动词使用错误 时态错误语态错误滥用be动词 5 汉语式英语 6. 不规则动词及常用词拼写错误 7. 名词单复数错误 8、词义模糊，用词不够准确9、行文清晰，句子与句子间缺乏衔接. 10、逻辑错误，如：because与so或者although与but等同时出现在同一个句子里。【考点精练】 Test 1你所在的学校将要举办一次主题为”What Can We Do for Our School?” 的英语演讲比赛，请写一篇英语演讲稿，要求从爱护学校设施和美化校园方面进行阐述，并举例加以说明。要求：1 词数：100左右； 2 参考词汇： 校园campus；设施facilities 3 信的开头和结尾已经写好，且不计入总词数。Hello, everyone!_Thanks for listening!Test 2假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记, 记述你和父母一起为爷爷过生日的过程。注意：1周记的开头已为你写好。2词数不少于100。Last Saturday was my grandfathers birthday. _ Test 3当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英文短文：1.看电影的好处2.读原著的好处3.我的看法及理由注意：1.词数100120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数）2.参考词汇：(the) original work 或(the) book in the original（原著）重要要求：1、注意书法，书法分4分；2、句式要求：文中要有一句话使用从句、倒装或者强调句；有一句话使用非谓语。每句话3分，共计6分，请考生在自己作文中的这两句话下面下划线，如果全文无下划线的句子，则以0分记入作文总分；3、作文内容分：15分。Film or book, which do you preferSome of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. _Test 4假定你是李华，正在一所美国学校学习英文。你对学校的周末音乐俱乐部 (Music Club at Weekend) 很感兴趣，决定申请加入。现给该俱乐部负责人写一封信，内容如下： 1表示有意加入； 2介绍音乐特长； 3说明性格优势； 4期待满意答复。 注意：1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结束语已写好，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam, Im Li Hua, a Chinese student taking the English courses at our school. _ Best wishes!Test 5请根据下面的漫画内容，结合生活实际，用英语写一篇短文描述漫画内容，分析这种社会现象产生的原因，并发表感想。注意：1. 文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 词数：100左右；3. 参考词汇：义务劳动voluntary labour; 观念outlook 精神文明：spiritual civilization 物质文明：material civilizationWe can see in the picture that Test 6下列图表反映的是某高中xx年与xx年学生健康状况调查的部分数据，请你用英语为某报写一份报告，反映你校三年间学生健康状况的变化情况，分析其中原因，并提出一些改进措施。注意事项：1. 报告必须包括图表中所有内容，但不要逐条罗列； 2. 词数120词左右。题目和开头第一句已给出，不计入总词数。HealthA recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years. Test 7目前,学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象,某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文,标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”.请根据下列提示用英语写一篇短文稿. 要点如下:主要原因：考试偏多,偏难; 不用功,懒惰; 取悦父母,老师; 个人看法：作弊不对,违反校规; 要诚实努力学习;.（其他看法）注意：1.包括所有要点,可适当发挥. 2.标题和开头已写好,不计入总词数 3.词数 100 左右Test 8假如你是李华，英国交换生Anna将来你校学习中文并住在你家（幸福路58号）, 请你应她的要求，根据下图介绍你家周边的情况，以便她初步了解在中国的生活。注意;1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节使行 文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已经给 出，不计 入总词数。Dear Anna,I am so happy to learn you are ing to study in our school and stay at my home._ I cant wait to see you in China. Yours Li Hua Test 9假如你是李华，是高三某班班长。为了丰富同学们的课外生活，班级准备成立一个自行车俱乐部(cycling club)。请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一则口头通知。通知如下：1.每周训练一次，由体育老师辅导，安排在每周三下午第三节的课外活动时间；2.注意事项：器材自备；活动免费。3. 到班长那里报名。注意：1. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯； 2. 词数100 左右。Test 10随着社会对“富二代”各方面负面新闻不断的报道。最近你校学生就“金钱是否能带来幸福” 这一话题进行了一场激烈的辩论，辩论的结果如下表所示：正方 反方1钱非常重要，生活离不开钱； 1金钱不是万能的；2钱可以帮助我们解决很多问题 2. 金钱买不到幸福和健康；3钱使我们的生活更舒适。 3过分在乎金钱就会失去人生的意义请根据以上素材为某英语报刊写一篇英语稿件，介绍这次辩论的内容，并谈谈我们应该如何看待金钱。注意：1.词数 100 左右 2.开头已给出，但不计入总词数； 3.不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，以行文连贯。Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness._ _ Test 11眼下，街谈巷议，人们的热门话题总离不开“三贵”：买房贵，上学贵，看病贵。请简要说明你所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象带来的后果以及你的观点。题目自拟。注意：1. 短文应连贯，完整。2. 词数：100-120词。Test 12请以 “The New Grading System in Our School”为题为你校英语报写一篇短文,说明这一举措以及你对学校实施这一举措的认识.要求: 1.词数 100字左右, 已给出部分不包括在内.生词: 评分体制grading system 参与participation（n.） tests notes homework class participation team workTest 13奥运会即将到来, 你班组织了一次活动, 查找街头拼写或翻译错误的英文标识, 请将此次活动情况写信告诉你的外国朋友Peter。注意: 1. 文章开头与结尾已为你写好。2. 词数不少与120。Test 14请针对父母不顾子女的兴趣强迫孩子参加课外补习班的这一普遍存在的问题，写一篇120-150词左右的英语短文，并发表自己的看法。Test 15目前，家长开车接送孩子上下学已成为一个普遍现象，人们对此做法褒贬不一。下面是就此现象所做的问卷调查结果。注意：1.文章的开头已经给出。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.词数：120-150【高阶特练】xx高考英语-书面表达集训（一）答案Test 1Hello, everyone!Its nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.The first thing we can do is to protect the facilities in our school. When we leave the classroom, we should never forget to turn off the light or close the door. We should not leave the tap water running or waste any materials in the laboratory class.The second thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful. Every one of us may plant a tree in the school or organize a thorough cleaning on the campus. And equally importantly, we should develop a good habit of not littering about.If everyone does his best for our school, I believe our school will soon take on a new look, and bee a better place to study and live in.Thanks for listening!Test 2Last Friday was my grandfathers birthday. To celebrate his birthday, we made many preparations. Early in the morning, my parents and I set off for the department store to find a gift for Grandpa. We chose very carefully, eventually a warm sweater caught our eye and was purchased.To show my love for my grandpa, I made a birthday cake with the help of my mother. In the evening, we got together to celebrate his birthday. With candles lit, we sang happy birthday out loud and clapped. After making a wish, he blew out the candles. The room was alive with the sound of cheering. Then we took a picture of the whole family to record the happy moment. When I saw tears of happiness in Grandpas eyes, I was filled with a feeling of acplishment and happiness.Test 3Film or book, which do you prefer?Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.Test 4Dear Sir/Madam, Im Li Hua, a Chinese student taking the English courses at our school. Im interested in Music Club at Weekend and Id like to join it. Im good at playing the piano. I have been playing the piano for more than 10 years and I once won the third place in a nation-wide piano playing petition. Also I can sing Chinese folk songs very well. As for my personalities, I think Im open-minded, friendly and easy-going, and above all, I really enjoy making friends with people from all around the world. I would be very happy if I can be admitted into the club! Looking forward to your reply! Best wishes!Yours,Li HuaTest 5We can see in the picture that one person is asking the other to do some voluntary labor, but the other feels it very funny, saying, “Arent you kidding me? Times have changed and doing voluntary labor is already out of date.”It is true that with the development of economy, many people have bee rich. However, with their wallets full, some people have changed their outlook on value, laying too much emphasis on nothing but money and personal interests. At one time, serving the people heart and soul was glorious, but now it is being constantly laughed at.In my opinion, spiritual civilization is as important as material civilization. Nowadays, the government advocates setting up a harmonious society. If everyone does a little bit for others and the society, our world will be a much better one.Test 6HealthA recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years. The number of short-sighted students has increased from 77% in xx to 93.5% in xx, while that of overweight students from 38% to 57.2%. Nearly 15% more students dont have enough sleep because of more homework. Besides, over 21% more students bee mentally unhealthy.It seems to me that the reasons for this lie in heavier burden of study and more homework, thus making students unable to spare any time to take exercise or have enough sleep. To improve students health, we call for less homework. Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and be more healthy. Proper diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they wont easily put on weight. With their heavy burdens removed, students can then keep in normal mental health.Test 7My Opinion on Cheating in ExaminationsIt is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.On the other hand, some of us are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. Whats more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.Test 8Dear Anna, I am so happy to learn you are ing to study in our school and stay at my home.My home is at No.58, Xingfu Road, just opposite a bank. A five-minute walk from my home along Xingfu Road westward will bring you to a crossroads, where Xingfu Road meets Youyi Street. On the southeast corner of the crossroads lies a shopping mall, where you can get everything you need. Walk north for about 300 meters, along Youyi Street, and youll see our school on the right. There we will spend most of the daytime. At the east end of Xingfu road stands the new railway station and its easy to reach, as a bus stop is just next to my home and No.26 or No.46 bus will directly take you there.I cant wait to see you in China. Yours Li HuaTest 9Attention, please, everyone. Ever since we entered Senior 3, weve burdened ourselves with a lot of work. To make ourselves enjoy a colorful life out of our daily study, weve decided to found a cycling club and organize some activities. We plan to offer basic training once a week, which will be instructed by our PE teacher. It will fall on the third period in the afternoon, when students are having after-class activities. It is desired that you take time to join our club, as it is a great way to keep fit and a good chance to relax ourselves. What needs to be specifically noted is that the activity is free of charge, but you should bring your bicycle along. Those who have interest can go to the monitor and sign up. Thats all. Thank you.Test 10Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness. Different students have different opinions. Some students think that money is so important that we couldnt survive without money. Besides, money can help us to solve many problems in life. In addition , it is money that allows us to live a fortable life. Others, however, have opposite opinion. They think money doesnt mean everything. For example, money cannot buy happiness or health. If we attach too much importance to money, we cannot find the real meaning of life, and nor can we find pleasure in life. Personally, we should not regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that helps us to get what we need. We should use it wisely and properly. Only in this way can we enjoy life to the fullest.Test 11Its Time to Reduce LoadsNowadays, we often hear people plain that it is expensive to buy houses, to pay for the childrens education and to see the doctor, which is really true. As is shown to people, some people are burdened with high expenses all their lives. Some people even get stuck in heavy debt even though they make their efforts to earn money and save every coin. Because of lack of money, some people have no room to live in. Some cant send their children to school. And some others even have to bear the pain of diseases.In my opinion, the government should build up a perfect system to meet the basic needs of living. The expenses on houses, tuition and medicine should be cut down so that everyone can enjoy a better life.Test 12The New Grading System in Our SchoolIn order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system. This shows how it works.The students final score will be made up of 5 parts. About 30% of it will e from their test results. The rest of the score is decided by the performances of the students in the following parts: 20% es from your notes, and another 20% is decided by how you do your homework. If you take an active part in classroom activities, you can get another 20% of the score. Teamwork in class is also important. If you want a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates.In my opinion, our school has made a good decision. This new grading system will certainly help to improve ourselves in all ways.Test 13Dear Peter,How are things going? We have been busy preparing for the ing Olympics recently, Last Sunday we had an activity to search for mistranslated or incorrectly spelt English on street signs. Early in the morning my classmates and I gathered at the school gate. With a camera, notebooks and bottles of water in our backpacks, we soon set out on our detective trip by bike. In the street, some of us took pictures while others took notes of the signs we thought were wrong or questionable. A busy, but delightful morning soon passed.In the English class next morning, we presented in class all the mistakes collected including “Wele to Beijing” and “Take Notice of Safe”. With the help of our English teacher we discussed and finally came up with the correct translation-“Wele to Beijing” and “Caution!”etc, Then we wrote to the newspaper and told the editors about our findings. We hope our effort will be of some help to the Beijing Olympics.Yours,Li HuaTest 14One day, my neibors little son seems to be extremely strong, as he can pull down a tree. But it seems that his mother is the stronger. It is she who is drawing the boy and in turn the boy is pulling the tree out as he holds the tree tightly.