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How to make your writing better,1,How to make your writing better,2,Free Talk,Look at the pictures carefully and answer my questions.,01,How many Chinese festivals did you see?,02,What are they?,03,When are they?,3,Lets match !,In September or October In January or February on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month on the 15th day of the first lunar month,The Spring Festival The Dragon Boat Festival The Lantern Festival The Mid-Autumn Festival,4,When we talk about a festival, What else can we write?,Before writing,5,zongzi,mooncakes,Things to eat,6,Things to do,7,The stories,8,The stories,9,I think its relaxing to admiring the moon.,Home is the warmest place,We can spend the holiday with friends,I can get lucky money and gifts then,I think its interesting to watch the races the most importing thing is to get together with families .,Why do you like it ?,10,Divide the parts,Beginning,Body,Ending,11,A writing,Beginning : name , date,Body : things to eat,activities, story,The Spring Festival, in January or February,dumplings zongzi share mooncakes with relatives admire the moon give best wishes This festival is in honor of Qu Yuan, one of the greatest Chinese poets. It celebrates the beginning of new year,Ending: feeling/ reason,Not only can I spend more time with my families, but I get much lucky money ,12,My favorite Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important Chinese festivals._. The Dragon Boat Festival is in honor of the poet QuYuan. It is said that _ . On that day, family members get together and have a big meal. After dinner, they enjoy the delicious fruits and zongzi, watching the exciting dragon boat races. The old always teach kids how to make zongzi and tell the story of QuYuan ._. I like the Dragon Boat Festival _.,D. he killed himself by jumping into Mi Luo river.,A. We all agree that it is the most touching story.,B . because not only can I spend time with my families but also I can know about Chinese culture -the symbol of China.,C. It is celebrated on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month,C,B,A,D,13,My favorite Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival.It is one of the most important Chinese festivals. It is celebrated on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month. It is said that “East or west, home is the best.” The Dragon Boat Festival is in honor of the poet QuYuan. On that day, family members get together and have a big meal. After dinner, they enjoy the delicious fruits and zongzi, watching the exciting dragon boat races. The old always teach kids how to make zongzi and tell the story of QuYuan We all agree that it is the most touching story. I like the Dragon Boat Festival because not only can I spend time with my families but also I can know about Chinese culture -the symbol of China.,Body,Ending,14,Make the sentences better,I study. I study hard. I study hard every day. I try my best to study hard every day. I try my best to study hard every day so that I can get good grades.,15,1. I like reading books. -I like reading books, such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers. 2. We should practice more. -As we all know, “Use it or lose it”. So we should practice more. 3. I often join in many activities. - I often join in many activities in order to communicate with other students better.,16,Improvement,How to make it perfect,Not only but also; Sothat; even if; In my opinion; as for me; As far as I know,1.Practice makes perfect. 2. East west ,home is the best. 3.Home is where the heart is.,1. Peole started the tradition of admiring the moon and sharing mooncakes with their families. 2.Behind all these things lies the true meaning of .,恰当使用连接词; 合理运用名言警句； 使用经典例句 高级词汇及句型； ,17,My favorite Chinese festival China has many traditional festivals every year. As for me, the Spring Festival is my favorite. It falls on the 1st day of the 1st lunar month. Before the festival, my family usually clean and decorate the house, buy new clothes and put up Spring Festival couplets. We are so busy. During the Festival, we have a lot of delicious food every day. Among them, I like the dumplings made by my mother best. At night, My grandma tells my little sister the story of monster nian, father and I play the firework, “As the new year begins , let us also start anew”.All of the people make promises for the coming new year. Whats more, I can get lucky money. It is the Chinese custom that the old will give children lucky money to wish a good luck. Thats why I like it most!,18,My favorite Chinese festival,写作话题： Festivals, holidays and celebrations (节假日活动),19,My favorite Chinese festival,Writing,主要人称：_ 主要时态：_,the present tense(一般现在时),The first person (第一人称),20,Appreciating & Evaluating 欣赏与评价,一 .请自我检查 二. 交换习作互相欣赏 用红笔划出对方的亮点,并对 不足的地方进行适当修改。 你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？ 根据worksheet上的评分标准，给同伴的习作打分。,After writing,21,我欣赏，我快乐 ! 分数_,After writing,注意：作文通用修改字符：优美句子；漏词；错处；去掉;注意有无语法错误 .人称错误 .时态错误 。,22,Summary,23,在西方节日当中，你最喜欢哪一个？请你从中选取你最喜爱的一个节日, 以”My favorite Western Festival”为题写一篇作文。 内容包括: 1.节日的名称和日期 2.人们怎么庆祝这个节日 要求： 1词数：80-100。不计入总词数。 2文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 There are many traditional festivals in western countries among the year_.,Homework,24,延时符,谢,谢,大,家,G,O,O,D,B,Y,E,25,
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