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,Writing,ShuitouNo.1MiddleSchool,ZhuRufang,TheHighSchoolEntranceExam(中考)iscoming!,goodwaystogetrelaxed,discuss,Isgoingouting(春游)agoodwaytorelaxforGrade9students?Why?,Ithinkits(not)goodforus.Because,1.getclosetonature;enjoythebeautifulnature,2.Openoureyesandincreaseourknowledge,3.begoodforourhealth,1.wastetime;affectourstudy,2.feeltired,3.Worryaboutoursafety,Recentlyclass4hadadiscussiononifgoingoutingisagoodwayforGrade9studentstogetrelaxed.70%ofthestudentsthinkitsagoodway.Theythinkitsagoodchancetogetclosetonatureandenjoythebeautifulnature.Goingoutingcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsofillthemwithmoreknowledge.Goingoutingisgoodfortheirhealth.30%ofthemdontliketheidea.Intheiropinion,goingoutingisawasteoftime,andithasabadeffectontheirstudy.Afterall,goingoutingwillalsomakeusfeeltired.Whatsworse,iftheygoouttoastrangeplace,noonecanbesureofthesafetyofeverystudentGoingoutingisofbenefitnotonlytoourhealthbutalsotoourstudy.However,itshouldbeorganizedwell.,Recentlyclass4hadadiscussiononifgoingoutingisagoodwayforGrade9studentstogetrelaxed.70%ofthestudentsthinkitsagoodway._theythinkitsagoodchancetogetclosetonatureandenjoythebeautifulnature._,goingoutingcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsofillthemwithmoreknowledge._,goingoutingisgoodfortheirhealth._,30%ofthemdontliketheidea.Intheiropinion,goingoutingisawasteoftime,andithasabadeffectontheirstudy.Afterall,goingoutingwillalsomakeusfeeltired.Whatsworse,iftheygoouttoastrangeplace,noonecanbesureofthesafetyofeverystudent_,goingoutingisofbenefitnotonlytoourhealthbutalsotoourstudy.However,itshouldbeorganizedwell.,inaword,besides,first,next,ontheotherhand,First,Next,Besides,Ontheotherhand,Inaword,Writingskill:使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章更为地道，更具“英语味”。,Sometimestodorelaxingthingscanmakeyoufeelbetter.,Tony,Gina,Tony,Gina,Tony,Gina,sothat,and,than,so,however,but,so,Thebetterlearningway,thebettergradeyoullget.,TonyandGinaaretwomiddleschoolstudents.Theybothworkhardbuttheyhavedifferentlearningways.Tonyoftentiredinclass.Hehardlylistenstotheteacher,hemisslotsofimportantpointsthattheteachermakes.Asaresult,Itstoodifficultforhimtofinishthehomeworkquickly.Sohehastostayuplateanddoesntgetenoughsleep.However,Ginalistenscarefulandtriestocatchwhattheteachersaysinclass.Becauseofthis,soshelearnsbetterthanTonyandshegoestobedearly.Inmyopinion,Ginalearnsbetterinclassandhasmorefreetimetoenjoyherself,soIpreferherlearningway.,改错,1.Tonyisoftentiredinclass./Tonyoftengets/feelstiredinclass.,2.hemisseslotsofimportantpoints,3.Ginalistenscarefully,4.Becauseofthis,shelearnsbetterthanTony.,Enjoybeautifulwordsandsentences.,hardly,stayuplate,but,asaresult,so,and,however,1pointsthattheteacher(定语从句),Writingskill:使用好词好句能使你的文章加分增加文采。,TonyandGinaaretwomiddleschoolstudents.Theybothworkhardbuttheyhavedifferentlearningways.Tonyisoftentiredinclass.Hehardlylistenstotheteacher,hemisseslotsofimportantpointsthattheteachermakes.Asaresult,Itstoodifficultforhimtofinishthehomeworkquickly.Sohehastostayuplateanddoesntgetenoughsleep.However,Ginalistenscarefullyandtriestocatchwhattheteachersaysinclass.Becauseofthis,shelearnsbetterthanTonyandshegoestobedearly.Inmyopinion,Ginalearnsbetterinclassandhasmorefreetimetoenjoyherself,soIpreferherlearningway.,Itstoodifficultforhimtofinishthehomeworkquickly,triestocatchwhatthe,teachersaysinclass,misseslotsofimportantpointsthattheteachermakes,Shelearnsbetterthan,Tony,Ourschoollivesarenearlyending.,Whatdoyouthinkofyourschoollife?,Whatareimportantthingsinyourschoollife?,Doyouhaveanydreamsnow?Whatarethey?,activities,writing,三年的初中学习生活即将结束，在装载你收获的行囊成长记录袋中应该增添一份你自己满意的答案,请以Myschoollife为题写一篇短文,记下你的校园生活，字数。,写作指导：Beforewriting：,(细读试题，认真审题),写作指导：Whilewriting：,3Afterwriting：,（）拟提纲，分好段落,（）连句成篇,检查全文,注意逻辑和文采,Dontgiveup,youllbesuccessful.,Homework:1.根据中考评分标准，四人一组互评作文并订正个自的错误及找出同组作文中好词、好句。（记录在作文本）2.再为你的作文另写一段开头和结尾.,Thankyou,附作文评分标准（供参考）：第五档（很好）：1315分表达清楚，行文连贯，复合句运用自如正确，有文采，用上全部关键词，语言得体，基本无误或错误很少。第四档（好）：1012分表达基本清楚，行文基本连贯，尚能运用复合句，语言有少量错误。第三档（还好）：79分只能运用简单句表达，语言有较多错误，但尚能答意。第二档（较差）：46分能写出几个要点，但语言错误较多，影响了意思表达。第一档（差）：03分白卷或文不对题，错误百出，不知所云。,Recentlyclass4hadadiscussiononifgoingoutingisagoodwayforGrade9studentstogetrelaxed.70%ofthestudentsthinkitsagoodway.Theythinkitsagoodchancetogetclosetonatureandenjoythebeautifulnature.Goingoutingcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsofillthemwithmoreknowledge.Goingoutingisgoodfortheirhealth.30%ofthemdontliketheidea.Intheiropinion,goingoutingisawasteoftime,andithasabadeffectontheirstudy.Afterall,goingoutingwillalsomakeusfeeltired.Whatsworse,iftheygoouttoastrangeplace,noonecanbesureofthesafetyofeverystudentGoingoutingisofbenefitnotonlytoourhealthbutalsotoourstudy.However,itshouldbeorganizedwell.,
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