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短文改错练习假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（）并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。A This morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo. At the noon we had a picnic on the grass. I eat too much, so I couldnt finish my sandwich. As I didnt know what to do with it, I asked my sister for advices. She pointed at the notice, that said, No litter. And she asked me throw the sandwich into the litter-basket. Just then I saw an elephant coming slow towards us. Suddenly an idea came into her mind. I could feed the elephant by my sandwich and I did so in the end. Seen this, my sister smiled and said, What clever you are!B Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him. That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.C Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don t like it, because online shopping is less reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers cant feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. In word, online shopping isnt reliable at all.D My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.EToday we has the honor of invite Professor Smith to give us an English lesson. All of us were deeply impressing by this unforgettable English lesson. The professor began the class in an amusing English story, which attracted our attentions at once. He spoke slowly and clearly so that we could follow him well. Great inspired, most of us took an active part in classroom activities. After class, many students being interviewed spoke highly of him. They said never before have they experienced such interesting a class. From his lesson, we came to conclusion that it is not so difficult to learn English whether we find a good way.F In England, nobody under 18 are allowed to drink in a bar. Mr. Thompson used to going to a bar near his house, or he never took his son, Tom, because he was too young. Then when Tom had his eighteen birthday, Mr. Thompson took him to his usual bar. After drinking at half an hour, Mr. Thompson said to his son, “Tom, I want to teach you an useful lesson. You must always be careful never drink too much.” “How do you know how youve had enough?” asked Tom. “Do you see those two lights at the end of the bar? When it seem to have become four, youve had enough and should go to home.” “But , Dad, I can see only one.” said Tom.GDear John, Im very pleasing to know you are coming to study in Beijing. It is really good idea to improve your Chinese before the new term began. And now let me to tell you something about the school. First, it is very conveniently for you to get there by Bus No. 16. Next, the classes are very small. There are 24 teaching hour a week. After class, you can enjoy sports and activities with other students. Stay with a Chinese family will provide you with a chance to practise your Chinese but know more about the Chinese family life. The time will suit you and only 200 yuan are paid per month. Ill get touch with them if you are interested in this school. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Li Hua HLast weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Dalian. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I search the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Dalian, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, we went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue. After the dinner, I packed the things the suitcase, what my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to show them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them safe journey.答案A 1. 第二句删掉第一个the 2. 第三句eat改为ate 3. 第四句advices改为advice 4. 第五句that改为which 5. 第六句throw前加to 6. 第七句slow改为slowly 7. 第八句her改为my 8. 第九句by改为with/on 9. 第十句Seen改为Seeing10. 第十句What改为HowB11. 第二句with改为on12. 第三句删掉so13. 第四句have改为has14. 第五句healthy改为health15. 第六句which改为what16. 第七句paid后加a17. 第八句her改为his18. 第十句step改为stepped19. 第十一句picture改为pictures20. 第十二句as many as中的many改为muchC21. increasing改为increasingly22. liked改为like23. And改为But24. merchant改为merchants25. 去掉to26. is改为are27. delivering改为delivered28. which改为what29. our改为their30. word前加aD31. visit改为visited32. but改为so/and33. go to anywhere. 删掉to34. comfortably改为comfortable35. I liked best were中的were改为was36. shared for中的for改为with37. taking改为taken38. dish改为dishes39. such后加a40. friend of me中的me改为mineE41. invite改为inviting42. impressing改为impressed43. class后的in改为with44. attentions改为attention45. Great改为Greatly46. being去掉47. before后的have改为had48. such改为so49. conclusion前加a50. whether改为ifF51. are改为is52. to后going改为go53. or改为and或者but54. eighteen改为eighteenth55. at改为for56. an改为a57. drink前加to58. know后how改为that或者when59. it改为they60. 去掉home前的toG61. pleasing改为pleased62. good前加a63. began改为begins64. 删掉to65. conveniently改为convenient66. hour改为hours67. Stay改为Staying68. but改为and69. are改为isH70. touch前加in71. their前加with72. search改为searched73. informations改为information74. we改为I75. had改为was76. the suitcase前加into77. what改为that/which78. show改为see79. happily改为happy80. safe前加a
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