基础写作-人物介绍.ppt

,基础写作：人物简介专题,人物简介,1).属于记叙文体裁2).基本类型：记人，叙事，写景3).常见高考书面表达题：介绍同学，朋友，老师，父母，名人等等4).记叙方法：顺叙，倒叙，插叙5).注意事项：选材代表性；精炼，感人，不拖泥带水；注意5W1H；人称时态。6).常见段落结构：主题句发展句结论句,一、人物简介的写作步骤：1Birthdayandbirthplace2Familybackground3Educationbackground4Bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)5Evaluation,二、人物简介写作常用的词组及句子：1.Birthdayandbirthplace:was/wereborninon她与1867年12月7日出生与波兰。eg.ShewasborninPolandonNov.7,1867.,2.Familybackgroundwas/werebornin/intoapoor/richfamilyhis/herfamilywassopoorthathis/herfatherwasverystrictwithhimthesonofapoorfamilywhenhewasasmallboy/youngasachild/asaboyof15duringhis/herchildhoodspendhischildhoodinliveahappy/hardlife,亚伯拉罕.林肯，一个贫穷家庭的孩子，与1809年2月12日出生与Kentucky。eg.AbrahamLincoln,thesonofapoorfamily,wasborninKentuckyonFebruary12,1809.查理.狄更斯出生贫穷，只受很少的教育。Bornofapoorclerksfamily,CharlesDickenshadlittleschooling.,3.Educationbackground,beadmittedtocollegegraduatefromdepartmentofuniversitywhenatcollege,hemajoredinreceiveadoctorsdegreegoabroadforfurtherstudies,4.Bigeventsinoneslife,beinterestedin/befondofworkhardatserveasdevotehislifetime/himselftoconcentratehimselftodoresearchabout/intomakeuponesmindtodosth.dosthwithgreatdeterminationandperseverancebestrictinsth.,haveawayofdoingsthtryonesbesttodosth.encouragesbtodofightfor,giveuponeslifeforsb/sthwinaprize/thefirstprizeincompetitionreceive/obtain/wintheNobelPrizeforbegoodatdowellinbecrazyaboutenjoy,makerapidprogressinsetanewworldrecordofequaltheworldrecordwin(won)agold/silver/bronzemedalbeselectedto/becomeamemberofstudyhardtrainhardgothroughhardshipovercomemanydifficultieshaveagift/talentforlanguage,etc,oneofthebest/mostimportantsetagoodexampleforamodelteacher/workerberespectedbyeveryonespeak/thinkhighlyofbehonoredas(anexcellentathlete)Hishardworkbroughthimgreatsuccess.HeistheprideofChina.Hisheroicstoryspreadalloverthecity.,5.Evaluation,makegreatcontributionstoConsistency/Perseveranceisthekeytosuccess.befamous/knownasberegardedasbecomeaworldchampionatChampionships（锦标赛）remembersbforeverAnewchapterofhistoryhasbeenturnedLeiFenghasbeenpraisedforhiscommunistspirit.aninspiringleader,5.Evaluation,6.描写人物外貌和性格特征,good-lookingfunny-lookingugly-lookingordinary-lookingwhite-hairedwarm-heartedkind-heartedabsent-mindedbad-temperednear-sightedfar-sightedastrongwilltallshortprettynaughtysmartwisebrightdiligentlazyhealthyhumorouscharming（迷人的）attractivetalkativeconfidenceindependentpatience,请根据表格中所提供的信息，写一篇介绍中国第一位航天英雄杨利伟的短文。,【实例剖析：】,【写作分析】通过认真审题，根据记叙文对写人的要求可以确定如下写作要点：文体：记叙文人称:根据内容可确定本文人称为第人称,要点：时态：,【实例剖析：】,短语及句型：bebornin,JointheChineseAirForcebesentintospaceShenzhouVspacecraftLandsafelyChinasnationalflagUnitedNationsflag,报纸32期基础写作,Yangliwei,borninLiaoningProvincein1965,becameapilotintheChineseAirForcein1987.After5yearsoftraining,hewassentintospaceat9amonOctober15thin2003byChinasShenzhouVspacecraft,whichorbitedtheearth14times.Afterabout21hoursinspace,helandedsafelythenextday.InspaceYangrecordedeverythinghesaw.HeshowedChinesenationalflagandtheUnitedNationsflagtothepeoplewatchingonTVathome.,32期报纸读写任务,Thispassagemainlytellsustheimportantroleparentsplaysintheirchildrenseducation.Parentsshouldalwaysencouragetheirchildrenandhelpthemlearnsomethingfromfailure.,Inmyopinion,parentscanplayaveryimportantrolenotonlyinchildrenslifebutalsointheireducation.Iftheparentsarestrict,theirchildrenwillsurelytaketheirstudymoreseriously.Ifachildisoftenencouragedbyhisparents,hewillcertainlybemoreconfident.Takemyselfasanexample,whenIwasinJunior1,IdidverybadlyinanEnglishexamandIfeltverysad.IthoughtIwasntabletolearnEnglishwell.Aftermymotherlearntaboutit,shetoldmetobepatient.ShesaidshebelievedIcoulddobetterifIworkedharderandwasmorecarefulthenexttime.HercomfortandencouragementwasofgreathelptomeandnowIdomuchbetteratEnglish.,Samplewritings,【基础写作实例剖析：】,你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文（只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容），介绍自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。,【实例剖析：】,【写作分析】通过认真审题，根据记叙文对写人的要求可以确定如下写作要点：文体：记叙文人称:根据内容可确定本文人称为第一人称,要点：李华的出生年月及地点；学历；所学主要课程；特长；获奖情况；业余爱好。,【实例剖析：】,短语及句型：bebornin,afterthat,begoodat/dowellin,graduate,themainsubjects,winfirstprize,enjoydoing,【Onepossibleversion:】,MynameisLiHua.IwasborninDalian,LiaoningProvinceinFebruary1977.Istartedschoolin1984whenIwassevenandIstudiedinGuangmingPrimarySchoolfrom1984to1990,afterthatIwenttoNo.6MiddleSchoolofDalianandgraduatedthissummer.ThemainsubjectsIstudiedatschoolincludedChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputer,inwhichEnglishandcomputeraremyfavourite,furthermore,lastyearIwonfirstprizeintheschoolcomputercompetition.WhenIamfree,Ienjoylisteningtopopularmusicandcollectingstamps,andmyfavoritesportsareswimminginsummerandskatinginwinter.,范例：请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章。,写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。,要点分析：,名人介绍，采用第三人称将提供的信息整合以一般过去时态为主。,Onepossibleversion:InMay1923,DrHuoYingdongwasbornfromapoorfamilyinHongKong.Attheageoften,hisfatherdied.After1955,hewasengagedinarchitecture,shipping,petroleumandbecameafamouspersonathomeandabroad.Sincethebeginningofthereformandopenpolicy,hehaddonatedover10billiondollarstosponsoreducation,culture,sports,andpublicwelfareinMainland.Hehasmadegreatcontributionstoconstructingandbenefitingourcountry,whichmakeshimaMovingChinahero.,2006年高考英语书面表达试题北京卷,国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简历。假设你是王姗，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简历。,Onepossibleversion:,ImWangShan,agirlofsixteen,presentlyattendingBeijingYangguangMiddle.Ilikemusic,especiallyclassicalmusicandImalsointerestedinphotographybecauseitallowsmetorecordthebeautifulmomentsinmylifeandthankstomyhobbies,Ivemademanyfriends.Infact,IlikemeetingnewpeopleandenjoytalkingwiththembecauseIbelieveweallneedhelpfromeachother,Iappreciatefriends”help,andIamwilingtohelpanyoneinneed.Ilovelife;IloveMotherNature,alsoIlovepeace,onthecontrary,Ihateanyformofviolence.IwouldliketojointhePeaceandFriendshipSummerCampsincetherewouldbeagreatopportunitytomakefriendswithyoungpeoplefromdifferentcountriesandlearnabouttheircultures.,假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现在正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信.内容应包括:1.个人情况：年龄、性别、学历2.个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况3.承诺：提供最佳服务,2006年全国各地高考英语书面表达试题全国卷（III）,DearSir/Madam.MynameisLiHua,IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames.Iamaboy/girlof17andIamstudyingathighschoolnowIamgoodatEnglishandIcantalkwithforeigntouristsinEnglishfreely.IbelieveIcandoagoodjobfortheGames:first,IlikesportsandIknowtheplaceverywell,second,Igetalongwithotherseasily,whichisespeciallyusefulforavolunteer,third,Imreadytogivehelpwheneveritisneeded.MypromiseistoofferthebestservicepossibletothepeopleattheGames.Pleaseconsidermyrequest,andImlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua,2006年全国各地高考英语书面表达试题湖南卷,请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。标题为：MyTeacherMrMooreTheresateacherMr.Moore.Whoislovelyandthirty-four.Alwaysencouragingustotry.Heleadsustoaworldof“why”.Wealladmirehimmoreandmore.注意：1.不得照抄短诗原文。2.必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开。3.必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯。4.短文不能写成诗歌形式。5.只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。,Onepossibleversion：,Ofallmyteachers,Mr.Mooreistheonewhoimpressesmemost,thoughheis34,helooksveryyoungforhisage,andhesoneofthemostpopularteachersinourschool.Comparedwithotherteachers,Mr.Moorepaysmoreattentiontohiswayofteaching,hetriesvariouswaystomakehisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Inhisopinion,weshouldnotonlyknow“what”,butalsounderstand“why”,so,insteadofgivingusanswersimmediately,heencouragesustothinkbyourselveswheneverheputsforwardquestions.Besides,withhishelp,wevelearnedhowtoanalyzeandsettleproblem,whatawonderfulworldof“why”heleadsusto!Heissuchalearnedpersonthatwealladmirehemverymuch.,爱因斯坦于1879年三月十四日生于德国。他小时候喜欢问很多问题。他喜欢数学和科学，但是他比较害羞，不太喜欢学校。17岁到瑞士学习。为了赚足够的钱，他当过教师，后来在政府部门工作。1905年他获得博士学位。19051915年，他开始研究工作，这些研究导致了他在物理方面的许多新发现。1918年，他已经世界闻名。1921年，他获得诺贝尔物理奖，并被邀请到许多国家作演讲。爱因斯坦是20世纪最伟大的科学家。他于1955年四月十八日逝世，终年76岁。,Samplewriting:EinsteinwasborninGermanyonMarch14th,1879.Whenhewasayoungboy,heusedtoaskalotofquestions.Hisfavouritesubjectsweremathsandscience,buthewasashypersonanddidnotenjoyschoolverymuch,whenhewas17,hewenttoSwitzerlandtostudy,inordertoearnenoughmoneytocontinuehisstudies,Einsteinworkedfirstasateacherandthenworkedinagovernmentoffice,in1905hereceivedadoctorsdegree.From1905-1915,hebeganhisresearchandstudies,whichledtohisdiscoveriesinphysics,andbythetimeof1981,Einsteinhadbeenknownacrosstheworld.HewasgiventheNobelPrizeforphysicsin1921andwasinvitedtomanycountriestogivelectures.Einsteinwasthe20thcenturysgreatestscientist,hediedonApril18th,1955,attheageof76.,【人物介绍】：刘翔,2004年8月28日是所有中国人难忘的日子，这天刘翔获得第28届奥运会110米栏冠军。请你给英语周报写一篇介绍刘翔的短文。内容要点如下：时间：2004年8月28日第28届奥运会成绩：110米栏冠军，击败欧、美、非名将；第一个冲过终点线，12秒91，平奥运会纪录背景：1983年7月13日出生于上海一个工人家庭成长历程：儿时被父母送入少体校，被孙海平教练发现品质：孝敬父母，每次回家带礼物；对邻居友善意义及未来打算：被称为民族英雄，为中国人和亚洲人争了光；今后更加努力，取得更大成就,