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高考英语写作指导之复杂结构和高级词汇,高考英语写作大纲要求：要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能：1.准确使用语法和词汇；2.使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。要求考生根据提示写一篇100词左右的英语作文。,根据文体划分：记叙文，说明文，议论文，应用文根据类型划分：图表式，提纲式，图画式，开放式,高考英语写作评判标准：1.内容：覆盖全部要点，进行合理想象，不得随意发挥；2.语言：使用简单语言清晰表达意思；并使用了较多的语法结构和词汇，使用复杂结构或高级词汇；3.结构：叙述连贯，逻辑合理。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑流畅。,高考英语写作解题要点：1.审题审要求，审文体，审人称，审时态；2.要点齐全，滴水不漏；3.好的开头，靓的结尾；4.使用复杂结构，高级词汇；5.用好过渡性词汇。,什么是复杂结构呢？如定语从句，状语从句，名词性从句，倒装句，强调句，感叹句，非谓语动词，插入语，with的复合结构，省略，独立主格结构等；什么是高级词汇呢?一般认为，不常用的词汇或者超纲词汇均可视为高级词汇。,1.Itissaid/reported/believedthat2.Itisthefirsttimethat3.,however.4.Itisnotlongbefore5.Itseems/looksasif6.NosoonerthanHardlywhen7.,常用的复杂结构句型：,1.Thepetdogissolovelythatalmosteverybodylikesher.2.Thepetdogissocutethatalmosteverybodylikesher.,比一比,A.Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.B.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.,C.Theregoesthebell.D.Thebellisringingnow.,高级词汇,复杂结构,复杂结构,升级之后：Weatherpermitting,Iwillcometomorrow.（独立主格结构）,复杂结构,原文：Whenheheardthebadnews，theyoungmancouldnthelpcrying.,升级之后：Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldnthelpcrying.（分词作状语）,原文：Iftheweatherpermits,Iwillcometomorrow.,复杂结构,升级1：Onlywhenwefinishedthewholeprojectcouldweleave.（倒装句）,原文：Whenwefinishedthewholeproject,wecouldleave.(when引导的时间状语从句),升级2：Itwasnotuntilwefinishedthewholeprojectthatwecouldleave.（强调句）,原文：MybrotherwasridingabikeandIsatatthebackofit.(and连接的并列句),升级后：Mybrotherwasridingwithmesittingontheseatback.（with的复合结构）,复杂结构,升级之后：Studentswhohavetheabilitytolearnbythemselveswilllearnwhattheyneedatanytime,whichcansavemoretimeforthemtolearnmore.（定语从句）,原文：Manystudentshavetheabilitytolearnbythemselves.Theycanlearnwhattheyneedatanytime.Itwillsavemoretimeforthemtolearnmore.,高级词汇,高级词汇：SuddenlyIcameupwithagoodidea.（用短语替代了普通单词）,原文：SuddenlyIhadagoodidea.,原文：Thequestionisreallydifficulttounderstand.,高级词汇：Thequestionisreallyconfusing.（用不常用词汇替代了常见表达）,原文：Everyoneshoulddohisorherbest.,高级词汇：Everyoneissupposedtodohisorherbest.（用不常用词组替代了常用单词）,高级词汇,原文：Hewassocleverthathecouldrepairtheradiohimself.,高级词汇：Hewassosmartthathecouldrepairtheradiohimself.（用不常用词汇替代常用词汇）,高级词汇：Takeamomenttoseewhatisgoingonaroundyou.（用短语替代常见单词）,原文：Takeamomenttoseewhatishappeningaroundyou.,练一练,1.我是一个高中生，今年18岁。,Iamahighschoolstudent.Iam18yearsold.(两个独立的简单句),Iamahighschoolstudent,whoam18yearsold.,Iamahighschoolstudentof18yearsold.,2.三亚是一个有着60万人口的城市。,Sanyaisacityandithasapopulationof600,000.,Sanyaisacitywhosepopulationis600,000.,Sanyaisacitywithapopulationof600,000.,定语从句,介短,定语从句,介短,练一练,3.我喜欢旅游。,Iliketravelling.,Ienjoytravelling.,Iamfoundoftravelling.,Itakegreatinterestintravelling.,4.我决定要努力学习。,Idecidetostudyhard.,Iamdeterminedtostudyhard.,Iamdeterminedtomakegreatefforttostudy.,课堂小结,化平常为神奇1.简单句连接成复杂句；复杂句精简成结构特殊的简单句；2.灵活多变地使用特殊句型；3.常见的普通单词换成较少使用的单词；4.灵活运用同义词、近义词和短语。,一.高级词汇,高级词汇：Itwillbealotoffun.,A.Itwillbeveryinteresting.,二，复杂结构状语从句,原文：Theenvironmentwillneverimproveuntileverybodytakescareofit.高级：原文：Shewasrobbedofherpursebutshehadnotimetocallforhelp.高级：,Notuntileverybodytakescareofitwilltheenvironmentimprove.,Shewasrobbedofherpursebeforeshecouldcallforhelp.,Notuntil,before,原文：Theboycomesfromapoorfamily.Theboydoesverywellinhisstudies.Theboyplanstoworkhiswaythroughcollege.升级之后：,Eventhoughhecomesfromapoorfamily,theboydoesverywellinhisstudies;furthermore,heplanstoworkhiswaythroughcollege.,Eventhough，furthermore,Iwontbelievewhathesays.,Nomatterwhathesays,Iwontbelieve.,Onceitisseen,itcanneverbeforgotten.,三.状从省略,Onceseen,itcanneverbeforgotten.,Whenhearrives，pleasegivemeane-mail.,四使用v-ing,Onarriving/hisarrival,pleasegivemeane-mail.,Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.,Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.,五.使用定语从句,Theshipdidntsinkwithallonboardbecausethereweretheeffortsofthecaptain.,六.使用虚拟语气,Butfortheeffortsofthecaptain,theshipwouldhavesunkwithallonboard.,Butfor,ThoughImweakIllmaketheeffort.,七。使用倒装句型,WeakasIam,Illmaketheeffort.,1.他是一个八岁的男孩,练一练,A.Heisaboyandheiseightyearsold(普通并列句),C.Heisaboyofeight,B.Heisaboy,whoiseight.,2.我们发现河水太脏无法钓鱼。,A.Wefoundthewaterwastoodirtyandwecouldnotcatchfishinit.（普通并列句）,B.Wefoundthewaterwassodirtythatwecouldnotcatchfishinit.（sothat句型）,C.Wefoundthewaterwassodirtythatwecouldhardlycatchfishinit.（hardly替代not）,1,2.那女子笑着说“此事很奇怪,A“Itisverystrange”thewomansaidandsmiled,C“Itisverystrange”saidthewoman,smiling,B“Itisverystrange”thewomansaid,withasmile,4.当他从车上摔下时，有人正经过。,A.SomeonewaspassingbywhenhefelloffB.Someonehappenedtobepassingbywhenhefelloffhisbike,6.许多老师给学生留过多的课外作业。,A.Manyteachersleavesomuchhomeworkafterclassthattroublethestudents,B.Manyteachersleavetoomuchhomeworkafterclasswhichtroublesthestudents,7.我将尽全力帮助你。,A.Illdomybesttohelpyou.B.IlldowhatIcantohelpyou.,台湾日月潭,8.大家都知道：台湾是中国的一部分,A.ItsknownthatTaiwanisapartofChina.B.Asweknow,TaiwanisapartofChinaC.Asisknowntous,TaiwanisapartofChina.,10.正如谚语与所说：熟能生巧,A.Asthesayinggoes,practicemakesperfectB.Withthesayinggoing,practicemakesperfect.,
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