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,Howtowriteagoodcomposition-Improvesentences,前置性补偿,Leadin,Whatdoesagoodcompositionconsistof?,Goodcomposition,前置性补偿,Leadin,Whatdoesagoodcompositionconsistof?,Goodcomposition,近年高考英语写作高分卷的五大特点,行文逻辑科学，条理性好；巧用过渡词汇，逻辑性强；巧用高级词汇和复杂句式，文章品味高；妙用变通式表达，文章错落有致；书写规范工整，整体效果好。,Howtowriteagoodcomposition-Improvesentences,火眼金睛,Whichoneisbetter?Why?,Shealwayssingswhiledoingherwork.Shealwayssingswhenshedoesherwork.,Aftereverythingwasfinished,theybegantochatwiththeelderlypeople.Witheverythingfinished,theybegantochatwiththeelderlypeople.,Ilostabook.Itscoverisred.Ilostabookwhosecoverisred.,（状从省略）,(with复合结构),定语从句,1.,2.,3.,(A),(B),(A),(A),(B),(B),Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.,IpassedtheEnglishexambecauseofyourhelp.IwouldhavepassedtheEnglishexambutforyourhelp.,(名词性从句),（虚拟语气）,4.,5.,(A),(A),(B),(B),6.,(A),(B),Thebusinessmenfromovertheworldwerepresentatthemeeting.Presentatthemeetingwerethebusinessmenfromovertheworld.,(倒装句),Whataregoodsentences：,高级词汇：所学词块和短语2.变换句式：三类从句（定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句）祈使句，倒装句，省略句，强调句，虚拟句及其他句式。3.非谓语动词,概括总结,1.通过使用网络与家人联系是很方便的。,ItisconvenienttokeepintouchwithyourfamilybyusingtheInternet.,2.我们所需要做的是冷静下来,反思我们的学习方法。,Whatweneedtodoistocalmdownandreflectourlearningmethod.,3.只有以这种方式，我们才能进步。,Onlyinthisway,canwemakeprogress.,熟能生巧,Translatethesentences,4.我们对自己的态度才是最关键的。,Itisourattitudetoourselvesthatmatters.,5.坐在一盘子粽子前，这个男孩不知道如何打开他们。（unwrap),Sittingbeforeaplateofzongzi,theboydidntknowhowtounwrapthem.,6.正如图中所示，爱就像黑暗中的一盏灯。,Asisshowninthepicture,loveislikealampinthedark.,7.我要去购物，大约五点才回来。,Iamgoingoutshopping,andwontbebackuntil5:00oclock.,8.他建议学校孩子要避免过度用眼，多做户外活动。,Hesuggeststhatschoolchildrenavoidoverusingtheireyesanddomoreoutdooractivities.,9.这一天如此美好，我们永远不会忘记,Itwassuchabeautifuldaythatwewouldrememberitforever.,（2011江苏）,1.意识到妈妈工作了一天一定很累时，小女孩帮妈妈卸下了肩上的包。,Realizinghermommustbeverytiredafteradayswork,thegirlhelpstoremovethebagfromhershoulder.,2.这一切使我想起了我的妈妈。她做了她力所能及的一切来满足我。,Allthisremindsmeofmymotherwhohasbeendoingwhatevershecouldtoletmehavethebest.,Fillintheblanks,走近高考范文,走近高考范文,Fillintheblanks,（2009山东）,1._(众所周知）thatChinaisacountrywithalonghistory.2._(随着春节的临近），peoplewillholdallvarietiesofactivities.3._(自从我见过史密斯先生已经好久了）andImisshimalot.,Itiswellknown,WiththeSpringFestivaldrawingnear,IthasbeenalongtimesinceIsawMr.Smith,Competition,VS,2分,4分,5分,6分,3分,7分,2分题,用it做形式宾语：我们发现提高作文并不难，只要你掌握王老师教给我们的词汇和句型。,Wewillfinditnotdifficulttoimproveourcomposition,ifwemasterthevocabularyandsentencepatterns.,用倒装句和定语从句翻译句子(2)出席这次会议的是王教授，他将做一个可再生资源的讲座。_,PresentatthemeetingisMr.Wang,whowillgiveusareportabouttherenewableresoures,4分题,他花5块钱买了那本书。,Hepaid_.(1)Hespent_.(1)Hebought_.(1)Thebook_.(1)Hewas_.(1),5yuanforthatbook,一句多译,5yuanonthatbook,thatbookwith5yuan,costhim5yuan,charged5yuanforthatbook.,5分题,6分题,with结构1.有这么多衣服要洗，今天我不能和你去看电影了。,_,Icantgotothecinemawithyou.,Withsomanyclothestowash,_,wewenthomebytaxi.,2.这件事情一解决我们就打的回家了。,Withthemattersettled,Withtheproblemsolved,Giveusabigsmile,3分题,7分题,用强调句型翻译今天下午钟老师在我们班上一堂公开课。陈述句：_强调宾语_2.强调地点状语_3.强调谓语怎么办？_,Mr.Zhongaredeliveringapubliclessoninourclassthisafternoon.,ItisapubliclessonthatMr.Zhongaredeliveringinourclassthisafternoon.,ItisinourclassthatMr.Zhongaredeliveringapubliclessonthisafternoon.,根据时态变化用did、do、does。,一锤定音,10分题,请根据下面四幅图画内容，写一篇短文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。注意：1.词数150左右。2.参考词汇：吊销驾照revokeadrivinglicense,小试牛刀,Myuncleexperiencedabadaccidentyesterday.myuncleandhisfriendshadgreatdinnertogetherlastnight.Myuncledidntdrivebackhomeuntillateatnight.Hewasobviouslydrunk,buthedidntadmititandinsistedondrivinghomehimself.Myunclesoonfoundhecouldntcontrolhiscarandhecouldnotseetheroadclearly.Thenhelosesenseofdangerandhedroveintoatreealongtheroadandgotseriouslyinjured.Luckilyenough,Unclewassenttothenearesthospitalquickly.Hewokeonthehospitalbed,andfoundapolicemanwaswaitingforhim.Hetoldmyunclethathisdrivinglicensewouldberevoked.Thedangerousdrivingafterdrinkingalmostkilledhim!Ihopepublicshouldobeythetrafficrules.,Suggestedanswer,improvedanswer,Myuncleexperiencedabadaccidentyesterday.Itallbeganlastnightwhenmyuncleandhisfriendshadgreatdinnertogether.Itwasnotuntillateatnightthatmyunclestartedtodrivebackhome.ItisobviousthatHewasdrunk,butbynomeanswould(意愿)headmititandinsistedondrivinghomehimself.Myunclewassodrunkthathesoonfoundthecaroutofhiscontrolandhewasnotcapableofseeingtheroadclearly.Whatwasworse,alcoholmadehimlosesenseofdanger.Asaresult,hiscarknockedintoatreealongtheroad,seriouslydamaged.,When引导的定语从句强调句和notuntil句型相结合。Itisobviousthat否定词在句首倒装Sothat结果状语从句Outofcontrol作宾补Becapableof过渡词whatwasworseAsaresultKnockinto分词作状语,Luckilyenough,Unclewasrushedtothenearesthospital.Hecamebacktolifeonthehospitalbed,onlytofindapolicemanwaitingforhim.Theofficertoldhimthathisdrivinglicensewouldberevoked.Thedangerousdrivingafterdrinkingalmostcosthimhislife!publicawarenessaresupposedtoberaisedtoobeythetrafficrules.Onlyinthiswaycanweleadabetterlifewithnoregretremaining.,BerushedtospComebacktolifeOnlytodo表出乎意料的结果状语/分词作定语Costsb.sthBesupposedtodoRaiseonesawarenessofOnly放句首倒装LeadabetterlifeWith复合结构,Improvethecompositionofthemidterm-examination!,Homework,Seeyou,
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