浙江专用2017届高考英语二轮复习第四部分写作训练专题一应用文写

专题一 应用文写作Writing 1你校英语社团将要排演英语话剧The Sound of Music，需要一些演员。请你根据以下提示，向国际部的学生发出口头通知，内容包括：报名时间：本周五之前报名地点：教学楼221室报名条件：1.英语口语流利；2喜爱话剧表演；3乐于与他人合作。注意：1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Good morning，everyone.May I have your attention，please？_Thanks for your attention.【写作指导】本篇应用文写作是一篇口头通知。口头通知的时态要用一般现在时，人称需根据内容灵活运用。内容要点包括：1.社团的英语话剧需要一些演员；2.时间：本周五以前；3.地点：教学楼221室；4.报名条件：英语口语流利；喜爱话剧表演；乐于与他人合作。可以适当增添细节，以使行文流畅。可以调整内容要点的顺序，但是不能逐字逐句翻译内容要点，还要注意不能遗漏内容要点。推荐用语：an announcement from，be willing to，work with，look for，join in，sign up【参考范文】Good morning，everyone.May I have your attention，please？Here is an announcement from English Club.We need some actors and actresses for the English play The Sound of Music. If you love acting and are willing to work with others，you are the right person we are looking for. Of course，fluency in spoken English is required.Cant wait to join in it？Just come to Room 221 of the teaching building by this Friday and sign up!Thanks for your attention.Writing 2假如你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，你校校园网需要招收英文网络编辑(Web editor)，请你根据以下提示，用英语向外籍主编Chris申请这一职位。1关心时事，对新闻工作感兴趣；2有做校刊记者的工作经历；3擅长英语，曾获校英语写作大赛一等奖。注意：1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Chris，_Yours sincerely，Li Hua【写作指导】本篇应用文写作是一篇申请函。写作前，考生要仔细审题，认真审读试题所提供的中文提示。写作要求中提示了写作要点，易于考生把握。考生写作时要注意紧扣这三方面的写作要点，即关心时事，对新闻工作感兴趣；有过校刊记者的经历；擅长英语等。确定写作要点后，考生便可开始写作，注意文章用第一人称，时态要用现在时。另外，考生要注意文章的层次，使其结构清晰；恰当地使用过渡词以使行文连贯。考生在写申请函时还需注意语气要委婉。推荐用语：Im writing to apply to be.，care a lot about，take great interest in，be good at，due to，get the first prize，in addition等。【参考范文】Dear Chris，Im writing to apply to be a Web editor，which I saw advertised on our school website.I would like to work for you because I care a lot about current affairs and take great interest in journalism.I think I can do the job well due to my language skills.Im good at English.Once I got the first prize in the English Writing Competition in our school.In addition，I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year，which will surely help me do the job better.I look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely，Li HuaWriting 3作为班长，请你根据以下内容给新任外教Mr.Smith写一封信，向他表示欢迎并转达同学们对英语课的希望：1介绍西方文化；2组织多样活动；3关注学生发音。注意：1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mr.Smith，_Yours，Chris【写作指导】本篇应用文写作是一封书信。写作时，要紧扣书信结构，结合内容要点，形成开篇、主体和结尾三部分。考生可适当增加细节，做到内容充实，结构完整。时态方面以现在时为主。人称方面以第一人称为主。遣词造句方面，考生应注意合理使用连接词，如first，besides，moreover，last but not(the)least等，以及情态动词和较高级词汇句式，如could，would like，we would appreciate it if you could.等体现诚恳、委婉语气的表达，以提高作文的逻辑性和档次。【参考范文】Dear Mr.Smith，Im writing on behalf of my class to extend our warm welcome to you.Here are some of our expectations for your English class.First，wed like to have topics in class about Western culture.We are all very interested in knowing more about culture behind the language. Besides，wed appreciate various activities to get everyone involved in speaking English. Last but not least，please give us some guidance and training in our pronunciation，because we all hope to speak English fluently and clearly just as you native speakers do.Thank you very much.Looking forward to meeting you!Yours，ChrisWriting 4请你给外教Jeff写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1告诉他你在学校演讲比赛中获得了第一名；2感谢他在口语及演讲技巧上给予的帮助。注意：1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jeff，_Yours，Li Hua【写作指导】本篇应用文写作是一封电子邮件。内容要点：1.告诉Jeff你在学校演讲比赛中获得了第一名；2.感谢他在口语技巧上给予的帮助。考生可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。内容比较简单，注意表达要顺畅，尽量使用一些高级结构，给文章添彩，比如：宾语从句、介词短语、现在分词、不定式短语等。推荐用语：take the first place，thank you so much for，advice on how to do，with your great help等。【参考范文】Dear Jeff，I cant wait to tell you that I took the first place in the Speech Contest.I know that without your help，I could have gone nowhere.Thank you so much for helping me with my pronunciation and offering me the advice on how to make the speech impressive.With your great help，I faced the challenge confidently.I really appreciate what youve done for me.Thank you very much!Yours，Li HuaWriting 5假定你是李华，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教(tutor)的广告，欢迎中国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括：1.自我介绍(包括中英文能力)；2参加意图(帮助别人学习中文和介绍中国文化)；3希望获准。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam，_Yours sincerely，Li Hua【写作指导】本篇应用文写作属于提纲类作文，其文体优势在于要点明确，内容贴近生活，这样能保证绝大多数考生有话可说。不过此类文章的写作难点在于考生要注意理顺要点，适当增加细节，使用恰当的过渡词句，以使文章语句逻辑连贯、条理清楚；同时还要注意仔细斟酌，认真选词，尽量使用一些较高级的短语、固定句式来确切地表达意思，避免汉语式的表达。【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam，Im Li Hua，a senior middle school student from the Peoples Republic of China.I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet，employing Chinese students as parttime tutor of the Chinese language.I am interested in it and Id like to take part in it.Chinese is my native tongue and Im excellent at it.Besides，I have a good command of spoken and written English.Im willing to help foreigners learn Chinese and introduce Chinese culture to them as well.I hope I will be accepted and Im looking forward to your reply!Yours sincerely，Li HuaWriting 6假如你是李华，有一个好朋友叫王刚，进入高三后，他的学习压力越来越大，常常熬夜，而白天却打不起精神听课，学习成绩每况愈下，为此他很痛苦，写信求助于你。请你写一封信给他，提出一些自我调整的建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Wang Gang，_Yours truly，Li Hua【写作指导】本篇书面表达是一篇书信体应用文。话题熟悉，贴近考生生活，容易下笔。书信的格式已经给出，无需考虑。首先，在构思过程中，要仔细审题，明确立意和要求。其次，在写作过程中，要对所给信息进行分析，做到层次清晰，逻辑性强，有针对性和说服力。切忌大而空，摆花架子。时态要以现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主，第一人称穿插使用。最后，在语言上，要使用亮彩的语言和经典句型来提升文章档次。当然，通过使用一些恰当的过渡性副词或连词能够使行文连贯，给人印象深刻。【参考范文】Dear Wang Gang，How are you getting along with your study recently？Here are some advice，hoping they are helpful for you.Firstly，you should follow your teachers advice，as its the first time for us to go through the College Entrance Examination while our teachers have so much experience.Secondly，you are advised to have a good sleep because a lack of sleep may make you have a hard time catching up in your studies.Thirdly，its necessary for you to make full use of daytime.In a word，relax yourself and believe in yourself，I do believe you can be successful!Yours truly，Li HuaWriting 7假如你是星光中学的学生李华，将参加主题为“My Chinese Dream”的英语演讲比赛，请撰写一篇演讲稿，主要内容包括： 1介绍自己的梦想：成为一名山村教师，帮助山村孩子；2解释拥有这个梦想的原因：山区偏僻，教育落后；3遇到的阻碍：父母和朋友都反对；4我会注意：1.词数80左右；2开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Good morning，everyone!_Thank you!【写作指导】本文是一篇提纲类应用作文，内容是要求考生以“My Chinese Dream”为主题写一篇演讲稿。写作内容主要包括：一是介绍自己的中国梦；二是解释拥有这个梦想的原因；三是要实现这个梦想的障碍；四是表明自己的愿望和决心。本文的话题符合时代需求，具有一定的现实意义。考生在审题时主要应考虑以下几个方面：动词的时态和语态、主谓一致和写作要点。这篇文章应以一般现在时和第一人称为主。在写作过程中，考生思路要清晰，语句通顺，可适当增添细节以使文章更流畅，可以运用一些复杂句型，如定语从句、名词性从句和状语从句等，还可以运用一些高级词汇和非谓语动词结构，这样有助于提高文章的得分档次。【参考范文】Good morning，everyone!Im Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “My Chinese Dream”As we know，the education of rural areas falls behind other areas.And the children there are longing for knowledge.Therefore，the problem of lacking teachers is especially serious.However，my parents and friends object to my idea of being a rural teacher.They think Im foolish.I understand their thoughts and feelings，but I think rural children need me greatly.I will study hard to realize my dream.I wont regret my choice.I will struggle for my dream.Come on and join me!Thank you!8