高考英语二轮复习 考点题组训练 专题11 短文改错1

专题11 短文改错 (2016新课标)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(第11处起)不计分。My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady.My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to I live.Though not very big， the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is .Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables high quality oil are for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in short period of time.Instead，he hopes that business will grow .1宾语从句中缺少地点状语，故用where引导。2though不和but连用，因though位于句首，故去掉but。3文章是介绍现在的情况，故用一般现在时。4此处是指“诚实”是他成功的秘诀，用名词形式。5从句意判断前后是并列关系，故把or改为and。6此处表示被动含义，be used for“被用来做”。7dream of doing sth.“梦想做某事”，为固定短语。8in a short period of time“在短时间内”，为固定短语。9此处指叔叔的生意，用his指代，保持人称一致。10grow“增长”是谓语动词，故用副词修饰。 (2016新课标)The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home，it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case，we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad，we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many，yet we can still learn a lot.The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about to do during the holiday.We can between staying at home and a trip.If we stay at home，it is comfortable there is no need to spend money.But in that case，we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad，we can broaden view and gain we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we 或 go to places of interest nearby.I that it is a good idea.It does not cost ，yet we can still learn a lot.1根据句意“暑假即将来临。我和我的同学们正在讨论假期该干什么”可知，此处应用“what不定式”作动词短语talk about的宾语，同时what还要作动词do的逻辑宾语。2情态动词can后应用动词原形，而chose为choose的过去式。3and连接两个并列成分。本句中动名词短语staying at home与taking a trip构成并列关系，都作介词between的宾语。4根据句意“如果我们待在家里，很舒服而且也没有必要花钱”可知，上下句之间是并列关系，故用and连接。5world前通常加定冠词the，表示特指。6根据句意“如果我们出国旅游，我们就能拓宽视野并学到书本上学不到的知识”可知，此处应该使用our与本句的主语we在人称上保持一致。7knowledge“知识”为不可数名词，无复数形式。8suggest作动词，表示“建议”时，宾语从句通常用虚拟语气“(should)动词原形”，故此处可把can改为should，也可删掉can。9本文的时态为一般现在时。根据前后句中的suggest和does也可看出此处应用一般现在时。10此处代词much指代不可数名词much money，作动词cost的宾语，而many通常指代可数名词复数。 (2016新课标)The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However，my parents didnt seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time，I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.The teenage from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and years in my life.At first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by .However，my parents didnt seem to think .They always me what to do and how to do it.At one time，I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be from them.I showed them I was independent by strange clothes.Now I am leaving home college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.1根据下文的13 to 19 were可知，year应该用复数形式。2此处用最高级，与上文的the best呼应。3at first“起初；一开始”，为固定短语。4句子的主语是I，因此反身代词用myself。5so代替前面的could make decisions by myself，such不能指代前面的内容。6这里讲述的是过去发生的事情，所以用一般过去时。7be是连系动词，其后要跟形容词作表语。8by是介词，后接动名词形式。9根据句意可知，此处指的是“离开家去上大学”，所以用for，表示目的。10此处是让步状语从句，句子缺少主语，由前面的主语可知用I。 (2016四川)It is Mothers Day today.Though its a western festival，its popular in China now.Mom has a fulltime job，so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mothers Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house，and then went on shopping.When he came back，I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Moms favoritest.At dinner，we said to her，“Happy Mothers Day！” Mom was grateful and moving.It is Mothers Day today.Though its a western festival，its popular in China now.Mom has a fulltime job， she has to do most of the .She is a great mother.Both Dad I planned to do something on Mothers Day.We up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house，and then went shopping.When he came back，I found a bunch of flowers in hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes 或 I cooked were Moms .At dinner，we said to her，“Happy Mothers Day！” Mom was grateful and .1句意：妈妈有一份全职工作，但是她得干大部分家务活。前后句之间为转折关系，故应用but连接。2housework为不可数名词，没有复数形式。3句意：爸爸和“我”都打算在母亲节这一天做一些事。both.and.“两者都”，是固定结构，符合语境。4句意：我们那天早上起得很早。事情发生在过去，故应用一般过去时。5go shopping“去购物”，是固定短语。6句意：当他回来时，我发现他手里有一束花。根据句意可知此处指代爸爸，应用his。7家里的厨房为固定的地方，故应用定冠词the表特指。8句意：我做的饭是妈妈最喜欢的。先行词dishes在定语从句中作宾语，故应用that，which引导或省略关系代词。9favorite“最喜欢的”，没有比较级和最高级形式。10moving“令人感动的”，moved“感动的”。根据上文内容可知，妈妈看到“我”和爸爸做的一切，感到非常感动，故应用moved。 (2016浙江)When I was a very young children，my father created a regular practice I remember well years late.Every time he arrived home at end of the day，wed greet her at the door.He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they chat，my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge.It was both excited and frightening to be up there！My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.When I was a very young ，my father created a regular practice I remember well years .Every time he arrived home at end of the day，wed greet at the door.He would ask who we and pretend not to us.Then he and my mother would have a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they ，my father would lift my sister and me up to sit the top of the fridge.It was both and frightening to be up there！My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.1根据I和a可知，这里应用单数形式，故用child。2根据语境可知，此处表示“很多年以后”，故用later。3at the end of是固定词组，表示“在结束时”。4根据语境可知，此处指代父亲，故用him。5根据主语we可知，谓语应用were。6此处to是不定式符号，后面需要用动词原形。7根据then可知，此处要用“would动词原形”表示过去经常做的事，故删掉had。8全文描述过去发生的事，应用一般过去时，故用chatted。9on the top of是固定词组，表示“在的上面”。10根据主语It可知，此处表示“令人激动的”，故用exciting。 (2015新课标)When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，well live to regret it.When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home incountryside.There the air is clean the mountains are green.Unfortunately， the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have shown that global warming has already become a very problem.The we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. rare animals are dying out.We must ways to protect environment.If we fail to do so，well live to regret it.1前后句都是过去时，且本复合句的从句用了过去将来时，故此处应用一般过去时，以符合时态一致原则。2城市与乡村生活对比，所以特指乡村生活。3前后句是并列关系，故此处需要用并列连词and连接。4考查介词with，表示“随着”。5“研究表明”应该用主动语态，故此处需要删掉shown前的been。6形容词修饰名词problem，不能用副词。7air“空气”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式。8需要用many修饰后面的可数名词animals。9must为情态动词，后面要用动词原形。10前后代词一致，前面的主语为we，所以应该用our或the。 (2015新课标)One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his .It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy a shop window.He liked it so much that he quickly walked into the shop.After at the toy for some time，he turned around and found 或 his parents were missing.Tony was scared and to cry.A woman saw him crying and him to wait outside shop.Five minutes later，Tony sawparents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.1根据下文可知是托尼和他的父母一起去的购物中心，故用parents。2玩具应该是摆在橱窗里，故用in。3本句是固定结构so.that.“如此以致”，故去掉very。4after是介词，后接v.ing形式。5found后接宾语从句，从句中不缺少成分，意义也完整，故用that引导，that也可省略。6begin在此句中是不及物动词，故不能用被动语态，应用一般过去时began与was并列。7and连接两个并列谓语动词，saw与told并列。8shop在文中再次出现应该用the，特指上文提到的商店。9句意：托尼看到了他的父母。此句中缺少物主代词his。10用副词terribly修饰形容词worried。 (2015浙江)My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the lefthand side of the class，I could easy see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.My old classroom was interesting because three of the classroom were made glass.I enjoyed close to the windows and looking at the view.On the lefthand side of the class，I could see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around .Farther in the distance，I could enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers inhurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me like I was dreaming. I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.1根据其前的three可知，此处应该用复数形式sides，表示“教室的三面”。2be made of/from都表示“由做成”，be made of是看得出原材料的，而be made from则看不出原材料。3enjoy后面应该用动名词形式sitting，表示“喜欢做某事”。4此处用副词easily修饰动词see。5本文通篇都是用的一般过去时，故此处用过去时态was。6此处it指代前面的单数名词a park。7根据全文语境可知，此处需要表示肯定，故去掉not。8in a hurry是固定短语，表示“匆忙地”。9使役动词make后跟不带to的不定式，构成make sb.do结构，表示“使某人做某事”，故此处用动词原形feel。10. 根据语境可知，此处不存在条件关系，而是表示让步关系，故此处用Although/Though。 (2015陕西)My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!My soccer coach retired last week.I wanted to do special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the biscuits in the world，so I to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really .My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor I was packing them up.At party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year justget some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me the biscuits with happy laughter!1“last时间名词”前不用介词，故去掉in。2肯定句中表示“某一事情”应用something。3由后文in the world范围的界定可知，此处表示“世界上最好吃的饼干”，故用最高级形式best。4通篇都是讲述过去发生的一件事情，故使用一般过去时。5step表示“步骤；措施”，是可数名词，由some修饰，故用复数形式。6此处作表语修饰the biscuits，表示“非常好吃”应用good，而well 作表语表示“身体健康”。7表示“在把它们包起来的时候”，应用when/while表示“在期间”，引导时间状语从句。8此处特指前文提到的his retirement party，应用the。9由语境可知，此处表示目的，故用不定式to get。10分析句子结构可知，此处应为现在分词enjoying短语作定语。 (2015四川)Hi，Janice，Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time，I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a timewasting activity！In fact，I dont like to go anymore，so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship.How do you think I should do？If you are me，would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.GraceHi，Janice，Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really wantshare with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I you last time，I made three new here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot of time in karaoke bars.Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me .And I started to see this as a timewasting activity！In fact，I dont like to go anymore， Im afraid Ill lose their friendship. do you think I should do？If you me，would you talk to ？Please help me and give me some advice.Grace1want to do sth.“想要做某事”，为固定搭配。2根据后面的last time以及主句时态可知应用一般过去时。3根据前面的数词three可知应该用名词复数形式friends。4spend time(in)doing sth.“花费时间做某事”，此处省略了介词in。5many用来指代可数名词复数，而此处指代花费的钱，因此要用much。6根据句意可知前后句为转折关系，应用but。7本句中what作do的宾语。句意：你认为我应该做什么？do you think为插入语。8本句为虚拟语气，表示与事实相反，故用一般过去时were。9根据上文可知不止是一个朋友，故应用复数代词them。10help为及物动词，其后直接跟宾语，“帮助某人”应用help sb.。 (2014新课标)My dream school starts at 8：30 am and ends at 3：30 pm. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didnt need to do so many homework.Therefore，we have more time with afterschool activities.For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.My dream school starts at 8：30 am and ends at 3：30 pm. are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We need to do so homework.Therefore，we have more time afterschool activities.For example，we can do reading for one and a half and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school like a big garden.There are all kinds of flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest，or by the lake listeningmusic.The teachers here are kind and .They are not only our teachers but also our friends.1此处没有指代意义，而是表示早晨有三节课，用there be句式。2根据语境这里需要用现在时态dont。3后面的homework是不可数名词，故此处用much来修饰该名词。4说明这些时间是“为了”课外活动的，故此处用介词for。5该词前有one and a half修饰，此处应该用复数形式hours。6主语是单数，所以动词用第三人称单数looks。7all kinds of“各种各样的”，后接名词时不用冠词，故此处去掉flowers之前的the。8or连接两个并列谓语，谓语动词形式要一致，用动词原形sit。9listen to music“听音乐”，为固定搭配。10此处用形容词helpful作表语与and前的kind并列。 (2014浙江)I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long，a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticketowner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in.I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station.I noticed that the carriage was and filled with people.Before long，a train inspector to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searchingthe ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from owner.The person who found ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had spoken to or even noticed the ticketowner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the their help.If we could show concern to others need，the world would be a better place to live in.1根据语境可知，这里是一般过去时。2was后面用形容词noisy作表语。3根据before long并结合全文可知，此处应为一般过去时。4前后两句是并列关系，故用并列连词and。5search for是固定搭配，表示“寻找某人或某物”。6此处应该用its/the来指代“车票的主人”。7此处是第二次提到，特指上文中提到的那张车票，故用the。8此处修饰had spoken，所以应该用副词previously。9根据语境可知，此处表示一个陌生人，故用单数形式stranger。10in need是固定短语，表示“需要的”。 (2014辽宁)Dear Jeremy and Alice，Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors，were hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a word，your dogCleo.Weve called several time about Cleos early morning barking.It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute shes outside.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.Beside，Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.This morning she starts barking even before 5 oclock.That is too much for us，considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill，but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely，Jack and RoseDear Jeremy and Alice，Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors，were hoping to settle something that bothers us.In a word，your dogCleo.Weve called several about Cleos early morning barking.It is difficult to why she barks every minute shes outside.The early morning barking been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.，Cleo tends to bark average of six hours a day.This morning she barking even before 5 oclock.That is too much for us，considering how the houses are.We appreciate apologies and goodwill，but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely，Jack and Rose1bother为及物动词，后面直接跟宾语。bother sb.“打扰/烦扰某人”。2several times“几次”，several修饰名词复数。3It is difficult to do sth.“做某事有困难”，动词不定式to后接动词原形。4考查主谓一致，主语为the early morning barking，故谓语用has。5beside为介词，意为“在旁边”；besides为副词，意为“而且”。6average以元音音素开头，an average of“的平均数”，为固定搭配。7由时间状语this morning可知该句描述过去的事情，故用一般过去时。8用形容词close在宾语从句中作are的表语。9此句与后一句中“but we hope that you can.