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实验中学高三英语组复习资料2011-03-10,Welcome,Attentionplease!2011江苏高考说明高考英语书面表达示例2-看图作文：看图作文的“图”不局限于某一类型的图，如漫画、广告，也包括其他图片、照片、图表等情景材料。考生们可根据图示的寓意、内容或情节线索，自己组织文字，进行描述、叙述、比较或表达思想观。作文应覆盖提示的要点，但应避免仅根据提示文字作简单翻译。,Differentformsofpictures,高考书面表达专题写作指导,漫画作文,Writingbasedoncartoons,Areyoufamiliarwiththiscartoon?,Whatabilitiesshouldwehave?,1.读图,3.谋篇,2.解意,.读图：Topicsofcartoons,Topicsofcartoons,Environmental/Naturalproblems,Socialphenomenon,Attitudestowardslife,.解意(theme)-tothepoint,注意:文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)，切记要认真阅读！,1.辨明褒贬，找准角度(angle),.联系生活，明晰主旨(theme),下面的漫画反映了一种社会现象，请你根据对这幅漫画的理解，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决此问题发表你的看法。,Example1.,_,角度comparison主旨educationinequality,ThecomparisonindicatesthephenomenonofeducationinequalityinmodernChina.,角度criticize,主旨,Thestudentsaswellastheirparentsonlyfocusontheiracademicachievements,neglectingpsychologicalqualityandmoralstandards.,Example2,Judgethethemesofthefollowingcartoonsasquicklyaspossible.,Letshaveacompetition,Comeon!Chooseme!,2,1,3,4,5,6,Peoplelackcommunication.,Picture1,Protectanimals.Nobuying,nokilling.,Picture2,Peoplecantaffordheavymedicalfees.,Picture3,Picture4,Onefalsemovemaylosethegame.Lookbeforeyouleap.,Moneycantbuyeverything.Healthisthebestwealth.,Picutre5,下图是某人寿保险公司的一则经典广告招画，这则广告想要告诉我们什么？,ifunexpectedcantforeseeprotectourselvesbuyinsurance,Picture6,Theadvertisementaboveshowsusthattherearealwayssomeunexpected“ifs”inourlife,butnotallofuscanforeseethemclearly.Sobuyinginsuranceforlifeislikelythebestwaytoprotectourselvesfromadeadly“if”.,Conclusion:Whenitcomestoattitudestowardslife,usingpropersayingsmakessense.,.谋篇-organizationStep1.Descriptionstep2.AnalysisStep3.Solutions,发现问题,解决问题,分析问题,Step1Description（人称/时态）Towhatdegreeshouldwedescribethecartoon?,Organization,Example,acountryboycryinglongforeducationacityboyenjoyallthebenefitsofeducation,Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,Ascanbeseeninthepicture,Inthepicture,thereareThepictureshowsacommonphenomenon.,Sentencestructures:,_,acountryboyiscryinghelplessinthedarkness,longingeagerlyforschooleducation,incontrast,thecityboyontherightisenjoyingallthebenefits.,Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,Step2Analysis(联系实际分析)(facts/reasons/results),Sentencestructures,1.Whatarethereasonsforthisphenomenon?2.ItseemsveryridiculousthatHowever,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.3.ThepictureshowsthatItistheexactreflectionof4.Thepictureindicatesthatwe/Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenonthat5.Thisisaironic(讽刺的)cartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong,Indicate:educationinequalityFacts:dropoutofschoolsufferfromlowstandardsofcomparativelybetteropportunitiesResults:lowerenrollmentratesworsentheproblem,Example,ThecomparisonindicatesthephenomenonofeducationinequalityinmodernChina.(facts)School-agecountrychildrenareoftendroppingoutofschoolduetopoverty.Eventhosewhomanagedtostayinschoolarestillsufferingfromthelowstandardsofeducationalfacilitiesandacademicquantities.Comparatively,citychildrenhavemuchbetteropportunitiestoreceivegoodeducation.(results)Thus,schoolinthecountrysidegenerallyhavemuchlowerenrollmentratesthanthoseinthecity,whichinturnworsenstheproblemofeducationalinequality.,AsfarasImconcerned/Inmyopinion,Frommypointofview,Onlyinthiswaycan./Onlyif,canwe,Step3Solutions(opinions/suggestions),Itishightimewetooksomemeasurestoputanendtothisphenomenon./ImmediatemeasuresshouldbetakentoThegovernmentshouldmakelawstoThemediashouldappealforWeshouldraisepeoplesawarenessofEveryoneshouldmakegreateffortsto,从大到小从意识到行动,ThegovernmentThemediabeawareofOnlyifsocialjusticeharmonioussociety,Example,Tosolvethisproblem,thegovernmentshouldspendmoremoneyontheimprovementofeducationinruralareas.Meanwhile,themediacanappealforthepublicdonationsforruraleducation.Moreover,allpeopleinthecommunityshouldbeawareoftheseriousnessoftheproblemanddowhatevertohelp.Onlyifwedothesecanwehavemoresocialjusticeandthusmakeoursocietymoreharmonious,Practice目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“HealthCare”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。,_,_,Clues:简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。,Steps,Contents,Description,Analysis,Solutions,anoldmansufferfromgotohospitalmedicalbillcantaffordanotherattack,Results:1.indebt2.bearthepain3.waitfordeath,1.reducemedicalexpenses2.buildupmedicalinsurance/caresystem,HealthCare(Description)Fromthepicture,wecanseethattheoldmanwassufferingfromhearttrouble/attack.Hehadtogotohospitalformedicalcare.Whenhesawthemedicalbillwith$5,0000fromthehospital,hewassoshockedthathecouldntstandonhisfeet.ItwasbeyondwhathecouldaffordItsreallyanotherheartattackforhim.,Sample,Analysis,Atpresent,manypeoplecantaffordheavymedicalfees.(Results)Becauseofthis,theymaygetintodeepdebtinordertogetpropermedicalcare.Worsestill,somecannotborrowanymoneysotheyhavetobearthepainofdiseasesorwaitforthelastdayoftheirlife.Whatapity!,SolutionsTosolvetheproblem,westronglycallforthemedicalexpensestobereducedThegovernmentshouldbuildupmedicalinsurancesystem,andtryitsbesttoexploreanddevelopanewhealthcaresothateveryonewillbeabletoenjoytheirlifeaslongaspossible./Onlyinthisway,canweenjoyourlifeaslongaspossible.,Whateverthepictureis,justremember:ProperdescriptionAccurateanalysisReasonablesolutions,Onlyifyoukeeptheserulesinmind,canyoumakeit.,Letsdrawconclusion,Consolidation,chenjuan73,Thankyou!,第五部分书面表达(满分25分)下图描述的是全球环境问题。请仔细观察这幅漫画，用英语写一篇短文，阐明漫画中所反映的问题，并提出解决此问题的方法(至少三点)。,_,Consolidation,_,_,DescriptionAnalysisSolution,Fromthepicture,wecanseethatpollutionisposingathreattoourearth,whichcomesinmanyways.Millionsofchimneysofthefactoriesarepouringheavysomokintoair,whichcausesseriousairpollution.Alargeamountofwastewaterfromthefactoriespolluteswater,makingourriversfishlessandourwaterunfittodrinkandswimin.Furthermore,alotoftreeshavebeencutdownwithoutproperplans,whichcontributestothesoilbeingwashedaway.Itseemsthatwereallyhavenocleanplacetolive,(Description+Analysis),Thepollutionissoseriousthatwehavetofindeffectivesolutionstoit.AsfarasIamconcerned,thegovernmentshouldpasslawstoreducepollutedair.Somemeasuresshouldbetakentopurifythewaterbeforeitispouredintotheriversoftheseas.Weshouldplantmoretreestokeepthesoilinplace.Whatsmore,peopleshouldbefurthereducatedtorealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection.Onlyinthisway,wewillhaveacleanandtidyenvironment.,(Solutions),Itiswellknownthatdrunkendrivinghasbeentheleadingcauseforroadaccidents,butsomepeoplestilldriveafterdrinking.Whatarethereasonsforthephenomenon.2.Whatcausesdriverstodriveafterdrinking?3.Thereasonswhypeopledriveafterdrinkingareasfollows:4.Thelackofsafetyawarenessisthedirectreasonwhythereis/existssomuchdrunkendriving.,Drunkendrivingisagreatdangertobothoursocietyandthedrivers.1.AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion2.Itisnecessarytoforbidfrom3.Itstimethatwetookaction/measuresto4.Everyoneshouldberesponsiblefor5.Thegovernmentshouldmakestrictlawsaboutitandpunishthosewho6.Educatepeopleabouttheimportanceofsafedriving/securitytoraisepeoplesawarenessofsafety.7.Onlyinthiswaycanwereduceroadaccident/Ibelieve,
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