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数量用the number of 增加increased 轻微的的变化a slight change of比重用the percentage of 减少declined 很大的变化 a great change of比率用the rate of 大大增加Greatly increased某物的数量在不断增加/减少The number of something is increasing/ decreasingMakes up Made up（过去式）ABC是人做主语要用复数形式：people take up ；students make up。开头1、According to the chart above , from 2014 to 2017 , the number of A increased from 20 to 50. while the percentage of B declined from 70 to 30 .with the rate of C experiencing a slight change of 5 .2、It can be seen graph above that the number of people doing something rose greatly/obviously/dramatically from 40to 80. meanwhile the rate of people doing sth descended by 30，whith the percentage of people doing sth staying at the same level/a similar level。 The graph above offers us a series of figures showing the proportion sth/people doing( sth: A takes up 30and B makes up 40 with C and D occupying 10and11 respectively.结尾These figures reveal a prevalent phenomenon that +句子（a growing number of people are paying close attention to the value/important/harm of sth ） ，which is meaningful and thought-provoking。 第二段首句1、 What are the leading factors behind the phenomenon mentioned above 。 2、so why did the phenomenon appear？3、for my part,there are two primary reasons accounting to for the phenomenon revealed by the chart.中间句（重要性、影响）重要性There is no doubt in saying that sth/doing sth can , directly or indirectly play an indispensable role in our life with sth , we would not achieve anything great in 方面 。影响 1、There is no exaggeration in saying that sth may , in one way or another , bring a positivenegative influence on。 2、it is an undeniable fact/truth that sth .will/could , to a large extent, exert a subtle/great effect on .尾句 1、For my part ，the to reasons given above are the main factor leading to the phenomenon /the problem/the changes mirrored by the chart 2、it is high time we should take some efficientefficienturgent measuresmovessteps to solve the problem第三段 首位句措施段：with the problem becoming srvere/urgent，it is imperative that we （should） adopt measures to batter / improve the current situation。总结段：Taking all the factors above into account，we can come to a conclusion+句子， 尾段其他内容措施段：On the one hand ，the department concerned should make laws/rules to protect sth/fight against sth。 to encourage people to do sth。 to dis courage people from doing sth。 On the other hand ，we should enhance strengthen peoples awareness to do sth/of doing sth/of the importance of sth
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