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2014级高三话题类作文常用短语与句型荟萃(三)-记叙文（日记、助人为乐等事件）一、文章语言特点1.时态：多用一般过去时、现在时 2.多用第一人称、第三人称3.严格控制句子数量,保证5句话;4.重视句子的衔接,用好过渡词.5 主要要点：what/who ,when, where, how, the result结局, the feeling感受二、话题常用单词短语1. kind-hearted(善良的) warm-hearted(热心的) helpful(助人为乐的) optimistic（乐观的）active（主动的） positive(积极的)，2. go outing郊游, go spring outing春游, have social practice activities参加社会实践活动visit a farm参观农场, see a movie看电影, go for a picnic 去野炊 visit the nursing home 参加敬老院，do good deeds做好事三、话题常用句型1. 交待故事发生的时间，地点与人物A.交代时间常用表达One day, The other day, Last week., This morning, A few days/weeks/months ago, on March 14, B.交代地点常用表达On the way to school/on the way home.C.交待时间地点和相关的人物典型句型time +sb was/ were doing sth in sp when sth/sb did sth何时某人正在做某事。这时突然.Eg: I was walking along the park road yesterday afternoon when I saw an old man coming out of the park . Yesterday I was taking a walk by the lake when i saw a man fall off.I was walking along the street when a terrible accident happened in the street. An elderly man was hit by a car while he was crossing the road. Somebody was about to do.when=somebody was on the point of doing.when 某人正要做某事。这时 Eg. We were about to set out/set off/leave when it began to rain.我们正要出发，这时突然下起雨来。Somebody had just done.when.某人刚刚干了某事，这时。Eg.I had just lain down when the telephone rang.我刚刚躺下，这时电话铃响了。2. 推动情节发展(事情经过)A.常用词汇 Then, suddenly, immediately, no sooner than , Hardly when, while, when , not. until B.常用句型：At this very time /moment/all of a sudden, sb. did sth.Then sb did sthAs soon as we got there we started to help the farmers.我们一到农场，就帮助农民干活。 Hardly had we got there when we started to help the farmers. No sooner had we got there than we started to help the farmers.Seeing this/Hearing this, sb did sth 一听到/一看到这种情况，。 On seeing this/On hearing this, I ran over to him as soon as possible.看见/听见这种情况，我立即朝他跑过去。Without hesitation/Without a word, we decided to do.毫不犹豫、二话不说，我们决定做。 Without hesitation, we decided to take her to the nearest hospital.3. 介绍故事的结果或谈自己的感想A.表结果常用词汇At last; Finally ;However, Luckily/Fortunately; To ones surprise,. feel tired, but delightedB.表感想Personally, I think that ;I learn from the story that. What surprised/attracted/delighted us most was that.最使我们吃惊/最吸引我们/最使我们高兴的是。 What attracted us most was that the water there was so clear.最吸引我们的是那儿的水如此清澈。. Tired as we were, we learned what we couldnt learn in school.尽管我们很累，但是我们学到了在学校学不到的东西。Although/Though we were tired, we learned what we couldnt learn in school.Through this meaningful activity, we learned something that cant be learned in class，通过这个有意义的活动，我们学到了在学校里学不到的东西. I was deeply impressed/struck/moved/touched by .我被.深深地打动了/。给我留下了深刻的印象。 I was deeply impressed by what he had done/his heroic deeds.他所做的事/他的英雄事迹给哦我留下了深刻的印象。We were completely amazed at the wonder and the greatness of nature.(我们完全被大自然的奇妙和伟大折服了) Once on the top of the hill/The moment we got to the top of the hill, we were deeply struck/attracted by the beautiful scenery. . Ill never forget the day when/which.我永远也忘记不了这一天,.I will never forget the day which/that we spent on the farm.我永远也不会忘记在农场的这一天。I will never forget the day when we stayed on the farm.拓展：We have an unforgettable experience/have a meaningful/instructive activityOnly in this way can we students promote our consciousness/moral awareness.It was not until then that I really understood the meaning of the proverb:“ Helping others is the source of happiness.”This may be the most unforgettable experience of my life. Although we were tired, we felt very happy. I think its our duty to cover our country with green.What a wonderful weekend we had! We enjoyed ourselves very much. I was praised for what he had done. We felt happy because we had done a good deed.Three hours had passed before we knew it. The time passed quickly before we knew it.四、佳作欣赏范文一：Last week, I helped my grandparents prepare for their journey to Beidaihe.On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched for the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidahe and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed the things needed by them into the suitcase, such as clothes,glasses, an umbrella and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt very happy for helping them and wished them a safe and pleasant journey.范文二：Today we visited a farm, which was called Hongxing Farm. In the morning we met at the school gate. When we arrived there we found that the farm workers were waiting for us for a long time. They received us warmly and showed us around. We noticed the crops and fruit trees growing very well. We were attracted by this wonderful view. At lunch time, we ate together and sat on the ground. We had a fun party after the picnic lunch. Some were singing and dancing, others were playing chess. We were lost in enjoying ourselves before we realized it was six oclock in the afternoon. Then we said goodbye to the farm workers and left the farm. What an interesting day!范文三：Last week, a football match was held between we Class One and Class Two.The players from both sides are all excellent basketball players, so the match went on fiercely at first. At last the result is: the winner is Cass Two, and we were the loser.We didnt win the match, but we didnt lose heart. One the one hand, we think that friendship comes first, and match comes second. On the other hand, since we all tried our best, we had no regret. In our life we may meet many failures, as long as we try our best, theres no need feeling regret for these failures. What more, we should analyze the reasons of failure to get success for the next time.In a word, success is important, so is failure, because its the mother of success.2013浙江卷 请以“One Thing Im Proud of”为题， 用英语写一篇100120个词的短文， 记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下1. 记述事情经过；2. 简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。One Thing Im Proud ofI still remember how I became agood table tennis player.The first day I went to high school,I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skilful they were,I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully tolearn their techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best playersin my class.I am really proud of this experience,because it helps me realize that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect.”
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