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洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练2015年高考书面表达仍会以学生熟悉的或亲身感受的生活中选材，贴近时代，但不追逐热点，写作重点将会是：校园生活、语言学习、师生关系、文娱活动、环保与交通、科技与人等方面。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 一、提纲类(2014安徽)为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 内容要点如下： 1表示理解并给予安慰。 2提出建议并说明理由。 注意：1.词数120左右。 2信中不能出现与本人相关的信息。 3信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：temper n脾气，情绪洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练Hi Worried，Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment._Yours，Jamie洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练【参考范文】Hi Worried，Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong，so you dont have to worry so much.The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret.Here are three useful tips：洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练First，talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.Second，go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.And third，remain optimistic about your future.Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours，Jamie洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 二、图表类(2014北京)假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 注意：1.词数不少于 60。 2短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. _ _ _洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 【写作提示】 本文是看图作文。建议先审题，包括审文字和审图两步。 1审文字 文体：英文稿件：语言要求比较正式。人称：自己的经历，但过程中也有多人参与，所以要注意人称的变化。时态：叙述个人经历：一般过去时；但可以多样化，抒发感受：一般现在时/一般过去时。结构：总分总洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 2审图内容要点：(1)提出问题：同学们存放车辆不方便，拥挤、存在安全问题等。(2)讨论问题：描述活动过程，和同学们一起想办法，和老师一起向校长提交建议。(3)问题得到解决：存车处多了一个入口，同学们和自己感到满意，高兴，同时对校长和老师表示感谢。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练【参考范文】There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked.So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report.Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him.He accepted our suggestions.Soon afterwards，a second entrance was opened to the parking place.Now it is easy to park our bikes there.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 三、开放类(2014福建)如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.”Sir Winston Churchill内容要求：1你对该引语的理解。2你的相关经历。3恰当的结尾。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 3词数：120左右。 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that_ _ _洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练【思路点拨】这是一篇话题类作文。(1)要求根据引语，写出对成功的理解。(2)需要写的话题已经给出，需要我们结合自己的相关经历进行写作。(3)过去的经历，用一般过去时，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。(4)尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。(5)注意要求的词数120左右，不要太多也不要太少。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练【参考范文】This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged right after failures.Rather，we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.Actually，we cant succeed in everything we try.Whats important is that we should stick at it.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练五种基本句型基本句型1主谓结构此句型的句子有一个共同特点，即句子的谓语动词都能表达完整的意思。这类动词叫做不及物动词，后面可以跟副词、介词短语、状语从句等。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 【巩固练习1】 1她昨天晚上回家很晚。 2会议将持续两个小时。 3在过去的十年里，我的家乡已经发生了巨大变化。 4每天八点开始上课。 5这个盒子重五公斤。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 答案1.She went home very late yesterday evening. 2The meeting will last two hours. 3Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past ten years. 4Classes begin at eight every day. 5This box weighs five kilos.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 主语可有修饰语定语，谓语可有修饰语状语。 如：1.The red sun rises in the east. 2So they had to travel by air or boat. 3We got up early so as to catch the first bus. 4She sat there alone，reading a novel. 5He came back when we were_eating.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 【巩固练习2】 6会议有可能开两个半小时。 7我所就读的学校坐落在那个美丽的湖边。 8她盼望已久的机会终于到来了。 9他把书放在书包里，而书包却找不到了。 10正在睡觉的婴儿笑了。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 答案6.The meeting will last two and a half hours. 7The school where I study lies by the beautiful lake. 8The chance which she wanted to get for a long time came at last. 9He put the books in the schoolbag，but the schoolbag disappeared. 10The sleeping baby smiles.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 基本句型2主系表结构 本结构是由主语系动词表语组成，主要用以说明主语的特征，类属，状态，身份等。系动词有： 1表示特征和存在状态的 be，seem，feel，appear，look，smell，taste，sound。 2表示状态延续的 remain，stay，keep，continue，stand。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 3表示状态变化的 become，get，turn，go，run，fall，come，grow。Our English teacher is thirty years old.The cake tastes delicious.We feel used to living in big cities.The potatoes went bad in the fields.Their boss seems satisfied with the_work.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 【巩固练习】 1冬季白天短，夜晚长。 2十五岁他就成为有名的钢琴家了。 3孩子们很少保持安静。 4她的工作是在幼儿园里照看儿童。 5这个报告听起来很有意思。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 答案1.In winter，the days are short and the nights are long. 2At the age of fifteen，he became a famous pianist. 3Children seldom keep quiet. 4Her job is to look after the children in the nursery. 5The report sounds interesting.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 主系表句型的几个特例： 1As in China，the weather is different from area to area. 2We are greatly surprised to meet him there. 3It is not a good idea to spend your vacation with strangers. 4It is kind of you to say so. 5It is not easy for them to go there by bike. 6Is it Tom who is playing the piano? 7It is a fact that they cant pass the exam.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练基本句型3主谓宾结构本结构是由主语及物的谓语动词宾语构成。 宾语成分的多样化使得这一结构异常复杂。如：1.Tom made a hole in the wall. 2.I dont know if he can come tomorrow. 3.They havent decided where to go next. 4.She stopped teaching English two years ago. 5.It took them ten years to build the dam. 6.Mother promises to give me a_present.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 【巩固练习】 1这本书他读过多次了。 2他们成功地完成了计划。 3那位先生能流利地说三种语言。 4我们大家都相信Jack 是一个诚实男孩。 5他不知道说什么好。 洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 答案1.He has read this book many times. 2They have carried out the plan successfully. 3That gentleman can speak three languages fluently. 4All of us believe that Jack is an honest boy. 5He did not know what to say.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练基本句型4双宾语结构说明：此结构由“主语及物的谓语动词间接宾语(人)直接宾语(事物)”组成。如：He brings me cookies every day.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练但若要先说出直接宾语(事物)，后说间接宾语(人)，则要借助于介词to或for。如：He brings cookies to me every day.She made a beautiful dress for me.用to侧重指动作的方向，表示朝着，向着，对着某人。用for 侧重指动作的受益者，表示为了某人，替某人。常跟双宾语的动词有：(需借助to的)bring，give，lend，hand，offer，pass，pay，promise，return，send，show，teach，tell，write，ask等；(需借助for 的) buy，call，cook，choose，draw，find，get，make，order，sing，save，spare等。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 【巩固练习】 1奶奶昨晚给我讲了一个有趣的故事。 2请把那本字典递给我好吗？ 3我替你叫辆出租汽车好吗？ 4新式机器将会为你节省许多劳动。 5他用他的第一个月工资给他妈妈买了一件毛衣。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 答案1.Grandma told me an interesting story last night. 2Would you please pass me the dictionary? 3Shall I call you a taxi? 4The new machine will save you a lot of labour. 5He bought a new coat for his mother with his first months salary.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练基本句型5复合宾语结构说明： 此结构由“主语及物的谓语动词宾语宾语补足语”构成。宾语与宾语补足语之间有逻辑上的主谓关系或主表关系或动宾关系，若无宾语补足语，则句意不够完整。可以用做宾补的有：名词，形容词，副词，介词短语，动词不定式，分词等。如：洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练The sun keeps us warm.I heard him singing.You must get your hair cut.They made Tom monitor.He used to do his homework with his radio on.用it做形式宾语，而将真正的宾语放到宾语补足语的后面，以使句子结构平衡，是英语常用的句型结构形式。即：主语谓语it宾补真正宾语。如：I found it very pleasant to be with your family.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 【巩固练习】 1我们叫她Alice。 2卫兵命令我们立即离开。 3每天早晨我们都听到他大声朗读英语。 4那可怕的声音把孩子们吓坏了。 5我认为有可能用另一种方法解题。 洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 答案1.We call her Alice. 2The guards ordered us to leave at once. 3Every morning we hear him read English aloud. 4The terrible sound made the children frightened. 5I consider it possible to work out the problem in another way. 洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 扩充细节四招 方法一列举具体的实例来补充说明 1我喜欢体育运动。I like sports very much.I like sports very much，such as basketball and football.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 2青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example，we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags，refuse to use singleuse products，plant more trees and save water and energy.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 方法二 添加与所给信息有关的神态、动作、心理描写及背景渲染等内容 1晚饭后，这个男的走向卧室。After supper，the man went to his bedroom. After a rich meal，the fat man slowly made his way to his bedroom.(神态、动作)洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 2我有时去村西的小河游泳。I went swimming in the river west of the village now and then. I went swimming in the river west of the village now and then.The water in the river was very clear.(背景渲染 ) 3我看到了一些不良行为。I found some bad behavior. I found some bad behavior.I was quite disappointed to find some bad behavior.(心理)洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 方法三 添加与所给信息有关的原因，结果，条件，让步，手段，目的等内容 1Tracy 来电话留言：咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消。拓展：因为她有重要的事情处理。(原因)Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee. Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee，as she has something important to attend to.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 2帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。拓展：孩子们进步很快，我也受到他们父母的称赞。(结果)I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons. I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons.To my joy，they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 方法四 结尾发挥，写你的感受，评价，愿望，倡议等 1Although I stood all the way home，I felt very happy for what I did. 2I think such activities are necessary and meaningful. 3In addition，if she would like to learn Chinese，I will be happy to help her. 4With everyones contribution，we can make our school a comfortable learning environment.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 【巩固练习】 一、翻译下列句子，请扩充细节 1有时去村西的小河游泳。(增加条件状语) 2我帮助祖父母干农活。(增加让步、目的状语)洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练答案1.If weather permitted / Weather permitting，I went swimming in the river to the west of the village now and then.2I helped my grandparents do farm work.Although I was very tired，I was still proud of myself.I helped my grandparents do farm work in order to experience life.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 二、运用所学知识，描述下列情景 1爱好旅游 2爱好运动 3喜欢养宠物洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练答案1.I like to seek a pen pal who is interested in travelling just like me.If possible，we can travel together or share traveling experiences in our emails.2I am a healthy boy full of energy so I like sports very much，especially outdoor activities.Whenever I have time，Ill go hiking or mountain climbing with my classmates.3I have another hobby，that is keeping pets.I have kept a lovely dog named Bei Bei for 3 years.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 三、请为下面短文适当增加细节Yesterday I went to the Friendship Store.I saw a foreigner buying clothes.He spoke English.The shop assistant couldnt understand him.I translated for them.They said thanks to me.I think the shop assistant should know a foreign language.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 答案Yesterday I went to the Friendship Store.I was doing some shopping when I happened to see that a foreigner was trying to buy some clothes.He spoke English.He tried what he could to make himself understood.But，the shop assistant couldnt understand him at all.Seeing this，I went up to them and translated what the foreign guest said into Chinese.They said thanks to me.I think the shop assistant should know a foreign language，or how they could work in such a big store without knowing any foreign language.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 三段十句法则 1十句作文法的优势(1)依据高考，针对性强十句作文法是结合多年高考书面表达命题规律总结出来的一种写作方法，具有很强的针对性。它符合高考书面表达的要求，尤其在词数上，十句作文法提供了切实的保障，从而避免出现因词数不足或文章过长而扣分的情况。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练(2)句型固定，层次分明十句作文法的核心是固定句型。十句作文法对文章总体结构作出了清晰明确的划分，有效避免了考生因思路不明确而导致的文章结构不清、层次混乱的情况。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练(3)句式灵活，简洁易学十句作文虽名为十句，但又不拘泥于十句，根据表达的需要，可以是八至十二句，而句子数量的增减取决于第二段扩展句的多少。如果考生感到利用现有的十句不能达到试题的词数要求，也可以在句中适当的位置添加一些修饰性或限制性的定语、状语等。这样，考生可以在完全保证句子整体意思不变的情况下，通过添加一些润色性的词语来达到规定的词数要求。十句作文法对主题句、扩展句、结尾句以及各段的功能都进行了界定。这样，通过对十句作文法模板的学习、训练，考生在动笔之前，头脑中就会形成结构清晰、脉络分明的写作思路。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 2十句作文的基本模式第一段为开头，通常包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出写作素材的核心话题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明主题句。或者将位置倒过来，第一句说明情况，第二句提出话题。再或者开头段只有一句主题句。第二段为正文，共七句。第三句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相关。第四句至第九句为扩展句，说明本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用恰当的过渡词，从而使段落逻辑合理，结构得当。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练第三段为结尾，简化为一句。既要总结全文，也要表明作者的观点。或者最后一段有两句，除了总结句还有一句扩展句。此外，三段之间要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的过渡手段。利用十句作文法要注意：(1)选好开头句(做到概括性强，表达清楚，主题突出)(2)合理安排结构(3)恰当选择句型洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练下面是一篇典型的十句作文法的例子。假如你校最近就“家长应该如何对待孩子”的问题进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1中提供的信息描述调查结果，并针对图表2中的一个数据所反映的情况表达你的看法。洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children(1)(主题句)According to Chart 1，three kinds of behavior from parents are considered the most welcome among the students(2)(主题句).33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them，laying a basic foundation for family communication(3)(扩展句).31.7% are content to be in the equal position with their parents when they are talking with each other(4)(扩展句)Whats more,22.7% feel happy to receive constant praise or encouragement from their parents(5)(扩展句)洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练As is shown in Chart 2,32% of the students think their parents expect too much of them，especially in their studies，putting great pressure on them(6)(主题句)Although all parents love their children and want the best for them，they put too much pressure on their children(7)(扩展句)Some students think they will fail if they are not admitted into a top school or university(8)(扩展句)I think parents should have practical expectations of their children(9)(总结句)This way，the children will feel more confident about themselves and really make a difference in the future(10) (扩展句) 洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 三大高分技巧 一、使用较高级的词汇 1Because the weather was good，our journey was comfortable.Thanks to the good weather，our journey was comfortable. 2We all think he is a great man.We all think highly of him. 3Suddenly I thought out a good idea.A good idea occurred to me./ A good idea suddenly struck me.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 4Mr.Zhang taught us English.He was 44 years old.He wore long hair.His character was very strange.Mr.Zhang,44 years old，used to be our English teacher of strange character with long hair. 5As a result，the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 6When she heard he had died，she went pale with sorrow.At the news of his death，she went pale with sorrow. 7She went to Austria in order to study music.She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music. 8When he spoke more，he felt more excited.The more he spoke，the more excited he felt.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 9In our school，there are twentysix classrooms.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms. 10You can find my house easily.Youll have no trouble finding my house.洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 二、使用较丰富的句式 1When he arrives，please give me an email.On his arriving，please give me an email.(使用v.ing形式) 2To his surprise，the little girl knows so many things.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.(使用名词性从句) 3Though Im weak，Ill make the effort.Weak as I am，Ill make the effort.(使用倒装句) 洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 4He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.(使用强调句型) 5I passed the physics exam because of your help.I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.(使用虚拟语气)洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 6She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.Followed by many students，she walked out of the lab.(使用过去分词) 7They sang and laughed as they went back to school.Singing and laughing，they went back to school.( 使用v.ing形式) 8I wont believe what he says. No matter what he says，I wont believe.(使用让步状语从句) 9If you study hard，you will make rapid progress.Study hard and youll make rapid progress.(用并列句)洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 10Our school is beautiful.It is very large.It has 100 mu.And there are 3,500 students in it.Its staff (员工)teaches and serves us well. Our beautiful large school in which there are 3,500 students covers an area of 100 mu，whose staff teaches and serves us well.(定语从句)洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 三、使用恰当的连接词逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序first，second，then，finally/at last，soon，immediately，suddenly空间顺序here，there，on one side.on the other side，in front of，at the back of，next to对称顺序for one thing，for the other thing，on one hand，on the other hand转折顺序but，however，while，though，otherwise，in reality，instead洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练条件顺序as long as，on condition that，if，unless，only if让步顺序though，as，even if/ though，whether，wh(what，when，where，which，who，how) ever递进顺序and，whats more，besides，in addition，to make the matter worse，whats worse过渡性插入语I think，in my opinion，Im afraid，you know，As we all know，As is known，in a word，to sum up洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练【巩固练习】运用所学知识，对下列作文中标注的地方进行升格练习试题：联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员，请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：洞察洞察命题动向命题动向感悟感悟真题精髓真题精髓把握把握写作技巧写作技巧分类分类话题巧解话题巧解创新创新典题狂练典题狂练 1大小：近100户人家，约500口人。
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