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第二篇第二篇 分类写作分类写作 本书所有作文题的写作要求相同，为了避免累赘，不再每篇附上。统一附注如下：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称；4. 如果有提供开头语或结束语，或者两者都有，所给内容不计入总词数；5. 答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。the nursing home 敬老院敬老院show our respect 表现我们的尊敬表现我们的尊敬gain a better understanding 获得更好的理解获得更好的理解a romantic story 一个浪漫故事一个浪漫故事sincerely 真诚地真诚地be familiar with 对对熟悉熟悉art gallery 艺术馆艺术馆judge 裁判裁判speech contest 演讲比赛演讲比赛deliver ones speech 做演讲做演讲is convenient for sb./sth. 对对方便方便locate 位于位于promote students interest 提高学生的兴趣提高学生的兴趣theme 主题主题participant 参与者，选手参与者，选手compete with sb. 和某人竞争比赛和某人竞争比赛feel honored 觉得荣幸觉得荣幸dragon boat racing 龙舟赛龙舟赛training camp 训练营训练营1. Im now writing on behalf of the classmates to invite you to come and attend it, if you can spare the time. 我代表同学写信邀请您来参我代表同学写信邀请您来参加，如果您能抽出时间的话。加，如果您能抽出时间的话。2. Im sure that youll have a good time staying with us. 我相信您会和我相信您会和我们一起度过愉快的时光。我们一起度过愉快的时光。3. Looking forward to your coming. 期待着您的到来。期待着您的到来。4. We would feel much honored if you could come. 如果您能来，我们如果您能来，我们会觉得非常荣幸。会觉得非常荣幸。5. If you have any suggestions, please let us know. 如果您有任何建议，如果您有任何建议，请告诉我们。请告诉我们。6. I sincerely invite you to watch the show because. 我诚挚地邀请您我诚挚地邀请您来看演出，因为来看演出，因为7. You can reach me through my phone number 44876655 at your convenience. 您可以在您方便的时候打我的电话，号码是您可以在您方便的时候打我的电话，号码是44876655。8. I wonder if youd like to go with me. 我想知道您是否想和我一起去。我想知道您是否想和我一起去。1. We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenience for you.1. convenience改为convenient2. Let me know as soon as possible that you are able to come or not.2. that改为whether/if3. Since you are such eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.3. such改为so4. Ive read in the paper about a five-days tour, which I think suits you, so now Id like to recommend it to you.4. five-days改为five-day5. CCTY is inviting foreign students to perform at the Spring Festival Gala, that will be held at CCTV Station on the evening of February 9, the Chinese New Years Eve.5. that改为which6. Please let me to know as soon as possible so that I can make some arrangements.6. 删掉to7. Im writing to tell you well have an English Corner active which will take place in the library on Saturday afternoon.7. active改为activity8. We have never been abroad ago, so we are very interested in what it is like in your country.8. ago改为before9. This is Li Hua, a monitor of Class Two, Grade Three of GuangMing High School.9. 删掉a10. Therefore, to make it a success, we would like to invite you to be our guide, give us some help with our spoken English.10. give改为giving；或give前加and 【2012全国全国2卷：邀请外教参加生日聚会卷：邀请外教参加生日聚会】假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教外教Susan参加，要点包括：参加，要点包括：1. 时间：周五晚时间：周五晚8点至点至9点点2. 地点：学生俱乐部地点：学生俱乐部3. 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等4. 要求：备小礼物要求：备小礼物满分佳作（一）满分佳作（一）Hi, Susan, Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday. Just as the name suggests, the party is still kept a secret from him. This Friday evening, well gather at the Students Club at 8 pm to celebrate his 18th birthday. Im now writing on behalf of the classmates to invite you to come and attend it, if you can spare the time. The details of the celebration, which will last about an hour until 9 pm, are as follows. At the start, the candle will be lighted and well sing “Happy Birthday” together for him, after which well enjoy the birthday cake and have fun together, playing games and singing songs. Im sure that youll have a good time staying with us.Looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li Hua满分赏析满分赏析 Just as the name suggests(正如名字所说一样正如名字所说一样)，语言运，语言运用地道，很自然地引出细节。用地道，很自然地引出细节。 用到用到Im now writing on behalf ofto(我代表我代表写写信信)，句式高级地道，点明写信目的；，句式高级地道，点明写信目的；if you can spare the time又显示出交际中的礼貌，十分得体。又显示出交际中的礼貌，十分得体。 用到了用到了which引导的定语从句；引导的定语从句；are as follows也是很好也是很好的引出列举的主题句。注意：的引出列举的主题句。注意：follows不要漏了不要漏了s，否则效果会归零。，否则效果会归零。 用用after which 介词提前的定语从句和介词提前的定语从句和playing games and singing songs现在分词短语，有效地把信息整合在一起，句式显现在分词短语，有效地把信息整合在一起，句式显得高级，句法复杂度高。得高级，句法复杂度高。 本句是作者添加的细节，详略得当，内容合适。本句是作者添加的细节，详略得当，内容合适。满分佳作（二）满分佳作（二）Hi, Susan, Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday.As scheduled, all the classmates in our class will gather at the Students Centre at 8 pm this Friday evening to celebrate Xiaomings birthday. We would feel much honored if you could come and enjoy it, which is to finish at 9, lasting an hour. As the party starts, we will light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” for him. Then the birthday cake will be presented and cut for all of us to enjoy, following which well sing songs and play some small games. Whats more, as a surprise, well all prepare some secret birthday gifts for him, and itll be great to see how surprised he will be seeing the gifts. As its a surprise party, he will know nothing about it beforehand, and we do hope that you could manage to attend it. Looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li Hua满分赏析满分赏析 We would feel much honored if you could，语气委婉礼貌，语气委婉礼貌，句式高级，用句式高级，用would和和could的过去式更体现出客气语气；且用到了的过去式更体现出客气语气；且用到了which引导的定语从句和引导的定语从句和lasting现在分词，体现句法能力。现在分词，体现句法能力。 following which是一大亮点，现在分词短语中包含一句定是一大亮点，现在分词短语中包含一句定语从句。语从句。 用用whats more连接自然，条理清楚；用连接自然，条理清楚；用and有效地整合了信有效地整合了信息。息。 本句是自己添加的内容合适，且用本句是自己添加的内容合适，且用do强调，更显邀请的诚意。强调，更显邀请的诚意。 这是写信的必备用语，必须做到零差错。这是写信的必备用语，必须做到零差错。【20072007湖北卷改编：邀请国际学生慰问老人湖北卷改编：邀请国际学生慰问老人】 作文原题作文原题 假设你是某中学学生会主席李华，你校与本地一所国际学校经假设你是某中学学生会主席李华，你校与本地一所国际学校经常举办联谊活动，你计划在重阳节组织学生到养老院去慰问老人，常举办联谊活动，你计划在重阳节组织学生到养老院去慰问老人，拟邀请国际学校的学生参加。请根据以下内容要点给国际学校的学拟邀请国际学校的学生参加。请根据以下内容要点给国际学校的学生会主席生会主席TonyTony写一封信。写一封信。 要点：要点： 向老人赠送礼物向老人赠送礼物( (鲜花、自制贺卡鲜花、自制贺卡) )； 为老人提供服务为老人提供服务( (做清洁、陪老人聊天做清洁、陪老人聊天) )； 为老人表演节目为老人表演节目( (唱歌、跳舞唱歌、跳舞) )。作文翻译作文翻译亲爱的亲爱的TonyTony， 重阳，中国传统的老人节日，即将到来。我们计划去敬老院庆重阳，中国传统的老人节日，即将到来。我们计划去敬老院庆祝这特别的日子，我们也想邀请你们学校的学生加入我们。祝这特别的日子，我们也想邀请你们学校的学生加入我们。 我们计划了几项活动。当我们到达那里时，我们会分小组在老我们计划了几项活动。当我们到达那里时，我们会分小组在老人们的房间拜访他们，给他们送花和自制的卡片，以表达我们的尊人们的房间拜访他们，给他们送花和自制的卡片，以表达我们的尊重和爱。然后，我们会在护士的帮助下为他们搞清洁和洗刷。重和爱。然后，我们会在护士的帮助下为他们搞清洁和洗刷。因为有些老人觉得孤单，我们可以和他们聊他们以前的日子、因为有些老人觉得孤单，我们可以和他们聊他们以前的日子、我们城市的变化、或者他们感兴趣的任何事情。我们也可以给他们我们城市的变化、或者他们感兴趣的任何事情。我们也可以给他们一些表演，例如唱歌、跳舞等等。一些表演，例如唱歌、跳舞等等。 我坚信我们都会对中国的老年人有更好的理解。如果你有任何我坚信我们都会对中国的老年人有更好的理解。如果你有任何建议，请让我知道。建议，请让我知道。 期待着你及早的回复。期待着你及早的回复。 你的你的， 李华李华Dear Tony, Chongyang, the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly, is coming around. We are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day, and we would like to invite students from your school to join us. We have planned several activities. When we get there, we will visit the elderly in their rooms in groups, presenting them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respect and love. Then we will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses. As some old people feel lonely, we may chat with them about their old days, changes of our city, or anything they are interested in. We may also give them some performances, such as singing, dancing, and so on.I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in China. If you have any suggestions, please let us know. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【20122012天津卷改编：邀请美国朋友观看演出天津卷改编：邀请美国朋友观看演出】作文原题作文原题 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友假设你是李华，你的美国朋友ChrisChris就读于天津某国际学校。就读于天津某国际学校。他熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。他熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。8 8月月5 5日下午日下午2 2：0000在新落成的在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧天津大剧院将上演越剧梁山伯与祝英台梁山伯与祝英台。请你根据以下提示，。请你根据以下提示，用英语给用英语给ChrisChris写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出。写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出。 1. 1. 提出邀请并简述原因；提出邀请并简述原因； 2. 2. 提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等）；提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等）； 3. 3. 请求对方回复。请求对方回复。参考词汇：越剧：参考词汇：越剧：ShaoxingShaoxing Opera Opera 梁山伯与祝英台梁山伯与祝英台 Butterfly Lovers Butterfly Lovers 天津大剧院天津大剧院Tianjin Grand TheaterTianjin Grand Theater作文翻译作文翻译亲爱的亲爱的Chris,Chris, 我有好消息告诉你。我有好消息告诉你。8 8月月5 5日下午日下午2 2：0000在新落成的天津大剧院在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧将上演越剧梁山伯与祝英台梁山伯与祝英台。它是关于中国的一个浪漫故事，。它是关于中国的一个浪漫故事，典型的中国文化。我诚挚地邀请你去观看演出，因为你熟悉中国文典型的中国文化。我诚挚地邀请你去观看演出，因为你熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。化，特别是戏曲文化。 看完演出后，我们计划安排一些其他的活动。例如，我们可看完演出后，我们计划安排一些其他的活动。例如，我们可以参观附近的博物馆或美术馆，以便了解更多中国文化和艺术。以参观附近的博物馆或美术馆，以便了解更多中国文化和艺术。 如果你有任何建议，请尽快联系我。我期待着你的答复。如果你有任何建议，请尽快联系我。我期待着你的答复。 你你的的,李华李华Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. There will be staged Shaoxing Opera “Butterfly Lovers” in new Tianjin Grand Theatre at 2 p.m. on August 5. It is about a Chinese romantic story, typical of Chinese culture. I sincerely invite you to watch the show because you are familiar with Chinese culture, especially Chinese opera culture.After watching the show, we plan to arrange some other activities. For example, we can visit the nearby museums or art galleries in order to know much more about Chinese culture and art. If you have any suggestions, please contact me as soon as possible. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【20152015新课标新课标2 2卷：邀请外教去敬老院卷：邀请外教去敬老院】假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)(nursing home)陪老陪老人们过重阳节人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括： 1. 1. 出发及返回时间；出发及返回时间； 2. 2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。活动：包饺子、表演节目等。Dear Lucy,.Looking forward to your reply.YoursLi Li HuaHua e【20152015新课标新课标2 2卷：邀请外教去敬老院卷：邀请外教去敬老院】Dear Lucy,Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and well wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.YoursLi Li HuaHua 【20102010全国全国1 1卷：邀请外教做比赛评委卷：邀请外教做比赛评委】假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛讲比赛(speech contest)(speech contest)。希望附近某大学的外籍教师。希望附近某大学的外籍教师SmithSmith女士女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然时间：英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然时间：6月月15日下午日下午2:005:00地点：地点：501教室参赛选手：教室参赛选手：10名学生联系人：李华（电话名学生联系人：李华（电话44876655）欢迎）欢迎大家光临大家光临 内容要点：内容要点：1. 1. 自我介绍自我介绍2. 2. 邀请做评委邀请做评委3. 3. 演讲主题演讲主题 4. 4. 比赛时间比赛时间 5. 5. 参赛选手参赛选手 6. 6. 联系方式联系方式Dear Ms. Smith,Dear Ms. Smith,With best wishes,With best wishes,Li Li HuaHua【20102010全国全国1 1卷：邀请外教做比赛评委卷：邀请外教做比赛评委】Dear Ms. Smith,Dear Ms. Smith, This is Li This is Li HuaHua, President of the Student Union of , President of the Student Union of YucaiYucai Middle School, which is located near the university Middle School, which is located near the university where youre teaching. Im writing to see if we could where youre teaching. Im writing to see if we could have the honor to ask you to be a judge in our coming have the honor to ask you to be a judge in our coming petition. You see, to promote students interest in learning You see, to promote students interest in learning English, weve planned to hold an English speech English, weve planned to hold an English speech competition, the theme of which is “Man and Nature”. It competition, the theme of which is “Man and Nature”. It will begin at two on the afternoon of June 15th, lasting will begin at two on the afternoon of June 15th, lasting three hours. There will be ten participants competing with three hours. There will be ten participants competing with each other in Classroom 501.each other in Classroom 501. We would feel much honored if you could join us. You We would feel much honored if you could join us. You can reach me through my phone number 44876655 at your can reach me through my phone number 44876655 at your convenience. Looking forward to your reply.convenience. Looking forward to your reply.With best wishes.With best wishes.Li Li HuaHua【20152015北京卷改编：邀请美国朋友参加龙舟训练营北京卷改编：邀请美国朋友参加龙舟训练营】 假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的美国朋友假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的美国朋友JimJim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：起参加，邮件的内容包括： 1. 1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间，地点，参加介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间，地点，参加者等）；者等）； 2. 2. 说明你打算参加的原因；说明你打算参加的原因； 3. 3. 询问对方的意向。询问对方的意向。参考词汇：龙舟训练营参考词汇：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training CampDragon Boat Training CampDear Jim,Dear Jim,Yours,Yours,Li Li HuaHua【20152015北京卷改编：邀请美国朋友参加龙舟训练营北京卷改编：邀请美国朋友参加龙舟训练营】Dear Jim,Dear Jim,Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. As the dragon boat racing is a typical summer holiday. As the dragon boat racing is a typical activity in the Dragon Boat Festival, I want to join a activity in the Dragon Boat Festival, I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if youd like to go Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if youd like to go with me.with me.This camp will open on July 20This camp will open on July 20thth. It offers teenagers . It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, please let Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, please let me know and Ill send you more information.me know and Ill send you more information.Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer. Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer. Yours,Yours,Li Li HuaHua
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