I am proud of myself优秀作文展评

精品文档，仅供学习与交流，如有侵权请联系网站删除I am proud of myself优秀作文展评结构一：讲故事型，通过讲述过去的一件事情，讲自己在某个方面突破自己，取得成绩，为自己骄傲。 1, Im proud of myself,because I overcame the shyness successfully. One day,I was asked to give a speech in my school. I felt so nervous that I couldnt sleep well at night.But I still decided to try my best.I listened to the radio and practiced hard at home.Finally.I standed in front of the public and gave a speech successfully! How proud I am! 2, Everyone should be confident of himself.Im proud of myself because of a wonderful experience. It was two weeks ago. The first sports meet was held in my school.I really hoped to win. So I did lots of exercise to build myself up.Every day I got up early and ran for at least 30 minutes.At first,I ran in the middle of the team,but a few minutes later,I was out of breath.To catch up with others,I tried my best and succeeded in passing the finish line. I won first place. How happy and proud I felt!. Im proud of myself not only for the good result but also for my hard work 3, Last month I took part in an English competition.I had never taken part in any English competition before that,so I was very nervous.I walked around the room and felt very upset.My mother suddenly came in and encouraged me.I felt confident about myself and decided to work hard.I recited some poems ,remembered grammar rules to get ready for it.As a result,I won the first place. It was my first time to take part in such a great competition.I think my success depended on my effort.Im proud of myself. 4,I used to be a shy girl.Im afraid of showing myself in public.One day,my teacher asked students to perform programs.My teacher encouraged me to show myself,but I didnt want to perform because I often felt nervous.At last I stood on the stage,I took a deep breath and I told myself I should believe my ability.I performed the program successfully.Im proud of myself,because I overcame the difficulty 5, Last year there was a sports meet in our school.I decided to take part in the 1000 meter race. At first,I wasnt the first,I was a litle nerous，then I tried to run faster and faster .I caught up with those who was in front of me one by one .later on,another player and I ran side by side.It was hard to say which of us would won,At last,I tried my best to pass the finish line earier than him,I won first place.I really felt proud of myself.结构二：对比型，叙述自己在某一方面的变化，过去怎么，现在如何，从而体会到什么道理，为自己而骄傲。 1, How time flies!I have been in my middle school for three yeas.I have made great progress in my English study.So Im proud of myself. Three yeas ago,I knew little about English,I also didnt know how to learn it. I felt very worried.My English teacher told me the way to learn it.From then on, I read English in the morning every day and listened to the teacher carefully in class.Now,I master a lot of English words, and I also can write well in English 结构三：议论文型，列出自己身上的几个优点或者擅长的方面，为自己而骄傲。 1, No matter what challenges I am facing, I always keep being confident of myself and proud of myself. Sometimes I failed in the exam, maybe I felt a bit depressed for the loss of hard work, but at last I would analyze the result carefully and picked my confidence up again.I always know how optimism affects my life, so I refuse to lose heart. Come on, friends !lets be proud of ourselves ans see a big picture of our future life. 2, Im Machael. Im a top student in my school.Im proud of myself.Here are several reasons.First,Whatever my teachers ask me to do,I can always do it properly and quickly.Second,I study so hard that I do well in every exams in the school.My classmates all trust me.Finally,I am always ready to help others,Im patient with everyone around me,so many students like to play with me.I can get along well with my teachers, all my teachers like me very much.Im really proud of myself.【精品文档】第 2 页