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2012考研英语二大作文剖析钱希如果不出意外，2012考研英语二大作文应该是延续2010和2011的趋势，继续是图表类作文。众所周知，图表类作文分为“图类”和“表类”。图类包括线图line chart，饼图pie chart和柱图bar chart，表类我们叫Table.临近考试，应大量同学的要求，我们给大家做一个最简单有效的剖析，希望对广大考英语二的同学能有所帮助。此类题除了给图，还会给出两到三点提纲，以2011年为例，Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart and2) give your comments.You should write at least 150 words.Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)(图表略）2008、2009年国内轿车市场部分品牌市场份额示意图（从左至右：国产品牌、日系品牌、美系品牌）第一段：考生需根据图表，描述所体现出的大趋势，叫做总体描述。具体步骤是：点出主题+对象+时间。然后，用两三句进行细节描述。（关注上升，下降，峰值，低谷等主要数据点）。在第一段，无需发表太多议论，就图论图进行描述即可。希望考生利用最后的40多天时间，巩固复习相应的图表描述句式表达。（后面附注了一些必备表达）2011年真题举例：（总体描述）As we can see in the above bar chart, dramatic changes have taken place inthe market share of certain brands in domestic car marketsfrom 2008 to 2009.（细节描述）During the period, there was a drastic jumpof 8% from 25% to 33% in the market portion of Chinese brands,whilethat of Japanese brandsdeclined significantlyby 10% from 35% to 25%.At the same time,the percentage ofAmerican brandsremained steady.第二段：和英语一大作文相比，论证方法相对简单，一般只需要分析这种现象或者趋势产生的原因。大家可以参考我们在课堂中讲的“八大盾牌观点”和“四大建议方向”去思考成因，一般需要两到三点原因，表示原因的句式，也可参看讲义中“论证方法成因”这一点中的具体讲解。例如：account for, be responsible for, contribute to, reasons can be listed as follows等。2011年真题举例：There are at least two fundamental reasons accounting for these changes. On the one hand, cutting-edge technology has offered a technical foundation for the rapid development of Chinese automobile industry by providing material basis and technical means.Meanwhile, no one could fail to notice that national automobile companies in growing numbers resort to price promotions to boost sales.On the other hand, the incredible words and behaviors of Japanese automobile corporations such as Toyota in recent years alsocontribute tothis tendency because it cheapens their image and finally ruin their reputation.第三段：主要是做一个总结展望或者建议，这个也可参考英语一中的讲解。2011年真题举例：Taking the above mentioned into consideration, it is far from being difficult to realize the significance ofquality, price and reputation of a corporation. Without the trust and favor of consumers, enterprises are bound to be affected adversely.Therefore, I reckon thatif Chinese automobile industry wants to enjoy a sustainable development, what they need is to spare no effort to reinforce their brands image.必备表达：1、文章开头图表类型：table、chart、diagram graph、column chart、pie graph描述：show、describe、illustrate、can be seen from、clear、apparent、reveal、represent内容：figure、statistic、number、percentage、proportionAccording to the table/pie chart/line graph/bar graph, we can see/conclude that根据该表/图，我们可知The table/graph reveals (shows/indicates/illustrates/ represents/points out) that该表/图表明As we can see from the tableAs can be seen from the line/bar graph As is shown (illustrated/indicated) in the pie chart 2、表示数据变化的单词或者词组rapid/rapidly迅速的，飞快的，险峻的dramatic/dramatically戏剧性的，生动的significant/significantly有意义的，重大的，重要的sharp/sharply锐利的，明显的，急剧的steep/steeply急剧升降的steady/steadily稳固的，坚定不移的gradual/gradually渐进的，逐渐的slow/slowly缓慢的，不活跃的slight/slightly轻微的、略微地stable/stably稳定的3、其它在描述中的常用到的词significant changes图中一些较大变化noticeable trend明显趋势during the same period在同一时期grow/grew增长distribute分布，区别unequally不相等地in the case of adv.在的情况下in terms of / in respect of / regarding在方面in contrast相反，大不相同government policy政府政策market forces市场规率measuren.尺寸，方法，措施v.估量，调节forecastn.先见，预见v.预测三、英语图表写作套句精选1.the table shows the changes in the number ofover the period fromto该表格描述了在年之年间数量的变化。2.the bar chart illustrates that该柱状图展示了3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding该图为我们提供了有关有趣数据。4.the diagram shows（that）该图向我们展示了5.the pie graph depicts（that）该圆形图揭示了6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of这个曲线图描述了的趋势。7.the figures/statistics show（that）数据（字）表明8.the tree diagram reveals how该树型图向我们揭示了如何9.the data/statistics show（that）该数据（字）可以这样理解10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that这些数据资料令我们得出结论11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table如图所示12.according to the chart/figures根据这些表（数字）13.as is shown in the table如表格所示14.as can be seen from the diagram，great changes have taken place in从图中可以看出，发生了巨大变化。15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure，we can see clearly thator it is clear/apparent from the chart that从图表我们可以很清楚（明显）看到16.this is a graph which illustrates这个图表向我们展示了17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b fromto该表格描述了年到年间a与b的比例关系。18.the graph，presented in a pie chart，shows the general trend in该图以圆形图形式描述了总的趋势。19.this is a column chart showing这是个柱型图，描述了20.as can be seen from the graph，the two curves show the fluctuation of如图所示，两条曲线描述了的波动情况。21.over the period fromtotheremained level.在至期间，基本不变。22.in the year betweenand在年到期间23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 19981995年至1998三年里24.from then on/from this time onwards从那时起25.the number ofremained steady/stable from（month/year）to（month/year）。月（年）至月（年）的数量基本不变。26.the number sharply went up to数字急剧上升至27.the percentage ofstayed the same betweenand至期间的比率维持不变。28.the figures peaked atin（month/year）的数目在月（年）达到顶点，为29.the percentage remained steady at比率维持在30.the percentage ofis slightly larger/smaller than that of比例比的比例略高（低）。31.there is not a great deal of difference betweenand与的区别不大。32.the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of该图表表明的数目增长了三倍。33decreased year by year whileincreased steadily.逐年减少，而逐步上升。34.the situation reached a peak（a high point at）of%.的情况（局势）到达顶（高）点，为百分点。35.the figures/situation bottomed out in数字（情况）在达到底部。36.the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a trough.数字（情况）达到底部（低谷）。37.a istimes as much/many as b.a是b的倍。38.a increased bya增长了39.a increased toa增长到40.high/low/great/small/ percentage.比低高（低）41.there is an upward trend in the number of数字呈上升趋势。42.a considerable increase/decrease occurred fromto到发生急剧上升。43.fromtothe rate of decrease slow down.从到，下降速率减慢。44.from this year on，there was a gradual declinel reduction in the，reaching a figure of从这年起，逐渐下降至45.be similar to与相似46.be the same as与相同47.there are a lot similarities/differences betweenand与之间有许多相似（不同）之处48.a has something in common with ba于b有共同之处。49.the difference between a and b lies ina与b之间的差别在于50（year）witnessed/saw a sharp rise in年急剧上升考研英语写作精彩高频词句钱希这些都是从今年3月到现在微博更新的考研写作素材（从后往前整理的），全部粘贴下来居然有这么多，先放上来，供各位同学参考，不止适用于考研，最后会归类整理到自己正在编写的书中。其实，积少成多，如果你今年三月就跟着Shirley老师来准备作文，是不是到现在应该是得心应手，驾轻就熟了呢？考研英语大作文-创新It is universally acknowledged that innovation plays an irreplaceable role in boosting growth of individuals as well as enterprises. Without this quality, one can do nothing but imitate and duplicate others. By no means will they acquire originality and become successful. The trend of copycat product is a case in point.The spirit of innovation should be massively advocated by various media and responsible educators especially among the youngsters.考研英语写作一大作文-诚信主要包括商业，人际交往和学术，有些素材都是前期讲过的。不法商人lawbreaking merchants唯利是图profit-oriented不择手段by hook or crook政策性缺陷policy bug损害消费者利益spoil consumers interest阻碍经济发展hinder/impede economic developmentOnly when the authorities concerned issue counter laws and regulations, can the vicious trend of incredibility be curbed and can the citizens feel sense of security, which is regarded as an essential need for human beings.Some businessmen resort to every trick to make profits, which contributes to the emergence of fake and inferior products. Therefore, the interest of consumers has been undermined.Lack of credibility may lead to failure in every aspect and level. As to an individual, he may lose friends and partners. As to a company, it may lose customers and employees. As to a nation, it may lose attraction and respect.Credibility precedes a lot of virtues in the sphere of business. Reaping profits at the expense of others is unacceptable, which is bound to cause failure.考研英语大作文-道德见义勇为never hesitate to do what is right予人玫瑰，手有余香rose to others, scent left in hand.传统美德time-honored virtue帮助弱势群体offer aid to the underprivileged慈善事业cause of charity义工voluntary work见死不救stand aside when someone is in peril.冷漠indifferent/ unconcerned缺乏道德：be devoid of morality害怕承担责任：be afraid of taking responsibility施救者甚至被起诉：those who offered help gain nothing but being sued.考研写作摘要-文化文化冲撞culture shock思维方式way of thinking价值观value求同思维convergent thinking求异思维divergent thinking习俗custom/convention促进繁荣boost prosperity增进了解enhance understanding加速和平accelerate peace互惠互利mutual benefit文化多样性culture diversity全球一体化globalization全球经济一体化globalization of economy文化多样性culture diversity文化融合culture blending文化交流culture communication文化遗产culture heritage文明civilization考研写作摘要-科技科技升级upgrading of technology科技创新innovation of technology提高效率improve efficiency网络的普及popularity of internet无线网络wireless wifi有限网络cable太阳能solar energy新能源new energy在高科技时代in the era of high-tech,发明创造invention and creation造福人类benefit human beings信息技术information technology尖端科技cutting-edge technology高科技在医疗方面的应用application of high-tech in medical treatmentWe should take full and proper advantage of cutting-edge technology to benefit us human beings. For example, generalize the utilization of solar energy to reduce pollution, contributing to sustainable development as well as welfare of our offsprings.Admittedly, technology is conducive to our life. Meanwhile, it also brings us a lot of headaches. Cyber fraud is a case in point, which is not uncommon nowadays.Apparently, modern technology does bring us convenience and comfort. Human beings are highly dependent on it in a variety of aspects, ranging from daily life to professional research.考研写作摘要-教育辍学drop-out全体教员faculty学术氛围academic atmosphere减轻学生负担relieve the burden on students剽窃plagiarism教书育人impart knowledge and educate people夯实专业知识foster expertise培养创新精神cultivate spirit of innovation激发学生潜能stimulate students potential促进性格养成facilitate development of personality学位degree文凭diploma证书certification资格证qualification学士bachelor硕士master本科生undergraduate研究生postgraduate教育理念notion of education应试教育exam-oriented education素质教育quality education传授知识impart knowledge以学生为中心的教学student-centered education以老师为中心的教学teacher-centered education扩招enrollment expansion托儿所nursery幼儿园kindergarten义务教育compulsory education小学primary school中等教育secondary school高等教育higher education职业教育vocational education网络教育online educationExam-oriented education is prevailing in China. Students are trained to deal with all kinds of exams, aiming to get a high score. They are informed that promising future can be guaranteed by excellent academic performance.Never before has the quality education been more important than now. If students are educated only to be exam machines, we are bound to reap as what we have sown. The future of both the young generation as well as our nation cannot be well guaranteed.It goes without saying that education plays an irreplaceable role in our life. The sustainable development and prosperity of a nation depends largely on its cultivation and nourishment of young generation.The issue of education has always been a concern of the general public. How to educate and cultivate the young generation has haunted parents for years. Without proper notion of education, one can hardly nurture his child well.考研写作摘要-经济经济衰退economic recession亏损deficiency货币currency养老金pension预算budget合同contract企业enterprise经济恶化economic deterioration美联储Federal Reserve物价消费指数CPI反倾销Anti-dumping个人所得税income tax关税tariff / duty国家税收revenue垄断monopoly垄断的monopolistic通货膨胀inflation通货紧缩deflation经济制裁economic sanction公司合并merger汇率exchange rate升值appreciation贬值depreciation/ devaluation进口import出口export贸易顺差surplus贸易逆差deficit考研写作-关于自由There is no one but thirsts for freedom, which is considered extremely vital for human beings. For freedom, some work with great efforts, some tolerate distress, and some even sacrifice themselves考研写作-关于爱心Lets take the event of derail as an example. Love can always penetrate ones heart, bringing victims hope and strength for their future life and helping soothing their relatives who must be extremely distressed.It pays to help others because we can always acquire a great deal by offering aids to the needy people. For instance, when doing charity via donation or voluntary work, we obtain a sense of achievement and psychological sooth.One can always benefit from helping others. Love is like a lamp, which shines more brightly when its darker. Confronting emergency, love is timely assistance, which is considered extremely vital.考研写作-关于梦想Everyone is endowed with the right to dream. Even living in adversity or below poverty line, one should not give up dreaming, which are wings helping us fly high in the sky. Dreams are like twinkling diamonds, decorating our life and providing us with push and spur. Life without dreams is doomed to be boring and dull.考研写作-关于老龄化In my opinion, it is the government that should assume the responsibility to ensure the interest of aged people. In addition, family and community cannot shun the obligation of taking care of the old, which is needed more by the senior in practice.The consequences of aging society can be listed as follows. To begin with, there will be shortage of labor which may hinder the economic growth. Secondly, it may bring more financial and caring burden to the family and community.The aging problem poses a potential and looming menace to our country. If the government cannot formulate a suitable and effective laws and regulations to solve the problem, individuals as well as society will undertake severe aftermath.考研写作-关于幸福As a matter of fact, everyone can approach happiness as long as you determine to acquire it. You can be happy through toiling and moiling for family or helping others and you will also be blessed via contributing to the righteousness of society.It goes without saying that wealth and fame does bring happiness but its not sufficient for a happy life. There are more which cannot be obtained by money and privilege such as health and friendship.Happiness belongs to those who possess a clear understanding of it. Failing to define happiness correctly, one can scarcely approach self-contentment. It doesnt matter how successful they are, they feel unhappy and vacuous in their life.Opinions towards happiness vary from person to person. Some consider it as high salary and noble social status, some regard it as harmonious interpersonal interaction, while others suppose happiness is a feeling of self-contentment.考研写作-关于挫折Adversity is like a touchstone, which can magnify bravery and cowardice. The strong-willed man becomes tougher, while the craven person slips even to be more fragile.Adversity may result in admirable virtues like perseverance, patience and so on. Just as a proverb goes, misfortune is blessing in disguise. Adverse situation contributes to steeling ones mind and polishing ones personality.Twists and turns are regarded as ingredients of life, resembling highlights and happiness in our life. Only with optimism and maturity, can we smooth away all the setbacks and approach a new success.No one can deny the fact that adversity occurs occasionally in our life, which cannot be avoided. Once encountering it, we can do nothing but face it with courage and wisdom.考研写作-关于压力There are several ways to release pressure as follows. Initially, try to spend more time with family members or friends to communicate with them or to do sports together. In addition, traveling at intervals contributes to eliminate tiredness and pressure.Stress from family and society makes some people feel frustrated and depressed. For instance, they worry about the installment of flats, the education of children and supporting their aged parents. Being under enormous pressure, one cannot but stick to it.According to a survey made by Sina, the majority of citizens complain about exorbitant pressure, who hardly have time to entertain themselves and company their family members.Enormous pressure of citizens results from fierce competition and pursuing high-quality living standard. Being devoid of sense of security, which is triggered by unsound social security system, people are compelled to work overtime with exhaustion.With the acceleration of life pace in modern society, people are suffering from unprecedented stress, which poses a potential and looming menace to their health mentally and psychologically.考研写作-关于成名Chasing fame and reputation to excess will definitely lead to distortion of state of mind, which is detrimental to ones psychological health.过度追求名声注定会导致心态的扭曲，这对于个人的心理健康极为不利。In an attempt to（试图，为了）be famous, some even get involved in doing things by hook or crook. Becoming celebrities at any cost is devastating.为了成名，有人甚至不择手段。不计一切代价想要成为名人的后果是毁灭性的。考研写作-关于成名The way of being famous is totally different from that of the past. Owing to the popularity of Internet, some even try to become well-known by smearing and defacing themselves.考研写作-精彩词句His achievement is a very manifestation of his talent.他的成就是他才华的最高证明。Depletion破坏Prolonged长时期的Supplant排挤，取而代之Ethos气质，民族精神，思潮考研写作-经典引用Diamond cuts diamond.强中自有强中手。Adversity leads to prosperity.国难兴邦He who does not advance loses ground.不进则退Choose an author as you choose a friend.选书如选友。考研写作-小词汇大用处Crystallization of wisdom智慧的结晶Full-fledged countries经济发达的国家Conflict of interest利益冲突It is stipulated in law that法律明确规定. Thorny棘手的Be geared to调试后迎合考研写作-词汇多样性全面的，全能的：comprehensive, versatile, omnipotent不平衡，不一致：unbalance, disparity, inequality缺少，缺乏：lack, shortage, devoid巨大的：enormous, tremendous, bulky过分的,过度的：excessive, exorbitant，Boons and banes福音与祸根（利与弊）Optimal opportunity绝佳机会Cutting-edge technology尖端科技Ordeal磨难，煎熬Bestow marked benefits upon the well-being of human beings大大造福于人类考研写作-精彩小句The popularity of Internet does not come without drawbacks.网络的普及不无坏处。（有坏处）The non-biodegradable litter poses a tremendous menace to our environment.不可降解垃圾给我们的环境造成巨大威胁。考研写作-小词汇大用处Resplendent璀璨的，辉煌的Culprit罪魁祸首: Lack of legal awareness is the culprit of this event. Alleviate缓和，减轻:The pressure of unemployment has been alleviated drastically. Unscrupulous不择手段的:do things by hook or crookHovering crime rate高犯罪率Discretion谨慎，小心处理：The problem of income gap should be solved with discretion. Augment income增加收入Empirical knowledge经验Nurturing parents含辛茹苦的父母Loving siblings情深意重的兄弟姐妹考研写作-精彩小句Drunk driving is perilous and prohibited by law but still a host of drivers were caught off guard, revealing their lack of legal awareness酒驾危险而且是违法的，但还是有不少人被抓个现行，充分说明他们法律意识的缺失。This regulation enacted recently is considered, by all accounts, rather effective.这个最近颁布的规定所有人都认为相当有效。Taking account of the side effect, the aged should not take the medicine.考虑到此种药物的副作用，老年人应该禁止服用。考研写作-精彩小句A leopard cannot change its spots.江山易改，本性难移。Its controversial that ones personal
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