同位语在写作中的应用课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,华侨中学 刘晓霞,Welcome to our class,写作,Easy?Hard?,Todays topic:,How to make your sentences better,写作基础,同位语在基础写作中的应用,请说出下列句子类型,。,1.Summer is coming.,2.They wont let me go,.,3.He showed me a new TV set.,4.She knows what to do,.,5.The weather is very cold.,S+Vi,S+V+O,OC,S+V+IO+DO,S+V+O,S+V+P,请分析下列句子的成分,1.All of us considered him honest,.,2.Tom told me an interesting story last night.,3.He is Mr.zhang,my math teacher,主语,谓语,宾语,宾补,间接宾语,直接宾语,表语,同位语,什么是同位语,1 Linda,a mother of a four-year-old boy,is our English teacher.,2 My sister,Lucy,26 years old,graduated from Beijing University.,3 Zhu Jiayi,a girl of 18,my best friend,is studying in Huaqiao Senior High School.,同位语：,一个名词(或其它形式)对另一个名词或代词进行修饰，限定或说明，,这个名词(或其它形式)就是同位语。,1 Mr.Smith,our new teacher,is very kind to us.我们的新老师史密斯先生对我们很好。,2 Yesterday I met Tom,a friend of my brothers.昨天我遇到了我弟弟的朋友汤姆。,our new teacher,是,Mr.Smith,的同位语,指同一人。,a friend of my brothers,是,Tom,的同位语,指同一人。,如何应用同位语优化句子：,Mrs zhang是我们的数学老师。她40岁了。我们都喜欢她。,We all like our math teacher,Mrs zhang,a women of 40.,Mrs zhang is our math teacher.,She is 40 years old.,We all like her.,此方法多用于,介绍人物,、,事物或地点,等。,例1,介绍事物,(2008广东),背景：,射击最初,(at first),只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。,同位语手段在基础写作的应用,Shooting is a means of survival at first.,2.It developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.,Shooting,a means of survival at first,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.,例2,介绍人物,(2009广东),时间:,上周末,对象:,眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授,主题:,我国中小学生近视(eye-sightedness)问题,1 Last weekend,I had an interview with Professor Wang.,2,Professor Wang is an eye-doctor.,3 we concerned the issue of short-sightedness of the school children in China.,Last weekend,I had an interview with,Professor Wang,an eye-doctor,concerning,the issue of short-sightedness of the school children in China.,例3,介绍地点,姓名,：李华,身份,：育才中学学生,职位,：学生会主席,(,the Student Union,),校址,：你们大学附近,1.Im Li Hua.,2.I am a student of Yucai Middle School.,3.I am the Chairman of the Student Union.,4.Yucai Middle School is close to your university,Im,Li Hua,Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School,which,is close to your university.,Task1:四人小组活动,运用同位语互相介绍你的学校,家乡或者你的朋友，同学等。For example:,1.蔡施艺是很英俊的一个男生，他很爱睡觉。,Cai Shiyi，,a very handsome boy,likes sleeping very much.,2 汪勇明，我们的班长，是一个非常诚实的一个学生。,Wang Yongming,our monitor,is a very honest student.,3 博罗，著名的,渔米之乡,是我的家乡。（home of fish and rice）,Boluo，,a famous home of fish and rice,is my hometown.,Task2：在写作的一些句子里运用同位语优化句子,1译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一。,1)Zhong Nanshan was born in Guangzhou in 1941.,2)Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China.,Zhong Nanshan,one of the greatest doctors in China,was born in Guangzhou in 1941.,2.(翻译)李敏是个女孩子,今年18岁,她在光华中学学习,她是我的邻居也是我最好的朋友。,运用,1.Li Ming is a girl.,2.She is 18 years old.,3.She studies in Guanghua Middle school.,4.She is my neighbour and my best friend.,1.Li Ming,a girl of 18,my neighbour and my best friend,is studying in Guanghua Middle school.,3.(整合)Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province.,It is located in the middle of Guangdong Province.,It is the culture and economy center of Guangdong Province.,3.Guangzhou,the capital and the culture and economic center of Guangdong Province,is located in the middle of Guangdong.,4.(整合)Zhang Hai,is male.He is 23 years old.He graduated from Hunan University last year.,4.Zhang Hai,male,23 years old,graduated from Hunan University last year.,牛刀小试,；,Now comes your turn!,个人简介：1.姚明，中国篮球的标志和骄傲，1980年9月12日生于上海。,2.周杰伦，中国台湾华语流行歌手，有“亚洲流行天王”之称.(Asian King of Pop),Discussion:,After you finish your writings,have a discussion with your desk mates,and try to,sum up a better one,to share with the whole class.,牛刀小试,；,Now comes your turn!,个人简介：1.姚明，中国篮球的标志和骄傲，1980年9月12日生于上海。,Yao Ming,the symbol and pride of Chinese basketball,was born on September 12,1980 in Shanghai.,2周杰伦，中国台湾华语流行歌手，有“亚洲流行天王”之称.(Asian King of Pop,),Zhou Jielun,the Chinese Taiwan Chinese pop singer,，has the name of“Asian King of Pop”,Homework:,Make at least 5 sentences each according to what we have learned today.,Thank you!,