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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,开放式作文的,分类与拓展,叙事类：由远及近，娓娓道来,例一,This morning when you entered the classroom, your head teacher,looked,angry. Tell us why.,Version1:,I came to school late. The teacher got angry. On the way to school, we were caught in the rush-hour traffic jam. As a result, I came to school late. The teacher got angry.,Version2:,Yesterday, we had a lot of homework. I didnt finish it until late into the night. I went to bed without turning on the alarm clock. As a result, I got up late this morning. Now you know why the teacher got angry.,Version3:,Yesterday we had masses of homework. I didnt finish it until late into the night. I went to bed without turning on the alarm clock. When I woke up this morning, it was already late. Unfortunately, on the way to school, the bus broke down. It took a long time to have it repaired.,As a result, I came to school late. Thats why the teacher got angry.,例二,You didnt go to school yesterday because you were ill. When you go to school today, you find everybody,is,excited. You ask them why.,Version1:,A school band from America is coming to our school tomorrow. We are very excited.,Version2:,We are very glad to hear that a school band from America is coming to our school tomorrow. Everyone is excited at the good news.,Version3:,We are very glad to hear the news that a school band from America will come to our school tomorrow. We are preparing to welcome them. There will be a party in the afternoon and we will put on some performances at the party. Besides, well exchange some small gifts. Everyone is excited.,例三：,You long for an mp3 for a long time, your parents promised to buy one for you last month, but you refused. Please tell us why you,have refused,it.,Idea 1:,我已经长大，不需要向父母要钱，我打算在高考后，暑假自己打工，既可以赚钱，又可以获得社会及工作经验，这就是我为什么拒绝我父母给我买,mp3,的原因。,Idea2:,我的好朋友，他叔叔送了,mp3,作为他生日礼物， 所以我打算买他的二手,mp3,比新的便宜很多，我可以用我自己的零用钱买。,Idea3:,我参加了一个英语口语竞赛，令我兴奋的是，我获得了大赛的第一名，我可以得到,mp3,的奖品。这就是我为什么拒绝我父母为买,mp3,的原因。,例四：,When your mother comes home from work, she finds the living room in a terrible mess. She asks you the reason. You tell,her,what,happened.,内容提示：,1, 小孩玩耍,2, 我找东西,3, 小偷来袭,4, 小猫玩耍,5, 强风刮的等,Version 1:,This afternoon when I was sleeping, I was woken up by a noise from the living room. I got up to see what was happening. I was walking outward when suddenly I saw a stranger in the living room through the crack of the door.,He was searching and throwing things here and there. He must be a thief. Then I called the police without causing his notice. The thief was caught easily.,Version 2:,I was studying this afternoon when I heard the cat mewing. I went out and found the cat wrapped by you knitting wool. It was bumping here and there. I wanted to help you out.,But as soon as I got close to it, it ran away at once and jumped up and down. The knitting wool was thrown everywhere. The paper and the books fell to the ground. The cat made the living room in a terrible mess.,例五：,It was a Monday morning of the summer. In the classroom Amy found a Band-Aid on Billys ankle. She asked Billy what was wrong with his ankle. Suppose you are Billy, please tell Amy what happened to your ankle.,思路开拓：,1, 踢足球,2, 打破杯子,3, 下楼跌倒,4, 蚊虫叮咬,5, 小猫挠的,6, 某种东西划伤,Version 1:,On Sunday, I went to,Xiang,Shan park with my friends. It was very beautiful there. We climbed the mountain and walked by the meadow. We enjoyed ourselves there. There was nothing wrong with me. But after I came back home, I saw my left ankle covered with a bit of blood. The ankle must be lacerated by some kind of plant. So I put a Band-Aid here.,Version 2:,On Sunday I played football with some boys on the playground. When I ran to control the ball, I bumped into another boy. We fell to the ground. His feet hit my right ankle. There was something hard on his shoes and it made my ankle bleeding. So I put a Band-Aid here after returning home.,例六：,On a cold winter afternoon I was sent back home, badly hurt on the left leg. Mum was shocked and,wanted,to know what had happened. You tell,her,what,happened,.,开放作文：,1, 建筑物上掉下来的东西砸伤,2, 打球摔伤,3, 路上发生车祸,4, 骑摩托车摔倒,Version 1:,This afternoon we had a P.E. class. I played basketball with my classmates. I jumped up and then fell to the ground heavily. I felt my left leg aching as soon as I lay on the ground. My teacher sent me to the hospital at once. The doctor examined me and said that my left leg was broken for lack of calcium. And I must stay at home for a month.,Version 2:,This afternoon on my way home I could see few people in the street. Perhaps people preferred to stay at home because of the cold weather. So I rode very quickly when I was to cross a lane. Suddenly, a bike rushed out of the lane at high speed. We crashed into each other. I fell to the ground so heavily that I broke my left leg.,II.,议论类：观点明确，论据充分,例一,(,东城,0405),May 31, No Smoking Day, is drawing near. Now what,do,you,want to,say,to,the smokers,to help them get rid of the bad habit?,Today more and more people care for the problem of smoking. On that day , nobody is allowed to smoke, because smoking is polluting the air, also its harmful to the peoples health and will cause lung cancer. Whats more, its a waste of money.,I hope you should make a plan to get rid of the bad habit. Its our hope that we all take an active part in the activity.,Im sure youll succeed in giving up smoking.,例二,Youll finish the senior school education soon. You are talking with your family about,your future,. What,s,your opinion?,I want to go to,Tsinghua,University to study computer. You know it has been my dream for many years. Im interested in IT and I do very well in,maths,. Whats more, my idol is Bill Gates. I do hope one day I can do great contributions to the whole world.,05,期末西城区开放作文,Suppose we are having a free talk in an English class. The topic is which is the best way of transport in Beijing when we are out getting around. To take a bus, the City rail, a taxi or to ride a bike?,Please tell us your choices (at least,two or three,) and why you,prefer,them.,开放作文,As far as .concerned .,I prefer because,Furthermore ,Moreover, besides, and,Compared with .,The expense of using taxis,Most of the time I but sometimes I because.,As far as,city transport,is concerned, I prefer buses,because,they are the cheapest way to get around.,Furthermore,compared with,the City rail, there are many more bus routes throughout the town,which,make any trip easy.,As,the expense of using taxis is much greater, I,seldom,take them.,Sometimes,I ride a bike,because,by this means,Im free to,go wherever Id like to, the places which buses or the City rail dont reach.,III.,说明类：几种方法,/,建议,/,可能性,例一（海淀,0404）,On the morning of June 7, Li Ming is taking a bus on his way to take the entrance examination. Unfortunately, he is caught in a traffic jam because of an accident. How,can,he,manage to get there in time? Please think out two or three different ways,for him.,First of all,he,can,persuade the bus driver to allow him to get off so that he can,walk out of the heavy traffic jam to take another bus or a taxi.,Or,he,can,get off and ask an assistant in a nearby shop to lend him a bike. Since it is an important day for the high school graduates, dialing 110 and getting help from the police is one of the choices,as well,.,例二,(,北京,04春),On a sunny morning, Xiao Hong from Orange Town was on her way to her friends house in Green Hill, a small town she had never been to before. At a crossroads, she,found,the signpost(,路标,),showing the directions had fallen over. She,got,lost.,How,could,she,find out which way to go? Consider,two or three,different,ways of working out the problem.,First of all, Xiao Hong,could,ask a passer-by for directions. Since it was a sunny day, she,could also,use the position of the sun to tell the directions.,And finally,she,could also,replace the sign post so that it correctly named the direction she had come from. Then it would be correct for all the other directions.,例三（北京,04,夏）,Xiao Ming tells you that he had 100,yuan,yesterday morning, which he put into the pocket of his jacket. He spent 40,yuan,yesterday afternoon. But now when he reaches into the pocket of his jacket, her finds only 10,yuan,.,He is wondering what has happened to the rest of the money. As his friend, you,suggest,to him three or four different possibilities concerning the missing money.,Maybe,you forgot you had spent the money on something else yesterday afternoon.,Its also possible,a pickpocket stole your money while you were shopping,.,Or maybe,you lost it on your way home.,And one last possibility,is,that you havent lost it at all-You put on a different jacket this morning, and you happened to leave 10,yuan,in the jacket earlier. So the missing money still must be in the other jacket, the one you were wearing yesterday.,05,东城区期末开放作文,根据下面提供情景，写一段接续文字，词数不少于,50,。,Your grandpa has retired(,退休）,recently. He,isnt used to,the idle(,闲散的）,life and often feels very unhappy and depressed (,压抑,).,You are worried about him, so you give him some advice(at least,three,pieces), trying to make him,cheerful,. You,say to him.,I think youd better .such as,You can also . like,Perhaps you can ,I think the most important thing for you is to so that you can and wont .,表示建议的句式,Dear grandpa, I think,youd better,take part in,some outdoor activities,such as,going mountain climbing, playing,Taiji,.,You can,also,take up some hobbies like gardening or playing chess,.,Perhaps,you can,keep a pet like a dog or a cat.,And I think,the most important for you,is,to make some friends with,the people of your age, so that,you can do things together. Having friends,means,that you can have someone to talk to,so that,you wont,feel lonely and depressed,.,