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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,初中英语书面表达,写作技巧指导,中考作文评分标准,第一档13-15分,信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或根本无语言错误。,其次档10-12分,信息根本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表,达。,第三档7-9分,能传达局部信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子根本可读。,第四档4-6分,只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。,第五档1-3分,只能传达个别信息，表达不清晰，只有个别句子可读。,安康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今日，会休息的人才会有安康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际安康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。依据你所得的信息，请为国际安康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进展假日休闲。,作文练习,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,travel,Stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。,写作第一步,审,安康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今日，会休息的人才会有安康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际安康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。依据你所得的信息，请为国际安康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进展假日休闲。,审,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,Health is very important.(Cui Zixuan,),How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report(miss zhang),Last Sunday,I asked some students about what they did on vacation(Yan pengwei),用简洁的句子或短语列出文章要点。,列,写作其次步,依据以下关键词及图表用简洁的句子列出文章的要点,如何度假,调查报告,建议假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,A lot of people travel.,Some people stay at home.,Some other people visit friends or parents.,A few people work.,Enjoy your vacation.,列,加,加首尾，使构造完整。,可以实行总分总构造或者总分构造，开头或结尾的句子应留意简洁，美丽。,写作第三步：,A lot of people travel.,Some people stay at home.,Some other people visit friends or parents.,A few people work.,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report,.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,a nice head,a nice tail,a nice body,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.,A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.,Come and enjoy your vacation.The people who relax well work well.,连,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个局部连接自然。,写作第四步：,1.表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,2.表示选择:or,3.表示转折:but,however,though,4.表示因果:because,so,5.表示条件:if,6.表示解释:for example,such as,that is to say,7.表示挨次:firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,finally,in the end;,8.表示强调:also,actually,in fact,9.表示结论:in a word,in my opinion,generally speaking,关联词,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.,According to it,most people travel.,And,some people stay at home.,Also,some other people visit friends or parents.,However,a few people work.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,连,改,选好词句，修改文章。留意语言的正确性。在有把握的状况下展现自己的语言功底。,写作第五步：,书面表达写作技巧,审,列,加,连,改,Thank you!,
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