如何写建议信

,*,*,Unit 2 Task,Writing a letter of advice,DearLily,，,Iamsorrytohearthatyouareill.Everygirl,hopestokeepslim.Butweknowthat,keepinghealthyisveryimportant.Iwouldliketotellyousomewaystokeep,healthy.,First,ahealthydietisgoodforyou.Itisbettertoeatfreshfruitandvegetables,withrichvitaminsandfiber.Donteatfoodwhichcontainstoomuchsugarand,fatlikecheese,chocolateand so on.,Fatandsugarcanmakeyouputonweighteasily.,Seconditisveryimportanttohavegoodlivinghabits.Youshoulddoregular,exerciseandhaveenoughrest.Besidesacheerfulstateofmindisequally,importanttoourhealthashealthydietsandregularexercise.,Letskeephealthytogether.,YYours,，,LiHua,Read the guidelines on page 34 and answer,the following question.,What is the most important part of reading?,To be able to understand the main point of the reading passage.,Skills building 2:,reading for the main point,How to read for the main point,1.read the first and the last paragraph.,2.read the first and last sentence of a paragraph.,3.read the repeated words.,4.If there is“however/but”in P1,the main idea is just after it.,5.sum up the main idea of each paragraph and get the main idea.,6.If there is no topic sentence,read the whole passage and get the main idea.,DISCUSSION,Entries,Main Points,The first diary entry,The second diary entry,The third diary entry,The fourth diary entry,Reading practice,Today has been a great day because my parents bought me an expensive bike.,We had a Maths test and I,m nervous about my result.,I failed the Maths test and don,t know how to tell my parents.,All that worrying was for,nothing.,1.instead of/instead,2.be proud of,3.stay up,4.be nervous/upset about,5.after all,6.make an error,7.mix up with,1.What is Liu Zhens main point in Para 1?,2.How do the boys parents and grandparents treat him?,His 15-year-old son refuses to do what,he and his wife ask him to do.,His parents treat him very well,and his,grandparents buy him many things.,Step 2:Reading a letter asking for advice,3.What is Liu Zhens main point in Para 2?,4.Why does Liu Zhen tolerate his son so far?,His son is wasting valuable time during,this important period in his life.,He wants to prevent upsetting the boys,mother with an argument.,5.What is Liu Zhen afraid that his son,will do?,6.What is the main piece of advice that,Liu Zhen is looking for?,He is afraid that his son will fail at school,or worse.,He wants to know how he can help his,son without harming their relationship.,1.ask for,2.refuse to do,3.as if,4.insist,5.either.or,6.be to do,7.allow sb.sth,Thank you!,高中英语,Writing a letter of,advice,Page35:,Reading a letter asking for advice,Page32:,1.How to ask for advice?,2.How to give advice?,15,Point 3,how to give advice/suggestions.,Useful words and expressions:,Im more than glad to give you my advice.,I would advise you to.,My suggestion is that,What I suggest is that.,In my opinion,youd better,As far as Im concerned,you might as well do.,When you are state the reasons to support your advice,youd better put it in order of importance.,1.first,/,what comes first is that,/,first of all,2.in addition,/,whats more,/,furthermore,/,besides,3.at last,/,lastly,/,finally,/,last but not least.,4.to conclude,/,to sum up,/,in conclusion,/,In a word,Page36,Skills building 3:,Planning a letter of reply,17,Step 3:writing a letter of advice(P.37),Liu Zhens son,who is also asking for advice about his father,has many problems with his father.,He cant get along with his father,His father forbids him from doing things he likes.,He loves his father and wants his father to understand him.,His parents always make him do things he doesnt like.,18,Discuss the following question:,1.What advice can you give to the son?,DISCUSSION,19,Talk to your father that you love him and will be a good boy;,Show that you are a big boy now and can make your own decisions;,Dont refuse his suggestions,but tell him you want to do things in a different way;,Some advice to the son:,He cant get along with his father,His father forbids him from doing,things he likes.,He loves his father and wants his,father to understand him.,His parents always make him do,things he doesnt like.,the sons problem:,20,写作提示,:,文体解读,首先要注意信的书写格式,;,信的内容是表达建议,因此要注意语气和措辞,命令的语气是不可取的,;,罗列要点须清晰,以使建议行之有效,避免使被建议的一方产生疑惑,.,框架梳理,1.)Beginning of a letter,2.)talk about his problems and show sympathy,3.)list several suggestions,4.)encouragement,5.)Proper ending of a letter,The present tense,the first person,Thanks for your attention!,Bye bye!,22,Dear Liu Wei,I would like to take the opportunity to express my appreciation for your kind attention to our magazine as always.Meanwhile,I feel that it would be beneficial to express my views concerning your problems with your family.,Dont worry.Many teenagers have difficulty getting along with their parents.I used to have the same problems when I was young.Parents love their children,but they dont understand them.Thats how problems come about.,Here Im more than glad to give you some advice.What comes first is that,you must honor your