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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2021/3/11,#,期末复习指导,4-,写作能力的提升,年 级：九年级 学 科：英语（人教版）,主讲人：学 校：,期末复习指导4-写作能力的提升年 级：九年级,1,学习目标,本课结束时，你将能够,:,1.,正确审题理清写作思路；,2.,运用丰富的词汇和句型丰富书面表达。,学习目标本课结束时，你将能够:,2,书面表达题型,中考书面表达是一种应试作文，要求学生在给定时间内根据提示或所给要点写出要点齐全、表达清楚、语言准确、行文连贯的文章。,不仅要求学生,熟练掌握词汇、句型语法知识,，而且还应具备一定的,审题,能力、,想象,能力与,表达,能力。,书面表达题型 中考书面表达是一种应试作文，要求学生,3,书面表达的写作步骤,审题,选材,列提纲,写全文,检查修改,审清主题,人称时态,要点信息。,服务主题,去粗取精,详略得当。,紧扣主题,结构清楚,衔接顺畅。,一鼓作气,内容完整,要点齐全。,主旨突出，内容完整，结构清楚，语言准确。,书面表达的写作步骤审题选材列提纲写全文检查修改审清主题,人,4,书面表达写作实践,(2020,北京 题目,2),“,不积跬步,无以至千里,。,”,积累,有助于我们达成目标,实现梦想。某英文网站正在开展以,“,积累,”,为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么,有什么收获。,提示词语：,accumulate(,积累,),read,keep,make progress,提示问题：,What did you do to accumulate knowledge?,What have you learned from doing so?,书面表达写作实践(2020 北京 题目2)“不积跬步,5,审题,主题：,积累知识,人称：,第一人称,时态：,过去时为主,穿插使用现在时或完成时。,要点信息：,做过什么,有何收获。,审题主题：积累知识,6,书面表达写作实践,Without accumulating,we can hardly achieve anything.,书面表达写作实践 Without accumulati,7,选材,本主题相关的词汇和句型。,1.,积累知识,accumulate knowledge,2.,重要,important,of great importance,play an important role,3.,有助于,help,be good for,contribute to,选材本主题相关的词汇和句型。1.积累知识,8,选材,本主题相关的词汇和句型。,4.,从基础做起,start from doing basic things,5.,养成习惯,form the habit of,develop the habit of,6.,努力,try ones best,make great efforts,选材本主题相关的词汇和句型。4.从基础做起,9,选材,本主题相关的词汇和句型。,7.,提高书面表达能力,increase writing ability,improve writing skills,8.,开阔视野,broaden my horizons,get a wider perspective of,9.,实现理想,realize my dream,make my dream come true,10.,使人受益,beneficial,benefit,somebody,选材本主题相关的词汇和句型。7.提高书面表达能力,10,列提纲,紧扣主题,结构清楚,衔接顺畅。,1.,承接首句，进一步点明积累知识的重要性,2.,做了什么：通过学习、读书、实践等积累知识,3.,收获如何：知识增加、能力提高、眼界开阔,4.,有何感想：受益、有收获,列提纲紧扣主题,结构清楚,衔接顺畅。,11,写全文,1.,承接首句，进一步点名积累知识的重要性,Without accumulating,we can hardly achieve anything.,Accumulating knowledge is of great importance.,Accumulating knowledge plays an important role.,It helps us realize our dreams.,It helps us achieve our goals.,It can improve our abilities.,It can broaden our horizons.,写全文1.承接首句，进一步点名积累知识的重要性,12,写全文,2.,做了什么：通过学习、读书、实践等积累知识,I try my best to accumulate knowledge.,I make great efforts to accumulate knowledge.,I listen to the teacher and take notes carefully.,I develop the habit of practicing what I have learnt.,I start from doing basic things,such as reading and writing.,I read a lot of English magazines.,I listen to English radio every day.,写全文2.做了什么：通过学习、读书、实践等积累知识,13,写全文,3.,收获如何：知识增加、能力提高、眼界开阔,Reading broadens our horizons.,Practice improves our abilities.,Listening to English radio helps us learn English well.,Accumulating knowledge helps us understand the world better.,Accumulating knowledge is a useful way to realize our dreams.,写全文3.收获如何：知识增加、能力提高、眼界开阔,14,写全文,4.,有何感想：受益、有收获,Accumulating is beneficial to us.,Accumulating benefits us greatly.,I think its necessary to accumulate knowledge every day.,I gain a lot by accumulating knowledge day by day.,I become more self-confident as I accumulate knowledge.,写全文4.有何感想：受益、有收获,15,第一版,Without accumulating,we can hardly achieve anything.,Accumulating knowledge is of great importance.It helps us realize our dreams.I tried my best to accumulate knowledge.,I started from doing basic things,such as reading and writing.,Reading broadens my horizons.I developed the habit of writing down and practicing what I had learnt.It increased my writing ability.Accumulating knowledge benefits me a lot.,第一版Without accumulating,we ca,16,书面表达中的常见问题,1.,中心不切题,2.,结构不合理,3.,主次不分明,4.,语言不准确,5.,衔接不顺畅,6.,无好词好句,注重语言积累,提高应用能力。,书面表达中的常见问题1.中心不切题注重语言积累,提高应用,17,检查修改,语法正确,用词得当,语言地道,表达丰富。,1.,检查语法是否准确；,2.,使用高级词汇和高效句型等；,3.,添加必要的相关细节信息；,4.,梳理逻辑；,5.,添加,主题句。,检查修改语法正确,用词得当,语言地道,表达丰富。,18,检查语法,Without accumulating,we can hardly achieve anything.,Accumulating knowledge are of great importance.,It help us realize our dreams.,I tried our best to accumulate knowledge.,I start from doing basic things,such as read and write.,主谓不一致。应改为,is,。,主谓不一致。应改为,helps,或,helped,。,代词混淆。应改为,my,。,动词形式错误。应改为动名词,reading,和,writing,。,检查语法Without accumulating,we c,19,检查语法,Reading broadens my horizon.,I developed the habit of writing down and practicing what I have learnt.,Which increased my writing ability.,I benefited accumulating knowledge a lot.,结构错误。应改为,Accumulating knowledge benefited me a lot.,名词单复数错误。,Horizon,表示,“,眼界,”,时为,horizons,。,时态错误。应改为,had learnt,。,连接词误用。应改为,It,。,检查语法Reading broadens my horizo,20,第二版,Without accumulating,we can hardly achieve anything.,Accumulating knowledge is of great importance.It helps us realize our dreams.I tried my best to accumulate knowledge.,I started from doing basic things,such as reading and writing.,Reading broadened my horizons.I developed the habit of writing down and practicing what I had learnt.It increased my writing ability.Accumulating knowledge benefited me a lot.,第二版Without accumulating,we ca,21,简单句,并列句,复合句,句型结构,句子类型,定,主,谓,同位,补,状,宾,插入,主从,宾从,表从,同从,定从,状从,倒装句,强调句,简单句并列句复合句句型结构句子类型定主谓同位补状宾插入主从宾,22,升级表达和增减细节,Without accumulating,we can hardly achieve anything.,Accumulating knowledge is of great importance.It helps us realize our dreams.,Accumulating
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