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单击此处编辑母版文本样式,英语,高考总复习人教版,必修二,书面表达专题,(,四,),学生习作点评,(,一,),实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表、更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为,“,Being a Good Listener,”,的英文演讲稿。,为何倾听,表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系,谁来倾听,家长倾听孩子,理解孩子，消除代沟，,老师倾听学生,了解学生，满足需求，,同学相互倾听,增进友谊，互帮互学，,怎样倾听,(,请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。,),注意：,1.,对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。,2,词数,150,左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。,3,演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。,Good afternoon,，,everyone!,The topic of my speech today,is,“,Being,a Good Listener,”,_,Thank you for your listening!,学生习作,Good afternoon,，,everyone!,The topic of my speech today,is,“,Being,a Good Listener,”,Good listening can always show respect,，,promote understanding,，,and improve interpersonal relationship.,Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children,，,so they will understand them better,，,and find it easy to narrow the generation gap,；,teachers should listen more to their students,，,then they can meet their needs better,，,and place themselves in a good relationship with their students,；,students should listen more to their classmates,，,thus they will help and learn from each other,，,and a friendship is likely to be formed.,What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to,others.Show,your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk,；,show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile,；,be,openminded,to different opinions even though you dont like,them.In,a word,，,good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.,Thank you for your listening!,教师点评,文章开门见山，点明,“,为何倾听,”,，并且运用了并列谓语动词来表达。,在,“,谁来倾听,”,一部分，作者运用并列的,“,parents should listen.,；,teachers should listen.,；,students should listen.,”,，使文章读来琅琅上口，很有气势。,在,“,怎样倾听,”,这一部分，作者提出了三点建议。本段首先运用,what,引导的主语从句；其次用了三个并列的祈使句，符合演讲稿的语言特点；最后，以,in a word,作出总结。,总之，文章不管是从结构上，还是从语言上，都不愧为一篇佳作。,(,二,),Directions,：,Write an English composition in about 100 to 120 words according to the points given in Chinese.,1,我最难忘的一课。,2,具体说明为什么难忘。,3,感想。,_,学生习作,On my study way,，,a,English class makes a deep impression on me and is,remian,in my,memory.At,that time,，,Im not interested in English and always do other something,in English,classes.However,，,this English class makes me change my mind about,English.The,English teachers lecture attracts me,deeply.She,opens a door for me,，,make,me realize English is very important and,interesting.She,gives me enough confidence learn,English,well.In,a word,，,this class changes my life in some,way.Therefore,，,I swear I must learn English well and I can.,教师点评,本文汉语式英语较多，出现了许多时态错误。既然是记叙,“,难忘的一课,”,，应以一般过去时为主。本文除最后一句外，其他各句的时态均应改为过去时态。,此处为汉语式表达，应改为,In my study life/career,。,冠词使用错误，,a,应改为,an,。,remain,为系动词，故应将,is remain,改为,remains,。,此处表示,“,其他事情,”,，应用,something else,或,other things,。,此处应用现在分词短语作结果状语，故,make,应改为,making,。,此处应用不定式作目的状语，,learn,前加,to,。,
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